Is Your Character a Mary Sue? | Comments
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I used some of my OCs for this to determine if I needed to work on them, but I will show you my MAIN one, Airbus.
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Airbus is a 19 year old air dragon that is in high school and is roommates with a friend she's had since middle school named Emily. She has wind elemental powers, but is lazy so she doesn't use them much. She also is overweight, but she still tries to go above and beyond when it comes to helping people. Is this good because I left a TON of details out because I didn't want to go past the character limit.
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Woah, 12%. Its alright though, being a downright terrible person is his whole shtick.
Honestly didnt know what to put for whether I described my character poetically. Ive called him quite a few things the only one I can find at the moment is our beloved fruity little dirty sack of burning maggots. Not sure if thats poetic enough for you, but Ive never written anything more touching.
Loved the quiz btw! This was surprisingly well made, thank you :))
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While I agree that this is a good quiz, what the frick is your name lol?! (not trying to be rude)
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17%! Wow, i actually expected it to be higher. Especially at my age- (11). I used an oc of a world i created on my own, her name is Nyrix (16 y/o). I was inspired by the song candle queen by GHOST. So basically, its like a country that has four kingdoms: Akyo, Fimuney, Deyx and Zenu. All have different powers. If you were born in Akyo, you can control the wind. If you're from Fimuney, you can control fire. Deyx: Plants and Zenu: Water. The royals of the four kingdoms get to have another power. Nyrix is the Queen of Fimuney, she has fire powers and plant powers. When she was born, her mom fell into a coma, wich put her dad into a deep depression. After 6 years, the mom died in the coma. The dad had a breakdown and blamed Nyrix for putting her in a coma. He tried killing her, and managed to rip out her eye. After that he hanged himself. When Royals die, they're usually consumed by their powers, since they're that strong. So when Nyrix' eye was ripped out, a part of her brain took this as dying and made thorns grow out of her eyepit, on her arms and legs. Nyrix was the queen of Fimuney from that day on, since she didn't have any more relatives. Nyrix became a very harsh and cold queen, because she didn't want anyone to think that Fimuney was weak. Everyone that made a tiny mistake was killed. And anyone that was against that way of ruling, was also killed. Simple. Once the prince of Akyo visited Nyrix, and they played around with their powers. Xay (Akyo prince) took Nyrix on a ride with his power, and they accidentally universe-traveled. They were now in our world in the year 2016. They collected money by shows of their powers. Xay accidentally found out about the thorns in Nyrix skin, and they found a way to remove them (still need to think of one oop-) They universe-traveled back, and since the time in the kingdoms works different, they were away for 5 years, even tho it was just 2 weeks. Fimuney was so angry at their queen for just leaving them, that they eventually
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* that they eventually killed her. Since they didn't have a queen or king anymore, Fimuney died. Since Fimuney was dead, the other kingdoms also died. The end
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The OC I used for this quiz is an android who time traveled from a few years from the future. She was defective and ran away. If youwant more info, check out the comic called Akukx-1247/Astoria on ibispaint.com
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Vale Sayer is the character I tested out at 16% a Mary Sue, which I think is rather impressive for my Level 14 age. His story is that he was born in London, England in the 18th-19th century, and had a normal childhood, but when he was 19, he was accused of murder and was executed for a murder he didnt commit. The name Vale Sayer is an alias, and he is referred to with many other names, but he is a thief with a bounty on his head the fake names are necessary to keep himself out of prison, as he has negative connotations of prisons, jails, and the cops (which in the afterlifes are called the Badges, which is headed by seven people who control all of the afterlifes government called the Council), because of his past.
He does have one illness, which in this world is called "corruption', which essentially causes a soul's body to slowly deteriorate, which is a big part of his character, as I imagine that growing up, he worked as some construction worker/farmhand, and he is supposed to act as the muscle or semi-powerhouse of the main 6, so him having an illness that would weaken him is a good negative trait or setback in my eyes. The only real supernatural trait about him is the mark around his neck that he received as a kind of like a branding from his hanging, and his eyes, which are a kind of pale green caused by the effects of the afterlife, and his corruption combined, as his eyes before death were hazel, but going to the afterlife turned them dark green, and when he got corrupted the color sort of drained from his eyes.
