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Cardinalcall is a red, brown and pale beige/white she-cat. She is mischievous and clever but holds grudges very easily. She had a decent childhood, growing up in a tight-knit family. Her father's name is Redtooth and her mother is Leafspark. She has an older sister named Mousethorn. Her mentor and grandfather was Owlbark, who she killed after watching him kill a young apprentice from another Clan. For this she was exiled, and met her now mates Marinette, a rogue, and Burntfoot, a fellow exiled warrior with extreme burn scars.

Name: Stormbellow
He/they
Pelt: patchy gray with some noticeable scars
Greenish-yellow eyes
Cunning, vengeful, swift

As a kit, he was very confident and couldnt wait to be a warrior, always wanting to help out. When he reached 6 moons, he became Stormpaw and was very well liked. One day, though, his sister, Minnowpaw wanted to play, resulting in Stormpaw falling off of a large, jagged boulder, resulting in several scars. After he healed, he noticed a shift in how other cats reacted when he was around. Thinking nothing of it, he continued his apprentice duties and eventually was given the warrior name Stormbellow. In the first few moons of being a warrior, he became close with a she-cat named Owlpetal, and developed a crush on her. Certain that she felt the same, he admitted his feelings to her. Owlpetal was stunned at first, then politely rejected him, saying that she was in love with another tom. Angry and saddened by this he hid in the warriors den for days, not talking to anyone. Eventually, his anger grew, and he thought Owlpetal had rejected him because of his scars. So he lured Minnowflash (Minnowpaw) into the forest, where he proceeded to attack and kill her, because she was the reason he had the scars. He returned to camp, and pretended that rogues attacked and killed Minnowflash. Feeling better, he returned to his warrior duties where he found out that Owlpetal was expecting another toms kits. The old anger grew inside him again, and he put deathberries in her food the next day. This time, he was seen by a Clanmate, and exiled, where he got ran over by a monster and still tries to make his old clan miserable from the Dark Forest.

[Second Comment, Took the test Twice]
Name: RisingDawn
Name: FadingDusk
Gender(s): Both Female
Role(s): Both apprentices

Pelt (Dawn): Blackish, Burn't Red fade, with fluffy coat, Etc

Pelt (Dusk): Black Faded blueish-grey, fluffy coat, & few scars

Eyes (Dawn): A golden-green on the right, purely white on the left.

Eyes (Dusk): A green/teal on the left, & purely white on the right.

Personality (Dawn): Clumsy, Heart-Felt, caring yet sassy.

Personality (Dusk): Cold, Intellgent, & collected.

Details/Traits (Dawn): 'The bright blessed Day'

Details/Traits (Dusk): 'The dark sacred night'

Lore: Rising`Dawn & Fading`Dusk are both born at the same time, twins. These twins are the beheld StarClan's gift to RiverClan, for they both are in a prophecy ment for the doom of one sister, & the throne for the other. Dawn was popular, kind & hot-headed, & dusk kept her out of trouble. But in the end, the tables turned, as Dawn's corrupted thirst for power, & Dusk's love for her sister had both sisters in deep peril. That is, only when Dusk saved her sister, that dawn had realised the damege she caused, at the cost of her sister's life. Once they both are in StarClan, they're then brought to the embodyment of StarClan, to be reborn as brothers. (To be Containued)

Name: FalconStrike
Gender: Tom / Male
Role: Deputy

Pelt: Blue faded into brownish red, White from Underside of throat to mid torso & front paws

Eyes: Golden/amber

Personality: Cunning, Humorous, Couragous, & Determined.

Details/Traits: Extremely Sharp Claws, & Exellent Eye-Sight.

Lore: FalconKit became an apprentice, just as any other, at 6 moons. He was extremely determined to become an expert warrior, & a wonderful fighter, to defend those he loves. As an apprentice, he met a caring & gold-hearted she, named 'Fox`Tail'. He then became Falcon`Strike, & devoted the rest of his life to his mate & 3 sons. In a horrific earthquake, FoxTail was killed by a Land-Slide, along with two of his sons. He then raised the 3rd son, to be the greatest warrior of all time, & once he became deputy, he made sure his son would take his place after his death. He then passed at the age of 38 Moons (25 in human), His son taking his place, as requested to the leader. In StarClan, Falcon`Strike finally reunited with his one & true love, FoxTail.

