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;-; write more even tho this made me think so hard o_o dude i NEVER been asked out in my life..o.o im just so all alone ;-; i remember when i went to my first school dance{6th grade} wow o.o did i make a fool myself :c well not really i was just the girl in the conner hiding from everyone ;-; lemme shut up now xD dude look up this song!{Frank Ocean-Thinking About You} and then reread this o.o it like sets the mood xD and in paranormal :P read like 50{or more} times xD

omg... is this true? i can totally relate to this... i don't wanna talk about it...

you should write more stuff like this its so.... BEAUTIFUL AND SOMETHING THAT PEOPLE CAN RELATE TO!!

ok i am crying right now this is just like my life.... i loved him very much.... i cant even talk about it....

I think you should do part 2

You never fail to amaze me. I have reread paranormal love at least 10 times x) hahaha, this was absolutely amazing. I swear my heart actually started to hurt...gah, amazing details!! You should make part 2! Also, i have a really good idea...this guys brother or cousin should show up and they should fall in love, making her exbf really jealous...you dont have to use it though-juss an idea!(: I really love all your stories though!!! :3

Must.Have.Part.2. Awesome!! Please check out my series...if you like HP :)

PLease make part two!

And where is part 2? THAT WAS SO GOOD!!! I think I like this better than Paranormal Love. Well, almost...

this is getting famous everyday. now... where is part 2!

* Gasp! * I loved it!!!!! Firey_Soul your like the BEST writer on GTQ!!!!!!! Make a 2nd!!

This was very sad and emotional. I'm completely inlove with this now. It's funny. My friend should me a pic where it said the tittle. How sad. That guys a @ss. >:( But you should make another one. :) I want to read more. Sadly, this makes me think of my ex. :'(

Hurry up and make part 2 i loved it :-)

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!! It is really sad and I actually cried, but it still VERY well written. Your my favorite GTQ writer and your my rolemodel, so I beg of you please write more!!!!!! It can be this story or any other story but just plz write something, Firey_Soul. Also, because you inspired me I'm writing my own story called Messed Up Love. Please check it Out!!!!!

@Firey_soul I BEG YOU MAKE PART TWO!!! I felt a tear run down my eye. It is so sad but I love it. You are my rolemodel by the way I am a huge fan.You are an insparation.

that was so deep and BEAUTIFUL!!!! wow!

@xxblutixx: LOL thanks it's a true story btw XD and also cheak out my series? It's called Forever and Always.

@Firey_Soul hope you're checking this still :P like I said before, I'm out of school, and now I'm motivated to start up on that mash-up idea about the stories. If you could revisit that comments page of angelic4's and email me please if you're still interested? Thank you :)

Deep felt, heart touching, sad,beatiful, words can't describe your depth, and it sounds like this guy has the same sense of humor as me :( It was so well written, I swear this girl was you. If it is, or any of you have had your heart broken like me, be assured I would give them a nice punch in the face like you would to this guy, and like I did with my ex.

... *eyes water up* *sniffles* that was so so so beautiful D,; Fiery_Soul, DX mehememmmm *mumbles unintelligibly* I'm sorry, I'm just a ball full of random emotions today because I'm out of school and back on GTQ and I just came from Dannica's story so you know what that's like... oh my, this was perfectly deep, thoughtful, and I had an image of a silhouette of a girl sitting, staring at the sunrise, reflecting on all of this... beautiful, and perfect just how it is. I wouldn't try to make it longer (though I enjoy your writing so much) because it just seems... perfect how it is. I also have to say I love the title; so creative! And Heels and Heartbreak, yes that'd be an awesome title too XD

@33iZZy18 you go, girl!

Omg that is so sad D: . I went through this b4. Write more

i love this it is ASOME!!!!!!!!! firey_soal right more and hurry!

Absolutely BEAUTIFUL, and dnt you hate it how your friends just tell you to get over it? But in truth if you had something specail with some one you can't just simply it never happend. Though I could see everything from your perspective, I never really had a boyfriend sure plenty of guys asked me out but for some reason I always said no I guess cuz Ik that a lot of guys are jerks. And the guys who ask me out are smoking hot but all of them are jerks, and thus guy your talking about I feel for you cuz one of my guy friends that I've known since the forth grade was a really sweet guy and always respectful to girls. Than high school changed everything*-_- now he's a really hot jerk that grabs girls a--s all the time and always gets what he wants if you know what I mean. And when I started getting "prettier" a lot of guys started to notice me and so did he, but he grabbed my a-- one time and I'm not the type of girl to just let a guy do that to her and especially if he knows why I dnt have a bf, drink, or get high I was so pissed I turned around and socked him in the eye. That left a mark.

Three words: Fan-tast-ic, or is that one word, oh well! Either way it was the best thing I've ever read! Wonderful job! Please write more!