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Name: Mintnose
Clan: Riverclan
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Medicine cat
Eyes: Mint Green

Fur: White with silver tabby legs, ears and tail

Descr:

So she met a Thunderclan tom named Chestnutfur (btw I made the whole Riverclan) when she was an app and they fall in love and he left the forest for Mintnose so she would't get caught but she still has his a kit but she didn't know abt him because he was only one and after he's born she left Sparklekit to a Twoleg place hoping they will afopt him and yea

Name: Raccoonshade
Gender: Male/Tom
Clan: An OC Clan named "BrightClan"
Age: 19 Moons
Rank: (Young) Warrior

Personality: Mischievous, clumsy, reckless, stubborn, sneaky, untrustworthy

Likes: Starry nights, messing with people

Dislikes: Being told what to do, boring situations

Appearance: Raccoonshade is a small, lithe tom that has gray fur with black raccoon-like markings. He gets his name from his raccoon-like appearance. He has distinctive orange eyes with a singular white streak on his face.

His pelt is slick and smooth with short fur. He has almost no scars visible. He has short legs and a very slender build.

Backstory: Raccoonshade's mother was named Duskstep. She didn't want anything to do with him and often mistreated him. She was very neglectful towards him. The closest thing he had to a mother was an elder in his clan named Moonshine. She took care of him when his mother wouldn't and told him stories to keep him entertained. His father was named Spiderstar and he was unaware that he was born for a long time. He has an older brother whom he is very close to. His name is Stoneriddle. He was actually mentored in secret by him. They would meet up when their clans fell asleep, as they are in different clans.

93%! Yes!

Name: DuskLeap
Gender: She-cat/molly
Clan: WindClan
Age:IDK they just old
Rank:Elder

Personality: A committed, friendly, cheerful she who tries to be independent even though she is death.

DuskLeap was never a real apprentice or warrior because of her hearing problem. Her brother and her had a great bond and he found a way to communicate with her. Although she never had a mentor she was determined to learn. After her brother finished training he helped her learn everything he did. As warriors she and her brother went out of camp and played together and tried hunting. Once he had passed she was overwhelmed and went to see her mother(SpiderFog) for comfort. Her brother helped her on her journey to starclan.

my oc is larchbranch! she's a charcoal bengal [mostly white/silver with matte black bengal markings] molly with golden yellow eyes from a roleplay server on discord.

she's a roseclan soldier, and about 34 moons. she is a lesbian!

her theme song is you stupid b*tch by girl in red and her current voiceclaim is angie martinelli [played by lyndsy fonseca] from agent carter!

she's a pretty wild gal, and never lost the adventurous personality that many kits have. she's fairly normal in all aspects, and grew up with two sisters. she isn't evil and she doesn't go to the dark forest, i just wanted a fun cat to play around with. that's just me, i like picking more minor roles so i can't get stressed like i would be in a leader, deputy, medicine cat, medicine cat apprentice, etc situation. i usually roleplay as elders, warriors, and apprentices!

anyways, that's my girl!
and i got 98%! teehee

coniferthicket a thin, long-limbed she-cat with short, well-groomed, soft, black fur. she has a tuft of fur on her head, and narrow, dark yellow eyes.

personality traits

she is clever, sarcastic, and untrusting of rogue cats or cats from other clans. she is un-fond of kits and has a small group of friends within her clan.

skilled and weaknesses

coniferthicket is an exceptionally good hunter, because of her good nose and sharp hearing. she is bad at swimming and good at climbing ; she has a unique fighting style, often jumping around to confuse her opponent. this strategy works well on new warriors, but she often struggles against more experienced warriors who know how she fights.

likes
* nighttime
* running
* leaf-fall
* hunting
* frogs/lizards
* gatherings
dislikes
* hot weather
* rain
* fighting
* fish
* caves
* mud
she doesnt have a backstory.
90%!

Name: Hugo
Gender: Tom

Clan: lives with his mate sunspot , in shadowclan, ruled over a weak leader. sunspot plans to take the role.

Age: about 20 moons
Rank: never really joined the clan

Personality: politely rude, a bit cowardly but would do almost anything for his loved ones.

