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  • I got 16% Mary Sue, and I honestly thought it'd be higher.

    Basically, my character is a wolf named Abilene. She's tiny and has a high-pitched voice even though she's 35, and always says it's because of her breed. She's an amazing healer, but also blind. She has special fireflies, their light changes color when it lands on something, so she can see it. The fireflies respond and do what she says. She has no unnatural colors or anything like that. My story involves some other characters, like Dakota and Skull who are German brothers that admire her skill. Natalie and Natalia who are twins, Natalie is really stupid, but Natalia is mute so can't really speak up against the retarded things she says. There's also Starla and Mocha, who aren't really main characters but appear in every other scene since they're her neighbors. Abilene is continuously shipped with Mocha by Starla, and Abilene is always extremely disgusted by it. Mocha is a pup and Abilene looks like a pup so... God, okay. This is too long, lemme just- Bye.

    PastelLeamurYT
    1
  • I got 31% which I believe is a little bit low for a Mary Sue, My character is named Lucas Rainbow and his a ghost hunter. My story focus on a cast of mythology monsters trying to find a way to co-exist with humans. Anyways, His goal is to find the murder who killed him called Killmore, He take an appearance of an older teenager but is actually around 50 years old. Were nothing alike appearance wise, Lucas has turquoise and Blonde hair, But, When he manifest the devil instead of him, He transformed into his evil persona called Shadow Lucas which has Red eyes and Black hair. Personality however, We got somethings in common. Lucas is a nature-lover, kind,weird, honest, loving, empathic, and brave hunter that loves to go outdoors and adventure. Me and him may not have the same hobbies but we both are kind, smart and empathetic. Lucas does get emotional and easily stress of things. He gets trigger easily if someone disrespect nature, And he make irrational decisions which lead to huge consequences. Lucas will put other characters first before himself, That usually also lead him into more traps, manipulation, and more stress in his journey. However, Lucas is able to put himself at a disadvantage and always find a way to rise against his foes. Then he has some non heroic characteristics such as a tendency of getting revenge. Lucas does have some Mary Sue qualities such as being a role model but it doesnt take him away from being human since he makes a lot of mistakes and then those mistakes into knowledge. And naturally, Everyone has a role model in their life. I hope to see my character grow in the story. Lol

    Mr_Comnerd
    1
  • 19%. I guess that was good? My character is an alien animal who wants to be human. Nothing can help them because there is no magic. Though they act just like a person most other characters are human. So they don't fall in love with anyone. For the tragic past. They were taken by humans to become a pet over and over. Until, one person saved them.

    Chu Chuu
    1
  • 16%. I honestly expected a bit more.

    My character is a fan character for the Wings Of Fire AU, but a post-apocalyptic version me and a few friends created. Shes 17 and a RainWing-NightWing hybrid. I hate to say this due to backlash, but she isnt exactly unattractive. Shes quite small with mostly black scales, with red, yellow, and blue accents. She was a runaway of the NightWing tribe and just kinda wanders. She has no powers from either tribe and isnt a oh Im the best kind of character. Her personality is quite complicated but she uses a witty, sarcastic, curious personality to hide her truly insecure, anxious, softer side. She has serious trust issues from her past and does make quite an impact in her roleplay story, although she is not at all a main character. What do you think? Ill take any feedback.

    JustXero
    1
    • I re-took the test after making some edits, and got 24%. I think its a bit more accurate but still kinda below my expectations, in a positive and negative way at the same time.

      JustXero
      1
    • I don't mean any offense, though I think Glory has a similar personality. I'm kinda curious, about her whole backstory though, since I'm a fan of that series and I never knew it had AUs.

      Orange WW
      1
  • I did this on my villain character Squirrel, a tall brown cat, with slightly darker stripes. I always thought of his voice/personality based off of the character Toffee from Star Vs the Forces of Evil . I am nothing like Squirrel-yet he got a 23% (which is quite a popular percentage) I am not an anthropomorphic brown cat, note do I wear pullover gray sweaters with white collars, nor am I a male, nor am I responsible for a loved ones death. Squirrel is very witty and calm, I am very dumb and chaotic.

    Also this quiz used the r slur, you know, the one used to make fun of and harass people with autism. I know they dont mean any harm with it, but they really shouldnt have used it anyways.

