Don't leave me hanging part 21 | Comments

I can't believe that Emilia >:( not only did she interupt me and Jack-Jack, but she also won't learn my name.

Masquerade ball?!!? Fuuuunn. I can't wait till I get to that part. XD

These are so interesting and well-written. The plot is great and so are the characters. So far I like both Cory and Jack-Jack about equally! It's so hard to choose T.T hehe, well, onto the next part I go! *skips along to part 22* ^-^

Next time ill kick Emmys assbuttocks and give her a reason for ruining my almost kiss with Jack! Wow, imway too into this.

Lumini, hmm... interesting. Youre a very interesting character.

Jack, I'm so shy in front of him. I don't know why. *gets shy and runs out of the room on two different occasions*

Marisa, Goodbye Alpha!

Maxy, I need you to stay with me. Please don't go. I'll keep you as my bodyguard.

Emilia, stop being a punk and grow up already. Damn. That stupid little girlie ruined my moment with Jack. She calls my Jack Jackie? I don't approve it. She's so annoying. She's so mean to me and Justin. Wait.... Is she jealous of me? I think she likes Jack. Its so OBVIOUS.

Justin, i'm so excited that justin too comes with us for the party. I don't know why but i feel safe with him. He's such a smart guy.

Kris, he is so quiet. He always cares about me more than Jack. *sees kris standing leaning against the wall with his arms crossed* *goes straightly to him* *puts my hand around his neck and kisses him for a brief moment* *looks around* *realizes the room is not empty* *runs out of the room skipping*

THANK YOU I LOVE YOU XXBLUTIXX!!!!

awwwwwwwww i wish i wouldve read this earlier to make a character!! i just found out bout this series sooo thats why :( ohhh well

It's cool how you incorporate your audience's ideas into the story. As a writer you always have to listen to your readers. I would write in a character but the whole thing is over and all so... yeah there ya go. If I were to make a character, she's be on the bad side. I have a knack for villains, because they're characters taken to the extreme. Emmy is a bit rude, but I'm not going to cause friction in the team. There's always going to be that one girl/guy who's hard to work with, but you have to try and co-opperate to succeed in your goals. I don't want to get in anyone's face, the only two people I want to see crash and burn are Logan and Blake. "We're not a team... we're a time bomb" ~Bruce Banner/The Hulk~

I have a good one, I hope I'm not late!
Name: Charlotte Rose (Charlie)
Personal ity: Outgoing, Flirty, Gorgeous
Side: Good
Man: Cory

Looks: Long, red hair; fair skinned; grey eyes that turn orange

Dress: short and cute; all red with a red rose at the strap

Mask: orange and yellow (feathers are optional)

this would be the mask

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and the dress

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just take out the spaces between the ws

AHHH! I hope I'm not to late, I probably am, but I've got a good one.

NAME: Lacey

PERSONALITY: smart, shy, clutzy, funny, and kind

DRESS: pale pink with gold lace, but not over the to

LOOKS: short, brown hair, a little past shoulders, small body frame, hazel eyes, rosy cheeks, pale skin, and pink lips not sure what she would look like in magic form

MASK: pale pink with gold design
SIDE: good side, cuz evil people scare me
LOVE THE STORY AS ALWAYS!
XD

Aha!I know how to do this now!Okay,look up - grey formal dress - on google image search.It's the one with the blonde girl who's looking away from the camera.It's under the one exquisite evening dress thing.The first one.Thanks!

Oh gosh, that's a great idea :D

Is it okay with two characters of mine? I'd want Oceana to have Jack, and Layla to have Quincy. I chose the name 'Layla' because it means 'Dark Beauty'(because she's on the 'dark side' XD) :3 Both of the girls are very beautiful, I forgot to say that while describing them... Oceana will be on the good side and Layla on the dark side, okay?

@KaliaRox No problems :) It was the truth, so... And I hate them too >.> Google's urls are always so long...

@xxbluti xx Yay ^-^ XD I'll create another one then ^-^ Here it goes:

Name: Layla

Physical appearence: Waist-long, jet black hair and emerald green eyes. In her immortal form, she has red... Things, like those Jack and Kris have, but they have purple and Layla has red.

Dress: Long, dark red, and simple. Strapless. She'll be wearing a bracelet, a black one with golden details.

Mask: A golden one. Let's see if I get the link right... h t t p://w w w.madison avemall.com/pro ducts/pro duct.asp ? sk u = M68 0Pa leBl ueVe lvetMa sk The flower in it will be dark red, the same color as the dress.

Personality : Cool, calm and collected. Most of the time. When she's angry, her voice is low, and hints DANGER, which means that you do NOT want to make her REALLy angry. Might be the last thing you do, depending on what.

Date: Quincy (Oceana can have Jack. Oceana will be on the 'good' side and Layla on the 'bad' side, okay?)

I love your quizzes, I'm such a big fan, part 22!

@xxblutixx:Perfect! Thanks!I hope the URL's will work though.I'm excited now!

@AiFiahK3mE :Thanks!You cheered me up!I hate long URL'S! -_-!!