Hogwarts Love Story Pt 18 | Comments

@natuhleegayle, as i said, I LOVE you and Aria. How do you guys come up with these amazing ideas?

@natuhleegayle, Im gonna try.

I might not get it properly but at least im trying

The setting is at home, with your both parents.

The doorbell rings. "_________ sweetheart, can you please open the door?" "Yes daddy !" You opened the door to see none other than Ambrosia. She had scars on her face and she looked as though she was thoroughly beaten. You asked shyly, "Ambrosia, what's wrong?" She stuttered, "M-my mother said it's my fault daddy came back to you." You couldn't help but throw your arms around this girl. You guided her inside and your father said, "Amby...sweetie, why did your mother do you that?" She shrugged and said, "Please father. I can't live with her. She's gone insane. Im sorry for not believing you and __________" She turned to you, "________________ The oliver thing was a big mistake. I got jealous. That's all. Please forgive me." You nodded and hugged your family, and your step-sister.

Additional points-A dream

natuhleegayle- thanks. I think you are an amazing writer and so far, you and Aria are my favourites.

@ketine11 right now im not sure. It's all very confusing.

Thanks for explaining to me, and the deep sleep thig was the last part of pt. 18 remember bagman was putting her into a deep sleep for the second challenge!

@natuhleegayle

add itonal points: everyone is meeting in the cafeteria for the death of cedric diggory

Hello everyone. You're gonna find that my name is funny because I kinda find the name Ambrosia is beautiful. I would like to say that the author of this series is the best i've read so far and i know she will go very far in life

@ketine11, i think what they are doing is after the challenge. =P You can do that, according to what natuhleegayle said. Read the contest over again. Where did you get the deep sleep thing from?

Umm a lot of you are writing scenes about Cedric's death, but he dies in the third challenge ad aren't we supposed to write scenes about the deep sleep the girl is about to go into??

Is that enough key points?

Thanks. It was my first time.

Kinda confusing i know but I meant when Draco asked you what happened you explained it to him

Additional Points- Oliver invited me to spend the summer with him.

When Cedric died- Everyone was screaming/crying. Draco wrapped his arms around me and shook me like a baby, rocking me back and forth. I couldn't believe it. Right before Cedric died, he told me he loved me. What am i supposed to do? This wasn't right. Draco whispered, "What happened in there?"

In the Maze- You, Harry and Cedric were transported to a graveyard. You saw Cedric die and you told Draco about it after.

Sorry, some of it is in the third person's perspective. Change it to first (=

@natuhleegayle
CON TEST ENTRY
Setting: Hogsmeade after the tournament
Main Chracter: Draco

I sat across from draco. His eyes showed pain as I couldn't stop crying. "__________, please don't cry." "Draco, cedric died. How can i NOT cry?" I missed Cedric a lot and I don't know what i'll do without him. Draco muttered, "I could've helped potter but i didnt..." You asked, "what?" "Potter saw Voldermort right?" You nodded and he continued, "I could've stopped it. My father is a death eater." Draco eyes began to water. You needed him now. He took you into his arms and said, "I'll be there. I'll take care of you but please dont leave me." You nodded and he kissed your forehead.

2 nat abot the three guys i could focus on one and mention the the other two, but i'm sure you know who one of the guys is =]

@natuhleegayle do you think i should?

@AiFiahK3mE I love that last coment