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Guess what number I got.... 69%

OC Part 2 LMAO
Name: Dream'Pool
Rating: 88%
Age: 17 Moons
Rank: Warrior
Clan: RiverClan
Prophecies: 0
Fell off of a waterfall

Positive Traits: empathetic, energetic, hopeful

Negative traits: cautious (kinda neutral NGL), daydreamer, short-tempered

Likes: sparrows, training (as an apprentice) friends, all clans, peace

Dislikes: hawks, sleeping, waiting, bad cats, rogues, StarClan non-believers, violence

Appearance: grey-blue fur, green eyes, and a bushy long tail. Short fur.

Backstory: when Dream'Pool was only Dream'Kit, she never knew who her biological parents were. So, she grew up with her adopted parents, Spruce'Wing and Wind'Whisker. She had a great life. When she became an apprentice, she was mentored by the leader herself, Fog'Star. She grew up to be one of the greatest warriors. However, during her apprenticeship, she lost her mentor and fell down a waterfall! A kind cat saved her, and her name was Sparrow'Leaf. She got scared, but she survived. Not even a mom later, Sparrow'Leaf killed herself by leading off that same waterfall. She mourned, and vowed that everything Dream did would be for Sparrow.

Name: Suntail
Rating: 84%
Age: 18 moons
Rank: medicine cat
Clan: WindClan
Prophecies: 1
Parents died after first prophecy
Positive traits: loyal, hardworking, sweet

Negative traits: envious, prideful, overworked

Likes: herbs, interacting with the StarClan, casting for kits

Dislikes: showboating, swimming, sleeping (very active)

Appearance: orange tabby, very floofy. Large tail, bandana. Brown eyes. White mittens.

Backstory: when Suntail was 2 moons old, she had her first prophecy. Soon after, her parents died. She mourned for a long time. Her father was the previous leader of WindClan. The new leader was very selfish and unkind. She ran away from WindClan and became a rogue. By the time she was 6 moons, she didn't enjoy the rogue live. She returned to WindClan and had a 1 moon sentence to torture. She got a scar from that one moon. She is now a medicine cat training an apprentice, Mothtail.

Woodedstep! He my real cat. Named McGoo and he is 86% well made! (He fat)

Name: One'Foot
Gender: Tom
Clan: ShadowClan
Age: 43 Moons.
Rank: Deputy

Personality: Trustworthy, fierce, realistic. Harsh, and his realism can appear as pessimism.

Appearance: One'Foot is a tall and broad-shouldered tom with a peanut coloured pelt and a chestnut brown tail and paws. One'Foot has shamrock green eyes and a brown area on his face. The tom has one extra dewclaw which is where he got his name, his ears are pointy and also.. brown.

Mockingjay
She-Cat
42 moons (approx. 3.5 years)
WindClan
Deputy (died before leadership)

Mockingjay is a white-based and sleek-furred cat with splotches of silver tabby and brilliant green eyes. She was widely known and fairly popular among other Clans at Gatherings, mainly for her fighting skills and excellent stories/storytelling ability. She was in one prophecy involving the deputies of each Clan where they were to work together and stop a war among every Clan. She died fighting alongside her leader (who died in the same battle) against an invasion of rogues.

Lynxheart

Clanborn, but when he was a kit his mother died due to a monster when they were out in the woods. He couldn't find his way back and for several moons hunted and fought for his life. One day his littermate found him and was overjoyed. Lynxkit mumbled in his sleep, only words a medicine cat could hear. Shining cats came down to him and said " your time is not over yet, little one. Wake up."

The knowledge of this seemed to posses lynxpaw and was in no time made a warrior, then deputy. When lynxheart spoke of his past, you could just about make out a blinding flash of white in his eyes, then if you looked into the depths of his eyes you could see stars glimmering faintly. The only cat who noticed this was a former loner. Butterpelt. A beautiful sleepfurred tabby cat with warm golden eyes. They tell in love and had 6 kits. But little did Lynxheart know there were much more challenging things ahead.

My OC is well made
Lavender'Wing
She-Cat/WindClan apprentice/8 moons

Appearance: Lavender'Wing has a lilac pelt with a slightly deeper shade of marble rosettes. With a rare eye mutations, making her eyes a shade of purple.

