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Name: Hazelpaw
Gender: Male/Tom
Clan: ShadowClan
Age: 11 Moons
Rank: Warrior Apprentice

Appearance: Hazelpaw is a light brown tom with darker stripes on his legs. He has white paws, muzzle, and tail-tip. His ears are tall and pointed, with dark brown tufts at the tips. He has a small dent on the top of his right cheek, and a small scar right above his left eye. His whiskers are particularly short, and he has big, pale, olive-green eyes. He is muscular, but has short legs, making him a couple of ears shorter than his denmates.

Negative Persona Traits: Irritable, short-tempered, defensive.

Positive Persona Traits: Honest, skilled hunter, observant.

Final Score: %78

Name: Cream'Sun
Gender: Female/She-Cat
Clan: WindClan
Age: 34 Moons (approx 2.8 years)
Rank: Deputy

Appearance: She is a cream colored She-Cat with yellow swirls on her back. She has pale cream paws and a big space of pale cream from her belly to her muzzle. She has dark tan stripes on her legs and dark tan rings on her long bushy tail. Her ears are dark tan and her eye color is Amber Gold. She usually wears a pretty pink flower on her head.

Negative Personality traits: Lazy, Bored at a LOT of stuff, Braggy sometimes.

Positive Personality traits: Good fighter, Peaceful most of the time, honest, brave

Final Score: 94% Sweet!

Name: Snowfern
Gender: She-cat
Clan: RiverClan.
Age: 23 moons (approx. 2 moons)
Rank: Warrior

Personality: Introverted and quiet, doesn't like drama or drawing attention.

Likes: Cool weather, Gatherings, gossiping with apprentices and elders.

Dislikes: Any in-Clan fighting, small spaces, drama.

Appearance: Snowfern is a short-limbed, skinny white she-cat with large, green eyes. She has big, fur-tipped ears and small teeth.

Her pelt is usually kempt and sleek, but very matted and ruffled after any fighting.

Score: 80%. Better than for what I was hoping for, fine by me.

Name:ravenkit (called ravenwind when older)
Gender: female/she-kit
Clan:shadowclan
Age:3 moons
Rank:kit (future warrior)

Personality:playful,loud,curios,impulsive,loyal,adventurous,irritable at times

Likes:playing with other kits,exploring,listening to the elders stories,warm weather

Dislikes:having nothing to do, no one paying attention to her, rude cats/kits,the cold weather

Appearance(as an adult and kit): fluffy long haired black,grey and white tabby patched fur with a small dark grey heart shaped splotch on her chest a large fluffy tail a short and sturdy build, claws are a common length,one lilac eye the other a icy blue, light pink inner ears nose and paw pads,sharp fluffy pointed ears

My cat is named Stormberry. She is a grey cat with emerald eyes and is currently deputy, although she will become leader soon. Her mate is Sandtail, (sandtail was a riverclan cat) but they both currently live in Thunderclan. Stormberry and sandtail have 3 kits, Wolfkit, Lionkit, and Falconkit. (And yes I know they are all names of other animals, deal with it) wolfkit was lost crossing a river and is assumed dead. However in Stormberrys leading years she will find wolfkit. Wolfkit was raised by loners. Stormberry is part of 2 prophecys, (three of you dont one about her kits.) I have written the first book about her and the next one will be in all three of her kits perspectives.

name: Sunpaw

appearance: Brown tabby with sun ray like stripes and golden eyes and a cream colored muzzle.

Clan: Riverclan

Story: Sunpaw was born to a she cat named Pebbleleaf in Riverclan but her father left to join Windclan before she was born. she had 3 other siblings and one that died at birth that she never knew about. the medicine cat apprentice got a prophecy from starclan saying, "When the Sun shines brightest the Shadows will fade." at first Berrypaw (The medicine cat apprentice) did not know what this meant but connected two and two and decided the prophecy was about Sunpaw. soon later, Shadowclan took over. there were many battles but eventually Riverclan was forced to retreat and live on the island. Sunpaw, Creampaw, Toadpaw, and Rockpaw went on a mission to restore peace to all clans.