He also is sort of the groups older brother figure, being one of the first members of a small ragtag group of thieves which consists of the other members of the main 6. Together they go around, stealing and scamming their way through the afterlife to put food in front of them, all while being chased around the nation by the badges. There is more to the story than just stealing, as Gods and Goddesses exist, but since Im planning on making this into
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I got 15% "Characters at this level could probably use some spicing up without any damage. Go ahead and make her a little prettier!"
Girl but... my character is hella pretty, she just doens't have the tragic innecesary past and even tho she has magic and is a warrior princess I want to make her relatable for the non-existing reader, but I like the result, it means she could pass as a normal teen as I intented and not an over the top mary sue
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Got 22% for my oc named Asuka Amaha. She gets abused by her parents and is a demon. She has black eye whites and red eyes and white hair with indigo on the bottom (not from hair dye) she wears comfy clothing and is a Demi girl and a lesbian. She has a girlfriend, and is lazy but is a kind person that would risk their life to save a person they just met, shes kinda chubby but its not overweight.
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I got an 11% for my OC, Vision. She is a fortune teller and can predict things based by how people look at her not in her direction, though because that overwhelms her abilities.
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I got 14%. The OC I used here is Rhinestone (One I came up with yesterday lol):
Appearance: She is a humanoid figure made of stone and gemstones. She can create anything out of gemstones with her power, and creates her clothes depending on the occasion. Her head floats and is diamond-shaped with a chip in the corner. Her body is light lavender.
Age: 23 Years old
Love life: Nobody-Personality: Chill, fun, kind, caring, can be overly attached
Catchphrase: "We'll meet when rain is falling, like rhinestones from the sky!"
Powers: Geokinisis (Limited by how large the object being moved is), invincibility (Due to her being made out of gems and stone), summoning (Limited by how large the object being summoned is)
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the quality of the character majorly depends on what you're planning to use them for. sounds like this is just a fun train of thought inspired by my favourite gorillaz song lol
but if you want actual in-depth honest feedback for a character you need to be interesting bc you're planning to use it for something (like a project); hmu :)
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My Oc I used here is called Quinton Williams, hes a 26 year old investigative detective with Aspergers, depression, anxiety, and a few other mental problems due to some past trauma that heavily relates and impacts him in the story and is a key component to character growth.
Hes from Kansas and grew up on a farm, along with training for his detective role, so hes well built and pretty toned, he maintains this by training regularly and walking his dogs. Hes very unkept and looks messy but hes a pretty good looking guy, hes got freckles beauty marks and scars littering his body, hes also covered in bruises and other injuries because he bruises easily and doesnt really care.
Hes very unkept and doesnt really care about his appearance, and doesnt take care of himself, he has scruff, bags under his eyes, and his hair is a mess. He relies on caffeine for his day and occasionally finds himself drinking alcohol. He takes meds for his issues. Hes socially awkward, as in he has trouble functioning correctly around people unless theyre super close. He gets hyperfixated on things easily and says really weird and awkward things in attempts to be funny or relatable, which leaves him nowhere.
He also has some other personal issues that are spoilers to my story.
His bf/husband is a dude named Damien, whos the opposite of him. Damien is super well kept, flashy, rich, confident and well liked. Theyve been friends for about a decade and a half and Quinn is the only person Damien became close with due to strictness with his dad and an inferiority complex with his sister
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I also have Aspergers and depression/anxiety, I dont want people to think I gave it to him without knowing about it btw lol
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So what are Damien's flaws? Sounds like this could make a really cool story if there's some kind of twist, like your guy Quinton viewing Damien as perfect until at some point it all falls apart (maybe Quinton cannot accept the truth (if so, make the reason why part of the plot)), or maybe Damien is like a metaphor for who Quinton wishes he could be (maybe bc of his mental illnesses), and he doesn't actually exist (although I would make Quinton aware of this (but maybe not the reader), since otherwise you'd have to add another mental illness to the list (since I don't think delusions like believing you have a perfect husband when you have none are a symptom of either of the two illnesses you mentioned), and the list will just seem like that: a list) but something like that anyway will really flair up your concept, make it shine, tie it all together ya know
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I relate A LOT with your OC Quinton there.
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I relate A LOT with your OC Damien there. Oddly so, in fact...
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My OC 16% Mary sue
His name is Rayes, Shard Shade/SS is his nickname or callsign, he is a Forman, a shapeshifter species from a different demention. A trained warrior from a Shield Clan faction.