Health Issues: Limp in both hind legs

Personality: Charismatic/Positive/Eager to please/Dishonest/Submissive/Self-conscious

Likes: Exploring the moor/Causal chats/Windy days/Green-Leaf

Dislikes: Going to the medicine den/Rain/Failing

Shorten lore: Lavender'Wing was the only kit out of a litter of 5 to not be a still birth. But was instead given the imperfection where a bone in both her hind legs weren't put in their proper places. And wasn't able to walk until she was 5 moons. Though with both her parents being rouges, they only stayed with her when she was unable to walk. Once she was able to all, her parents picked her up and dropped her off in a bush on WindClan territory. Lavender'Wing waited for a few nights for her parents return, but was saddened when she realized they were never coming back. It was only her cries of sorrow that lead the WindClan warriors to her. Though since that day, she has been accepted into the clan. And was given her proper prefix and suffix. Lavender'Wing is very grateful to StarClan for how her life has turned around. Though she might not fully understand it just yet.

my oc i quite strange
Ashtuft

he was clanborn, but as a warrior he ran away from his born clan, Smokeclan, and became a loner in unclaimed lands. Ashtuft lived in an old, partially torn cabin worth of twolegs. Because of where he lived, though, with the horrible weather and constant danger, no twoleg wanted to live in a place like that. In the cabin, there was once twolegs so there was a fireplace, a fabric chair, and Microfiber carpet that he enjoyed clawing at. he also often when outside to catch prey, and he lived alone. to any cat that might see through the window or come in, Ashtuft's eyes will look supernatural and intimidate any cat that sees him. He is often mistaken for a dark forest cat. once he died, he still stayed in the cabin and any cat that looked or came inside would still see his piercing gaze in the cabin warning them to leave.

i got good oc
Mantidstar

Mantidstar was born in a group of rouges, his name was Moonlight then. He was born with a black pelt and white chest, and yellow eyes. One day when most of the rouges were asleep, a cat came back and rather than bringing food, they brought a lit cigarette. So, when he spat it out, the grass caught on fire and a few rouges died because they were sleeping. Moonlight got separated from the other rouges, but he was only panicked because of the fire caught on his ear, so he put it out on a small patch of grass, he was only a few moons old. A few moons into shifting more onto the loner side, he met with another loner who was named thorn and they became friends. A few moons later, a twoleg took Moonlight and left Thorn behind. Moonlight was a kittypet for days until the twoleg found an infection in his ear from the fire and Moonlight had to get his ear cut off or else there would be deadly circumstances. Moonlight was horrified after his ear being removed, so he ran other of the door and into the woods in a panic. After strolling around the forest for a while, he came across Risenstar, Risenclan leader, who greeted and took him into Risenclan due to a previous disaster that they called the death storm that wiped out most of risenclan. The medicine cat, Crowpelt, also got a prophecy specifically about Mantidpaw saying "Only a cat as stealth as a mantid can fix a broken clan's mistakes" Previously. Skip into time, as a warrior Mantidheart met his old friend Thorn only his new name was Nighttusk. Mantidheart was the deputy as the old deputy, Tornclaw, died of poisoned prey. After Mantidstar became leader, he made Nighttusk the deputy. Eventually, Nighttusk died of his own foolish curiosity, and he jumped into a grinder. Mantidstar was in disbelief for a while, but eventually he made the new deputy Pebbleshade.

Lives:
1 = Food poisoned
2 = Earthclan attack
3 = Gathering battle (sadly ;-;)
4 = Ghostclan attack
5 = Pushed into a pit of mice
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How developer is your oc

Name: Mintnose
Clan: Riverclan
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Medicine cat
Eyes: Mint Green

Fur: White with silver tabby legs, ears and tail

Descr:

So she met a Thunderclan tom named Chestnutfur (btw I made the whole Riverclan) when she was an app and they fall in love and he left the forest for Mintnose so she would't get caught but she still has his a kit but she didn't know abt him because he was only one and after he's born she left Sparklekit to a Twoleg place hoping they will afopt him and yea

Name: Raccoonshade
Gender: Male/Tom
Clan: An OC Clan named "BrightClan"
Age: 19 Moons
Rank: (Young) Warrior

Personality: Mischievous, clumsy, reckless, stubborn, sneaky, untrustworthy

Likes: Starry nights, messing with people

Dislikes: Being told what to do, boring situations

Appearance: Raccoonshade is a small, lithe tom that has gray fur with black raccoon-like markings. He gets his name from his raccoon-like appearance. He has distinctive orange eyes with a singular white streak on his face.

His pelt is slick and smooth with short fur. He has almost no scars visible. He has short legs and a very slender build.

Backstory: Raccoonshade's mother was named Duskstep. She didn't want anything to do with him and often mistreated him. She was very neglectful towards him. The closest thing he had to a mother was an elder in his clan named Moonshine. She took care of him when his mother wouldn't and told him stories to keep him entertained. His father was named Spiderstar and he was unaware that he was born for a long time. He has an older brother whom he is very close to. His name is Stoneriddle. He was actually mentored in secret by him. They would meet up when their clans fell asleep, as they are in different clans.

