Is Your Character a Mary Sue? | Comments

33% isn't bad my oc is a lookism oc. She is arrogant and a bit two-faced. she is a prodigy at music and s---. she has brown hair and eyes. she comes from a rich family. Her parent 'treasure' her because she is talented. They have a good relationship but don't communicate a lot. affection is materialistic. She is very popular because of her looks and skills. she doesn't befriend the Mc as fast as others do. she is very dramatic and extra. she is ( to an extend) inspired by nadeshiko rurichou from kakegrui. She doesn't have supernatural ability, just a lot of training when she was a Child. like the Mc she is a beauty, how she first catches people attention. this is just a rough idea

27% Doesn't seem too bad to me. I honestly just wish I wasn't as scared at the thought that my oc might be a mary sue so she could be a bit spicer ;w;

I used a JSAB OC, Trinity Blossom, who basically came into existence from a glitch in the shape-making matrix. Basically, all the shapes are "born" from the Tree of Life as lifeless shapes that contract color from the environment around them.(kinda like ponies and cutie marks lol) Something had went wrong while Trinity was being made, and instead of being a heart , she looked much more human, with a birth mark shaped into a heart on her cheek. She got her color from cherry blossoms that were on the trees at the time she was made, so she has lightly-pink tinted skin, and magenta colored hair. And most shapes are born with shapeshifting powers or weapons too, but of course that glitched, resulting in her being able to form into a small creature with wings, but not being able to control her form. She's clueless as f---, since she knows little to nothing about the world, so she has a very positive outlook and a bubbly personality. She's stuck in a war between corrupts and pures, so she's kinda the push-me-pull-me toy, because no one really knows what side she's on-

So yeah- this is my smol babey-

27% Mary sue huh? That's kinda disappointing, but I ain't gonna shoot the messenger. In case anyone is curious, here is a basic rundown of the MCYT OC I used for this quiz:

Name - Cherry Hoglidite.
Age - 21.
Pronouns - She/Her.
Species - Half Piglin Half human.

Personality - Witty and tough on the outside, sensitive and in need of love and acceptance on the inside.

"Powers"(I say that cuz normal humans don't have these things, they're specific to her species) - Knockback fists, sensitive hearing, the ability to speak to pigs, piglins, and hoglin beasts.

Origin - Nether.

Family - Pietron Hoglidite(Father, deceased) Unknown mother.

Allies - Technoblade, Phillza, Ranboo, Phoebe, and Nikki.

Backstory - Her human mother died during the birthing process so her piglin father had to raise her in the nether, teaching her to steel from the bastion so they could survive since he wasn't respected enough to get a job cuz he took a human wife. He took his anger out on her a lot, and she has a few scars to prove it. One day she took too much and accidently dropped a gold nugget, alerting the guards, they took her father's life because he was held responsible for her actions. She carried on a pretty much raised herself in the harsh environment. Eventually she was old enough to be recognized as a wanted criminal, she saw something she had never seen before, a portal, and she leaps into it in hopes it would help her get away from the guards and ends up in the overworld. There she starts rummaging through a cabin she finds and it turns out to belong to Technoblade. They fight for a bit but eventually agree that if she helps out around the house and mines and becomes his loyal battle partner, she can stay as long as she needs too. Eventually she joins the Syndicate and becomes close friends with Techno, she develops a crush on him but I'm leaving it up to the fans and the actual person behind the Techno character to decide whether they should be a couple or not.

24% I used my self comfort character, Aurora. I daydream a lot so in my daydreams I just am her. Shes 11 years old and has dirty blonde hair with brown eyes, shes pretty scrawny. Shes DIO's kid ( I make my characters overpowered, due to long lasting effects of my brother convincing me any character I think of will become real, or I can become them when I was 4-10. ) She lives in a edited-for-convivence jojo timeline where for some reason part 5 happened in 2020? so that it takes place in present time. basically after part 5 DIO decided " ew giorno became joestar friend " and decided to take in Aurora to raise her to not be a joestar friend or something. I KNOW SHES A MARY SUE, BUT SHES MY COMFORT CHARACTER

I got 11% for my character. I'm writing a story using her. I'll just write about her.

Her name is Larka Kiea, she lives in a fantasy world. (Reason why her name is like that) She has curly tawny hair with deep tan skin and grey eyes. She's an assassin who joins a gang in book 2. (Reading the story will help make sense) She became an assassin because she found out her husband was cheating on her with her friend. She didn't have the greatest relationship with her parents. But the backstory wasn't tragic. Before she was an assassin, she was a musician, it plays a big part in the story. How do you like her?

My character is Theresa Rachel Stark and is an MCU OC. She looks usual(brown eyes, brown hair, tan skin). She has been abused by foster parent after foster parent and is suicidal. She is Iron Man's little sister and was abused by her original family also(mainy her father Howard). One day, she was at one of her first abusive homes, and an assasin came, telling her that she was a friend of the mans. The assasin then killed him, but caught a glimpse of the fresh scars that ran down Theresa's back. Assasin took the child and gave her a happy couple of months. Theresa was found and but back in the foster system, saying her name was Tessa(the assasin's nickname for her) Michelle(the assasin's name) Howard(that nae was familiar). Fast forward until it is her two year anniversary with her one good foster parent, when she has a flashback to her childhood(before any foster parents) and sees her brother. She goes home after school and there's Tony Stark, talking to her foste parent.