More?: Falcon`Strike is one of my favorite, & many Ocs, I couldn't decide which to specificly use on this test- So i randomly decided, Falcon`Strike should be tested.

Name: BlazeFlight
Gender: Tim
Pronouns: He/Him
Role: Leader
Fur: Black and orange tortoishell
Eyes: Light green

Personality: Cold and rought. Sometimes can be mean but he really doesn't mean it sometimes. He is misunderstood

Lore: He was bringed to the clan (not sure abt the name yet) when he was a kit. He was bringed to a queen named DoveShade. DiveShade accepted Blazekit as her own quickly and treated him like her own. DoveShade already had another kit named Copperkit. Copperkit was older than BlazeFlight and was redy to apprentice in the next moon. Blazekit's brother didn't like Blazekit. Most of the clan didn't also like Blazekit. After long moons of his brother not giving him attention and his mother's love he was named as an apprentice. Blazekit was now named Blazepaw and was trained by the leader. The leader was also very interested in Blazepaw and treated him nicely. The clan didn't still fully agree having Blazepaw in the clan. Copperpaw was really famous in the clan. He was hard working and did anything to get attention from his clan. Later it was shown that Blazepaw wasn't really bad to the clan and did his best to be accepted. The clan started to like Blazepaw now more. But then his brother got jelaus. Copperpaw started to frame Blazepaw from little bad doings. This started to get the clan suspicious about Blazepaw. Soon Copperpaw was named CopperClaw. But not even that long after CopperBush was named, another apprentice was also named Cinderpaw. Blazepaw was now 8 moons old, CopperClaw 13 moons and Cinderpaw 6 moons. Soon Blazepaw grew up and was named BlazeFlight at the age of 13 moons. Time went by and nothing exiting really happened until BlazeFlight reached the age of 37 moons. Cinderbelly and Blazeflight became mates! They had grown a lot if love for each other nad has been best friends since they has been apprentices. Blazeflight was now 37 moons and a warrior, Cinderbelly 35 moons and a warrior and CopperClaw 41 moons and deputy. The life was

Name: OpaqueTerracota
Gender: Tom
Pronouns: He/They
Role: Elder

Fur: Cream with Reddish Dilute Brown splotches that intensifies and darken at his lower body

Personality: A raconteur elder with a burning passion for telling stories, either real or imaginative.

Lore: He was born as Opaquekit at shadowclan, his mother was a energetic and stubborn queen who tended to bring life to the nursery. He made few friends and went in a little bit of mischief but was never something serious. As a warrior he was a gentle feline yet lurked in the shadows as a true master, nimble and mysterious. Even in his senior moons he kept his strong mind and agile feet. Now hes retired and adore his calm seasons after the storms he went trough.

Name: WitheringRose (She changed it to that later on, her real name was CloudWhisker)

Gender: She-Cat

Clan: Riverclan (Now, Dark forest but whatever)

Age: Idk
Rank: Deputy

Personality: Somewhat kind yet stern, nervous, anxious, aware, and determined (How do these go together? I dont know! They just sorta do!)

