Is Your Character a Mary Sue? | Comments

I got a 9%. My character's name is Lila, she's a fandom character (Undertale) more specifically, she's one of the kids that Asgore took the soul of. She's an orphan, she grew up in an orphanage until she ran away at the age of 10. She climbed the mountain (I forget what it's called) and fell to the Underground. Toriel found her and took her in, and she stayed with Toriel for a few days until she grew tired of the same routine and managed to excape. However, Asgore found her and took her soul within a few hours, as she was grossly unprepared for the rest of the Underground. She contributes to a lot of Toriel's guilt about not being able to save any children.

Appearance-wise, she's skinny with stringy black hair, blue eyes, and freckles. She likes to dress extravagantly but she doesn't own many clothes. She most often wears a small, beat-up tutu.

She's super wimpy, scared of the dark, and she has asthma, which is why Asgore got her so quickly.

Lololololol I can't say I'm all that surprised with the 7% I got. I love the old man dearly, but I haven't done nearly enough to flesh him out. His name is Gary and he's an old blind guy who's really into death metal and being a good dad. He makes a living by making and selling custom electric guitars and he spends most of his free time doing artsy s--- with his adopted daughter. The kid's name is Blake, and they're actually supposed to be the main character but shhhh don't tell anyone.

Dang, Isaac. You are incredibly boring. 4%. I get it. I purposefully made Isaac kinda average to make up for his status in the demon world. He is the heir to the underworld, but his father doesnt trust him, as Isaac is incredibly kind and sweet. Isaac has depression and anxiety. He is so unnoticeable in the overworld that the only people who know him are his small friend group made up of a few mistreated demons. Basically, he hated his life in the underworld so since his father was a reaper (a demon who teleports to the overworld to collect souls) before he became ruler, Isaac had that ability and used it to start a life in the overworld where he and his friends were just like every other human. He goes to a human high school and meets the love of his life, a human boy who happened to be the smartest kid in the entire school and was WAY out of Isaac's league.

Hmmmm...

I never new that a space cat muderer would get a 15%

Wow

23%. I'm not too surprised about this, noting that a few of the mary sue-esqe questions that involved looks I answered 'yes' to. I just think if you were to really look into my character's backstory, you'd sorta understand it more. The character I used was Tayami Ito, which was for creepypasta. Her backstory plays a huge part in her appearance, and I'd have to go into her entire backstory which would take too long to fully unfold.

I got 22%, but I feel like my character is really hard to put in these quizzes. Her name is Isla and she is a shapeshifter. She is the only one of her kind on the planet and was sent there by a goddess to save the planet from destruction, but she ended up starting a war because she became an outcast and was furious that everyone on the planet had rejected her. She has dark red hair and bright green eyes, but these can change whenever she wants. She can change literally everything about herself so it's really hard to answer questions that have to do with weight and/or looks. Overall, I think that I have to just give up on using this character for these quizzes. She's doesn't really fit into the answers.

I got 18%, that is pretty good I think! This time I tested an OC named Milly, she is a protagonist of a comic book I worked on since like, two years ago, I recently changed her appearance so I decided to take this quiz Milly is kind of a self insert, based on my 9-year old self with her hairstyle, personality, and obsession with cats, and has that outfit of my current outfit tastes, she wears a blue stripey long sleeve shirt/sweater with a ginger tabby cat on it, she wears dark blue rain boots, a blue Russian fur hat with kitty ears, she has blue eyes, a dark blue skirt, and thigh-high stripey socks. Now onto her personality, she is based on the younger me (9 years old, so it is her age too) so she is hyper, thoughtful, creative, and imaginative, and very adventurous, which suits her current lifestyle. She isnt a completed character yet but I know what my flaws were as a child but dont know how to use them as a plot device yet. Now onto her past/story, she was a normal friendly human girl until she met Yaying (another character in the book) who was an alien specifically a species called Yayis) that got his planet destroyed. And throughout the book, Milly and Yaying go on adventures, and try an fix the damage that the two antagonists, Heartbreak and ash have done to the Yayis. But yeah, this quiz was really fun!

