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Thread Topic: Poem
I also know. Big and brown...lol...mabye the wrong thing to type.
LOL, I remember yesterday, as soon as I read it I had to leave, and I was laughing in the car...! Oh, and both your poems were nice.
HUGE ASS Newbiei was gonna giv this to ma krush so i may as well post it here cuz shell never b mine...:(
tell me wat u think
i dont kno how i can breath
i dont kno wat 2 do
wen i hav to leave
i feel lik if we r not togther
then my life wil shatter
so i just want to tell u
how much i luv u
n i hope u feel the same way
each and evry day
i feel like rippin the paper up now.
Srry Biance, didn't really read that part, ha ha.
sapphiretwirl Noviceha ha! i did kinda remind me of s---
It's okay. I forgive you.
Wow, Sam, that was sad, I mean normally I'd laugh and say that was s---, but I like you, and you seem really depressed, but don't worry, you'll probably find someone else...
hippie4life Newbie@rachcab21 it not
Cause just one thing. Would make me say.
cuz just one sip would make me sick
Tears at bay
Your words crash over me like a title wave
Another gash is cut into my heart and skin
I told myself to be brave
But collapse under the pain
Nothing could stop my tears
My friends try to help
But I refuse,
Concentrating on what I never wanted to hear
My heart speaks her 'mind' freely
"Another failure, how can he do this to me?
Oh my aching pain"
My mind will always respond:
"Shut up! No need to stir up the rain!
Donâ€™t worry my fragile thing.
Just like always it'll go away"
The madness has torn me apart
But I try to keep the tears at bay
They come anyway, drowning me in despair
This was not right
I try so hard as my emotions climb higher
In order to keep what I can
Still feel the burning pain, the fire
I have to try to not sway
In the wrong direction
As I try to keep my tears at bay
another one i have is:
I sit by the sparkling pool
Staring at my reflection
My once blue eyes
Clouded with fear
My lips swollen
From endless lies
And fairy tale kisses
My blonde hair
From constant anger
My cheeks stained
But when I look in a mirror
I see the blue eyed
Blonde haired, unharmed
Me that I am
I look back into the pool
And see a stranger
With my face, staring back at me.
My true reflection.
Submerged in darkness
Surrounded by fear
In endless tears
In aching pain
That wonâ€™t go away
Cloaked in confusion
Images passing by too fast
Like pictures on a flickering television
In never ending nightmares
In sleepless nights
Filled with terror
Iâ€™m under water
Iâ€™m cold and yet so warm
I canâ€™t breathe
Something that was forewarned
I know this feeling all too well
Sounds like fire and ice
Iâ€™m going straight to hell
Please am I worth saving?
Questions with no answers
I couldnt decide which one to post so i did both...hehe i rhymed
Wow, those were super amazing, I liked the first one most, but all of them were very good, you've got talent, unlike me, I'm not creative with words. I hate myself!
Why don't I write a poem now? I'll try:
Reach a high point in life,
And everyone knows it's true,
And certainly not a lie,
But what if,
All that succes went undone,
And now it's like standing on a cliff,
You have no chance of one,
Now meet me when I call you,
And I'll tell you what you need to do,
So if I was going to fall,
Would you be there at two 'o' clock,
But would you hide behind the wall?
'Cause if I lose all hope,
Here you'll have to go,
And don't cry or mope,
Becuase then everyone will know.
Hmm... not very good. f--- it, I'm bored now.
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