Likes: Hanging out with loved ones, battle training, fresh mouse, swimming for long time periods, other

Dislikes: The dark forest, rude cats, disloyalty, dogs, and death

Appearance: A black cat with Ruby red eyes, yet ruined by the tears in her body showing bone, her face is mostly black but white takes half of it, somewhat saying she has two sides, or is two faced. Also carries a skull necklace which can become bigger and be worn as a protective face cover, or something else

Time for trauma [Warning] Kinda cringe :)

CloudWhisker was visited by a dark forest cat who gave her the necklace, and taught her how to use it, she wasnt the greatest hunter, but the necklace helped, showing her where prey was, giving her an advantage in hunting, but she didnt know that really every time she caught prey, one cat dropped dead. If she caught fish, Someone in riverclan died, she caught a rabbit, someone in wind clan died, and so on, yet she didnt know, for a little while, she soon figured it out, and you know what that means! (Here comes the big sad ) she cried for a long time but she had to keep hunting so she just never hunted fish again, soon she became deputy, and then war broke out, every clan accusing another that they were murdering their clan mates, and the she died in the war and was sent to the dark forest, even though she should have gone to starclan, because they forgave her (for some weird reason) but the dark forest cats dragged her back, into the dark depths of the forest. Only if she knew she could have taken off the skull tsk tsk. Oh well! Bye :)

Almost forgot!

Score: 81% Sure I guess, Id take anything rlly :)

Name: Mothglare
Gender: Tom
Clan: windclan
Age: 12 Moons
Rank: apprentice

Appearance: A small shortfured ginger tabby with amber eyes

Personality: Protective, weird, caring, quick thinker, warm hearted, funny, clever, annoying.

Dislikes: family, battles, being stressed, the cold, fleas, slimy fish, shadowclan

Likes: bugs, friends, prey, exploring, kits, the leader, some loners, other apprentices

score: was like 78 or smt

Name: Parrotvalley
Gender: She-cat
Age: 26 m
Rank: Warrior
Clan: MandevillaClan
Appearance:

A Bengal she-cat with vibrant pelt patterns and green eyes. She has a half-face-colored appearance with a sleek body build.

She does not have any mates whatsoever.
Parents:

(Mother) Sharp'owl - A dusky brown siamese she-cat with green eyes and a half-colored face. (Genetics ofc)

(Father) Robinheart - A Bengal tom with pale pelt patters.

Traits:
Negative: Good liar, manipulative
Positive: Observant, Self-control
Neutral: Complex, Stylish

add-ons - ADHD, trauma, likes dark humor. Raised a duckling, bipolar, sensing the atmosphere's mood.

Name: Moonfall
Age: 49 moons
Clan: Fogclan

Personality: strong, indipendent, sly swift and smart.

Appearence: A big swift she-cat, with dark blue fur and white speckles. Light blue eyes and two scars across her face making an "X". She likes to wear lillies in her fur.

Backstory: she was very close to her sister " sunbird" when they were apprentices, and still were while being warriors. Until one day the deputy suddenly annaunced that he was moving to the elders den. Moonfall, who had her eye on the deputy role for a long time was very exited, and waited in patience as the leader called a new deputy. But to her suprise, the deputy turned out to be sunbird. From that day on, she hated her sister more than anything. And it became worse when sunbird became mates with the cat Moonfall loved. Even tho she still formed a closeness to her niece, Hollypaw. They were very close and Hollypaw never told on her aunt. At the time, Moonfall was also plotting revenge for her sister, by making allies with loners and other rouge groups. When the time came, Moonfall attacked Fogclans camp, and looked for her sister in the battle. She spotted Sunstar (leader now) and got closer and closer, and right at the moment she was about to pounce, Hollysky (her niece) pushed her away and battled Moonfall to her death. But even after, she felt guilty. And on her way to the dark forest, already in spirit form, while nobody saw her, she sat by Hollysky. And later on, left.

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Name: Glowingheart
Age: 29 moons
Clan: Windclan

Personality: swift, not very strong, with some trust issues, somehow calm.

Appearence: A siamese averagely tall she-cat with blue-greenish eyes and a small scar in her cheek.

