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  • @Aria - Haha, thank you :) Yeah, I've seen growth in my writing as well. To the whole Bella & Cedric thing; it's because the actor who played Cedric is Robert Patterson best known by everyone as Edward Cullen. It was just sort of For those people who dislike Cedrix's change. Haha, I'll be sure to keep writing till then :)

    @Samantha2332 - Awe really? Thank you, I look forward to reading if you don't mind :) Also, I've told people that Cedric will be a Love interest but he won't be a result just because he dies in this series as well. We're all looking forward to clobbering Ambrosia. Haha

    natuhleegayle
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  • @HogwartsLove - It's alright, it's the thought that counts. Im relieved you enjoyed the scene with Neville, I was debating or not if I should keep it because it wasn't the Neville everyone grew to love. Haha, that bed intruder option is the result of lack of imagination. Glad you laughed though :)

    @AiFiahK3mE - Thank you :) Haha, at least you did manage to get Oliver.

    @storyqu een - Don't worry, I don't intend for Draco to act that way any longer. He'll have a very good excuse (once I come up with one) but fear not & thank you by the way :) Haha, oh! You do te to strangle her though.

    @Chicken girl - Thank you :) Actually 2 of the options are actually positive among Harry & Ron. Sorry, I don't think i gave it any clarity between the two. I'll be careful next time & haha, yes! I do agree with the older boy comment :$

    natuhleegayle
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  • @XxxKaliaxxX - Awe, thank you :) It means a lot to me ! Haha, I think everyone especially Robert Pattinson preferred if Cedric stayed Cedric instead of the sparkly vampire. However, I can only see Cedric as Rob and no one else. Haha, I'm sure you'll get that spark of writers craft you'll need and your story will be wonderful!

    @Obss ions0112 - Hehe, thank you as well ! :) Yup, and might I add you'll be somewhat satisfied with the next edition that comes out tomorrow! I absoluetly loved and laughed to what you suggested with Neville! It was actually so cute, that would have been such a great tease for Neville :') I'm still laughing about that

    natuhleegayle
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  • This was absolutely riveting as always! I never comment but I Decided to on this one! I really love it. The storyline,the characters... And Cedric! Though I likes him better in the books because he wasn't played by Robert Patterson,so I could imagine Cesric really handsome, without thinking about a sparkly vampire at the same time. Anyways,that was great! Keep writing! Wow,I really do wish I could put out my stories as fast as you.

    XxxKaliaxxX
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  • @_ViolaLover_ - Awe, okay but don't worry. From my personal opinion, there will be some clobbering but not anything to serious. She'll live @ haha, yeah it does sound dangerous but rather exciting right ? thank you. :)

    @Jayla - Oh man! LOL, thanks. I can see that you, like many really do hate Ambrosia. Uhm, it should be up later today. Probably another two editions will be release I don't know , but thanks for your support :)

    natuhleegayle
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  • Brillent! fantastic as normall at the end where you said I might get to strangle her I squealed. By the way instead of getting all mad at Neville I made up my own version of this story.

    (Neville picks up magize and zones me out I rant for a bit and then see he is not paying attention)

    ME: And Oliver was so sad when I told him about my feelings for you but I couldn't keep it secret teasing him like that.

    Neville: Mmmmhhhhmmm

    Me: It was then I swore ' The next time I see that lovable boy I will kiss him until he understands my love for him'

    Neville: mmhhmmm
    Me: I intend to keep that promise.

    You rip that magizen out of his hands and kiss him very long.

    Neville: I-I.... what? *he blushes*
    Me: This is why you listen to me hunny.
    XD I think I acted this out to. XD

    Obssions0112
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  • Hey guys! So, this is irrelevant but I just want to thank you guys again. I've really grown as a writer, I've looked back to my first quiz till now; it's crazy how much one can improve. If anyone has any questions about this part like the rest, drop it in the comments box! Last of all, thank you for Part 11 to make it to the Top 100 quizzes. The feeling is always surreal. Well, toodles. Off to work x

    natuhleegayle
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  • natuhleegayle!
    utt erly speechless

    it's been a while since i've read your quizzes but nevertheless, it is better than before!