93%! Yes!

Name: DuskLeap
Gender: She-cat/molly
Clan: WindClan
Age:IDK they just old
Rank:Elder

Personality: A committed, friendly, cheerful she who tries to be independent even though she is death.

DuskLeap was never a real apprentice or warrior because of her hearing problem. Her brother and her had a great bond and he found a way to communicate with her. Although she never had a mentor she was determined to learn. After her brother finished training he helped her learn everything he did. As warriors she and her brother went out of camp and played together and tried hunting. Once he had passed she was overwhelmed and went to see her mother(SpiderFog) for comfort. Her brother helped her on her journey to starclan.

my oc is larchbranch! she's a charcoal bengal [mostly white/silver with matte black bengal markings] molly with golden yellow eyes from a roleplay server on discord.

she's a roseclan soldier, and about 34 moons. she is a lesbian!

her theme song is you stupid b*tch by girl in red and her current voiceclaim is angie martinelli [played by lyndsy fonseca] from agent carter!

she's a pretty wild gal, and never lost the adventurous personality that many kits have. she's fairly normal in all aspects, and grew up with two sisters. she isn't evil and she doesn't go to the dark forest, i just wanted a fun cat to play around with. that's just me, i like picking more minor roles so i can't get stressed like i would be in a leader, deputy, medicine cat, medicine cat apprentice, etc situation. i usually roleplay as elders, warriors, and apprentices!

anyways, that's my girl!
and i got 98%! teehee

coniferthicket a thin, long-limbed she-cat with short, well-groomed, soft, black fur. she has a tuft of fur on her head, and narrow, dark yellow eyes.

personality traits

she is clever, sarcastic, and untrusting of rogue cats or cats from other clans. she is un-fond of kits and has a small group of friends within her clan.

skilled and weaknesses

coniferthicket is an exceptionally good hunter, because of her good nose and sharp hearing. she is bad at swimming and good at climbing ; she has a unique fighting style, often jumping around to confuse her opponent. this strategy works well on new warriors, but she often struggles against more experienced warriors who know how she fights.

likes
* nighttime
* running
* leaf-fall
* hunting
* frogs/lizards
* gatherings
dislikes
* hot weather
* rain
* fighting
* fish
* caves
* mud
she doesnt have a backstory.
90%!

Name: Hugo
Gender: Tom

Clan: lives with his mate sunspot , in shadowclan, ruled over a weak leader. sunspot plans to take the role.

Age: about 20 moons
Rank: never really joined the clan

Personality: politely rude, a bit cowardly but would do almost anything for his loved ones.

Likes: likes to collect random things, a mouse bone, Once he found a ring outside. when he lived with his homefolk he enjoyed the company of the family dog Hattie, who sometimes got on his nerves.

DISLIKES: not being comfortable/well fed, other cats who give a sense there better in every way possible.

Appearance: a chunky orange tabby tom, wide pale hazel eyes, a handsome-ish face. Sort of gives a sense of arrogance.

Some backstory: he was living happily being fed every day before he was put on a diet which he was discussed by, he went outside trying to catch some prey, and wondered further and further away from his home. Hugo suddenly Hurd heard a painful yowling, ducking into bushes, a blood stained, twisted sort of cat was limping as fast as he could away from something. Another huge light gray Tom steps tored the bloody one and brutaly kills it and drags it away. Hugo panicked of what he saw bolted and found his way to windclan camp were he begs to stay for protection. They agreed and was going to be given the name finchpaw which he refused. Hugo made close friends with sunpaw and she knowing that shadowclan was weak, and wanting power they plan to go there. after he had stayed there for a while she developed a crush he was ( kind of ) unaware of, later becoming mates and so on.

I used a cat i made up, Voidclaw, they are a tom, their clan is leafclan(known as LC) which replaced Skyclan,currently they are an apprentice but will be Warrior then Deputy then Leader, they do have a prophesy, given to the dead toms that raised them, Flametail and Jayfeather(straight from normal books, these are about 40 years future,) the prophesy is "There will be three, Raised by Jay and Flame, and the Feather of the Moon, who hold the power of the Moon in their paws" Voidclaw and Shiningheart(she is a medcat) and Moonfeather(my friends oc also yo bagel if you see this) are the three, Voidclaw: Swift as a Leapord, Fierce as a Lion, Golden claws(grandpa was farmed for them), Shiningheart: can speak with the bookclans(erin hunter book clans) and has Diamond claws, Mother was farmed for them, and Moonfeather: can see much better and hear. This was long.

