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  • Lumini, hmm... interesting. Youre a very interesting character.

    Jack, I'm so shy in front of him. I don't know why. *gets shy and runs out of the room on two different occasions*

    Marisa, Goodbye Alpha!

    Maxy, I need you to stay with me. Please don't go. I'll keep you as my bodyguard.

    Emilia, stop being a punk and grow up already. Damn. That stupid little girlie ruined my moment with Jack. She calls my Jack Jackie? I don't approve it. She's so annoying. She's so mean to me and Justin. Wait.... Is she jealous of me? I think she likes Jack. Its so OBVIOUS.

    Justin, i'm so excited that justin too comes with us for the party. I don't know why but i feel safe with him. He's such a smart guy.

    Kris, he is so quiet. He always cares about me more than Jack. *sees kris standing leaning against the wall with his arms crossed* *goes straightly to him* *puts my hand around his neck and kisses him for a brief moment* *looks around* *realizes the room is not empty* *runs out of the room skipping*

    SimplyDawn
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  • I have a good one, I hope I'm not late!
    Name: Charlotte Rose (Charlie)
    Personal ity: Outgoing, Flirty, Gorgeous
    Side: Good
    Man: Cory

    Looks: Long, red hair; fair skinned; grey eyes that turn orange

    Dress: short and cute; all red with a red rose at the strap

    Mask: orange and yellow (feathers are optional)

    PurpleCherries
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  • It's cool how you incorporate your audience's ideas into the story. As a writer you always have to listen to your readers. I would write in a character but the whole thing is over and all so... yeah there ya go. If I were to make a character, she's be on the bad side. I have a knack for villains, because they're characters taken to the extreme. Emmy is a bit rude, but I'm not going to cause friction in the team. There's always going to be that one girl/guy who's hard to work with, but you have to try and co-opperate to succeed in your goals. I don't want to get in anyone's face, the only two people I want to see crash and burn are Logan and Blake. "We're not a team... we're a time bomb" ~Bruce Banner/The Hulk~

    Missy Prissy Cat
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  • Thanks a ton for the characters angelic4 and AiFiahK3mE!

    @angel ic4 *gasp* I was thinking of a character like Savanna too! XD I guess I'll come up with costumes and masks for them unless you want to, then you can post here again.

    @AiFiahK3mE your improved url came up justtt as I got rid of the last space of the long url XD but that's a really pretty mask :D I hope I can do it justice when I describe it :3 And I'm perfectly fine with your comments; I love any comments I get :D (and you say the most interesting things sometimes ^^)

    xxblutixx
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  • Layla sounds like a great date for Quincy, thanks again AiFiahK3mE :) I love the name, in this online game I play, my name is actualy a variation of that... everyone's characters sound so good, I want to keep all of them... I was thinking of creating another series (while still continuing ths one) that is from the persective of a girl on the Blake's side, since many of you seem to like at least one of the bad guys, it would let me keep more of these characters being created, and I have lots of deas for more hot guys ;) Tell me your opinions?

    xxblutixx
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  • @KaliaRox No problems :) It was the truth, so... And I hate them too >.> Google's urls are always so long...

    @xxbluti xx Yay ^-^ XD I'll create another one then ^-^ Here it goes:

    Name: Layla

    Physical appearence: Waist-long, jet black hair and emerald green eyes. In her immortal form, she has red... Things, like those Jack and Kris have, but they have purple and Layla has red.

    Dress: Long, dark red, and simple. Strapless. She'll be wearing a bracelet, a black one with golden details.

    Mask: A golden one. Let's see if I get the link right... h t t p://w w w.madison avemall.com/pro ducts/pro duct.asp ? sk u = M68 0Pa leBl ueVe lvetMa sk The flower in it will be dark red, the same color as the dress.

    Personality : Cool, calm and collected. Most of the time. When she's angry, her voice is low, and hints DANGER, which means that you do NOT want to make her REALLy angry. Might be the last thing you do, depending on what.