Name: Mistystorm
Rank: Warrior
Clan: SnowClan

Appearance: Small silver and white tabby she-cat with ice blue eyes, a very fluffy tail and a beautiful face.

Personality: Funny, loyal, strong, courageous and can be a little sassy or harsh, but still has a kind heart.

Story: Her mother, Smokewhisker and her father Tigerstripe raised her with her littermates, Hazelkit and Mothkit. As a kit, Mistykit was annoying but nice and energetic. Her first friends were Vinepaw and Ivypaw, both 5 moons older than her. Vinepaw and Ivypaw became Vinefoot and Ivyclaw, while she was still a 6 moons kit. Vinefoot was her mentor, making her so happy. Mistypaw grew close to Hailpaw, and was so sad when Hailpaw died, killed by a Thunderclan cat. When Mistypaw had her warrior ceremony, she was given the name of Mistystorm, as a reminder that she born in a terrible storm and survived it anyways. Mistystorm and Vinefoot became mates, and Ivyclaw and Wolfwind too. Ivyclaw was exiled for no reason, making Mistystorm following her to bring her back home behind Flamestar's back. Ivyclaw had abandoned her, going back to Snowclan and leaving her alone in the wild to live as a rogue. She started to train in the Dark Forest for revenge and learned that they had planned everything, for her to be exiled and never come back. She died sadly and went in the Dark Forest forever with her real family. Mistystorm took the spirit of an innocent kit, Mistykit. She had every single pawstep and words controlled, and when she became Mistypaw again, she fell in love with Rainpaw, who Flamestar's spoiled and selfish daughter, Berrypaw liked too. One night, Rainpaw told them that he liked Mistypaw, making Berrypaw mad. Berrypaw dragged Mistypaw too the waterfall cave, and threw herself in an abyss filled with ledges. Berrypaw lived because Mistypaw's only brother, Hawkpaw, saved her life for his. When Mistypaw went down to help them, Berrypaw killed her, biting her neck. Flamestar didn't do anything to help her, a

Name: Sparrowheart
Gender: She-cat
Clan: FogClan

Appearance: Brown with a black stripe running from her head to tail, white heart on her forehead, greenish-blue eyes

Personality: Light-spirited and naive, she's like a kit in a warriors body. She's also very caring and will help any cat in need.

Story: Her mother mananged to bring a time of peace between clans and later became leader of FogClan. Sparrowkit used to brag about this to the other kits, but later learned how snobby she was being. She became Sparrowpaw and her mentor was Onyxice, who would often have to take over Hailpaw's training as well. Sparrowpaw soon grew feelings for Hailpaw, but was unaware he was using her to get closer to the clan leader. At Sparrowpaw's first gathering, she met Squirrelpaw from MapleClan. She began getting very close to him and was too naive he was using her for secrets about FogClan. After they became warriors, Sparrowheart noticed her sister - Fadedbird - and Featherfall - a grey she-cat - grew feelings for each other. Sparrowheart couldn't understand why so she grew distant from her sister. Eventually, Sparrowheart and Hailcrash had a litter of kits; Nutkit and Ashkit. However, Ashkit disappeared a few days before his apprentice ceremony, which made her extra protective of Nutkit. At gatherings, she would often sneak off with Squirrelfern and began growing feelings for him too. Hailcrash knows this and is becoming possessive of her, which means Sparrowheart never has time to be alone.

That's all I've gotten done so far! She got a score of 73% :D

Name: Snakestalker
Gender: she-cat

Appearance: Brown with black legs, jaw and tip of her tail, tan ears and muzzle, and bright green eyes

Personality: Secretive, keeps to herself, but sweet and caring once you get to know her. She can be snappy at times.

