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og this is the best
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OW THE HELL DID YOU KNOW IM IN THE SIXTH GRADE

Make more it was really good and i would love to see more!

Title: Heels and Heartbreak

It really is catchy and i already started writing it

@Firey_Soul

what? i couldnt hear you with randomness in my head. and i was typing that with me swimming in the comments. wait its raining yesterday... well more water for me! :D ok still randomness is taking over my head and i fought over that ipad just to read your story. and slept at midnight just to read it. maybe i finished like 10 mins so whatev. but still ty cuz you made me sleep at 2 am hehe. i love sleeping late! and then again i woke up 12 pm. and i think i made those freakin comments just somehow to make sense and help me to make a pool of comments... or like pooments...LOL! and it was late so i have no idea what i wrote. hey look my comment is long! Stardust! I MISSED YOU!

YOU NEED TO MAKE A PART 2!!!! THIS WAS SUPER AMAZING!!!! If you don't get the next part out, I will hunt you down and force you to write more.

Amazing plz make part 2 it kinda made me want more... Plz!!!

Wow that story was deep... AGAIN AGAIN ha write more it's good my house got ran sacked today and we called the cops and... BYE b----

that was really good. wow. wow. WOW. that was REALLY GOOD. i think that this story is perfect the way that it is. i think that if you write a part two it will kind of ruin the effect of this one. this story seems more like its meant to short. i wouldnt advise dragging it out. i think its perfect right now. by the way, i LOVE the title. its so creative :D

This was so good I seriously cried because it related to me so well! Youshould check mine out please the name is really similar its: S(HE) be(LIE)ve(D) I think your super amazing Firey_Soul!

Now I'm just getting pissed off anywho yea I ment he's broken I left off at I can picture it now seeing this made into a book even though its the first chapter well I thInk you should make a chapter 2 cause it already AMAZING Y don't u make it FANTASIC anyways that's all I got to say I LOVED IT AND YOU SHOULD TOTALLY MAKE A CHAPTER 2

Sorry bout that my freakin iPod is retarded anyways I was saying how it's cool how you but she's broken and he's broken in to make the title I really LIKED IT I could just picture it n

I went back to the quiz after I read the comments and I disnt get the title at all the I thought bout it then Got it it's really cool h

Write more its really good, too bad he sounds hot,lol

Oh hey I have time because I stole the iPad. Ok I'm in 6th grade and I know the guy your talking about. I think you danced with your best friend in homecoming and that guy is the person that dumped me in a text in paranormal love. And I know these things happened to you. And I also know he I think is your ex and you hate him very much. Hope this somehow the story happens to me cuz..... Cuz.... OMG I FORGOT WHAT TO SAY! Lol btw, my school will start in like 1 week and I want to read the story. This story. This part is extremely long somehow like how long PL was. Ok I still forgot what to say and I just fought off this iPad from my brother just to comment and read your freakin story. Don't worry about wasting my time cuz you will never will. You are one person who is worth wasting time of. You have an amazing talent and that guy if he was real should have stick with you than her. You are better than her. And that guy is really not smart at all. Cuz he dumped u for her. Oh s--- I forgot what to say again. But here's what I will say... Never get your hopes up cuz you will always make an amazing story now matter how you write it. Even though you messed up... You will always know how to fix the mess. Ok the heck I dont know what im saying. Ok but remember this.you could always count on me. ;) gtg bye. :) man I'm sounding like Angela + Alecx. And that's how you make my real me appear. Lol. Ok bye!

oh sorry firey soul i have to read this tomorrow cuz somethings blocking my way... (my mom has a test) lol ok i havent read it yet but i know its good. ill go commant again tomorrow ok. and remember... i will als=ways be your fan! and maybe your craziest super fan but whatev im thinking of a fan right now as in fan. a literal fan...lol my mom bye

A - MA- ZING!!!!!!!

wow you really should make part 2 this was so intriguing and I really enjoyed the plot! PLease I beg you to make part 2 xD

i love your story! amazing.. personally, i want to tear up when reading it because i had once experienced almost the exact thing that happen in the story. really touched.. please do continue.. ^^

If you don't write more i'll seriously hunt you down, you know how much i love your writings *memory lane* i remember the first time you posted your first series i was there, now i'm here for this edition

:D *hugs you* You gave me a title to a sad love story i thought about writing do you mind if i use it [me: it's in your story] It's the most perfect title, i'll give all my credit to you

I loved, loved, loved it!!!! Please make Pt 2

So good!! Part 2 please

Hurry up and make part 2

This was amazing.It was so sad but amazing!!! Your so amazing! I love the title!! If anyone didn't like this they would be crazy!!!

Oh by the way, I love the title. It's very creative! ;)