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My oc!
Name: Creek skip
Clan: ( oc clan ) barren clan
Rank: medicine cat
Age: about 40 moons
She cat

Creek skip is a disabled medicine cat who was born without one of her back legs. Creek skip is a very lively cat who can run like the wind but is very forgetful. She would get to an injured warrior as fast as she can but then realize she has nothing to help this cat and have to run back multiple times . Because of this she’s not the most favored medicine cat. The clan is also does not respect creak skip very much for the leader deputy and medicine cat only having their roles because all the three roles died in battle because of rouges. And the three roles were filled by 3 siblings cats who had little to no training so a barely trained medicine cat is not very admired by anyone. But because of this creek skip likes to spend time exploring and finding new things as it bring her joy in sorting all of her plants and berries.

mine is called Briarstripe, she’s a brown tabby Norwegian forest cat with a muscular build. she was found as a kit in RiverClan territory and taken in, and because of this is devout to her clan and proving herself to her clanmates. she tends to consider honesty the best policy, and rarely lies. A StarClan cat by the name of Quickhare who’d been a member of RiverClan in the past took notice of her, and gave her a prophecy as a chance to prove herself to her clan. She made it to the rank of deputy whilst fulfilling this prophecy (which is currently undecided as to what it’ll be). only three moons after this prophecy, however, she was killed by the cat she’d came to love, drowned in the river by someone she’d trusted who’d only been getting close to her to find out what she could to to steal her rank as deputy after killing her (the cat who killed her is called Sunflare). this is all very vague atm tho and may change

My oc is an ancien bloodclan warrior, she tried to escape from the war with the other clans and just live in the forest with her sister who has a handicap since the war, her name is Vipère which is viper in english.

Goldenfur. mate: Boucingcloud for skyclan

A shiny bright Shadowclan warrior queen with white points

three children, Butterflykit(leap), Leopardkit(pelt) and Sugarkit(Leaf)

She was born with a missing eye and then had the other pecked out by a hawk, blinding her completely. When her children were kits Leopardkit nearly died by badger, who sliced off Leopardkit's eye, after that, she showed favoritism to Leopardkit and Butterflykit(Who was deaf) and made Sugarleaf despise Shadowclan, and eventually became a loner with a KITTYPET mate, Callie.

Name: Brindlestar/BrindlePelt
Clan:WindClan
A white and brown-ish tan she cat

She was initially from Riverclan but ran away after her mate (Half'Foot) had died from being hit by a monster. She joined WindClan as an apprentice called BrindlePaw due to her coat. She had to get used to her name as she was called Sandy'Paw in Riverclan. The leader had been named Greenstar hence his eye color. She grew to love WindClan and her name. Once she received her warrior name, (Brindlepelt) Greenstar had retired. The new leader was HollyStar and that day, Brindlepelt got her first apprentice named RussetPaw. Moons and moons had passed, when the deputy had mysteriously vanished. HollyStar had chosen Brindlepelt to be the new deputy. She was overfilled with joy and her apprentice grew into a warrior called RussetFur. Soon, she met her mate Ripple Creek and they had kits, BlueKit, RiverKit, and Leafkit. A few moons later, she became Leader from HollyStar retiring. She went to the moonstone and starclan told her that she will be a great leader and that Ripple Creek would be a great deputy. After that she lived happily ever after and died of old age. (Sorry for this being to long)

his name is Burntceder. he is 39 moons old, his left front leg is completetly burnt and has a bad limp. he was a loner, he had a mate, his old name was snow'leopard. he had 3 kits.a few moons after his kits were born, there was a fire, he tried to save his kits an mate 2 out of 3 kits died and his mate died too, he get dreams from starclan, he later joined windclan where he is currently living with his new mate and 2 kits <3

her name is Mellow'mallow, she is currently 24 moons. She was a medicine apprentice but when the leader (her crush) was murdered she took revenge on the cat who murdered the leader and her mentor that defied the idea of revenge also later killing the leader of her clan after manipulating another clan to help her battle her previous clan. She also was semi- haunted by her crush and two daek forest cats that shunned her after exile<3

Name;MoonlightCanyon
Age before death; 29 moons

Personality; she's often grumpy and lashes out easily but only because she is afraid to let any cat close incase she gets hurt again.