    IMadeThisToComme
    0
  • I got a 22%. So my character, Azura, is an awkward lil baby with social anxiety and only a couple close friends (really inspired by my current life situation HUH). Backstory time :) so she had a friend named Pepper, and she acted as her protector against bullies and such. Now, as the years went on, Pepper became much more confident and Azura went in the other way, as family issues developed she felt more and more as if she couldnt say a word at home or else some kind of object would be thrown at her. As a result, she relied more and more on Pepper for emotional support, but some things happen and they get into an argument. A lot of things happen, but long story short Azura ends up killing Pepper. Yeah, not the greatest thing to do when the person you killed is your best friend who is also your only emotional support? So yeah thats all where I have the story so far? I do have another bit planned where Pepper somehow comes back to life (something to do with her being of a species with an ability that grants a second life chance or something) and then a bunch of confusion follows? I have no idea. About her appearance, shes around 14-16, Blue hair with a white streak, One eye is a lighter blue than her hair while another is pure black, like more black than the kind of natural, and shes quite small, wears baggy hoodies and other loose fitting clothing because she only really gets clothes as hand-me-downs from her older brother minus her school uniform which she saved up for herself. Honestly introducing her to strangers has really got me in some inspiration to develop her story, so maybe give me some ideas on what could happen next?

    ayumu
    1
  • 23% and 30%. Ok.

    So the one that got 23% is called Mari, the female protagonist. She lives on earth, which is inhabited by mythical creatures. Humans have harnessed the creatures powers and gave them to human children, causing an era of evolution. Mari is an incredibly, incredibly weak Soul Dragon Mix. She has amnesia, and is living with foster parents and 2 siblings. She is actually an artificially created child, and belongs 100 years back, but was sent to the future to stop the human government from... doing stuff Q-Q. She inherited her mothers Eye of Foresight, in order to stop these series of events that lead to the universe once again being destroyed. But... shes weak and naive as heck and tends to be a mess and extra baggage. Thats why she needs Yuka, the one who scored 30%.

    Yuka is the powerhouse of the two of them. Hes rather mischievous, but more like a hyper child than anything. Mari thinks things through. Yukas tragic past is not certain yet, but it does include his arm being blown apart, fear of loneliness, and a desire for revenge (oooohhh). He is the descendant of royalty and one of his ancestors was good friends with maris mother. His descendant promised maris mother that his family line would protect the future. Boom.

    Im sorry for writing so much, idk why I just typed out half of my unfinished plot, I swear there is way more to this. (Actually, the story is more of a dark brain game). Damn.

    nutennas
    0
    • All I'm confused with is how an artificially made child has a biological mother. Hoping you can explain that part a bit maybe?

      Orange WW
      1
  • Fifteen percent huh, well then.

    My character is an angel-human hybrid. Whos extremely selfish and cruel but but everyone likes her anyway because shes pretty. She dresses very slutty and has had many boyfriends previously. Shes a feminine bad girl in a sense. Her hair is reddish and is brown set up in two ponytails and bangs. As a child, she got raised by her sister because her parents died in a car crash. And her sister really didnt care about her, which is why she is the way she is. Shes about seventeen years old and lives with her best friends. Shes basically a bully but she usually harm the victim more mentally than physically

    MeegaKarla
    1
  • I got 25%. this seems ok though I feel it should be lower. My OC's name is Niq IdenBane. They are a sniper for the Gaster Brothers (MafiaFell). They can shapeshift but since it drains their magic they can only shift up to 5 times every 24 hrs.They had a pretty normal life until their single mother was killed in neutral territory during a shootout between the Dreemurr gang and the Waterfall gang, after they found out they joined the Gaster brothers gang at age 24 and worked up the ranks to sniper. Does this sound good?

    anon1234
    1
    • Also They had taken a vow to kill the leaders of the Dreemurr and Waterfall gangs, because of this they have made enemies with the underbosses, and mob bosses of these gangs, earning themself a spot on their targets list. Their species is a Skeletal Dire Wolf, they are demisexual, and due to their skills as a sniper they have earned the nickname "Angel Of Death".

      anon1234
      1
    • They have a temper which is often used against them in the MafiaFell AU. They have in the past tortured information out of rival gang members, and they have been diagnosed as a Psychopath due to not feeling remorse for killing someone. They will often chose the most gruesome ways of torture, such as Blood Eagle, Swedish Drink, Bamboo torture, and the use of the Judas Cradle. FOR THOSE WHO HAVE A WEAK STOMACH, DO NOT LOOK THOSE UP, FAIR WARNING THE INFORMATION IS NOT PRETTY!!!!

      anon1234
      1
  • I took the quiz for my OC Acacia. She was stolen at the age of 2 and taken into a royal family (stay with me here). She has an incredible memory and remebers bits of her past through nightmares. She doesn't like to talk because she has a raspy voice. Anyway, Acacia doesn't look too out there. She has long, black hair and dark blue eyes. I'm surprised she only got 24% because I thought she would get more from the "kidnapped and taken into royalty" bit.

