Is Your Character a Mary Sue? | Comments

Right, so I got 27% so I might as well describe them.

My OC is a self insert, made to represent myself in my YouTube videos and roleplays. Her name is Mud and she's about 6'7, from head to hoof. Her legs are a deer's, and she has a black bushy tail. She's extremely skinny with a flat chest (my body type) and mostly wears an oversized batman t-shirt accompanied by a yellow, leather collar.

She has pale skin and freckles, and her hair is light orange. Her hair is extremely curly and is worn in a ponytail. One of her eyes is black with a hazel, heartshaped pupil, and the other is hazel with a black heartshaped pupil. She's filled with bees, and because of that became a walking beehive and cannot feel pain.

Some of the non-self insert properties, is that she's a creation of a super prestigious demon family. Mud's cannon name is Moss, and she works as a servant for the family. She had raised almost all of the family's children. Moss was created by Kiru to be overly powerful. He took the properties of the most dangerous animals on earth and put them together.

Most of Moss' obstacles are stemmed from her mental state. She's terrified of failure, and gets attached to people way too easily. She has a rather childish personality, and often says things without thinking that makes people dislike her easily. Moss is also really stubborn and doesn't like accepting help or anything like that.

Everyone else is doing this so :o

I used a guy named Arsene (15% btw) he's a pretty mean guy, and mocks everyone that he comes across. friends, family, it doesn't matter to him. due to his country (one that i made, ryx) he has tattoos over his body that tells people how many people he has fought (and won). also worthy to note: he has a face tattoo, which means he has killed someone before (it was by accident, overcome with anger)

he's friends with a prince, and a girl who has one of the most powerful magic in the world (my girlfriend and i made it up). he. he just has the ability to make good decisions.

because of his country, he's not rich and is hungry most of the time. he makes sure his friends have food before him though. they don't let him cook, he sucks at it.

he has helped a villain, but those villains are stupid so yknow. like one is an insomniac, an angry brother, and a guy who gardens. (girlfriend made the first two and the powerful magic girl)

the prince (i made him? is interesting too, i'll talk about him if y'all want me to :)

I got 15% Mary Sue, here is my OC, she is apart of the Jurassic Park fandom. (Not related to any cannon character). She was used for a roleplay. Some of her backstory is for plot.

Name: Lucinda Mara Storm'Petal (Last name is Storm'Petal because she was originally a Warrior Cat OC and I liked the name Storm'Petal)

Age: 17
Birthday: December 22nd, 2003
Sexuality: asexual biromantic
Gender: female
Pronouns: she/they

Appearance: Lucinda has wavy, chest length raven black hair. Down turned dark olive green eyes that look black. Almond/Sienna colored skin. 5'2 1/2 with a bottom hourglass figure.

Clothes: Olive green cold shoulder short sleeved shirt tucked into blue jean shorts with dark grey boots.

Talents: singing (from choir and theatre), archery (practiced for years)

Mental Illnesses: BDD and anxiety (both caused by her mother's abuse)

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Childhood:

Her life was normal until 5 years old. Her parents divorced, then her mother won the custody battle. Scarlet (her mother), soon became an alcoholic. Which made her toxic towards Lucinda. Slowly started to become mentally and a bit psychically abusive. Her mom got a boyfriend, which made matters worse when Lucinda was 10. She had participated in multiple school activities such as choir and JR. theatre. One day, her mom got arrested when Lucinda was 11. Social services got her in multiple different foster homes.

preteen;

She was in a foster home with other kids, slowly on her path to regaining confidence again and try and leave the trauma behind her.

teen; (the three girls would be on the island and cause trouble that's why they're in her backstory)

Freshman year, she was 'befriended' by Paula Chandler, Jessica Johnson, and Rosetta Hunter. Who are the toxic popular group, which she didn't know at the time that they were that toxic. She got into theatre that year. Lucinda got into a musical called Into the Woods, and got the role of 'Red Riding Hood'. Later that year, she got into another musical called Lit

Alot of people are doing this so I decided to join in with the comments. (This is a MHA fan character)

I got 16% Mary sue
Name:Rozeru nabihop
Quirk: Rose demon

Looks: pinkish redish hair with green eyes, black horn's with rainbow colored flowers on them and a black tail.