Still working on my oc a bit but they got tortured by there old two legs that tried to abuse and kill her so she fled with tons of cuts on her and is blinded in one eye so she wears an eye patch she made of from wolf fur she found. She has trust issues and is a loner. Still working on the name and I want her to eventually start her own clan or join riverclan sense she is a excellent swimmer. She is 5 moons old and has a gray and white pelt with silky fur but messy. Pawsome quiz mate.

My OC's name is Dewfur she comes from RiverClan, and she is 32 moons old. She's a lesbian.

Dewfur's personality:

Dewfur is slightly more introverted. In converstions she is quiet, considerate, and funny. She is guided by her heart and likes to watch fish in the river. Dewfur can also be competitive and destructive. She doesn't share her opinions, but when she does it's in favor of war. Dewfur is power-hungry and is hoping to be leader one day.

Rank: deputy

Apperence: Her fur is desaturated gray with a striped tabby pattern. It is shaggy and long. She has a triangular face with circular blue eyes. She has a soft voice and a leafy scent. She has a long, fluffy tail and is considered loyal to most but she will turn evil.

Backstory: Her mothers were Featherface and Dappledpool, she was very close to Featherface because Dappledpool died shortly after giving birth to four kits, which left Featherface to raise them. Featherface was killed by a fox and after she became a apprentice and worked hard to try and please her dead parents. She soon began to go mad, and killed two of her siblings, Blueheart and Greythorn. Ever since she has been longing for power but acts loyal to one day become leader of RiverClan

Family:
Dappledpool (with StarClan)
Featherface (with StarClan)
Greythorn (with StarClan)
Blueheart (with StarClan)
Olivetail (alive)

Bro- I got a 69% like- I'm so unmature and I'm trying not to laugh :,)

My oc is, Cyan'Breeze. She is a small elder she cats with a cyan pelt and eyes with black spots and toes with a black mask. She lives in river clan after being a leader of Thunder Clan and wiping out a clan by herself over time. She was a good cat and went to star clan after being killed by her sister from jealousy, rip.

Age:192 moons (16 years wow!)
Gender:She cat (Female)
Mate:Elk'Face (Died in a fire)

All names:Cyan'Kit, Cyan'Paw, Cyan'Breeze, Cyan'Star.

Parents: Mom:Meadow'Cloud. Dad:Five'Foot.
Time born:Oct/5/2078 at 5:34 am.

Name: Merrytrot
Gender: Male/Tom
Clan: ShadowClan
Age: 67 Moons (approx. 5.6 years)
Rank: Medicine Cat

Positive Traits: Playful with kits, wise, humble of his rank

Negative Traits: Empathy issues, impatient with older cats, defensive of his blindness

Likes: Gathering herbs, cool weather, rain, snails/frogs

Dislikes: Hot/Humid weather, enclosed spaces, aquatic prey

He is chestnut-colored, but a large portion of his body is white, including his paws, tail, and muzzle. His chestnut markings are tabby striped, and they look almost red from far away. He is very grizzled, and his ears are both shredded. His eyes are cloudy due to his blindness, and the lack of black pupils make his gaze a bit unnerving.

He is quite long-furred, and he has a thick white mane. His tail is also quite bushy, and they are both areas that often get tangled with herbs and twigs.

He often trots confidently, which is why he was given him prefix and suffix, "merry" and "trot".

Scoring: 69%! I'm surprised I did this well.

Name: LogBranch
Gender: Male/Tom

Clan: (OC Clans) Formerly SparrowClan; Currently AppleClan

Age: 36 Moons (approx. 3 years)
Rank: Warrior

Appearance: A brown tom with a cream underbelly and dark brown stripes on his legs, a dark brown tail, and amber eyes.

Story: LogBranch was born with his sister, AshKit. They became apprentices together. Logbranch was mentored by StoneFall, a pure black tom with one blue eye and one green eye. LogBranch was loyal and always listened to his mentor. He and his sister also became warriors together. AshPaw became AshSong. And LogPaw became LogBranch. His sister was then chosen deputy. But then, while LogBranch was on patrol, he saw a beuaitul calico She-Cat. She was from AppleClan. Her name was FlowerPatch. LogBranch then figured out she liked him too. They then started meeting at the Big Oak and stuff happened. He then found out FlowerPatch was carrying his kits. By then his sister became leader and was now AshStar. He tried to hide everything but all else failed. He had one more choice and that choice was to join AppleClan. AppleClan only let him in because they were low on warriors. Now LogBranch is living with his mate and kits. But.. His sister is still mad at him...