Bio
Rayes is a Forman that had a mental sickness that trigger his high emotions like anger and madness. It first been release when he was bullied and abused by few of the Clan members and one of the high rank warrior, it make him become an unstopable rage and mortaly wound every Forman that had hurt him, it cause him to send to an Asylum for a year. But luckly the Clan leader give him a chance and proved himself that he will be a better person.
He join the FSF (Forman Special Forces) of the Shield Clan, with his two cousins and two best friend. After completing the near impossible training, the five group callsign is called "Pack 10" with his older cousin as the Captain of the group.
Even tho he had these illness, he's actually a nice guy (if you didn't trigger his anger or making him upset), and be kind and loyal to his family, and play with children, because it remind him how happy he is when he was a kid, playing with his old friends who's been saperated because they were recruited from different Clan. He really afraid of being left out, because spending time in the Asylum in a white room alone without his family and friends by his side had leave an emotional scar in his heart, that's why every mission, he try his best to keep his allies and friends alive and prevent anyone turning into him. Rayes can be rude to anyone who he disliked, even attack bullies and become very brutal to them, because he think they are responsible for his anger. He was feared by many of his clan member and close allies, not daring talking to him when he had bad day, the only thing that can calm him and talk things out is his cousins.
Note : Forman is a fictional species, the species is human that can change into one powerful monster or beast, from other species and other demention (a.k.a
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I finished doing the quiz for my second mlp oc, her name is Harmony Swirl! She got a 15% mary sue.
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The character I used for this is name Ble koudoni, (means Blue bell in Greek :D) shes an mlp character, her character isnt all that interesting. So she got a 19% mary sue, time to do another mlp oc!
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23%! I like to think I've improved in conceptualizing characters that aren't the manifestations of dripping perfection covered in cringe.
The character I was thinking of is one I technically have had in my head for a while but haas went through a hefty chunk of re-visualising since I was a tween haha. Their name is Wyatt Eswood, a Canadian college student (and perhaps involuntary drop out due to whatever story I chuck them in) of North African/Arab descent since I wish there were more characters like me out there. I think this change in here heritage is rather important than me since I went through a "wishing I was white stage" most second or first gen immigrants go through. If you know, you know.
Very short brown curly, twisty hair and good old basic brown eyes. I call this an upgrade from the flat hair and ~dark blue eyes~ I had for them (her at the time). Was majoring in Kinesiology and minoring in International Relations before adventure.
A fairly average person, some background in sports, hobbies, etc. Until story happens where, idk, universe glitches or something along the lines of quantum mechanics and ends up in another dimension that's essentialy a show they either watch or used to watch. I imagine she lurks in the shadow to either bring a better ending for the characters and doesn't get introduced explicity until a while in the story. No born powers, but their real power is the power of knowledge, using their otherwise freaky know-it-all brain to be a step ahead and therefor a potential ally or threat to others. Think of it like, if theres a plot that involves magical item that gets disposed of, they'll nab it to use before its disposal.
Otherwise, a goofball. On the outside, they portray serious, wise, and or cool demeanour. So smart and clever. Hang around a bit longer and she's the dumbest, most distracted and risky taking smartass you'll meet.
"You've met the mysterious cloaked person who resides deep in the forest? Said to watch over and prot
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also sorry for any typos or words that got autocorrected into smth thaat doesn't make sense. Not only have I written this late at night but my computer's keyboard is also cucked lol
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love how im now rereading it and gosh i wish this website would let u edit posted comments hahahahahaa
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OH IT DIDN'T EVEN POST THE WHOLE THING :/ all that writing for nothing. they didn't evne give me warning well goodbye. glad i made this account just to post this
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phew
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I got 19% and that's OK, she used to be a Mary Sue, but then I decided her to NOT be the chosen one and be narcisstic and that changed everything.
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This was for my 17 year old charater named Silvia, she was abandoned on October 14, 2004 when she was a baby at a orphanage, she had a traumatic childhood and is a killer, she carries a chainsaw around and s--- too. It turns out shes 27% a f---ing mary sue, but whatever, i still care about her either way
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I got 22%, which I am unsure if it is accurate.
Starting with his pros, Orion is a cat (my story is in perspective of cats). He has a sister who is essentially a governor of a colony. Theres a slim chance in one of the colonies that the cats are born with three different powers. His specifically are invisibility, healing and strength. Peacemakers are what is kind is called, and they claim their kittens almost three days after birth, to be trained as one of their own.