Backstory; when she reached 7 moons her sister attempted to kill the cats around her, Moonlight pushed her sister in the gorge and kept it a secret, she became cold and bitter and even had got threats to be banished for some of her continous challenging behavior

Appearance; she is a large tortioa--hole she cat with forest green eyes and one white paw.

Clan; she is a river clan cat

Love; she fell in love with a Tom named CoalPelt, due to him being the only clan member(apart from one of her mentors who died of green cough) who pestered her enough to get the truth out of her and stay by her. He helps her open up more and be a bit more tolerable of her clanmates.

Mentors;she's had a few but only has really considered an actual mentor was a warrior named HawkFlight who died of green cough at 37 moons

Family; charedpelt(deceased mother killed by her other daughter), silvermoon(deceased father killed by his other daughter), Maplepaw(deceased pushed into the gorge by her sister after killing their parents and her mentor)

Death; she died fighting off a fox that was trying to invade the camp.

Name: Snake'lag
Age:16 moons
Rank: Queen

Personality:Deadly,mean,scary,blood luver,luvs kits.

Description,she-cat, has 3 kits that died by a Badgerstree clan warrior,kits names were Sparrowkit,Foxkit,and Bearkit,she is out getting revenge but sadly she died 3 moons after her kits died and now she is in the dark forest killing cats,but she found a love in the forest and her loves name is Lillowfern, Lillowfern is a she cat who also lost her kits, she is in Owltree Clan, and her and Snakeleg fell in love with each other and now they both are killing cats.

Name:Dust'Storm
Age:20 moons
Clan:Tunderclan

Dust'Storm is .grayish male with a colour that darkens down towards the legs. It has a long tail where its fur gets longer. He has deep green eyes that are charming. He has a normal height, even large for his age.His fur colours resemble cold. He is a handsome male cat with a compact muscular build.His long tail and legs helps him to be more agile which makes him better fighter compared to other cats.Although he is a fighter, he has no scars, which is why he is rarely killed in battle, and his athletic skills help him repel enemy attacks.His sharp claws and claws contribute to victory.

Personality: Dust'Storm is handsome and elegant in appearance male. He is serious and ambitious in his work. His shrewd approach gives him experience from everything he has experienced. Dust'Storm is strongly built towards his feelings and learned how to rule them. He isn't very social but likes having time with his friends. He is loyal, stubborn, elegant,sometimes dismissive, but a male who always has a plan. The cat shows his charm when he is glad from himself.He always keeps himself clean and looking good.He's strict when he chases his purpose.He has experience in the fights that's why he always had chosen by the deputy to lead the border patrols.He seems like the cat with perfect life but his past isn't from the bests.Sometimes he behaved arrogantly, but he tried to change the bad in himself.He is perfectionist and likes everything in order. He is curious but sometimes this gaves him troubles.

Preferences:He prefers rabbit meat and fresh water. He likes to spend time with his loved ones, but he is serious when he is assigned a mission.He is good swimmer and enjoys hunting fishes.Likes to be in shape. He is loved by cats because of his serious, stubborn, charming character.His elegant and gentle appearance attracts the attention of many cats but sometimes and repels that's why he likes to be noticed

Fears and Dislikes: One of Dus

Name: Inkyfang
Gender: Shecat
Clan: Shadowclan
Age: 27 moons
Rank: Medicine Cat

Personality: Intelligent, focused, kind, protective, understanding but not gullible

Appearance: Black fur with brown belly, very fluffy, green eyes, scarred muzzle, tufty tail

Negative traits: Short temper, consistent hunger, vengefulness, friend of kittypets, used to be part of bloodclan so still carries those traits

Name: Neon
Status: Loner
-uses they/them pronouns
- 18 moons

(Was a kitty pet but the kitty pet house burnt down)

- cowardly cat, likes telling jokes and completely black fur with some burns and 2 brightly colored paw warmers

Eyes: Orange

Name:Curlyfur
Clan:Thunderclan
Gender:she-cat
22moon
Medicine cat

Nice cat, she has light brown fur whit orange spots.