Story: ok I hope this sums it up. As a kit her mother was killed in front of her, leaving her in grief. She takes it out on her Sister, Swiftpaw. Their brother Bristlepaw has to stop the fights. Snakepaw becomes a warrior named Snakestalker because on her final assessment she catches an adder (Like Ravenpaw). Her littermates get the names Swiftwind and Bristleclaw. As a warrior, she goes to help a family of rouges hunt and fight. Two parents named Dice and Sparky, and their three kits, Streak, Flutter and Claw. As a TunnelClan patrol comes, including Swiftwind and her apprentice, Echopaw. They think Dice and Sparky kidnapped her and Snakestalker was only taking pity on them because they had kits. They kill Dice, Sparky and Flutter. And the patrol forces her to leave Claw and Streak. (Btw ik Claw has an emo name, he came from a roleplay. Actually so did Snakestalker and Swiftwind XD) so as moons pass, Swiftwind and Snakestalker's fights are now physical. And Snakestalker is in a half-clan relationship with a MarshClan cat named Newttail. When she is expecting half-clan kits, TunnelClan exiles her and MarshClan rejects her, she goes to roam the streets of Twolegplace. (Btw there are two other clans. BrookClan and CavernClan) She runs into two rouges named Fox and Slate, and they bring them to their leader. Their leader is Claw, wow who knew. Oh btw forgot to mention, the medicine cat apprentice, Gorsetuft, received a prophecy from StarClan in the prologue. The snakes fangs will be strong enough to defeat the Claws of Blood. Yeah. Anyways this non-canon BloodClan is called The Tribe of Blood. And she has four kits. One dies and she named him Ginger after her mother. The two she-cats she named Fluffle and Myrtle, and t

Name:Mousewing
Gender:She-cat
Clan:Windclan
Rank:New warrior

Personality:Kind but stays out of the way-background character-sorta peppy-not very smart-a good friend- shes better at hunting that fighting-

Appearance:A silver she-cat with brown stripes(sorry if its not realistic)

Name history: Mousekit, Mousepaw, Mousewing
Score:88% I expected 60-70% XD

Name: snowgoose
Gender: tom
Clan: thunderclan
Rank: senior warrior
Age: 55 moons

Personality: politeto clanmates, loyal, rude to loners and trespassers, not a fan of kittypets, patient

Apperance: a white longhaired bob tailed cat with yellow eyes, the tail looks like a goose's tail

History of name: as an apprentice he got bitten in the tail by a goose, he doesn't like to talk about it though

(Just for context: This takes place in it's own universe entirely, separate from main story and merely uses the concepts and environments from the books)

Name: Corpse'Blossom (Edgy name, I know, but it was given to him as a joke/nickname by the rogue group that he ran with to mock warriors names)

Gender: Tom/Male

Clan: Previously in a Rogue group called "Wastrels" but took advantage of Shadow Clan as they were low on cats.

Age: 58 moons (Approx. 5 yrs)

Rank: Previously Unaffiliated but bullied his way to Leader when the clan was low on cats.

Personality: Tyrannical, Oppressive, Good sense of humour, Abrasive, Sneaky, Confident, Brave, Loyal (After being driven out of Shadow Clan)

Likes: Getting his own way, Being in control, Birds, Peaceful walks, Fighting for his way (verbally)

Dislikes: Being told he's wrong, Being told what to do, Being alone.

Appearance: He is a scrawny, ratty tom with darkish-grey with dark tabby stripes and white highlights. He has sharp orange eyes and a toothy smirk.

His pelt is often well groomed but can become unruly fast in times of stress or anger. He has long, slightly pointy ears (his left ear having a small tear in it due to play fighting as a kit).

I haven't made a Warriors OC in a good few years so a score of 67% was to be expected heh. However, Corpse is only one of my OC's and I am inspired to go back and improve him. Thank you for the feedback, have a good day :3

Name: Chipped-Gorge
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: Exiled TC/Rouge
Age: 27 Moons
Rank: Warrior

Appearance: Slender, agile, and some-what tall, brown-orange stripes with a golden pelt and splotches of white. Right eye yellow while the left is a light orange. Has a shredded ear and one long scar that starts at her mouth then down towards the upper part of her throat.

She has long sharp ears that look like theyre capable of hearing far away but truly, shes partly deaf. She has a abnormally long and fluffy tail while the rest of her pelt is very short.

One of her teeth is slightly chipped from a clumsy fall onto a rock while being a kit which gave her the prefix, Chipped.

