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My OC is 10% mary sue according to this test but can you make any for object heads or humanoids and the game they are supposed to be in is cuphead and his 4 abilities are portals he can only fit his arms in that can be anywhere they want them to be, time reverse only for 10 seconds (max strength and energy use which is very rare is 1 min) making objects out of static which fades in 1 hour unless it is food because they eat it and it stays until it the nature digestion has finished, freezing people with static for 10 seconds, is that OP? they just average body and not that fit, their story is a bit tragic but are they a mary sue? do I need to weaken their abilities? in the casino their one of dice's lackeys so I tried to make them the same amount and as powerful as the rest of them. They only have 3 friends and aren't that misunderstood and people do dislike them and they dislike people, they take insults and stuff well and the universe doesn't bend to their will, Is my OC a mary sue?

My OC is 15% marysue according to this test but this was a confusing test because he is a alien a lazy one and he excuses himself for it because his mom pushed him to his limits in education when he was little he is intelligent with education but lazy and i used this to drive the plot forward he landed on earth and got stuck there and meets other aliens no one hates him but 't got to know him no one likes him either they hadnt he tries to create communicator to tell other aliens he was stuck. he was in a trio of aliens who were nice enough to take him in and he hid with them and they got to know each other and became friend he has a slite crush on one of them whos past is unknown she can be a little obnoxious at times but she is pretty and was slowly opening up until my OC messed up and and got mad I know its bland I'm still working on giving them personality

Hmmm... Not really sure about that. I checked everywhere if someone believed it she's a Mary Sue, and none of them said so. I also don't, sHe's grEat! She's a warrior cats character called Dawncloud. She left windclan because of her mental disability, I'm not sure how it's called but it's that you're afraid to have contact with any other people. She didn't knew she was pregnant at that time. So she born her kits, everything is good. Until the twolegs start poisoning the rabbits. Dawncloud accidentally feeds one to her kit, wish dies. She is heartbroken, but she can't leave her other kits without a parent. In the great journey, she just follows them. One kit didn't survive it. After they reached the new territory, she spies around, looking for a new territory. but then, she sees something traumatic. It is this Tom, who always had a crush on her since they were little, getting chased by dogs! He tries climbing up a tree, but windclan cats aren't made for climbing. So the dogs pull him and start ripping his stomach open. Dawncloud could hear the loud pain scream. He manages to escape, and looks around to try to find a place to hide. He sees Dawncloud hiding in the bushes. his eyes teared up, while he whispered "I thought you were dead..." He continued running as fast as he could, but the wound stopped him. He got slower and slower after every step, until he just laid down and waited for the dogs to kill him. They did. After that, Dawncloud felt so responsible for his death, because she didn't even try to help him. A few sunrises after, she tries searching for new territory to live with her only alive son. She crosses windclan territory, and sees a patrol passing by. The leader of the patrol, who also was the leader of the clan, Berrystar, ran up to her, biting Into her neck, intensely whispering "you killed my son, you killed my son" over and over again, leaving Dawncloud to die Infront of her kit. I wouldn't really consider her as a Mary Sue :/

Did you just say that Antisocialism is a mental disorder- thats extremely incorrect

Are my characters that bland? Did it for two of my characters and got 10% and 11%. It said I could probably use some spicing.

My ocs are Carolina and Sam. Theyre both demons and he demons powers are all stored up in a bottle theyre all born with and if another demon steals the bottle they can use it. But if the bottle gets destroyed or all the liquid in to spills out the demon dies.

Sam is a lower middle class demon. Her main ability is to hear sounds well, but she steals some other abilities from other demons later on. Shes not very appealing but not unpleasant to look at either. Shes 24-25 years old, got blue eyes and red hair, and is very athletic. She dies later after getting her bottle stolen and broken by my angel oc.

As for Carol I thought she would be in the Mary sue category considering that shes a nobility amongst the demons, is attractive, rich, and powerful. Literally her only flaw is her lack of physical strength and her s---ty personality. Her main power is to control people like puppets but she stole a lot more from other demons. Shes 30+ years old and loses her arms and a horn after being mauled by another demon oc.

;w; i did alot of googling due to not knowing if an angel is a mythical creature 23% im so sorry mateo-

No my character isn't....welp I dont even know what or who Mary sue is

I got 15% yay! Well I worked on this oc for more that an year so it would be pretty dissapointing if I would've got more hehe. I mean she is 14 and sometimes smart, most of the times not when needed, and when she is out with people she tends to try way too hard to look cool and it comes off as annoying or even cringy. Oh and her name is Saorsa and she is romanian. Tell me ur opinion about her! <3

I got 11% for one, and 15% for the other, which is pretty good in my opinion.