Likes: likes to collect random things, a mouse bone, Once he found a ring outside. when he lived with his homefolk he enjoyed the company of the family dog Hattie, who sometimes got on his nerves.

DISLIKES: not being comfortable/well fed, other cats who give a sense there better in every way possible.

Appearance: a chunky orange tabby tom, wide pale hazel eyes, a handsome-ish face. Sort of gives a sense of arrogance.

Some backstory: he was living happily being fed every day before he was put on a diet which he was discussed by, he went outside trying to catch some prey, and wondered further and further away from his home. Hugo suddenly Hurd heard a painful yowling, ducking into bushes, a blood stained, twisted sort of cat was limping as fast as he could away from something. Another huge light gray Tom steps tored the bloody one and brutaly kills it and drags it away. Hugo panicked of what he saw bolted and found his way to windclan camp were he begs to stay for protection. They agreed and was going to be given the name finchpaw which he refused. Hugo made close friends with sunpaw and she knowing that shadowclan was weak, and wanting power they plan to go there. after he had stayed there for a while she developed a crush he was ( kind of ) unaware of, later becoming mates and so on.

I used a cat i made up, Voidclaw, they are a tom, their clan is leafclan(known as LC) which replaced Skyclan,currently they are an apprentice but will be Warrior then Deputy then Leader, they do have a prophesy, given to the dead toms that raised them, Flametail and Jayfeather(straight from normal books, these are about 40 years future,) the prophesy is "There will be three, Raised by Jay and Flame, and the Feather of the Moon, who hold the power of the Moon in their paws" Voidclaw and Shiningheart(she is a medcat) and Moonfeather(my friends oc also yo bagel if you see this) are the three, Voidclaw: Swift as a Leapord, Fierce as a Lion, Golden claws(grandpa was farmed for them), Shiningheart: can speak with the bookclans(erin hunter book clans) and has Diamond claws, Mother was farmed for them, and Moonfeather: can see much better and hear. This was long.

Still working on my oc a bit but they got tortured by there old two legs that tried to abuse and kill her so she fled with tons of cuts on her and is blinded in one eye so she wears an eye patch she made of from wolf fur she found. She has trust issues and is a loner. Still working on the name and I want her to eventually start her own clan or join riverclan sense she is a excellent swimmer. She is 5 moons old and has a gray and white pelt with silky fur but messy. Pawsome quiz mate.

My OC's name is Dewfur she comes from RiverClan, and she is 32 moons old. She's a lesbian.

Dewfur's personality:

Dewfur is slightly more introverted. In converstions she is quiet, considerate, and funny. She is guided by her heart and likes to watch fish in the river. Dewfur can also be competitive and destructive. She doesn't share her opinions, but when she does it's in favor of war. Dewfur is power-hungry and is hoping to be leader one day.

Rank: deputy

Apperence: Her fur is desaturated gray with a striped tabby pattern. It is shaggy and long. She has a triangular face with circular blue eyes. She has a soft voice and a leafy scent. She has a long, fluffy tail and is considered loyal to most but she will turn evil.

Backstory: Her mothers were Featherface and Dappledpool, she was very close to Featherface because Dappledpool died shortly after giving birth to four kits, which left Featherface to raise them. Featherface was killed by a fox and after she became a apprentice and worked hard to try and please her dead parents. She soon began to go mad, and killed two of her siblings, Blueheart and Greythorn. Ever since she has been longing for power but acts loyal to one day become leader of RiverClan

Family:
Dappledpool (with StarClan)
Featherface (with StarClan)
Greythorn (with StarClan)
Blueheart (with StarClan)
Olivetail (alive)

Bro- I got a 69% like- I'm so unmature and I'm trying not to laugh :,)

My oc is, Cyan'Breeze. She is a small elder she cats with a cyan pelt and eyes with black spots and toes with a black mask. She lives in river clan after being a leader of Thunder Clan and wiping out a clan by herself over time. She was a good cat and went to star clan after being killed by her sister from jealousy, rip.

Age:192 moons (16 years wow!)
Gender:She cat (Female)
Mate:Elk'Face (Died in a fire)

All names:Cyan'Kit, Cyan'Paw, Cyan'Breeze, Cyan'Star.