    Apotheosis_Ari
    1
  • So my character is a wizard (not a Harry Potter fan character I promise), who wasn't raised by his real parents, could easily win a fight as long as the other party isn't overpowered, he's a genius, he's calm (actually depends on the situation), he has yellow eyes, he's kinda attractive in that cute way... and he's only 16% mary sue (or gary sue). I mean I guess he has actually more flaws than strengths...

    Gay_
    1
  • I got 32%. Thought I would've gotten more for her. She's a Wings of Fire OC with a personality very similar to mine. She has an odd backstory and had to save all of Pyrrhia once so I honestly thought she'd be more of a mary sue XD

    Luster_Sandwing
    2
    • I mean-

      All the OGs in the Wings of Fire are basically what you described your character as, but they aren't Mary Sues at all.

      abadwriterTM
      1
  • I got a 16

    I feel like I wasnt able to specify because he actually was kind of noticed immediately because he began as an antagonist and just attacked them, so the other characters noticed his attacks but didn't know who the hell he was. And uh, he's actually a human that killed himself and went to hell, so in human years he's 17, but in demon years he's 21.

    BobZeBuildah
    1
  • I got 42%

    Honestly, its understandable and I accept the fact that its a high percentage. My character is 15 and come from the year 3046 that time travels to the attack on Titan time line to change it. I would but also wouldnt say she has ptsd, because shes gotten so used to the experiments and murderes.

    When it comes to relationships, no one fails for her and she doesnt fall for anyone, which I enjoy because thats what attack on Titan is somewhat about, there isnt time for relationships.

    Levi being a popular character, I did make it so she saves Levi and Kuchel, but she looks at them like family and nothing more, she becomes close to young Erwin, but Erwin never falls for her and shes just using him to become his right hand man when Erwin becomes a commander.

    The only relationship shell ever create with the characters are becoming their friends but also being that thorn in the ass for the trio main characters.

    Shes quite strong and she has around a bit more strength than the ackermans, but she still gets injured.

    I took this test because I honestly thought I made my character too much of a Mary Sue, and I accept and agree with the percentage, I take criticism and if you have any for me Id enjoy to take it in and change my character to make her less of a Mary Sue.

    Haxofclans
    1
  • I got 16%

    My character is MHA fan oc called Kumiko hisa (first name is Kumiko) so you might not understand if you haven't seen the anime. Yurei is an alias she uses throughout the story.

    *=start of backstory and end

    *She the daughter of the pro hero Spiriter (another oc) and a cop. She was a late bloomer with her quirk and I mean a LATE bloomer since she didn't get her quirk until she was 11. She was a joyous, loud child before finding out she was a late bloomer. After that she became rather reserved so her classmates wouldn't question her about her quirk. Her family life was stable until an incident. She had gotten her quirk which is a combination of her parents quirk which I will have to explain. Her mom's quirk called spirit allows her to have the appearance or abilities of a dead person or animal so if she uses a cheetah she can run really fast. Her dad's quirk is exchange so whatever he touches he can turn it into something else. So whatever Yurei touches will turn into an animal or object of her choice. A few month later she joined some classmates doing some vigilante s--- cause they think they are so strong and can be a hero. Basically hero killer is in the area and a run in with him equals traumatic experience for Yurei. Her quirk has a sort of energy bar that decreases each time she uses it and when it gets to zero she gets exhausted and bruised/cuts will appear on her body. She is at her limit and yells at stain (so smart-_-) to distract him from a class mate. Scars are left and stain let's them live cause they are vigilantes not really heroes or even heroes in training. Family finds out and Yurei is no longer allowed to be a hero cause it's way to dangerous for someone with no experience with their quirk. She runs away to pursue her dream and ends up working all kinds of jobs at 16 while lying about her age using her quirk to look like someone else. A teacher at ua witnesses her help protect some civilians in a villain attack and nezu is nezu helping her

    LilacLulu
    1
  • The OC I used for this quiz goes by the name of Blue Zynophere. She was originally created for the fandom DDLC, but she's become a whole different OC, and I never use her in anything relating to DDLC anymore.. so I guess she's not a fandom oc. She's an angel with naturally blonde hair, but she dyed it blue and green eyes. She's 17, simply 2 years older than me. She was born in Japan but her dad is American and her mother is British. She kind of does have an 'edgy' backstory. She got kidnapped and kinda killed her dad on accident- her dad was trying to kill her boyfriend who was trying to kill Blue because Blue was being really stupid- she regretted it. Her mom yelled at her everyday for killing her father, she deserved it. She always acted like a demon, not an angel like she was supposed to. Eventually her mom got arrested after starting to physically abuse Blue. That's pretty much everything about her, unless you include my friend's ocs who heavily influenced her popularity. She doesn't really have any powers besides her wings, and her only mental disorders are depression and bipolar. Also. She's flatter than Natsuki.