She doesn't know that she has a superpower, given to her by way of a botched super soldier serum that her father gave her. The serum gave her a healing power that forces her to take on someones injuries if she has skin-on-skin contact. I got 19%

Everyone else is doing this so :o

I used a guy named Arsene (15% btw) he's a pretty mean guy, and mocks everyone that he comes across. friends, family, it doesn't matter to him. due to his country (one that i made, ryx) he has tattoos over his body that tells people how many people he has fought (and won). also worthy to note: he has a face tattoo, which means he has killed someone before (it was by accident, overcome with anger)

he's friends with a prince, and a girl who has one of the most powerful magic in the world (my girlfriend and i made it up). he. he just has the ability to make good decisions.

because of his country, he's not rich and is hungry most of the time. he makes sure his friends have food before him though. they don't let him cook, he sucks at it.

he has helped a villain, but those villains are stupid so yknow. like one is an insomniac, an angry brother, and a guy who gardens. (girlfriend made the first two and the powerful magic girl)

the prince (i made him? is interesting too, i'll talk about him if y'all want me to :)

I got 15% Mary Sue, here is my OC, she is apart of the Jurassic Park fandom. (Not related to any cannon character). She was used for a roleplay. Some of her backstory is for plot.

Name: Lucinda Mara Storm'Petal (Last name is Storm'Petal because she was originally a Warrior Cat OC and I liked the name Storm'Petal)

Age: 17
Birthday: December 22nd, 2003
Sexuality: asexual biromantic
Gender: female
Pronouns: she/they

Appearance: Lucinda has wavy, chest length raven black hair. Down turned dark olive green eyes that look black. Almond/Sienna colored skin. 5'2 1/2 with a bottom hourglass figure.

Clothes: Olive green cold shoulder short sleeved shirt tucked into blue jean shorts with dark grey boots.

Talents: singing (from choir and theatre), archery (practiced for years)

Mental Illnesses: BDD and anxiety (both caused by her mother's abuse)

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Childhood:

Her life was normal until 5 years old. Her parents divorced, then her mother won the custody battle. Scarlet (her mother), soon became an alcoholic. Which made her toxic towards Lucinda. Slowly started to become mentally and a bit psychically abusive. Her mom got a boyfriend, which made matters worse when Lucinda was 10. She had participated in multiple school activities such as choir and JR. theatre. One day, her mom got arrested when Lucinda was 11. Social services got her in multiple different foster homes.

preteen;

She was in a foster home with other kids, slowly on her path to regaining confidence again and try and leave the trauma behind her.

teen; (the three girls would be on the island and cause trouble that's why they're in her backstory)

Freshman year, she was 'befriended' by Paula Chandler, Jessica Johnson, and Rosetta Hunter. Who are the toxic popular group, which she didn't know at the time that they were that toxic. She got into theatre that year. Lucinda got into a musical called Into the Woods, and got the role of 'Red Riding Hood'. Later that year, she got into another musical called Lit

25%
Name: Tracei
Species: Dog
Gender: Female
Age: 22

Preferences: Anyone, as long as she trusts them or thinks they might like her back.

Main fandom/originated fandom: Happy Tree Friends

Birthday: May 18th, 1998

Bio: Tracei is a 22 year old dog who enjoys relaxing, reading, and having fun with some coffee and friends. She did experience some negative experiences as a child/teen, as her parents separated when she was 12, and she started going to therapy a few months after. Whenever she hears yelling, screaming, overall threats, even if pretend, or anything that reminds her of her parents' divorce, she can't stop herself from harming the people who said/did these things, and once all is said and done, she immediately regrets it and starts crying. Her main weapon of choice is a knife, or pepper spray. She chose her father for custody, and personally liked it when they used to calm down and read a book or play a game. Her current crush is Flippy, a 22 year old bear. She mainly likes him because he reminds her of her father, who passed when she was 17. She also likes him for his overall personality. She hasn't asked him out to a date yet, as she is afraid he will reject her/start hating her.

aye i know this is worded poorly just because i make ocs don't mean i'm a writer so like it might be confusing n messy :D

7% garysue

I used my character Hana Amjad who after being kicked out when he was 17 for not "following god" found his own definition of god and began to believe that he was in fact a messenger of god and that god basically spoke through him to correct the world of their sins and purify the way humans acted and thought. he started a commune when he was about 20 where he would find youth and people around his age in dark places and invite them to a place where he promised family, support and happiness, only for them to preach his crazy ideas and crazy ideals for how people should think and act, when he becomes angry due to people not listening or things not going his way he becomes abusive towards his followers because in his mind he is superior to any other person in the world. he is also in a polyamorous relationship with a man and a woman which is pretty healthy for a man who mentally manipulates everyone around him

mine is 20% mary sue

my oc is someone named rin yamada. they are trans, ftm, and bi. their pronouns are they/he. they like sleeping, video games, hanging with his bestie, friday night funkin, boba, vr, stardew valley, sebastian from sv, and drawing. he has an updo with a portion of his hair covering his left eye. they have a little bit of hair sticking out the back as like a mullet kind of. they like wearing grungecore clothes and listening to mindless self indulgence. they have a pet frog named ito. they have a bad habit of biting his nails. he is currently dating their friend, aoi yakizawa, as recently they found out aoi had a crush on him, and rin liked aoi back. they cant meet up irl, so they videocall everyday. they even had a mini virtual wedding.

My OC is 10% mary sue according to this test but can you make any for object heads or humanoids and the game they are supposed to be in is cuphead and his 4 abilities are portals he can only fit his arms in that can be anywhere they want them to be, time reverse only for 10 seconds (max strength and energy use which is very rare is 1 min) making objects out of static which fades in 1 hour unless it is food because they eat it and it stays until it the nature digestion has finished, freezing people with static for 10 seconds, is that OP? they just average body and not that fit, their story is a bit tragic but are they a mary sue? do I need to weaken their abilities? in the casino their one of dice's lackeys so I tried to make them the same amount and as powerful as the rest of them. They only have 3 friends and aren't that misunderstood and people do dislike them and they dislike people, they take insults and stuff well and the universe doesn't bend to their will, Is my OC a mary sue?