    I really see some growth and i have to say, what's with the Bella thing and cedric?

    i know it's bella from twilight
    ahaha
    nicee one

    anyways, i cannot wait for the next one and please continue writing until nineteen years later

    im sure everyone here loves your work!
    And we all love OLIVERRRR!

    Aria
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  • This was so amazing! xD

    I totally loved that whole Neville scene! And I laughed so hard at the bed intruder thing. At first I went "is she making it seem like - yep!" :D I tell ya! So awesome! I'm sorry this comment is so short; LOL. I really loved this and can't help take these over and over!

    HogwartsLove
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  • Oh, I don't want to kill her or hurt her really badly, I'm just not that kind of person. Of course, I wouldn't object if I had a friend do it for me, but details, details...working for the twins sounds dangerous...o.o I'm slightly afraid. Nooooo what's wrong with Draco >.< Can't wait for your next one!

    _ViolaLover_
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  • @angelic4 - I appreciate your comment! I kind of agree with you, I fancy the older guys. Erks, we wouldn't want that now but interesting idea.

    @Horseluve r - Ahaa! Well, that's an interesting idea as well. I'll try to see where Ambrosia takes us this time~

    natuhleegayle
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  • @rosekat - well, I guess I should make the story more interesting by changing directions to a new guy. That's a possibility bit we'll see & thank you very much :)

    natuhleegayle
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  • @Samantha2332 - Don't worry! It's fine, if you want to run your ideas by me email me at rawrnedly@hotmail(. )com if you want my opinion & I'm sure youll be successful on your own but I'm happy to help

    natuhleegayle
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  • realy awesome I loved it and I think I must agree with those who think we should clobber the evil little brat a.k.a. Ambrosia mwahahahahahaha ok enogh of that just so you know I'm still super torn between oliver and draco but I guess I'll just have to live with it lol.ok anyways great job and as always KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!

    rosekat
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  • loved it!!!! keep it up!

    but couldn't there have been any positive reactions to ron and harry's hair????

    angelic4 i agree with you-older guys are awesome!!

    (even if they soon become dead but hey whatever! they're great while they last right?????)

    Chickengirl
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  • loved it!!!! keep it up!

    but couldn't there have been any positive reactions to ron and harry's hair????

    angelic4 i agree with you-older guys are awesome!!

    (even if they soon become dead but hey whatever! they're great while they last right?????)

    Chickengirl
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  • OMG! I love this story! :D Shame Draco's being a b***h at the moment! Can you change that please, or at least give him an excuse! And I can't wait to see that B***h you have to sleep next to getting strangled! I'll be back!

    storyqueen
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  • @natuhleegayle Thanks I think it would have been a good tease for all the Neville fans out there also. I laughed the whole time I posted it and considered not putting it up...... I'm glad I did

    Obssions0112
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  • @natuhleegayle: I kinda wanted your opinion on my ideas, because I wanted this series to be as good as yours, and I never really have a good beggining to my quizes, so yeah! And I would be honored if you did read my hp series when I make it

    Samantha2332
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  • @natuhleegayle: I absolutely loved this quiz! I am thinking of righting a hp quiz just because of you! I dont know if I like Oliver or Cedrick. But was Cedrick even a result? Doesnt matter but Im all for strangling Ambrosia!!!!

    Samantha2332
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  • @Obssions0112 - LOL, I'll keep that in mind.

    @Samantha2 332 - Haha, I'm never on my phone anymore. It's easy for me to visit & talk to you guys now. And alright, can't wait :)

    natuhleegayle
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  • I loved EVERY minute while reading this :D I got the twins the first time I took this quiz, but the second time it was Oliver :)

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • I know she wouldn't take Neville, unless the bi*ch does it to annoy me... I'll kill her in the night and frame Pansy Parkinson...

    Horseluver
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  • Whenever im reading this the only voice of the guys i can do are Fred and George the rest of them i can't get right

    littleTiger
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  • Ahhhh, Oliver Wood, once again!

    luna_ravenclaw
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