    eliotyohei
    1
  • I got 13% which Im pretty proud of considering the fact that the character I submitted, Adrielle Hart was made barely two years ago. Adrielle is one of the main characters in a web comic of mine called Never Again in Fantasy Land. Which is still a work in progress. I plan on submitting all 114 parts I currently have, I just need to find the right platform. The web comic is a pretty cliche slice of life Fantasy High School where all of the students have unnatural and fantasy-like features.

    For example, Adrielle has Taurus-like horns which are tainted a soft red and cream. Adrielle also has a bull-like tail which displays the same colors. He ears are quite left, drooping low and her hair is a very dark green.

    If you would like to see a red sheet, there is one on Deviant Art that I posted a while ago, the account is @thatdaylightsh1t

    In the story, Adrielle isnt much of a main character, but her mechanic in the web comic is applied when she falls in love with another characters love interest, another girl named Blaine Sawyer, who is a gentle and quiet girl, very secretive known for her above average melee combat skills. Adrielle does whatever she can to get close to Blaine, and is always feeling low due to the fact that she knows Blaine can get flirty with some other characters. Adrielle feels excluded, because the recipient of Blaines flirtatious comments is never her, but always another person. Adrielle spends a lot of her panels being lovesick over Blaine, often complaining to her best friend, a pixie-looking boy named Elliott Brooke.

    I wont bore you with more, if you would like to check out my comic, I will update the comic when it is released!

    Nexx
    1
    • Meant to say her ears are quite Elfy not lefty lol

      Nexx
      0
    • Sorry for all the typos!

      Nexx
      1
  • I got 23% his name is Stephen and he has a mental disorder that his lover tried to force him to get help for it. He tries too get therapy and it doesn't work, he gives up and stops going. The only reason he got help is because his lover tried to get him to. Anyways he eventually ends up trying to murder his boyfriend (caused by him not getting help) but his boyfriend chokes him to death before he can murder him, the relationship was toxic mostly from Stephen, but also a little from his boyfriend. Stephen was more physical and emotional, and his bf was toxic emotionally. His bf got depression and anxiety caused by Stephen, and after his death he got ptsd as well. Basically it's a story about two guys one angry and pessimistic and one optimistic and Stephen makes the other become more like him, to the point when he has to kill Stephen.

    AAAHHhH
    1
  • I got 1%?? her name is Artemis. she is named after the goddess. she finds an undiscovered island with her friends who colonize it. she has same and paranoia. the people on the island each have a falcon that they gain a power/special ability from. her ability is to become her falcon. (a large gyrfalcon named strika) Hope your characters are nice! OH YEAH! and she is a bit violent with anger issues. She is condemned to fight in an arena after everyone finds out she killed someone. she then becomes the arena champion. her friend was the queen but turned against her from power.

    JustAnAnimus
    2
    • Woah. That's the lowest I've ever known of. Also what's same?

      Orange WW
      1
  • 29%! Pretty decent for my first major Gacha series. My OC has messy purple pigtails and one purple eye and one white eye. (Covered by an eyepatch) she wears a pastel pink sweater and a pastel blue maid skirt. She wears a white necklace that her dad gave her before he died in a plane crash. Her name is Apple, she is a Tsundere and loves her childhood friend, Waffles. She isnt popular, she has cat ears and tail, (In their world many people are half animal) she has big eyes and tan skin. She is short and likes cute things. She has no special powers, nor does she save many people (She saves Waffles in the climax) and she has many flaws. She is insecure, aggressive, hides her feelings, but is soft on the inside.

    SisterCat
    0
    • I play Gacha Life too. Also I want that name. Waffles.

      Orange WW
      1
  • I got a 23% for a fan fiction character which is honestly pretty good- Im not going to explain who he is or what hes a fan fiction of but hes a short-tempered hot-head who is protective of his friends, and has a sweet side. (Basically, the traits of his parents combined)

    IAmBunny
    1
  • 21%

    Hes a new character who hasn't been fully developed yet

    His name is Maru, an 11 year old boy with a twin named Mafu. I took the isekai trope from anime and used it for them.