Personality: Ruthless, untrustworthy, thief, ambitious, zealous, and curious

Likes: Smooth rocks, tall grass, drawing in dirt, and squirrels

Dislikes: Loud obnoxious sounds, leaf-bare, confined areas

Score: 86%, Its a lot better than Id expect ;_; I was thinking more like 63-74%, something like that.

Name: Kittenfang ( originally had the prefix collie)

Gender: Tom
Clan: windclan

Backstory: Mother was a little and father was the SC med cat. He had two siblings, Houndkit ( tom) and terrierkit ( she) their mom abandoned them and they were found by windclan. They had a normal life growing up. Colliepaw fell in love with a economic cat, but was friendzoned. When his assent came, he found a rabbit and while chasing it, a hunter found him and shot him. His lower jaw was blown off and teeth were chipped or fell out. He recovered with the help of a friend, who also had a disability. The two fell in love and became mates, colliepaw having the new name Kittenfang. They had a litter of three together, all of them having a disability. Kittenfang and his mate grew old together and happily died the same day together as elders

Name:coyote storm
Age:18 moons
Clan:wind-clan
Rank:deputy
Personality:strong,and prideful, yet gentle
Gender:male/Tom
Likes:kits,clanmates,his apprentice

Dislikes:shadow-clan patrols that cross the border/disobeying the code

Apearrence:coyote-storm is a cream tom with orange-ish stripes and amber eyes his appearance also makes him looks unbeatable in battle although he isnt

Backstory:he was raised in wind-clan. Born in a storm with his two brothers fish-kit, and bat-kit. While an apprentice he was mentored by hawk-breeze a brown she-cat. When he was a warrior he was given the name coyote-storm by his leader ferret-star. He fought off a badger loosing his brother fish-whisker. When he became deputy he was the age of 16 moons. He is described as wise. He tells stories to young kits,and apprentices. He has his very own apprentice now a she-cat named falcon-paw.

Her name is FrostGlare and she is a pure white cat with crystal blue eyes, she was a kitty pet until she joined Wind clan. Her mate is DewStar and her kits are GoldenGlare and GorseFur. Her kitty pet name was Frost(named after my real cat). She is graceful, but she is untrusted by her clan mates. And my score was 94 and I feel good about that.

Name: Dogsnap
Gender: Female/She-cat
Clan: SunClan
Age: 48 moons (about 4 years old)
Rank: Warrior (nearly deputy)

Appearance: A sleek and somewhat fluffy light brown tabby she-cat, with a black sock on her right paw, and hazel brown eyes. Her tail is puffed up and out like a Somali cat, and she has black ear tufts to show it. She has a petite mouth on the outside, but when she opens it, it looks double it's original size.

Personality: Dogsnap is known for her sass, even for her age she's a bit lively too. Blunt, and confident, although she might hesitate and discourage it if it's too outrageous for even her.

Likes: Chamomile petals and the strong smell of them. She also likes to nibble on her claws, which is a bad habit, and makes her pristine self look broken by her eroded-looking claws.

Dislikes: She dislikes having to do duties, or being waken up by another cat. Sleeping in is her thing. Or someone sassing her back or being able to. But, that rarely happens :)

My score is 71%, not the best but good.

Shinestar
Gender: Female

Appearance: light gray with EXTREMELY light yellow eyes long fur

In one prophesy: when all is bleak, one star will shine brighter than the others and light up the forest

Do any toms wanna be my mate

Name swiftcurrent
Clan thorn clan
Age 42 moons
She cat

Rank history apprentice warrior deputy then death

Personality feisty brave a tiny cat about the size of a apprentice when they are about halfway through training can take down a cat twice her size short tempered will kill a cat who wronged her loyal to her clan NOT starclan cant change her opinion

She loves a good meaty thrush and also likes twoleg scraps likes to be the centre of attention

Looks like a silver tabby cat with sparkling green eyes she has a white underbelly and as an apprentice her tail got cut off so she has a really little fuzzy one