Backstory/trauma: Her mentor Flamingfox was a vicious, bloodthirsty and harsh yet skilled tom, who basically abused her in her apprenticeship. She heard things she wasn't supposed to and he tried to kill her, luckily a kit that had wondered out of camp to see them 'train' saw them, and the dawn patrol was just in time to save her life. She stayed in the medicine cat for some time before having her warrior ceremony. She then fell in love with Swiftgaze, a silent but caring tom. They had four kits called Onyxkit, Sunkit, Ivorykit and Coffeekit. (Now ima stop here bc she just lives a happy life, and it's her kits who have the prophecy, not her. Starclan gives the propechy to a random shy apprentice)

Name: Mantis`Maniac, around 20-22 moons
Clan: Windclan
Pan, poly

Personality: Quiet, timid, friendly, usually hungry and nervous

Appearance: A medium she-cat with pale brown fur and a fade to darker browns at the end of her body. She has blueish green eyes. Mantis grew up in windclan with her brother, who disappeared when they were apprentices, and her mother and father. She fell in love with Crow's`Call and became mates with him but when she tried to have kits, it was a miscarriage, so she lost them. She ended up just being mates with Crow's`Call and caught sights of a she in her clan and it was love and first sight. (I have to end it there cause I got nothing else.)

Rating: 97%

Name: Smoke'Hollow, roughly 24 and a half moons

Clan: River Clan, formerly rouge
Straight

Personality: Snarky, Clever, Stubborn, Sarcastic, Hardworking and proud

Appearance: A small she-cat with ashy dark brown fur, a black under belly, black socks that go to just below her shoulders,a black tail and a black mask around her face, she has some odd little patches of white fur.She has green eyes.Smoke was found as a rouge at the border of River Clan territory at around 6 moons by a hunting patrol and chose to go with them to join the clan,luckily she was accepted and began training immediately as Smoke'Paw alongside a tom named Rain'Paw and a few others and grew into a noble young warrior named Smoke'Hollow.She eventually fell in love with Rain'Spots (was Rain'Paw) but Rain'Spots wanted kits and she didn't want kits, causing tension in their relationship.Frustrated,they quarreled constantly on this matter until Smoke'Hollow decided she was done being pressured to do something she didn't want to do, and left him.(Smoke'Hollow is still a work in progress and idk what happens from here I'm considering a villain arc I hope you enjoyed lol)

Rating: 87%

Corvidstone is a black, medium furred cat with grey spots and green eyes.

Taken into Riverclan as a stray kit, Corvidkit wasnt very popular among the clans. They were quite the opposite, actually, with very few actually liking them. The few that they got along with was the queen that raised them, a couple other kits that shared the nursery with them, the leader, and of course the medicine cats.

Growing up, other cats often outcasted them, making them feel unwanted. They spent their free time as an apprentice/warrior out in the forest, practicing battle moves, hunting, and occasionally helping the Riverclan medicine cat look for and gather herbs.

The first prophecy was received by the medicine cat. It worried them, as they werent quite sure what it meant. In the end, the prophecy drove Corvidstone out of the clan, much to the leader and medicine cats dismay. Their adoptive mother and past playmates had begun to grieve. Their adoptive mother had actually taken off from her warrior duties temporarily, as she was finding it difficult to cope with.

The second prophecy was received by Corvidstone while they were on exile. They hesitantly headed back to clan territory, realizing that their old clans camp was being attacked by an enemy clan. They rush in, yowling out orders from a rocky ledge and leaping in to help fight when needed. In the end, their adoptive mother dies due to battle wounds, the leader has 3 lives left, and the deputy has been retired to the elders den due to permanent injuries. A couple nights pass, and the leader decides to make a final decision. Corvidstone is now made deputy, later on dying in a large battle against the other four clans.

Name: Whitewish

Age: 14 years (in my fanfiction the ages are measured in years because I dont like measuring age in moons)

Gender: she-cat
Rank: medicine cat
Clan: GrainClan (fan made clan)

Appearance: white with tortoiseshell on her face, legs, and tail. Rosettes on legs and tail. Silver speckles on back and face. Left eye amber, right eye turquoise. Long legs, slim body.

Personality: shy, quiet unless shes familiar with who she is speaking to. Has her own sense of humor. Likes to think she is humble but can sometimes brag (but she tries) She tends to be more of a follower than a leader, but sometimes she tries to act like shes in charge.