    Date: Quincy (Oceana can have Jack. Oceana will be on the 'good' side and Layla on the 'bad' side, okay?)

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • i habent commented sijnce part 19, i didnt even know u made part 20, cant wait for part 22

    Character
    Name: Savanna

    Desc. black hair, with purple highlights, purple eyes that can turn a reddish violet when she's angry, 5'6, Evil and like Blake

    Power: morphing
    And i wanted a guy
    Character
    Nam e: Daniel (Dan)

    Description: tall, has dark green hair a bit spiked which looks a little black, grey eyes with green specks,(cute),

    Power: Invisibility

    angelic4
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  • @AiFiahK3mE ohhh I see what you mean there. I was planning to have _______ go single and the guys each have a date or go single I don't have it completely worked out yet :P If you want to make another character, then by all means, go ahead! I don't really have a limit on how many will be added unless it gets to some crazy number like 25 or something, but I doubt that will happen.

    xxblutixx
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  • @SimplyDawn mhm Luna is quite the... um... personality... Max would make a good bodyguard, and yes your annoyance toward Emilia is shared by many XP Yup, Jus is pretty reasonable, logical, smart and Kris does care a lot (that would be a cute scene, but yes, drama would ensue violently XP I like the skipping away haha)

    xxblutixx
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  • AHHH! I hope I'm not to late, I probably am, but I've got a good one.

    NAME: Lacey

    PERSONALITY: smart, shy, clutzy, funny, and kind

    DRESS: pale pink with gold lace, but not over the to

    LOOKS: short, brown hair, a little past shoulders, small body frame, hazel eyes, rosy cheeks, pale skin, and pink lips not sure what she would look like in magic form

    MASK: pale pink with gold design
    SIDE: good side, cuz evil people scare me
    LOVE THE STORY AS ALWAYS!
    XD

    PersonXD
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  • I can't believe that Emilia >:( not only did she interupt me and Jack-Jack, but she also won't learn my name.

    Masquerade ball?!!? Fuuuunn. I can't wait till I get to that part. XD

    These are so interesting and well-written. The plot is great and so are the characters. So far I like both Cory and Jack-Jack about equally! It's so hard to choose T.T hehe, well, onto the next part I go! *skips along to part 22* ^-^

    rhimicha
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  • Is it okay with two characters of mine? I'd want Oceana to have Jack, and Layla to have Quincy. I chose the name 'Layla' because it means 'Dark Beauty'(because she's on the 'dark side' XD) :3 Both of the girls are very beautiful, I forgot to say that while describing them... Oceana will be on the good side and Layla on the dark side, okay?

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • @xxblutixx One more thing(I'm starting to get annoying again >.>). I have to admit I wouldn't like it very much if Jack had another date than _______(me), even though it's my own character -.- So I'd apreciate if her date was Quincy. If it turns out to be a little complicated with a 'good' girl being the date of a 'bad' guy, Oceana can also be 'bad' then. Or maybe, if you ask me, I'd like to make TWO characters, one good(to Jack) and one bad(to Quincy). You can choose what Oceana will be, and then the other girl will have the guy that's left.

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • If I have space later one, maybe I'll open it up again, Missy Prissy Cat. Yes! I love creating villains too X) but I don't know why...

    Oh, I doubt you're reading this PurpleCherries, but I know a spot I can fit your character in, part 35 though probably :P

    xxblutixx
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  • i give up -_-.i'll just describe it.The dress is greyish silver with a single strap about 4 shoulder length.there's a flowy bottom that ends at the shoes,with a tie on the waist that ends in a sparkly swirl.The top is bejewled beautifully.it's awesome.The mask is just like any other mask,but it's grey,and it has a swirl on one side that ends just above the top of the mask.Their is tiny patterns on it.

    KaliaRox
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  • Aha!I know how to do this now!Okay,look up - grey formal dress - on google image search.It's the one with the blonde girl who's looking away from the camera.It's under the one exquisite evening dress thing.The first one.Thanks!