Eyes:left:green right:blue

Dead:accidentally shot by a hunter while looking for herbs😢

ivytongue is a smart mouthed sarcastic and agile shekitty

backstory!!: When ivytongue was a young cat she was constantly compared to everyone around her. She had to fit to her mothers (shadefern’s) standards she had to supress her emotions to live up to her mothers expectations thus leading to lots of built up emotions later. Many moons later ivy had gotten appointed for deputy of shadowclan. Although now instead of just her mothers she had to live up to everybody around hers standards slowly driving her insane one day she snapped and killed the leader (lynxstar) and her own mother. she couldnt belive what she had done she knew she needed to flee she ran as fast as she could away from everyone until she had found a barn. Everytime she had thought of what she’d done she would rip a piece of flesh off her paw in punishment. a couple moons later she decided she couldnt keep doing this so praying no other cat had heard of her past she decided to go to thunderclan. suprisingly they hadnt heard what she had done and let her in. after some moons she had her eye on a tomcat named “brindlefeather” he had liked her aswell or so she thought only for him to be seen with a shecat from RIVERCLAN?? after that she decided to build up walls around her so no one could hurt her again. After awhile she had made friends although shes always on edge still leading to her short temper and snappy personality. (STILL WORKING ON HER STORY :3 PROLLY GONNA CHANGE IT)

Bueno mi oc no ce si es lo suficientemente bueno pero se llama Plumoso Featherpaw es naranja y tiene la mitad de la cara negra dos patas de color negro y la parte negra de su cara tiene un ojo azúl y la parte naranja un ojo verde pero bueno es un mestizo del clan del río y el clan del viento como su madre Eagleflight murió en el parto Red star tuvo que criar a su hijo en riverclan. Plumoso/Featherpaw se interesó por el mundo de la curanderia pero a las 12 lunas de edad se estaba enamorado de su amiga de toda la vida lunarplet/Manto lunar y un día fueron a recolectar provisiones de hierbas y una patrulla del clan de las sombras los sorprendió lucharon los dos y le ganaron a la patrulla pero Manto lunar/lunarplet quedo ciega y Plumoso/Featherpaw se transformo de un gato amable y comprensivo a un Jaypaw/glayino pero una noche Plumoso/Featherpaw le dijo a Manto lunar/lunar plet que se iba a ser un mínino doméstico porque si no iba a ser curandero no iba a ser nadie (esto sucedió a las 13 lunas y media de edad) Plumoso /Featherpaw fue nombrado Heysel por los dos patas, Heysel se arrepentio de volverse un mínino doméstico y fue al clan del río pero lunar plet/ manto lunar no dijo nada sobre la supuesta desaparición de Featherpaw/Plumoso ahora Heysel apareció en el campamento y su padre Estrella rojiza odiaba a los mínimos domésticos y uno una pelea verbal y física donde Heysel salió perdedor triste y devastado corrió hacia el sur pero cruzo la caza de los dos patas fue más allá del bosque y termino en un desierto. Desnutrido y sin poder caminar más se desmayo en medio del desierto y hay recibo un mensaje del clan estelar una serpiente siendo devorada por un alcon y cuando despertó era el atardecer y estaba en una caseta abandonada y un perro sin la pata delantera llamado Xolock le ofreció comida y agua y se hicieron amigos y por el mensaje del clan estelar Heysel que se auto nombró Alcon plumífero decidió volver al bosque se subieron a un tren

Name: Ashstrike
Gender: she-cat
Clan: ThunderClan
Age: 40 moons
Role: Deputy

Ashstrike is a she-cat. The colour of her fur is silver- grey. She has a leader's star on her forehead and chest. Her eyes are half sky-blue, half heather purple. She is kind, loyal, fast and responsible. She had 1 secret kit- Dawnkit. She is from a prophecy. She had a forbidden mate from ShadowClan.