Physical traits: smaller than the average cat, but not exactly tiny. Long legged, slim body. Long, plumed tail. Doesnt hunt much considering she can only catch fish and rabbits on some occasions. An ok fighter.

Relationships:
Mom: Wish (loner)
Dad: Plume (loner)
Brother: unknown (MeatClan)
Best friend: Snowcloud (Tom, ForestClan)

Crush: Jaypepper (ForestClan, handsome gray tom with golden spots and turquoise eyes. A cat named Velvetfall also has a crush on him.)

Mentors: Amaranthclaw (GrainClan, her mentor before the events of my fanfic) and Pearlwhisper (ForestClan, the cat who completed her apprenticeship)

Scoring: 82% well made

Name: Zephyrpaw/dream
Gender: She-cat/Female
Clan: MistClan (OC Clan)
Age: 9 moons
Rank: Apprentice (Will live to be Deputy)

Appearance: Light blue/gray tones with some tan and white marbled rosettes. Long, silky fur. Long tail. Long, slim legs. Slim, Lethe build. One sky blue eye and one light green eye. On the smaller side but not tiny.

Personality: Friendly, kind, bouncy. Has anxiety but does a good job fighting it, although she does get anxiety attacks sometimes. She is very spirited though, and goes to trouble to make sure everyone is happy and doing good in her Clan. She can be a bit stubborn too, and sometimes doesnt know the meaning of no. But when needed, she can step up and take the lead, and is good at it when she gets the chance.

Physical traits: Agile, Lethe, fast, great at climbing trees. She is not, however, very strong, so fighting is not one of her specialties. The prey that is easiest to catch for her are squirrels and birds because she can leap very far and high. She can sometimes snatch squirrels out of their nests if she is having a good hunting and stalking day.

Relationships:
Mom: Pasturebreeze
Dad: Strikestorm
Sister(s): Blossomkit(dead)
Brother(s): Verdantpaw, Cyngetpaw
Best friend: Briopaw(She-cat)

Secret crush: Fangedpaw(Tom)(Hes rude and hot-headed but really hot, and half the apprentices are chasing after him.), Dashingpaw(Tom), Briskpaw(Tom), Flarepaw(She-cat), Verdantpaw(Tom/brother), Quellpaw(She-cat), Briopaw(she-cat).

(There are a lot of apprentices in MistClan)
Mentor: Ashenspring(Tom)
Family info:

Pasturebreeze: Kind, calm, motherly. Light gray with blue/gray rosettes. Green eyes.

Strikestorm: Protective, stubborn, nice. Torbie with amber eyes.

Verdantpaw/Flame: Loyal, brave, strong. Ginger tabby with brown patches. One green eye, one amber eye.

Cyngetpaw/Feather: Gentle, introverted, organized. (Also a gay Medicine Cat Apprentice.) White with tan rosettes. Blue eyes.

Future relationships:
Mate: Dashingthunder (Formerly Dash

Name: Tumbleoak
Gender: female
Clan: windclan
Age: 40 moons
Rank: medicine Cat

apperance: a Light Brown tabby with thick, fluffy fur and short legs. She Always seems to be having different leafes Stuck in her fur.

Story: Tumbleoak was Born Into windclan. She was the only Kit in her litter and her mother died During birth. This let to her father being very close to her and always looking after her. She soon started to have interest in herbs and was apprenticed to the old medicin cat Crystalsnap. Later in her Life she Fell in Love and became mates with Silbersplash, the current deputey, and even Had two Kits with him (in my Story medicin cats are allowed to have Kits as long as there is another medicin cat)wich she named turtlekit and molekit. She still lives in Windclan Happy to see her Clan thrive and her Kits grow.

Name: Ravenwing
Gender: Female
Clan: ShadowClan
Age: 47 Moons
Rank: Deputy

Appearance: A black she-cat with subtle wing patterns in her fur. She has blue eyes and short fur. She is surprisingly strong for her lanky build.

Personalty: Harsh and jaded. She is one of the most aggressive cats in the clan, but she has a soft heart that she only shows to a select few.

