Hogwarts Love Story Pt 18 | Comments

Okay, thnks a million!

Just a question, if I wrote a Potter related quiz (not necessarily with romance in it...) would any of you be willing to read it? Just wondering, because I really like stories, and it would be nice to have some unbiased opinion on how I write.

I really wish id send u something...ill send u even after the competition so ill know wat u think of it cause now i have a little idea in my mind ... lol XD

Yeah only two more days! That means new addition soon!!!

OK...THATS IT.i totally GIVE UP!!!whatever i think about as a story just doesnt work.WHY AM I BORN TO BE A BAD WRITER?!?!?!?!?!??? ! It just doesnt work out as it should and since this week i had exams,i just cant make up a good story :(( ah well as they say "Once a loser,ALWAYS a loser " maybe i can submit something in the next competition???Hopef ully =|

Natuhleegayle I do hope you got my email =)

I loved this! It's really nice you're adding Cedric to the results, I'm sure that pleased many fans. As always, your detail is phenomenal, and the story line was pure brilliance and your wording is very vivid. I always adored the ways that the detail you involve is a basic build of what you want us to see, but then you leave room for us to imagine the setting, or character. I was so excited to see this released! The contest was a great idea, and I may attempt to join. Surprisingly, I loved Harry's hair in the fourth year, it was even more shabby, LOL. Great work as always! I understand what you mean about it being difficult to write something subtle after having a big climax in the writing. I think you did perfectly, though, and I love being part of the Tri-Wizard Tournament.

MAN i still have NO IDEA what to write about ;_;and i wanna participate so badly:(

@_ViolaLover_ and Ambrosia THOSE WERE AMAZING and @ natuhleegayle can both those things happen? and Can't wait for the next part

Well, I decided to come here and give your a scene, because I work best under the procrastonation of other things. I'm supposed to be writing my quiz, I work on my english project. I'm supposed to be working on my english project, I write an entry. I'm supposed to be writing an entry, I write my quiz =)

*ahem* I was walking down the street of privet drive, coming back from the store because I had to get some sort of special salsa for my Aunt Connie. Unfortunatly, they were out of it. She was so nice to let me stay with her this summer while my mom went on a business trip. Consumed in my thoughts, I almost didn't see the boy carrying a much larger boy down the street, walking next to an old lady. I squinted and could make out messy hair and piercing green eyes hidden behind round glasses. Was that..."Harry?" I called out, starting towards him. He glanced up in surprise and said, "_______?" "The one and only, what happened?" I asked, reaching him at last to see that the boy he was supporting was extreamly pale. "Dementor attack," he replied grimly. "I have to get Duddly home." Without being asked I through Duddly's arm over my shoulder and helped to carry him. "You should be find now, I'm going to go," the old lady said kindly. I smiled at her and then asked Harry, "Dementors? Here? What are they doing so far from askaban?" He through me a sidelong glance and stated blandly, "I have no idea." We reached the door of a house and it opened quickly revealing a sour looking woman who's face clearly showed alarm. "My Duddlikins! What did you do to him?!" She screached at Harry. He winced and angered, I replied, "He didn't do anything, it was the dementors." Harry stared at me as this woman's face paled. "And who are you exactly?" she asked me, staring me down.

Well, my real name IS amber so after reading your stories, I asked myself, why not put ambrosia?

I'm really liking all of these submissions, they all have substance and short sweet plots. good job everyone

I never really liked some of these chacters but after reading your story, i LOVE draco.

@Aria, it's my pleasure. I read your series and I hope it turns out flawless because I find it's going wonderful so far. I eagerly await part four

@natuhleegayl e, oh okay. That's great. My email acc is hacked otherwise i would have emailed you.

@Ambrosia, thanks for the compliment. It's just so sweet of you whoever you are to make your name "Ambrosia."