Quirk description: can control flowers and plants, but they have to fully wrap around one of her limbs for her to use them. They also slowly wrap around that limb getting tighter and tighter. Thanks to this fact she ended losing her right leg and now has a prosthetic leg.

Backstory: Rozeru grew up in a normal family, and ended up attending UA around the time Aziwa and President Mic were enrolled. She was in class 1-E with some other students. She grows up and leaves UA, during one of her missions as a hero ( she called herself Dejdmon) she found a female solo villain and got captured. Unsespectingly the villian was weirdly kind. Couple of weeks later they fell in love. After this Rozeru realizes that she can't be a hero and love this villain, so she instead becomes a vigilante. Keeping her hero name.

My character is named Ashanna. (Ash-a-na)

She lives on a planet called Emoria. It is basically a replica of the earth with different animals and contidents. It is an au Earth where everyone doesn't pollute the plant, has elemental powers (Fire, Air, Water, Earth (called Emoria),Engery and Darkness. If anything Major happens on earth they alert Emoria if it was good or bad and what lead up to it so they can avoid it if bad and try to make it happen if good. Also they are all replacements of humans on earth. Ashanna is a replacement for a girl named Lori. Whenever something major happens they feel their pain. At anytime the replacement for a mom giving birth will fall onto the floor while giving birth and a baby will appear next to her.

Ashanna is a Fire Emalent (that is what they call Humans) SHe is 14 and has no idea who her mom is. The person representing their mom fell on the floor with 3 other girls next to her. They all live together now. Ashanna and her "sister Novella (Energy) were practicing their elements when Novella git shocked and died. Ashanna blames herself and has Tanidenphobia, the fear of partnership in emoria. She had brown eyes \that look like they are burning when shes mad. She is 14 and 5,8 my dream height. She has black hair that is died red and magenta. She is very good at her power.

I made a new OC, Morutchi Kontayo!

She is a circus performer that has anger issues but is still easily excited. She has a lavender like bear cap that covers her hair, a purple dress with black polka-dots all over, darkish blue jeans, and boots. She's Chilean and occasionally likes to make traditional South American dishes such as empanadas for both her and her workpartners who are each around the same age as her, 18-19 (she's 19, an '01 gal [I think]). Her birthday is May 9th, which happens to be Mother's day.

She got 28% but I tried to answer the answers that I know are true/false about her.

I kinda wanna roleplay with someone, but I don't know which OC I should use. Or who I should ask lol-

Anyways, I need help deciding on a main OC to use if anyone wants to roleplay with me. If you wanna help, I posted my own descriptions, and replied to other user's descriptions with my own descriptions.

31%

She a Hazbin Hotel OC, her name's Luffinsoka and she's a spider demon who was a human in the living world. She was a mixed Irish criminal, but her first theft and un-life were both accidents. She also started drinking no no juice at 18, and died at age 24. She now resides at the Hotel, where she mostly hangs out with Angel Dust and Husker. She also enjoys playing video games such as Fallout, and reading things like Harry Potter or Twilight. As a spider demon, she has purple skin, cyan eyes and purple hair, which were both with her as a human (the eyes and hair). She also has 2 extra arms, and a small fang pointing out of her mouth because why not? Also, when human, after her first crimes, she started getting into the feeling, idk why but she did. She did get 1 year in jail at 18, but she wasn't caught anymore after that, but not because she stopped. Also, she absolutely DESPISES Valentino. So, that's Luffin for ya-

Also, Tracei has Burgundy/dark magenta eyes, a minty green nose, a light pink body, purple inside ears and a purple stomach, and rosy pink cheeks. She also is OBSESSED with Hot Topic, Pop-Cult (I think it means Pop-Culture), and Clairs, three of her favorite stores in a mall. She also enjoys reading, especially the Twilight and Harry Potter books. She's on the 5th Twilight book, Midnight Sun, and the 3rd Harry Potter book, The Prisoner of Azkaban. She also likes the book series, Dork Diaries (it's like Diary of a Wimpy Kid but underrated, and in my opinion, better-), and is unsure about whether or not there's a 15th book yet. Her favorite coffee is a White Chocolate Mocha Frappuccino with Whipped Cream, Caramel Drizzle, and a little bit of Cinnamon.