Parents: Mom:Meadow'Cloud. Dad:Five'Foot.
Time born:Oct/5/2078 at 5:34 am.

Name: Merrytrot
Gender: Male/Tom
Clan: ShadowClan
Age: 67 Moons (approx. 5.6 years)
Rank: Medicine Cat

Positive Traits: Playful with kits, wise, humble of his rank

Negative Traits: Empathy issues, impatient with older cats, defensive of his blindness

Likes: Gathering herbs, cool weather, rain, snails/frogs

Dislikes: Hot/Humid weather, enclosed spaces, aquatic prey

He is chestnut-colored, but a large portion of his body is white, including his paws, tail, and muzzle. His chestnut markings are tabby striped, and they look almost red from far away. He is very grizzled, and his ears are both shredded. His eyes are cloudy due to his blindness, and the lack of black pupils make his gaze a bit unnerving.

He is quite long-furred, and he has a thick white mane. His tail is also quite bushy, and they are both areas that often get tangled with herbs and twigs.

He often trots confidently, which is why he was given him prefix and suffix, "merry" and "trot".

Scoring: 69%! I'm surprised I did this well.

Name: LogBranch
Gender: Male/Tom

Clan: (OC Clans) Formerly SparrowClan; Currently AppleClan

Age: 36 Moons (approx. 3 years)
Rank: Warrior

Appearance: A brown tom with a cream underbelly and dark brown stripes on his legs, a dark brown tail, and amber eyes.

Story: LogBranch was born with his sister, AshKit. They became apprentices together. Logbranch was mentored by StoneFall, a pure black tom with one blue eye and one green eye. LogBranch was loyal and always listened to his mentor. He and his sister also became warriors together. AshPaw became AshSong. And LogPaw became LogBranch. His sister was then chosen deputy. But then, while LogBranch was on patrol, he saw a beuaitul calico She-Cat. She was from AppleClan. Her name was FlowerPatch. LogBranch then figured out she liked him too. They then started meeting at the Big Oak and stuff happened. He then found out FlowerPatch was carrying his kits. By then his sister became leader and was now AshStar. He tried to hide everything but all else failed. He had one more choice and that choice was to join AppleClan. AppleClan only let him in because they were low on warriors. Now LogBranch is living with his mate and kits. But.. His sister is still mad at him...

Name: Hazelpaw
Gender: Male/Tom
Clan: ShadowClan
Age: 11 Moons
Rank: Warrior Apprentice

Appearance: Hazelpaw is a light brown tom with darker stripes on his legs. He has white paws, muzzle, and tail-tip. His ears are tall and pointed, with dark brown tufts at the tips. He has a small dent on the top of his right cheek, and a small scar right above his left eye. His whiskers are particularly short, and he has big, pale, olive-green eyes. He is muscular, but has short legs, making him a couple of ears shorter than his denmates.

Negative Persona Traits: Irritable, short-tempered, defensive.

Positive Persona Traits: Honest, skilled hunter, observant.

Final Score: %78

Name: Cream'Sun
Gender: Female/She-Cat
Clan: WindClan
Age: 34 Moons (approx 2.8 years)
Rank: Deputy

Appearance: She is a cream colored She-Cat with yellow swirls on her back. She has pale cream paws and a big space of pale cream from her belly to her muzzle. She has dark tan stripes on her legs and dark tan rings on her long bushy tail. Her ears are dark tan and her eye color is Amber Gold. She usually wears a pretty pink flower on her head.

Negative Personality traits: Lazy, Bored at a LOT of stuff, Braggy sometimes.

Positive Personality traits: Good fighter, Peaceful most of the time, honest, brave

Final Score: 94% Sweet!

Name: Snowfern
Gender: She-cat
Clan: RiverClan.
Age: 23 moons (approx. 2 moons)
Rank: Warrior

Personality: Introverted and quiet, doesn't like drama or drawing attention.

Likes: Cool weather, Gatherings, gossiping with apprentices and elders.

Dislikes: Any in-Clan fighting, small spaces, drama.

Appearance: Snowfern is a short-limbed, skinny white she-cat with large, green eyes. She has big, fur-tipped ears and small teeth.

Her pelt is usually kempt and sleek, but very matted and ruffled after any fighting.

