Is Your Character a Mary Sue? | Comments

I got a 48% for my oc, which is Yukira.

Yukira basically used to be a human, but she had a bad past (family issues) , now shes half human and almost fully demon (someone offered Yukira a good life but she got tricked and experimented) , a headband she wears is important to her, an illusion disk for her to hide from the negative humans. (Illusion disk is like a more human like form) . She got Mary Sue-

I got a 27% for my OC Emmra Drop.(her story is actually based off of a role play I was apart of) she was born into a cultist like religion. she serves as a spy for her colony. after a few missions she realizes how different the colony's lives are compared to the other places she was seeing, she started to want to leave the community she was in and join the others. there was two options, leave now and be searched/hunted for by her community or wait till her next mission and despair seamlessly without a trace. she's impatient and decides to leave right now, she was being hunted and searched for she hided in a small cave to hopefully escape the search party's and then met another person hiding named lunar, he was hiding because they were being hunted down as a ritual sacrifice. (lunar is not Emmra Drops love interest) a lot happens and at the end Emmra did not have a good ending so to say but on the bright side lunar returned safely to his family so yay ?

sum more info:
19yo
5''8
likes journaling & drawing & singing
is not really good at drawing
ex best friend is named willow

I got 17%. I used a fan oc for this (bfb oc)

they are a division algebralien who is very quiet and sensitive.

they are short (about the size of x) and are a bluish purple color. they like taking naps and drawing. they prefer to be alone near a nice view.

I got 21. The OC I used for the quiz was Tierra Greene. She has Earth abilities due to an experiment done to her. She can only use Earth and cannot use any other element.

She is the illegitimate daughter of a Queen and a psychopathic scientist. Her father experimented on her and other children. She was sent to a childless couple but was kidnapped by her actual paternal aunt and the couple were burnt alive.

Tierras deadly sin is mainly pride as she isnt very modest.

She later marries and has children.

I got 14%

I used my main OC Evie Summers. She has short black hair with an orange streak (dyed) and dark brown eyes. She has an extreme phobia of vomiting, but she has a very weak stomach, so she ends up almost vomiting everyday. She is kinda smart, and she is disliked among a few students, as she can be extremely nasty. She has insomnia. She is 15 years old, so 2 years older than me. She is a bisexual queen. She dresses emo, gothic and grunge. Her favourite bands are Gorillaz and Nirvana. She is American and lives in Aberdeen. She writes Wattpad fanfiction for funsies. She often uses British slang.

I expected her to be more Mary Sue lmfao.
She's basically a different version than me.

If I was a nasty American 15 year old with black hair and emetophobia and insomnia.

woah.

Your character is 21% a Mary Sue!

I used an OC named Sachiko, she's a vengeful spirit of a high school girl.

She was severely bullied and ended up dying in her bathroom, now there's a rumour about her that says if you write someone's name in the bathroom three times she'll kill them.

One of her eyes is bloodshot, as a blood vessel popped when she was dying.

18% not bad

Since everyone posts their ocs I guess I will to

Her name is Briar Rose, she is from a country known for not having any powers but still rivaling the strongest country, she trained her whole life to protect her country from beasts because of an incident that led to them getting kicked out of the continent and getting no rights/privilege of protection. She found out about the truth of the reason why us because her ancestor made weapons that scared the celestial royalty(highest royalty, like the noble of nobles) so they killed the ancestor and threw away the country. And so she decided to gather the weapons(which are given to different countries as treasure) then kill the celestial royalties.

No tragic past if you don't count the fighting off beasts to survive

I was afraid she is too op because I had to make her be able to fight entire countries but I managed to do some plot to make her over average but not godlike op

I was really glad she didn't turn out to be a mary sue

23% for me!

My character is my danganronpa self-insert oc! Her name is Ramiko Kinos---a, she doesnt have any special powers due to the fact powers dont really exist in Danganronpa, its just teens trying to escape a school.

Shes 18-19 years old, has black hair thats into two small down pig tails, Shes African American (In real life my skin tone is more of a lighter brown color, but my Dr oc is fully colored brown.) And her outfit is mostly black and grey, and has an athletic body shape.

She is the Ultimate Personal Fitness Trainer.

She doesnt have any trauma surprisingly, and It kinda makes me feel like my oc is kinda Mary Sue-ish.. its because I cant really think of any type of traumatizing backstory for her. I may change this if I ever do update my oc lore.

My oc lives with her Mother, Grandmother, Grandfather, and Dog!

(I live with my Mom, Grandmother, and dog irl. But my Grandfather passed away in 2018, Rest In Peace to him.)

I shipped my oc with Chihiro Fujisaki! Hes my comfort and highest kin character.

I wanted to make my oc have a female muscular type of body due to the fact I wanted to make my oc look a bit unique!