15%

welp, I guess I should ask if shes boring. creepypasta oc btw. also sorry for bad grammar and being out of order. :/

Shes known as The Babysitter, but her real name is Chris. Her mane weapon is a metal softball bat. She also has a backpack with the following supplies in it: Children's toys, water, food/snacks, books of nursery rhymes & old wives tales, hair ties, medical equipment, complete mask, multiple fabric masks, Sharp things. Idk if Splendorman has proxy's, but if he does shes one of them, if not, she just works with him. Her targets are late babysitters, parents who leave before the babysitter gets there, adults who bother her. shes asexual, because who needs relationships? Not her! Shes 16. I think. she likes cows, children, fake curse words, socks, Splendorman. dislikes; Chickens, adults, Jeff, BEN, Slenderman, high heals. Instead of a catchphrase, she sings old nursery rhymes. method of killing; bashing heads in with her bat, blood letting, other old wives tales weirdness. she also dresses pretty similer to me, and has short black hair. She was abused and neglected a lot as a child, and thats why she doesn't like adults, but protects children.

7% marysue

Ummm.... i think my character is marysue in 30 %

I got 10% out of a traumatized charcater who does things wrong all the time and is not excused for it- weird. I thought that was normal. There's also the antisocial-ness and average appearance. She would be pretty not in-world but pretty much everyone looks like her besides eye colour so I can't really say much on appearance since she's average at best. There's also the whole magic explosion that killed a ton of people thing and being adopted by someone who was supposed to kill her which is pretty cliche. Also somehow got mastery over her powers, albeit she had a "tutor," in a short amount of time. Then there's the dictator thing and oh my god she's weird.

mine is 20% mary sue

my oc is someone named rin yamada. they are trans, ftm, and bi. their pronouns are they/he. they like sleeping, video games, hanging with his bestie, friday night funkin, boba, vr, stardew valley, sebastian from sv, and drawing. he has an updo with a portion of his hair covering his left eye. they have a little bit of hair sticking out the back as like a mullet kind of. they like wearing grungecore clothes and listening to mindless self indulgence. they have a pet frog named ito. they have a bad habit of biting his nails. he is currently dating their friend, aoi yakizawa, as recently they found out aoi had a crush on him, and rin liked aoi back. they cant meet up irl, so they videocall everyday. they even had a mini virtual wedding.

Did you just say that Antisocialism is a mental disorder- thats extremely incorrect

I got 24%.

Name is pronounced Nedai but she shortens it to Nee. She has tanned skin, a slim build, and long black hair reaching her shoulders. She has completely solid gold eyes, x tattoos all over her body that glow orange when she gets angry, and a pair of small brownish-golden horns on her head. Between the horns she has silvery antlers that radiate a sort of blue smoke, which changes colors depending on her mood. She is also much taller than most, because she has a sort of anthropomorphic deer legs that are very long. She usually wears a T-shirt from a popular brand in-universe and jean shorts, and she sometimes puts a leather jacket over it. In her human disguise her eyes turn brown with gold flecks, the horns, antlers, and deer legs disappear, and most of the x's all over her disappear, leaving just a few on her arms.

Her story is that long ago, she and my 2 other oc's (Igi and Tao) were the first beings to exist. They started the universe billions of years ago, and the blast was so powerful it knocked them out for a couple hundred years. When they woke up, a society had been started with deities each owning planets and nurturing the life on them. They each decided to find a planet and hopefully one day create a great civilization. Igi and Tao worked hard to take care of their planets, and so did Nee... at first. But then one day she made a volcano erupt, and she liked seeing the organisms die... soon she became more and more addicted to it and a couple million years later, wiped out the dinosaurs. She saw that a new species was maturing, and couldn't wait to do experiments on them. Igi and Tao found out and tried to stop her. This started a great war that lasted for who knows how long. In this war Nee created devils and Igi created angels to serve as armies. At the end of the war, Igi and Tao created a thick golden collar that wrapped around Nee's neck, and it silenced most of her power. For her last spell, Nee permanently removed the same amount of magic fro