    Maru is a bit of a pushover and is terrified of the isekai world. His only trauma is from his parents kicking him and Mafu out very violently.

    At one point he was seperated from his brother and taken in by this man to fight off monsters. Yeeyee

    FiloChan
    1
  • 17% Mary Sue- thought it would be worse

    His name is Max Evens, it starts out with him in grade 9, normal looking kid, blond hair, blue eyes, many freckles(dont take that statement lightly) He has a high interest in the arts. music, drama, dance are his main focuses.

    I wouldnt consider his back story tragic, his parents are divorced as are over 50% of American parents. Max lives with his John his dad and his sister Rebecca who is 2 years older then him. He and his sister visit their mom once a week one Wednesday.

    In the summer of his grade 9 year, Max decides that he needs a change so the classic cutting of the hair. Little back story about this, his girlfriend Nicole, now ex. Told him he was bland and boring. So he as it suggests he became the opposite of bland and boring. No yes this could be viewed as negative, the character changing him self just because someone said so. Now yes it did start out like that but he actually enjoyed the person he was becoming, he was braking out of his shell in a way.

    Btw, the style he chose was punk, Mohawk, leather jacket, the whole shabang

    Idk, always thought he seemed like a Mary Sue. But as long as your character has flaws and some normality to them they wont be to Mary Sue. If you struggle with things like this, look at people you know, look at their flaws and back storys, it will give it more realism.

    Luxthepup
    0
  • I got 8% but I think it would be more. I dont know what to call them yet but theyre a Reverse-sona in a cyberpunk-ish setting.

    Basically they live with my own persona, named Kittu. Kittus a full-time writer, Reverse sona (lets call them Doggu) is an extremely famous pop star. But hes also a part-time assassin.

    Doggu isnt necessarily extremely evil but he is selfish, hes more so true neutral if anything. Sometimes hes bad, sometimes hes good, hes just looking out for himself and Kittu.

    Hes charming, attractive, and is amazing at singing. And hoo boy does he get the ladies..and men. Hes pansexual but that isnt the most important to his story.

    Basically he was, quite literally made for the use of pop. He was created in a lab, but he wasnt a natural good singer and was forced to work on his talent, even if he didnt want to. Hes an android and even with his charm, he still has a hard time processing them.

    Thats extremely prevalent with Kittu, who has high functioning autism and depression. While Kittu does tend to drop signs of his stress, Doggu doesnt usually pick up on them.

    Kittulads
    1
  • Well, my character is 15% Mary Sue, so... I wanted to ask if I should change something...

    His name is Meiko Komaeda (yes... Child of Nagito from Danganronpa.) and an oc I made called Horuda Nikawa (Ultimate Detective) (I know, he hears already like a Mary Sue, but, please. Keep reading.)

    He is an Ultimate Musician, and he tries his best to be one, but still, he thinks he doesn't deserve that title because he just plays piano and makes computerized music.

    He, at the difference of his father, has bad luck, but not so big, even though, he almost burned his hair once.

    Anyway, going to his story, he lived happily, but had a kinda rough childhood because of his bad luck, messing up games and works in groups, but he never told it to his dad because we didn't want him to worry (he may have a little of Wendy syndrome, now that I think about it...), but he ends up telling him, and being changed of school with better people. He then becomes a good person who always tries to make people feel better, but still, he can mess up things.

    They live happily, but one member of despair (don't have a name yet, but soon I'll have it. Let's call him Steve for now) rises and makes another war, called by Horuda as "The Second Despair War" (because she always found stupid the name of "The Worst, Most Despair-inducing Incident in the History of Mankind"). She can escape and go with other members of the Future Foundation, but Meiko and Nagito cannot, so they have to go around, look for a safe place, and stuff. They found out the 77-B class and the 79 class survivours (Horuda's class) and hide altogether, but after some time they are found and everyone dies, except Nagito and Meiko.

    Meiko ends traumatized but has to be strong (but obviously, takes some time to calm down). Then, they run and get into an abandoned lab with machines, including a time machine, which can support two persons, but both are activated separately. Nagito contains the Monokumas, while Meiko tries to activate the mach

    Flostafo
    1
    • chine, but can only activate one. Nagito, knowing that he won't be able to activate the other one, he sends his son to 2014 (when the DR2 events take place) so he can change the past (prevent Nagito to "die"). Meiko, now alone, gets into the simulation, being part of the class, helping Hajime and Nagito, and prevent Nagito to be... Well, Nagito, even if he has to take his place (being he the one who plans a murder, trying to blow the place, etcetera.)

      So, what you think? Should I change something?

      Flostafo
      1

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