Is Your Character a Mary Sue? | Comments

Hmm well, I got 22%

My character is a guy, and yes he has a weird eye colour, a weird hair colour and just a weird style overall- but that's because he's albinos. So that also means he has an incurable disease, although I won't say it's exactly a "disease". More like a particularity.

His name is Kintsugi which literally translates into "to repair with gold" and it kinda has huge meaning behind it since it comes from how people in ancient Japan used to repair broken pots with gold or silver, making the pot more beautiful once broken. And even though I'd love to, I don't have such a cool name.

He has a weird power (a power that most people think belong with murderers and thieves) making him an outcast, most people either hate or fear him really. Aaaand he has a dark past, and even though it sounds cliche, well, I really hope it's not-

basically, the world he lives in is divided between two "species" sort of, except they're both human, and Kintsugi and two other friends were hoping to bring balance between the two species, although everyone rebelled against that bullying them, but I won't go too much in details since it's a pretty massive backstory, but basically his friend is killed by someone he thought was his friend. But Kintsugi figures it out and murders his so called friend as well as all the other people who stood by and did nothing, or who bullied them before.

This justifying everyone's claims that through his power, he's a bad person. And he just spirals further down, becoming more and more like the stereotype people see in him; until my main character comes in. And helps him out of all this.

Is it cliched ? I'm really putting as much work as I can in this story, but if my characters are flat well then there's not much I can do.

All help is grateful <3

I'm ~b a c k~

This time it's fan character that doesn't have a super cringy name~

Guess you'll never know them
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Lol I got 27%,, his name is kumono nemui wich literally translated to "sleepy cloud". He's like an angel that take care of people's dreams and his relationship with his parents isn't the best but they still love eachother very much. His hair and eyelashes are white with blue eyes and details on his hair and he mostly just wanna chill with his human friends. Well that's good i guess

Haha I got a 15% for my OC Azakumu, a wolf girl that was abandoned at a young age and was picked up by the local witch to be her apprentice after the witch found her in the dumpster. At kindergarten she meets her best friend Ivy. One day Azakumu accidentally got some magic in her eyes which turned both of her eyes red and to have greusome nightmares and hallucinations, which caused her to be afraid of the dark for all of her life. Around middle school she develops a crush on Ivy, and in their sophmore year of highschool, Azakumu confesses her feelings, but since Ivy is aromantic, they just decide to be together.

I'm a sucker for happi endings, ok-

Oof. My character got 14%, says she could use some spicing up. Although, to be fair, some of the questions allow for some blind spots. *shrugs* Oh well, its just for fun. I still like the quiz.

Since everyone else is sharing too, Ill add that my character is Sinastra, a manipulative, greedy, selfish career criminal who lives in a cartoonish fantasy world. (Think the cartoon Chowder but with more magic). The world is made up of floating cities, populated by a variety of races (giants, spirits, zombies, etc) with Sinastra coming from a city mostly populated by humans and witches.

Sinastra is basically the Grinch, if the grinch was mixed with Kikis Delivery Service, and was an unusually tall and overly skinny woman with a hatred for modern technology. Modern technology in this case being puppets and marionettes (magical objects used by connecting the string of your soul to it).

When Sinastra steals an old marionette from a museum, she gets more than she bargained for with the curse it comes along with; binding Sinastras strings to the marionette permanently, and bringing the toy itself to life as an annoyingly happy child named Little Boy. Sinastras only hope to undo the curse (and to escape the authorities and the fellow criminals after the marionette) is to rely on a witch named Daz, a straight laced puppet enthusiast who believes in the merits of hard work, and wants to start her own business fixing marionettes. After them is a one-eyed zombie detective, a knightly mage who worships the moon, and Mr. Fritz, CEO of the worlds largest puppet conglomerate.

Any thoughts?

Apologise for the grammar erros in advance, i just dont care

I got 24%

My sweet child, Mikios was a part of an experiment in the bnha universe, basicly he was a mix of nezu and hawks back story. he was borm with a slight mutation that gve him a tail and clawed feet.His parents, being discriminate a--holes, didnt want him, and gave him up the goverment. He was then trained and experimented on when the secondary part of his quirk developed when he was five. he has the abilties to manipuate shadows, and become one. Great. Now he has the doctors cutting him up, and making him fight these other kids. He is kept in check with electric colors and a small cabnit which would later make him claustraphobic and hate anything around his neck. Flash foward he is eleven, the heroes found out about the fcility and he is ou o there. The hero who saved him was calld Rising Hope. She was adopted him, and he now is in theapy and has an older sis named Janey. He can speak because in a ccident he tore his vocal chords, buts fine now, Janey has been teaching him JsL and he is much happier, and is currentlylooking into finding a school.