The first is 25 year old Aarin Estrada. He has medium length black hair, green eyes, is 6'2", and Hispanic. He's very smart, but is also lazy, and it's hard to get him motivated if he's in a depressive state. He has suicidal thoughts and self-destructive behaviors (unsafe driving, sleeping with many people, self-harm). His mother died from cancer a few years before the story starts, and his father has dementia and is in a nursing home. He works part time as a sort-of investigator. Aarin houses the second character, Keith Williams.

Keith is 21 years old (only a year older than me), and has messy black hair and blue eyes. He's 5'5", and is half-Korean, half-English. He's hardworking, but is also childish and irresponsible. He can also be very violent under stress. Keith lived on the streets until Aarin helped him. He was molested for years by someone who took care of him, and is has a fear of intimacy because of it (genophobia). He's helping Aarin with his cases. They end up growing close while working on one case that has to do with how Keith ended up on the street. A lot of the story is centered around how they both help "fix" what's bad about the other (Keith and his distrust of everyone, and Aarin with his self-hatred).

I've had these characters for a few years and they mean a lot to me, so I'm glad they don't sound to cliche, lol.

I got 23%. Considering that my OC in the MHA world (kinda) I'm surprised. I'm working on a animation channel visual novel with my Oc's from MHA called "The Sane Asylum" and I wanted him to be one of the main characters

His names Tokyo Ouma. He has Long brown hair, Green eyes, blue contacts, short, 14-20 though out the story, Mexican/Japanese, Light skinned, and acts like a kid. Imagine Togas quirk but he can only copy quirks and if he has it for to long he will instantly pass out.

He's in a testing asylum under a hospital for his past actions in high school (Killing his close friend). The only family member he has problems with is is father, he's a real mommy's boi tho. He's rude causes he's trying to keep his guards up and keeping his 'Hero' rep.

I just give him a oversized hoodie and pants with a body full of scars and came up with my first child I've ever loved <3

I decided I wanted to take this 1 year apart with the same character, with the changes I had made. Darksong, originally Darkstar. is a dark grey tabby with yellow eyes. She specifically hunts birds, Is in love with someone who she grew up with named Foxfur. Her original character was the child of Greystripe and a rogue named Chaos. Yikes. Chaos is still her mother, but instead of being abandoned, her mother ans sibling were kicked out for breaking the warrior code.Her original character is 24%. the new version is only 14%. Nice improvement?

My character is a girl with brown hair black eyes and is an orphan. She has never seen her parents shes has a 9yo friend but shes kinda normal. She only sticks out cause her eyes are ALL black like no white in her eyes

does the bad actions my Character does count even tho he has did and its his other personality doing that lol

HUH. I got a 17%.

My OC is a college student named Rhodes Bramwell (red hair, blue eyes), that was rushing to finish the most important essay of the year (she couldn't graduate without it) but ended up running out of time. With only an hour to the deadline, she's confused, delirious and slightly insane. She finds a random business carded (gifted to her by her deceased great aunt, Hettie) that says "More Time! We can all use a little more time. Call [a phone number] to receive more time!" She dials the number ("What's the worse that could happen?") and somewhat to her surprise, a professional-sounding woman answers.

Rhodes wakes up the next day, her essay turned in and her apartment a mess. She thinks: Well, that phone call must have been a delusion made up by my overworked brain.

It wasn't.

While Rhodes is out drinking to celebrate getting an A+ on the exam, she is approached by the professional-sounding woman who introduces herself as Hester Finch.

Apparently, Rhodes had signed away her freedom for the next eight decades (this time is measured by an hourglass with her name embossed on it) to the Chronos Incorporated (I have no idea what 'incorporated' means; I just didn't know what to name the damn thing), a company that controls time, in the exchange for the ability to stop time. The upside is that while working for the company, she is functionally immortal and can't age. The downsides are that she can't talk to her friends while there and she loses her chronokenises when she leaves the company.

The story follows her life as a tired bureaucrat and part-time time traveller.

Wow I got 12%

My ocs Sadoko. Shes got light brown hair, dark brown eyes and a furry personality. Shes got a phobia of being left behind and thats basically the majority of the story. To sum it up, its a story of love and loss and her path to recovering from her first loves tragic departure. As well as some fantasy/supernatural elements, as her former love comes back as a ghost (who sticks with Sadoko for a year while helping her recover from her loss). I plan to write the story EVENTUALLY but, Ive got the characters down :,D

27% Mary Sue.