Score: 80%. Better than for what I was hoping for, fine by me.

Name:ravenkit (called ravenwind when older)
Gender: female/she-kit
Clan:shadowclan
Age:3 moons
Rank:kit (future warrior)

Personality:playful,loud,curios,impulsive,loyal,adventurous,irritable at times

Likes:playing with other kits,exploring,listening to the elders stories,warm weather

Dislikes:having nothing to do, no one paying attention to her, rude cats/kits,the cold weather

Appearance(as an adult and kit): fluffy long haired black,grey and white tabby patched fur with a small dark grey heart shaped splotch on her chest a large fluffy tail a short and sturdy build, claws are a common length,one lilac eye the other a icy blue, light pink inner ears nose and paw pads,sharp fluffy pointed ears

My cat is named Stormberry. She is a grey cat with emerald eyes and is currently deputy, although she will become leader soon. Her mate is Sandtail, (sandtail was a riverclan cat) but they both currently live in Thunderclan. Stormberry and sandtail have 3 kits, Wolfkit, Lionkit, and Falconkit. (And yes I know they are all names of other animals, deal with it) wolfkit was lost crossing a river and is assumed dead. However in Stormberrys leading years she will find wolfkit. Wolfkit was raised by loners. Stormberry is part of 2 prophecys, (three of you dont one about her kits.) I have written the first book about her and the next one will be in all three of her kits perspectives.

name: Sunpaw

appearance: Brown tabby with sun ray like stripes and golden eyes and a cream colored muzzle.

Clan: Riverclan

Story: Sunpaw was born to a she cat named Pebbleleaf in Riverclan but her father left to join Windclan before she was born. she had 3 other siblings and one that died at birth that she never knew about. the medicine cat apprentice got a prophecy from starclan saying, "When the Sun shines brightest the Shadows will fade." at first Berrypaw (The medicine cat apprentice) did not know what this meant but connected two and two and decided the prophecy was about Sunpaw. soon later, Shadowclan took over. there were many battles but eventually Riverclan was forced to retreat and live on the island. Sunpaw, Creampaw, Toadpaw, and Rockpaw went on a mission to restore peace to all clans.

Name: Mistystorm
Rank: Warrior
Clan: SnowClan

Appearance: Small silver and white tabby she-cat with ice blue eyes, a very fluffy tail and a beautiful face.

Personality: Funny, loyal, strong, courageous and can be a little sassy or harsh, but still has a kind heart.

Story: Her mother, Smokewhisker and her father Tigerstripe raised her with her littermates, Hazelkit and Mothkit. As a kit, Mistykit was annoying but nice and energetic. Her first friends were Vinepaw and Ivypaw, both 5 moons older than her. Vinepaw and Ivypaw became Vinefoot and Ivyclaw, while she was still a 6 moons kit. Vinefoot was her mentor, making her so happy. Mistypaw grew close to Hailpaw, and was so sad when Hailpaw died, killed by a Thunderclan cat. When Mistypaw had her warrior ceremony, she was given the name of Mistystorm, as a reminder that she born in a terrible storm and survived it anyways. Mistystorm and Vinefoot became mates, and Ivyclaw and Wolfwind too. Ivyclaw was exiled for no reason, making Mistystorm following her to bring her back home behind Flamestar's back. Ivyclaw had abandoned her, going back to Snowclan and leaving her alone in the wild to live as a rogue. She started to train in the Dark Forest for revenge and learned that they had planned everything, for her to be exiled and never come back. She died sadly and went in the Dark Forest forever with her real family. Mistystorm took the spirit of an innocent kit, Mistykit. She had every single pawstep and words controlled, and when she became Mistypaw again, she fell in love with Rainpaw, who Flamestar's spoiled and selfish daughter, Berrypaw liked too. One night, Rainpaw told them that he liked Mistypaw, making Berrypaw mad. Berrypaw dragged Mistypaw too the waterfall cave, and threw herself in an abyss filled with ledges. Berrypaw lived because Mistypaw's only brother, Hawkpaw, saved her life for his. When Mistypaw went down to help them, Berrypaw killed her, biting her neck. Flamestar didn't do anything to help her, a

Name: Sparrowheart
Gender: She-cat
Clan: FogClan

Appearance: Brown with a black stripe running from her head to tail, white heart on her forehead, greenish-blue eyes

Personality: Light-spirited and naive, she's like a kit in a warriors body. She's also very caring and will help any cat in need.