17%

my character is sorta like a god n stuff so i'm surprised i got below 20 lol.

he's like the person who controls everything, and by everything i mean storylines n stuff lol. they're each represented by locks and are usually open which means it's a good sign and everything is going according to plan.

but then there's a girl who "respawns" every time she dies, like a glitch in the story, which would make the lock of the story close. but she gave this "power" to one of her friends when she started getting tired of it. (she got rid of it, then died in a car crash lol.) her friend, connor, found out another glitch with it, and was able to travel to different storylines, and in many different eras or years i guess? (this all takes place in my own made-up country called sinan lol.) every time connor traveled to a different storyline, it shut the lock of the storyline, which were sorta hard to open back up. when a lock is shut, strange "not normal" things would happen, like paranormal stuff but without ghosts, and if it's not open soon, then it could get progressively worse. in a storyline about 5 years later, this guy from japan finds out about it from an anonymous forum connor posted on, and wants to broadcast it across sinan on one of the biggest radio stations across the country, but it's mostly an atheist/ agnostic country, so..

and to think i came up with all of this from a deltarune theory i heard lol.

Are humans supposed to be Mary Sues bc I tested myself and got 26%.

I got 23% his name is Stephen and he has a mental disorder that his lover tried to force him to get help for it. He tries too get therapy and it doesn't work, he gives up and stops going. The only reason he got help is because his lover tried to get him to. Anyways he eventually ends up trying to murder his boyfriend (caused by him not getting help) but his boyfriend chokes him to death before he can murder him, the relationship was toxic mostly from Stephen, but also a little from his boyfriend. Stephen was more physical and emotional, and his bf was toxic emotionally. His bf got depression and anxiety caused by Stephen, and after his death he got ptsd as well. Basically it's a story about two guys one angry and pessimistic and one optimistic and Stephen makes the other become more like him, to the point when he has to kill Stephen.

17%! I just wanted to make sure, but I knew my OC wasn't a Mary Sue. This OC is the most depressing out of my other ones

My character is Kate Keller and she's 16 years old. Her past is quite frankly very tragic and suffers from PSTD due to her father and step-sisters death. Her father's death was caused because of her mother. Why? Well, her mother abused Kate when she was 12 and her father found out. Her father soon took Kate away from her abusive mother and took care of her. Her mother was enraged and planned a murder that would take place at Kate's 13th birthday on April 5th.

How the hell did this only get 40% Mary Sue? I tested on my childhood OC who was literally the mean girl and had all the powers and everybody loved her even if she was a total b----.

My character is a Red Dead OC Born in 1839. His name is Lee Evans. He had a bad relationship with his parents as he had different ideals regarding slavery. He was kicked out with his brother in '55 and enlisted in the Union army in '62. He survived but his brother did not. He became a gunslinger and was involved in gunfights throughout the 1860s-1910s. Most being in the 1880s. Lee became a Lawman in '78 and was relieved in '84. He was elected Marshal of a Utah town in '03 but was shot in the back of the head

10% Mary sue!
He also has PTSD...

I got 31% which I believe is a little bit low for a Mary Sue, My character is named Lucas Rainbow and his a ghost hunter. My story focus on a cast of mythology monsters trying to find a way to co-exist with humans. Anyways, His goal is to find the murder who killed him called Killmore, He take an appearance of an older teenager but is actually around 50 years old. Were nothing alike appearance wise, Lucas has turquoise and Blonde hair, But, When he manifest the devil instead of him, He transformed into his evil persona called Shadow Lucas which has Red eyes and Black hair. Personality however, We got somethings in common. Lucas is a nature-lover, kind,weird, honest, loving, empathic, and brave hunter that loves to go outdoors and adventure. Me and him may not have the same hobbies but we both are kind, smart and empathetic. Lucas does get emotional and easily stress of things. He gets trigger easily if someone disrespect nature, And he make irrational decisions which lead to huge consequences. Lucas will put other characters first before himself, That usually also lead him into more traps, manipulation, and more stress in his journey. However, Lucas is able to put himself at a disadvantage and always find a way to rise against his foes. Then he has some non heroic characteristics such as a tendency of getting revenge. Lucas does have some Mary Sue qualities such as being a role model but it doesnt take him away from being human since he makes a lot of mistakes and then those mistakes into knowledge. And naturally, Everyone has a role model in their life. I hope to see my character grow in the story. Lol

I got 15%

My oc is Abbie. She is basically a clumsy, shy, naive, and optimistic kid. The only thing tragic about her is that her dad is basically a manic and that she has lung disease-

She has blue eyes and platinum blonde hair, as well as peach skin. She only has one dude who has a crush on her and she is practically oblivious about it rip

For the most part, she's basically a happy little ray of sunshine who has many flaws to work on. Her life is pretty plain and she's okay with that.

All talk aside, she is mah bby ;w;

i put in everything sans had and i got 23%