Chihiro is a shy person, so I decided to do the opposite with my oc and make her strong!

This is a good tip if you want to make self-insert ocs! Try to make your oc kinda the opposite than the character your self-shipping yourself with.

I got 10%

Ots a cat. Its a fluffy 8cm cat that have moth wings. He has 6 legs and a tail that makes him 12cm. He is very fluffy and very cute. The fur is white with hints of light purple. The eyes are black like if a cat is supper concentrated on a target, to contrast the purple, the eye color(apart from the balck) is dry green

i got 29%

my oc is a fanmade mha oc his name is remedy his quirk is dragon which allows the user to fly and breath fire like a dragon it only occurs in 1 in a 100 people and he was lucky to get it when remedy's mom found out she didnt like it she had a thing with kids were they whould always hate her and she thought the same for her son 9 months later he was born and she gave him a few years of trauma till he was 4 then she snapped and trued to gauge his eyes out leaveing him blind till this day he has ptsd and trust issues his adopted dad is kirishima

I got 15%

So Juna is a 14 years old singer and child actress from South Korea. She started her acting career since she was 6 and also composed most of her songs. She also pretty skilled at playing guitar but of course all this skills needs years to develop. She started both singing and dancing lessons shortly after she started her acting lesson and she was very tired at first. Her popularity started to risen at age 10 and this is also the same year she started learning guitar mainly because she grew interest with the sound

She is well-mannered, calm, collected, and intelligent but blunt and sarcastic especially if she's around her close friends or family but her bluntness can be a problem as she was pushed by some or few of her peers because of this trait. She's also distant as she was almost always alone during her days in elementary and quite skeptical the people around her after experiencing being used for her talents mainly by adults

As for her appearance she has a wavy black hair that reached her waist and gentle pale purple eyes. She usually wears streetwear or casual clothes and not really like feminime clothing

I genuinely don't know what to think of my score (9%). My character's name is Jefferey. He didn't have a good relationship with his parents during childhood because they often socially neglected him. Later in life, he struggles with disassociation and hallucination. At some point, he gets a pink rabbit hat because he feels it summarizes his lifea weird trashy waste of space. His clothes slowly start containing more vibrant colours and mismatched clothing as his mental health deteriorates. At some point, his fashion mostly consists of neon colours as his hallucinations blur the lines between reality and fantasy. No longer being able to tell what's real, he spirals into insanity.

I got 23%. Not horrible, Id say. My OC is a catboy- or- cat nb- who was based off of the infamous UwU cat. Their name is Jay. They wear a lot of pink and have pink hair and eyes, different shades, though. Theyre generally sweet, but just a little bit egotistical sometimes. One person fell in love with them (it was, of course, my own version of the infamous demon alpha wolf bad boy). They also have autism. I love them so much.

I also got 27% for a different OC. His name is Yukio, and hes sort of based off of Eijiro Kirishima. Hes kind to people and also insecure. He also has red hair and eyes- but in a different way than Kirishima. I know that doesnt make sense- but yk. He lived in an abusive household until he was rescued by another one of my OCs when he was about 16 or 15. Hes also autistic because I make all of my OCs somewhat like me nobody has ever fallen in love with him, but that wasnt an option so I had to put 1-3. Anyways, I love him too

17%, not too bad.

Astrid is my original character for a book I'm writing. She starts off as 13, and in the end she's 14 (3 years older than me). She is a quiet Norweigan girl who has moved to Brooklyn, new york. My story takes place in 1968 - 1969. She knows only how to write in english, and thus is forced to communicate with others solely by notes on paper.

She falls in love with a rambunctious young girl named Elizabeth, and the two meet in secret every day underneath a filthy old stone bridge.

Around a year after meeting, Elizabeth discovers that it is illegal to be in a realashinship with the same gender. Infuriated - Elizabeth takes Astrid to a small gay bar on the corner of Christophers street.

Stonewall.

During the police raid that one fateful night, Astrid is killed. Pretty much the summary of my story. I am aware that nobody died at stonewall that night - this was just for the story.

I got a 31% I made a oc who was built on the lms railway

I got 20% I made an oc who is just really morally gray she's mishaps and many people hate her for being all around anoing she will help when it's convenient for her , she has my flaws such as dyslexia and asma and a constant habit of talking to her self she really doesn't have a backstory she just showed up one day and hopes between worlds to mes with the casts of the shows such as pranking harry Potter or anoin deku to his braking point and just likes having fun