History as a kit lived in a twoleg den then her father thorn evil catcame and took he she soon realized that this is her father she got a very strong connection to him then one day he died she got attacked and was forced out of the twoleg place (she was basically royalty and that is why) she joins thornclan following her fathers dieing wish that she destroys the clans she becomes an apprentice and when patrolling meets a rouge his name is talon they instantly click and meet in secret he later joins thornclan and they become warrrior together she starts training in the dark forest so does talon who is now goldentalon she becomes deputy after she killls her leader no one knows this but her the dark forest stacks and she fights beside them they find out that she is loyal to the dark forest and is forced to leave her clan she finds some on a Patrol and fights them she kills one a warrrior she goes on killing cats in her former clan until she is finally slain by three cars together she lives now in the dark forest training young cats and still killing clanmates

69% Well made!
Name: Duskstar
Gender: Female/She-cat
Clan: Riverclan :)
Age: 58 moons (About 4.8 years)
Rank:Leader

Personality: Confident,Sure of themselves,Compulsive,Loud,Usually does what she's told

Likes: Rain, Shiny pebbles she finds in the shallow parts of the lake,Fish

Dislikes: Small spaces, Lizards, Cold days,Those who don't take her seriously

Appearance: Duskstar is a small,lithe, Blue-grey she-cat with large, round amber and blue eyes, she has strong back legs, and usually has a very clean pelt, She has darker coloured paws, ears, muzzle, and tailstripes. She has a lighter underbelly, and a somewhat small face.

Name:Lightningblaze (star)
Gender:tom
Clan: thunderclan
Age:45 moons
Rank history: kit, apprentice, leader, deputy

Personality: tough, stern, loving of those who he gets along with, no mercy in battle (which is a bit of a problem), extremely loyal, has very strong opinions on everything, even when he has nothing to do with it. He is headstrong and will do things without thinking.

He loves mice and voles, not really into other food (so basically very fussy), he loves sleep and hates it when he is woken up for dawn patrol.

Looks like: light grey with white chin, black lines on belly and forehead. Blueish-grey tail and socks. Dark green eyes that if he stares at you it makes your hackles lift in fear and you will faint if you dont have enough will power to stay awake.

Backstory (brief): mother died giving birth to him, father waited until giving him name. Got his name by being struck by lightning as a kit, he technically died but his mother sent him back despite firestars protests. The dark forest rises, he meets a cat named aurburntail, she is from WindClan. They fight at first but then fall in love. They start seeing each other in secret but then lightningblaze said that he couldnt continue so she joins thunderclan. They have kits named risingkit and fallingkit, the leader of the dark forest (named darkforest, basically the dark forest scaled down and in the shape of a cat) arrives and takes over half the lake. Fallingpaw is captured by them and then is convinced to join them. Risingfire and fallingstripe get their warrior names. Lightningblaze becomes deputy, the dark forest attacks thunderclan and kills whitestar. Lightningblaze becomes lightningstar. Fallingstripe slaughters alongside the dark forest when they attack again. Risingfire and Lightningblaze are both distraught at the thought of fallingstripe betraying them.

Thunderclan allies with the other clans and attacks the island (where the dark forest is camping) and fallingstripe kills his previously best frie

Name: Songpaw
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Boulder Clan (Oc clan)
Age: 17 moons
Rank: Med. cat apprentice

Personality: A quiet and kind she-cat with a bunch of patiences and love for her clan

Appearance: A small light yellow tabby with slightly fluffy fur and ice blue eyes

Mentor: SilverFall
Sisters: Ryepaw, Blazepaw
Brother: Thistlepaw
Mother: BreezeFlake
Father: BeeSong

Hopes to serve her clan well and be a great medicine cat

She got 80%

Name: Eclipseshadow
Gender: She-cat
Clan: My OC clan "Wildclan"
Age: 26 moons
Rank: Warrior

Personality: She is shy and sometimes and be a bit harsh on younger cats, but once she opens up she is kindhearted and loyal.

Appearance: She is a black cat with a white splotch over her left eye. She has very pale grey eyes.

Quote: "Life turns endlessly. If we sit and wait for a moment we lose out time we could be working."