Orions personality; he doesnt like help (Ill explain more on that in a moment.)Hes usually stressed about something, or irritated. He doesnt show up like that, but it can quickly escalate if someone doesnt understand what he is messaging.
Orion was acting very strange when he was first brought into the peacemakers, and they soon discovered that he was dumb (not stupid dumb, speaking dumb)
Though the book, Orion has to use morse code with blinking. Only about 25% of the cats in the series can understand him, so hes constantly mouthing words and repeating himself slowly. His main weakness really is that he needs help with communicating quite often, which causes him a lot of problems in the later chapters.
Overall, its like hes the smartest person in a math class but has adhd, so fails anyway.
One more pro I should mention; he is a master of healing, using his powers to assist him.
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Do you mean he's mute?
Also, you never mentioned any cons? So now I can't decipher what these points should be pros to hahaha
But it sounds like a really good arc, has a lot of potential, especially if you manage to make the cat thing fit into the real world somehow (like people's regular house cats are secretly superheroes), and really get some plot obstacles going with this healing power of his (maybe he has doubts about being good enough to use them or something, it's a good chance for character development and story building, try to tie it together with the rest of the story so that it all makes sense and feels meaningful)
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The OC I used for this is An alien who can shapeshift, his name is Orion Agara. He has purple skin and white hair because he (doesnt know yet) is the son of Lotor (he is a Voltron OC) hes hated because his primary race is galra, and he got a 27%
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My character Blaise MacKay got a 26%. I didnt expect him to get a quarter score. He is an elf from a fantasy world Ive created, and he has heat magic abilities (which get more powerful as the climax approaches).
Hes 17, and has brown hair with orange eyes (Thats normal among elves.) He has a pretty normal appearance other than that.
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Id rate him about a 5% Garry-stu. Unless his personality is an all-knowing, loved by all handsome dude with zero flaws, he seems like a character with a lot of potential, without being an awful protagonist.
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17%
My character is around 22 years old, she has blue hair and red eyes (that's normal for her world) she is a villian. Her parents died when she was little, and she got adopted a few years later by a small family with an older son. Let's just say they where not nice
She started her life of crime when she was around 16 let's say, by doing some petty theft. When she was 19 she burned her adopted parents house down and devoted her life to crime
Her name is Comyt (Com for short) and her pronouns are She/Her or They/Them
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Svetlana Kholodkova. 21 percent mary sue. (yes bnha oc.)
Female, Aquarius. 17 years old, a bit taller than Bakugo, but shorter than Iida.
Changed her surname to 'Ryokyo' To uh, 'fit in' with the other students.
A smug ISTP. Russian too, she has three sisters and four brothers.
Black hair, fluffy in the back. Mousy brown eyes, droopy eyelids, the smug type. ( kind of like Neito Monoma. Just kinda of. ) She's rarely angry, but when she is, it's the destructive type. ( I don't wanna say this, but she has big breasts. *wheeze* ) She is kinda based off of Fubuki from One Punch Man. He hero costume is similar to Fubuki's outfit too.
Messy room, bad at math, trouble focusing. Svetlana think's it's funny provoking people, especially one explosive student.
Negative traits:
Mean.
Cruel when she's angry.She will join in putting someone down if she doesn't like them.
Svetlana likes making others feel bad, depending on the situation.
Haughty.
Self-centered.
Mean insults.
Good traits:
Friendly.
Social, actually.
Great conversationalist.Get's along with almost everybody in class 1-A.
Good at writing in Russian and Japanese.
Good at making others laugh.
( it was hard to think of these. )Her quirk is a Psychic Aura. It's confusing, so i'm not gonna write about it.
I accept constructive criticism..not breaking down criticism.
I hope you enjoyed my oc..k bye lol
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if you've ever heard of my immortal i did this for the main character ebony darkn'ess dementia raven way and only got 36%
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I got 16% My Oc Is kinda humen though she has bunny ears. She is 21 years old and she mostly only sleeps and makes gacha videos
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I got 18%. My oc is a teenage girl named Sonya Clifford. Her past used to be perfect until her stepbrother got killed while they were on a family trip. They never found the culprit for the murder. Her stepdad left the family and her mother got depressed by this. When she became 17 years old she moved into her own house with her butler. Now she has an unhealthy obsession trying to find the killer of her stepbrother and she shuts everyone elses out of her life. And no she doesnt have powers, shes just a cold and bratty but still lowkey intelligent teenage girl.
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