I got 22%
I used my stranger things oc for this XD

Basically, she was Harry pottered to the Byers family and grew up with them, she always hated her dad because he was a drunkard, but her mum and her brothers were always there for her and,especially her brothers were ready to defend her against anything. She'd find metal and DND at a young age (about 10-11 years old) and was fascinated by it. Through this hobby she'd befriend Eddie and become part of his party, they'd go to all kinds of concerts and festivals together and have fun. At about 15 years of age she'd find out about her sexuality (she's a lesbian) and come out of the closet to Eddie, through that she'd find out that Eddie is actually gay. One day she'd take her brother home and they both go missing. While in the upside down she gets 'killed' by the demobats and wakes up as a vampire. She then finds her brother and tries to protect him, but through mysterious ways she gets pulled back into the normal world. There she tells everyone about the upside down, but the policemen think she's just so traumatized, that she imagines things. Her brother then gets found and she finds out, that she isn't the only vampire in the world. She's introduced to the brotherhood and they explain that she is a 'royal', which is because she wasn't turned by another vampire, but by 'bats of another world', and that she possesses a lot more power than the non-royals. She also now knows, that once she doesn't drink blood for a month, she falls into a 'bloodlust', which means that she can't control herself and her body anymore, and her instincts go wild. Now there's a lot in-between, which I haven't decided how to go yet, but after some time she gets abducted by the Russians and escapes by using her bloodlust against them. While all that she hides her powers and pretends like she can't control them, incase she needs to use them as a kind of 'suprise attack'. Her family then moves away while she stays with Eddie. Then season 4 happen

I did this for my OC named Zander and I got 13%

He lives in a post apocalyptic distant frozen desert land that was ravaged by global warming and then machines.

He's kind of like this tired 30+ old scientist that was tasked long ago by the government to retrieve life on earth 1000+ years after the catastrophy.

He was genetically preserved in a tank in a secret labratory underground where he was released from after all attempts of stopping the catastrophy failed, 18 yrs old at the time and tasked to literally reboot the entire eco system is kind of a big burden to put on barely an adult.

He lives in that labratory and almost exclusively never goes out because he's terrified he might catch a disease or get hurt and that might halt his progress in his research, so basically a wimpy mad scientist guy in a post apocalyptic sci-fi setting.

Zander is 6'2 in height, lean with almost no muscle and a really pale complexion, he has curly shoulder length brown hair and usually wears a long brown trench coat and a grey turtleneck underneath, he also wears round glasses and has pernament eye bags.

Oh lets go 13%!

Im wondering why however as he is a a--hole of a swordfish whos a leader of a mercenary group in Norway for a Continental Sport where they beat the s--- out of one another. Hes 8 feet tall and when he becomes a swordfish he is 14 feet LONG. Hes a bard so he has to be talented at singing and with the European technology help and heal his team with his own music, only written by him or it wont work. But if im going to be for real thats normal in his universe with even more insane and cartoony ass world of Europe he lives in. PLEASE FOR GOD SAKE GIVE ME ADVICE FOR THIS PEACE OF INSEX s--- I CALL The Bard.

22% Mary sue.

She's a UT OC that was made to be a joke Mary sue but then I actually started working on her and she turned into a good character :,D wtf is wrong with me. Anyway, here

Sansa (joke name. Also no her real name). They are a Skeleton that has major ADHD and no magical powers. The reason for no magic was due to a damaged soul, so not only a lack of powers, but a shortened life span. The only way she could use magic for a short period was through "chemical magic" which is mixing monster magic with chemicals to liquidfy the magic to be drank. Will one last a few minutes. Sansa (I wheeze at the name every time lmao) is a 42 year old, with a height of 5'6. For being so old, she is surprisingly active and childish, possibly due to ADHD.

yeah that's all I got

I got an 18% on my character, Zibethicus (Beth for short). They're a muskrat who died hundreds of years ago, but was accidentally reanimated by a necromancer, who was trying to revive her girlfriend. Beth's skull and consciousness was put on a human skeleton. They're incredibly smart for a muskrat, but in human terms they are an absolute idiot. They ended up with some necromancy powers but have no idea how to use them and keeps accidentally reanimating random things. They started out as a joke character but at this point I am incredibly attached.

I got 15% for my original character, Aveline Mandel :)

Aveline was 5 years old, attending kindergarten at Castor Elementary, when her music teacher noticed she had a beyond-exceptional singing voice for her age. However, this same music teacher was involved in a large underground operation which abducted young children for talent-based experiments. Aveline was an easy target, so she was soon abducted. The organization then spent months traumatizing her into the point of disassociation, and restructuring her RNA so that she would completely forget her past aside from singing. After that, they spent five years tirelessly training her voice, so that it would be as perfect as possible. All of this was to evolve societys talents, and create a superior human race. When she was ten, one of the other children (academic talent) started a riot and escaped, helping Aveline and several other subjects escape. However, due to the neurological trauma the subjects suffered, they soon forgot and / or repressed the memories. Their life expectancy is also very short as a result of the experimenting. One day, in October, a group of detectives began searching for a series of suspicious missing children cases. There, they found Aveline and took her in.