Story: Raven was born as a rogue in the center of a big city. She was kicked out of the family at a young age and spent many moons honing her skills to steal food from other cats. Eventually she found herself at the carrionplace and first met the ShadowClan leader at the time, Wildstar. Wildstar was the one to introduce her to the ways of clan life. Raven quickly fell for the sense of community and joined the clan. She even gained a mate and two kits, Silverpaw and Goldenpaw.

But not all was what it seemed. After becoming deputy, she realized that Wildstar didnt belive in StarClan. The ancestors came to her instead, warning her about dangers that lay in wait for Wildstar. She took it as her duty to protect Wildstar for as long as it took. And- was she falling for her leader?

KP name: Panda
Clan name: PandaPaw -> PandaHeart
Gender: She/They

Story: Panda was born in a shelter and adopted by an abusive pit or two-legs. She watched her sister who had come with her die in their hands so listened to the stars and followed the brightest ones to RiverClan. She was held prisoner for a few days and than apprenticed to the leader SwiftStar. When she became a warrior she fell in love with BeeWing (She/Her). They ended up taking in a pair of kits they found by the ThunderPath. They named them DangerKit (He/Him) and MiracleKit (She/Her). PandaHeart than passed away a few moons later as she shoved MiracleKit out of the way of a monster after she attempted to hunt a bird.

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Name: Red-Stripe
Gender: She-Cat
Age: 41 moons
Rank: Senior Warrior
Clan:WindClan

Personality: Distrusting (from past trauma) Skittish Determined.

Likes: Going on Patrols, Assisting classmates

Dislikes: TwoLegs, Streets, anything implying TwoLags are around

Appearance: A somewhat larger cat with dusty grey fur and amber eyes. A red stripe of permanent hair dye on her back. She doesn't have notable scars, apart from one on the top of her head.

She was taken as an apprentice from a more distant clan, but was abused by her Two Legs and escaped to WindClan. She is generally cautious of others and doesn't have a lot of friends.

I got a 69%, lol

Name : Piapiacwing
Gender : Cisgender female
Sexuality : Aroace
Rank : Herbalist ( Made up role )
Clan : Seamountclan
Status : Warriorsona
MBTI : INFP-T

Personality resume : A kind herbalist who's always eager to help.

Positive : Kind, diligent, pure, calm and creative.

Negative : Tough, insensitive, insecure and desesperated.

Like : Corvids, nature, herbalism, the ocean and her flower shop.

Dislike : Falconquill, fire, dry herbs, loud noises and thunderstorms.

Mother : Treepievalley
Father : Harpystrike
Younger sister : Ravenshade
Best friend : Weepingcloud

Friends : Riverrow, Windsail, Ravenshade, Svea and Hollyprairie.

Enemies : Falconquill.

Appearance : Long-furred tall she-cat with a pretty white pelt with dark-gray and black spots. Beautiful vibrant blue eyes with light blue eye

lashes. Light blue, blue and dark blue flowers growing in patches on her fur.

Name: Halo'Fang
Gender: She-Cat
Age: 36 Moons
Rank: Deputy
Clan:RiverClan

Personality: Stubborn, (Somewhat stupid but means well) Kindhearted Snarky.

Likes: Her mate and kits, (Kits were apprenticed before she was made deputy) A elder named Fallen'Stone (her brother)

Dislikes: One apprentice named Stormpaw, and Shadowclan

Appearance: Halo'Fang is a slender, glossy-furred she, she's (Somehow) a bengal patterned, dark brown with small light orange patches one on her front left leg, chest, tail, and face (Like.. a chimera cat) She has very subtle heterochromia, (Dark blue and greenish blue) Her left ear has a small rip out of it, and she has a scar across her nose from fighting a thunderclan cat who was hunting on riverclans territory shes a medium furred cat. Her pelt is usually well kept and she hates getting it dirty.

Idk.. I forgot my score and im to lazy to go redo it or look at it soooo yeah.