23% - not to bad for a character (& story) who was made up on the spot that was very much inspired by a song (It's My Bad - Nico Collins on SoundCloud go check it out, its amazing) so it isnt really original material but I feel like Im going to have fun with this character/story!

He doesnt have a name yet - but he is a teenager and goes by he/him pronouns and is panromantic/pansexual (demiromantic). In the story, he gets cheated on by his girlfriend with his best friend for the millionth time. To put it shortly, he has a mental breakdown, and in said mental breakdown, he murders them both.

For the majority of the story, he is on the run from the police but not before he drags two of his closest friends (names not decided) for the ride. Not sure to end off the story, kind of just a spur of a idea.

27% wow, Raizei is my oc who died at the age of 14 and cause of his death was he was pushed off a building by his dad's homophobic gf because his sexuality is gay- and he's 21 yrs old now and ofc he's an angel. His hair is red and white in the bottom, yes he's a Countryhumans oc, his eyes are light grey, he's a positive boi. He has astraphobia and he has a lil sister who mostly visits him and his mom's grave most of the time and my other ocs are like siblings to him.

I have a total of 10 or 11 ocs and they're all like children to me.

My character was male so I don't know if that affected the score at all but I did get 14% I think I would have gotten lower if I didn't say he had a tragic incurable disease. I only said that because he has sickle cell disease, which can make you go blind or lose your vision in severe cases, which is why I needed him to have it because he starts losing vision around the age of 15 and I didn't want it to be for a random reason. His name is souls and he's from a universe I made up with a whole giant story-line. Basically, everybody has their own unique ability called a Soul Fire and some people have more powerful soul fires, these people are called destines or, destiny's, souls is a destiny and that's there are prophecies about him (And every other destiny) and that doesn't mean he's royalty either because he gets forced into purgatory for accidentally killing of half of the Kalidathian army, (Tee side in a war fighting for magic rights) and now he's forced to live on an asteroid in space big enough to have an atmosphere. Later on in the story, he does get infected by a darkness parasite, a thing that comes from the darkness, a powerful force slowly eating off the universe. (Basically, every villain in the story is a result of darkness) and so now he is slowly losing control of his own body as the darkness begins to take over his mind. When he does go fully mad, he ends up starting a "Revolution" that kills off 20% of the population of the known universe. After a while, he does end up getting killed by a huge chunk of ice smashing him so. kArMa HaHa. Souls was a very optimistic person before he was infected after he was very cruel and even attempted killing his apprentices caretaker. And basically after his death, the universe starts to go downhill, one by one each destiny dies off leaving one left who gets frozen by darkness and flung to a nearby planet, long story short the darkness wins and destroys that universe, creating the one we're in today!

%24 percent a Mary Sue! Her name is Melanie and she is a teal alien. The whole story is about monsters but the quiz doesn't really know that- So if she was a normal human the percentage would probably be a little lower. Melanie was bullied as a child because she used to go to an all human school, as it was the only school in her area. Her father was able to get a new job as a reason to move so she could go to a place with people like her, a school of monsters! She meets other people and falls in lOvE with a white alien. Aka a legendary colored alien. As they have a whole ranking system depending on their color. She also meets a team of monsters who are basically trying to destroy the whole human race. Now i'll stop explaining before this gets too long :'D

I got 26% Mary Sue. Her name is Lucky. At around 7, she is taken from her mother by an off- grid government program, where they intend to use her powers for experiments. She meets her friend there (kori), who has somewhat similar abilities. However, Kori is deemed too powerful, and taken for execution. Lucky is able to save her, and they both escape. 2 years later, They're both captured, again. This time, Lucky is taken for an attempt to weaken her powers. This causes her to lose skin pigmentation. Unfortunately, Kori is killed saving her. :( Lucky escapes, and undergoes procedures in an attempt to look like herself again. One goes wrong, causing her to lose one of her eyes. She gets it fixed, but now she looks absolutely unrecognizable. The bad guys are still trying to track her down, so she teams up with someone else to escape, and that's about all I have right now.

yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 15% lets gooooooooo

my oc is named Hawthorne! i often refer to him as Gemini subconsciously because he's kinda like... two... people?