Story: Her mother mananged to bring a time of peace between clans and later became leader of FogClan. Sparrowkit used to brag about this to the other kits, but later learned how snobby she was being. She became Sparrowpaw and her mentor was Onyxice, who would often have to take over Hailpaw's training as well. Sparrowpaw soon grew feelings for Hailpaw, but was unaware he was using her to get closer to the clan leader. At Sparrowpaw's first gathering, she met Squirrelpaw from MapleClan. She began getting very close to him and was too naive he was using her for secrets about FogClan. After they became warriors, Sparrowheart noticed her sister - Fadedbird - and Featherfall - a grey she-cat - grew feelings for each other. Sparrowheart couldn't understand why so she grew distant from her sister. Eventually, Sparrowheart and Hailcrash had a litter of kits; Nutkit and Ashkit. However, Ashkit disappeared a few days before his apprentice ceremony, which made her extra protective of Nutkit. At gatherings, she would often sneak off with Squirrelfern and began growing feelings for him too. Hailcrash knows this and is becoming possessive of her, which means Sparrowheart never has time to be alone.

That's all I've gotten done so far! She got a score of 73% :D

Name: Snakestalker
Gender: she-cat

Appearance: Brown with black legs, jaw and tip of her tail, tan ears and muzzle, and bright green eyes

Personality: Secretive, keeps to herself, but sweet and caring once you get to know her. She can be snappy at times.

Story: ok I hope this sums it up. As a kit her mother was killed in front of her, leaving her in grief. She takes it out on her Sister, Swiftpaw. Their brother Bristlepaw has to stop the fights. Snakepaw becomes a warrior named Snakestalker because on her final assessment she catches an adder (Like Ravenpaw). Her littermates get the names Swiftwind and Bristleclaw. As a warrior, she goes to help a family of rouges hunt and fight. Two parents named Dice and Sparky, and their three kits, Streak, Flutter and Claw. As a TunnelClan patrol comes, including Swiftwind and her apprentice, Echopaw. They think Dice and Sparky kidnapped her and Snakestalker was only taking pity on them because they had kits. They kill Dice, Sparky and Flutter. And the patrol forces her to leave Claw and Streak. (Btw ik Claw has an emo name, he came from a roleplay. Actually so did Snakestalker and Swiftwind XD) so as moons pass, Swiftwind and Snakestalker's fights are now physical. And Snakestalker is in a half-clan relationship with a MarshClan cat named Newttail. When she is expecting half-clan kits, TunnelClan exiles her and MarshClan rejects her, she goes to roam the streets of Twolegplace. (Btw there are two other clans. BrookClan and CavernClan) She runs into two rouges named Fox and Slate, and they bring them to their leader. Their leader is Claw, wow who knew. Oh btw forgot to mention, the medicine cat apprentice, Gorsetuft, received a prophecy from StarClan in the prologue. The snakes fangs will be strong enough to defeat the Claws of Blood. Yeah. Anyways this non-canon BloodClan is called The Tribe of Blood. And she has four kits. One dies and she named him Ginger after her mother. The two she-cats she named Fluffle and Myrtle, and t

Name:Mousewing
Gender:She-cat
Clan:Windclan
Rank:New warrior

Personality:Kind but stays out of the way-background character-sorta peppy-not very smart-a good friend- shes better at hunting that fighting-

Appearance:A silver she-cat with brown stripes(sorry if its not realistic)

Name history: Mousekit, Mousepaw, Mousewing
Score:88% I expected 60-70% XD

Name: snowgoose
Gender: tom
Clan: thunderclan
Rank: senior warrior
Age: 55 moons

Personality: politeto clanmates, loyal, rude to loners and trespassers, not a fan of kittypets, patient

Apperance: a white longhaired bob tailed cat with yellow eyes, the tail looks like a goose's tail

History of name: as an apprentice he got bitten in the tail by a goose, he doesn't like to talk about it though