My OC is called Thomas, a 17 years old bounty hunter in One Piece universe, without any Devil Fruit ability to speak of, just haki (hardening and observation) and good ol' style brawling. Almost died from being stabbed by a band of thieves and thrown to the river, but was saved by Tashigi.

Thomas leads a band of bounty hunters that operate East Blue. While Thomas and his crews hunt pirates as a job, Thomas himself has a personal vendetta against thieves who

"ravaged" and killed his mother, and generally made his life miserable. Thomas' crews clashed with Nami once but they let her go in exchange Nami returned all the money she stole from Thomas.

Why do Thomas' crews stay in East Blue instead of hunting bigger fish in Grand Line? Simple. They don't have good enough ship to survive Grand Line's unfriendly climate, and East Blue is the easiest bounty hunting job.

I said that Tashigi saved Thomas' life, but there won't be OC/Tashigi. I have plans to pair him up with my another OC. Personally, I don't like pairing an OC with a canon character.

Pretty bland OC, I think. But I will try to be better.

I got a 35% mary sue,
I can see why,

my character has so many ethnicity's and species because shes got a super big and royal family,

her past is very, sad,

but the good thing is that for every species I add I'll add even more weaknesses,

i'm currently writing a book series called Wilted Roses and its a fanmade JJBA fanfic,

if you wanna go check it out my wattpad account is Fnafkidfan0522 I have a Bruno Buccirati / Buccelati pfp and a peppa pig JJBA themed pfp to

15% mary sue. The only reason I felt I earned this score for my OC is that I took the time to develop his story and character.

I got a 19%. I dont know if I'm satisfied because my character DOES technically have a mental disorder, (PTSD) and eventually goes on a murderous rampage. These actions are not excused though because, while in a violent state, he is in complete control and is not excused for this. (At the end of his arc, he kills himself because he knows that he is too dangerous. Plus, he had seen and heard all of what he needed to.) Yes, he has a tragic backstory, (of basically surviving a nuking in his country/town that he used to live in) but it is used to give context to his PTSD and thus why he has sort of a... racist/violent additude towards the race that nuked the place. (I keep this very vague because of future reason's) Now, he technically isn't like this during most of the episodes. (Again, vague.) Normally, he's a kind, silly person that has an old timey sense of humor. (Mainly because he's a 1930's cartoon character that happens to live in a world with MANY other things.) But I feel that the quiz could use more options to show my character more.

--12%---
name: H-37s

Species: Idk she has demon horns a plugin tail

age: unknown but looks 14
hair: black
skin color: black

shirt: a white shirt with a strap that leads to cuff with japense writing that means: too cute

demon horn: neon green (left), hot pink (right)

tail: rainbow

sock color: neon green (right) hot pink (left)

shoes: neon blue and yellow
eye color: neon blue
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sexuality: Asexual
romantic attraction: panromantic
favorite music artist: girl in red

lore: long story short she was created by my inventor oc

Got 11% for a Pokemon OC.

My character's name is Elena who is a protegee of Lance and Claire from Pokemon. Blonde, blue hair, and really pale, she has spent majority of her life training in caves. Elena, like most dragon trainers, love dragon pokemon.

She has an overtrained, spoiled Hydreigon (because of favoritism) which she needed to woo and bribe for him to actually follow her orders. She learned from this and thus was able to train her Dragonair properly which by far is her best pokemon. The rest of her party include Gible, Fraxure, and Bagon who she unfortunately was not able to train much because of said obsessive favoritism for Hydreigon and she would get reprimanded by Lance and Claire because of this behavior. She has a huge crush on Lance, might even say a simp for him, but does not get the kind of attention she wanted from him as Lance remains professional with her. Claire uses this info as some sort of blackmail for Elena to actually shape up with her training. Having to have her name and reputation stained in Lance's eyes as her biggest fear, she strives to be noticed by and impress him in all the ways she could, sometimes embarrassingly so.

I got 25% wow

I have a character who is recognized fairly easily but not in their first appearance since the first appearance of that character is in a crowded lunch room where everyone who is royalty eats (character is a queen) she did have a tragic past which gave her PTSD and a fear of knives. A lot of people fell in love with her because they think she is hot but she never really likes any of them. (most are fanboys/fangirls/fanthems) probably since she isn't ever gonna give her ghost hubby up. She does have purple eyes but they are pretty common as most people on her planet have weird eye or hair colors. Her PTSD is never blamed for her actions and she is pretty selfish sometimes. She actually only befriended the M.C to get revenge on her enemy, who the M.C dislikes. However, she does have a nice side that the M.C gets through to before the big bad fight. She never had a bad past with her parents so no need to apologize to them. That's about it