Name: Night Dream
Gender: she-cat
Clan: River Clan
Age: 39 moons
Role: Warrior

Night Dream is a small she-cat with dark fur. The colour of fur is very dark silver. She has black swirl on her body. Her eyes looks like saphires. She is kind, loyal, fast and responsible. Right now she is in Star Clan. She had 3 kits: Almond Paw, Pearl Paw and Flame Paw. Her kits are from a prophecy just like her. She had a mate from Thunder Clan- Fire Tail. Also she had 2 friends- Sweet Petal and Night Sky.

Name: Goldenorchid
Gender: Female/She-cat
Clan: My OG clan called "InkClan"
Age: 53 moons
Rank: Medicine Cat

Personality: Overprotective, Sweet, Loving, Gullible, Judgmental, Forgiving, Trustworthy.

Appearance: GoldenOrchid is a short, cream and cinnamon colored she-cat with large, shing brown eyes. To make herself look better, she often puts and orchid near her ear, hence her prefix "orchid". She got this habit sense she was a apprentice when her clanmates mocked her for her large scar from a racoon attack, calling her "weak" and other rude names, so she put on an orchid to look better. Her pelt is clean and smooth, she has short hair, where you can see her scar pretty clearly. Her pelt was "golden" to her mother, hence the "golden", though when she became older the color faded a little.

Her Prophecy: Although she wasn't in her prophecy, she did deliver one. "The stars will cascade and the feather of the quail shall smother all threatens the hay." was her prophecy, at first no one knew what this meant. "The feather of the quail" was indeed a cat, Birchfeather, and the "hay" was another cat, Deernose.

(Family)
Mother: Rabbitwhisker
Father: Pebblejaw
Sisters: Maplestorm, Ivyheart
Brother: Dawnsky.
Rating: 95% I'll take that :3

So his name ist Phoenixstar (Phoenixfire) and he is related to Tigerstar and thats why he was in his first prophecy- He has an older Brother, two older Sisters and a Younger sister. His older brother has three kids but doesnt care for them. One of them became a kittypet, the other one joined his Clan later and the Last one became besties with him. So, he lived in an Oc-Clan called Crystalclan but they got attacked from wolves and one stole his Younger sister greykit who got the Name Dragonkit from them. She never changed her name and is now deputy of another OC-clan called Forestclan, her name is Dragonscale, short Draco. She hates Phoenix. He rescued her from the wolves and got to know the ex of his Brother who got banished from her Clan, because she was a healer. Phoenixstars prophecy was written in German, becuz I am German and I do Not want to translate it, so...No Prophecy for you, sorry :D Phoenix' mother died very early, her name was Spiritsoul, they named the oldest son after her, Silentsoul. He joined the "Clan" of their Aunt Cherryfog who now terrifies all Clans in the so called "old territories". Back to Phoenixstar: he was feared and hated by his father and all other cats and got mad after his older sis, Silverrose (now Silverstar), became leader of the Crystalclan and not him. He Made his own clan, the Clan of the night. He took in kittypets, banned cats and everyone who was good enough. After many moons He got accepted and ended his war with the Crystalclan.

The second Prophecy is more about his brother and his oldest son, himself being called "the innocent" by Starclan itself, after they called him "the Tiger" in the First prophecy. He treats Silentsouls Son Nightburn like his own, he has three kits, one of them will become evil. Phoenixstars dad became father again of two kits, one of them will die early, the other will become evil. Phoenixstar is gay and his partner is called Griffinclaw (Harry Potter lol). But because Phönix is an a-hole he has v

I got 71%! My OC is Lightningsplash, a she-cat in one prophecy! She is a warrior of ThunderClan, and lost a few beloved cats on the way of her life. She is fierce, loyal, and good-natured! Only 75% done with her though, so good results!

Oh i forgot!

She She has light green eyes, and a yellow stripe from her nose to her back and the stripe turns into a completely yellow tail.

Name: Sunpool
Role: Medicine cat
Clan: Sunclan
Gender: she-cat

Scars: One on the right front paw and the other near the left ear

Personality: kind, helpful, quiet, friendly

Name: tall-furn
Coat: ginger and black
Role: medicine cat

Scars: one eye gouged out and one on the back 4 on 2 of the back legs and tail because she snuck out of camp once as a kit and ran into a fox

Gender: she-cat

Personality: kind , helpful , brave , loves collecting ferns!