he's a happy-go-lucky, sarcastic, robot-obsessed anthropomorphic bobcat in an anthro feline/vulpine/canine world!! he lives in a dirty lower-class suburban neighborhood near a lake with his mums. He used to have a sister? but something convoluted happened on a frozen lake, causing her to "die," and Hawthorne still really hasn't recovered since. (his sister had blonde hair, so he bleaches his hair, but it looks more grey than blonde)

after a while of homeschooling, his mumsies encourage him to go back to school! he reluctantly agrees, but decides to get lost in the nearby forest instead because he's quirky like that

after a while of wandering through the woods, he finds a disassembled android girl (whos totally not miku whos miku hdgjfgekj) lying on the forest floor. he pops off and decides to 'fix' her!! after a while of tinkering with her, she regains consciousness and immediately tries to run away from him. but, she do be a robot doe, so she's not very fast, so hawthorne the scrawny ass b---- can catch up to her!

b----ass android girl (aka minako) tries to explain as well as she could that (she's a ______ for some _________) but she has that weird ass robot voice so hawthornes like "brug" and reboots her!!! she forgets everything about being a ______ but the company is still using her eyes for analysis! some more characters appear along the story, like (delica, mysterious little ghost girl) and (sterling, sports and science enthusiast). i have a whole story and pilot in the works,, so i don't wanna spoil the entire story until i finish my animation courses. but its so cool that i get to share some crap!!!

if you'd like to know how they look, then you can check out my deviantart @appltun!

I got a 21%, which isn't bad, especially since the character I did this with is a fan character. Her name is Jorii Aoki, and she's a Jojo oc who is Jotaro's cousin. Not gonna write her whole story out, but basically one of Dio's assassins kills her parents and kidnaps her sister, so she goes with the crusaders to Egypt. Her Stand's name is Material Girl and it's basically just tactical glitter. Its ability is to make anything it covers as hard as diamond, and we all know that diamond is unbreakable. *gets ran over by a bus for making that awful joke*

I got 23%, I mean my OC is kind of a mary sue, I mean, she got injured at the end of my story, but she is really smart and she is really pretty- i wish i looked like her :

I got a 16

I feel like I wasnt able to specify because he actually was kind of noticed immediately because he began as an antagonist and just attacked them, so the other characters noticed his attacks but didn't know who the hell he was. And uh, he's actually a human that killed himself and went to hell, so in human years he's 17, but in demon years he's 21.

I'm disappointed... I went out of my way to make the Mary Sue to end all Mary Sues as a joke and it only gave me 94%... Should have been 100%, guess I'll have to find the cutting it down by 6% factor...

Yeet. Kaydia Winterwood, she lives in mid-evil times and was an orphan since the start after her mother overdosed and her father was just some rando. She has terrible memory like, sure she's not Dory, but it's still pretty bad. She was one of a few orphans from the orphanage that survived after the 'Dragon Flayers', eight warriors said to defend the 'Last Ones' against dragons. She's 18 percent sue, and I have no idea why... sure she's not incredibly pretty, and she's asexual, but love is hardly important. My opinion anyway.

10%!! Just a gay dragon genius

Hi! I got a 13% for my OC, Visby! My problem with this quiz is that none of it applies to Visby. Because they use they/them pronouns. I know it seems like a silly complaint, but for future reference, maybe instead of saying he or she constantly, try out they/them!

I got 42%

Honestly, its understandable and I accept the fact that its a high percentage. My character is 15 and come from the year 3046 that time travels to the attack on Titan time line to change it. I would but also wouldnt say she has ptsd, because shes gotten so used to the experiments and murderes.

When it comes to relationships, no one fails for her and she doesnt fall for anyone, which I enjoy because thats what attack on Titan is somewhat about, there isnt time for relationships.

Levi being a popular character, I did make it so she saves Levi and Kuchel, but she looks at them like family and nothing more, she becomes close to young Erwin, but Erwin never falls for her and shes just using him to become his right hand man when Erwin becomes a commander.

The only relationship shell ever create with the characters are becoming their friends but also being that thorn in the ass for the trio main characters.

Shes quite strong and she has around a bit more strength than the ackermans, but she still gets injured.

I took this test because I honestly thought I made my character too much of a Mary Sue, and I accept and agree with the percentage, I take criticism and if you have any for me Id enjoy to take it in and change my character to make her less of a Mary Sue.