    KaliaRox
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  • @xxblutixx Maybe I do. Maybe not. I don't know. It's just that I seriously don't try to say nice nor bad things about myself. We can say I let the self-judgement to others. I just act like I want to, without thinking about it. And I have no idea of how I got in to this topic >.>

    @KaliaRox Ah, I know how you feel. See those annoying comments down there, trying to get a link right? That's me >.>

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • DESCRIPTION CONTINUED:
    Power :The ability to shrink of course!

    Personalit y:Sad,happy,mixed emotions.kind,yet angry at the same time/kinda emoish

    Date:Just in(Jusss!!),Kris,or ,if i have to -_- Logan.

    Good side or Evil Side:Depends on the guy-if Kris of Justin,good.If Logan,evil.

    THAN KS!!!YOU'RE SUCH AN AWESOME WRITER!!:DDDDD

    KaliaRox
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  • @AiFiahK3mE yeah like that, the things you say about the story are... insightful I guess is the word I'm looking for?

    @Bluebird Thanks Bluebird! :D The character creation event is going to continue for the next few parts, I don't think I'll be able to use them until maybe part 24-ish area, so you still have time if you want to :)

    xxblutixx
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  • Emily is a dead woman. Jack was going to kiss me >:-( Call me crazy, but something is suspicious about her... I mean, if she was really, and I mean REALLY, loyal to the team, why'd she try to have the Milia to a ultra-dangerous party, and continue begging for it though the leader(Jack-Jack ^-^) says no? Also, here's a character. It's a woman, and I want her to be preferably in the 'good' side. Here's the description.

    Nam e: Oceana (Oh-shee-anah)

    Phy sical description: Long, wavy dark brown(REALLY dark brown, but not black-looking) hair that goes down to her waist and oceanblue eyes. When she's in her immortal form, her eyes have golden and purple tints(I don't know how to call it. You know when Kris's on his immortal form, when there is something purple in his eyes? Like that, but with gold too on Oceana)

    Dress: A very long, pure-white one, sleeveless one. Plain, but beautiful. She'll be wearing a silver necklace too, with a small pendant with the figure of a dolphin.

    Mask: h t t p://w w w.google.se/imgres? q=silver+mask&u m=1&hl=sv&b iw=1366&bih=651 &tbm=isch&t bnid=C4igGn5oGyDP2M :&imgrefurl=[no urls]&docid=aSX IqEX5lWpwHM&img url=[no urls]&w=600&amp ;h=400&ei=NNcIT 7v7O4Xf4QTXocmNCA&a mp;zoom=1&iact= hc&vpx=740& vpy=157&dur=339 6&hovh=183& hovw=275&tx=197 &ty=121&sig =103349649583264550 780&page=1& tbnh=126&tbnw=1 89&start=0& ndsp=21&ved=1t: 429,r:3,s:0 but a silver one, and not golden. I don't know how to describe it, so I have a link to a picture here.

    Personality: Sweet and kind. Cold when she's angry.

    Guy I'd like her to have: Quincy (because I know there will be probably someone else who will want Jack-Jack :'( So I let them have him. For now ;) )

    Sorry this was such a long com

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • Oh, @AiFiahK3mE one more thing, if you want, Oceana could be Jack's date, that might work out better if she was on the good side; each guy can have a couple characters attached to them... but if you'd rather keep her with Quincy I can make that work too :)

    xxblutixx
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  • I would love to make a character for you, but I'm currently writing a quiz myself, and I need to channel all of my creative powers to it xD Can't wait for the next one!

    _ViolaLover_
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  • @AiFiahK3mE you underestimate yourself :o I wanted to say something like how your comments help me understand what you think about the story and how I'm doing so far writing it :) I couldn't think of a good, single word to describe that though XD

    xxblutixx
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  • Loved it! I can't wait until the next part! I can't really think of a character but I'm sure the next part will be great whether I submit one or not. I'll be looking.

    Bluebird
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  • @xxblutixx Maybe! We can wait and see if there are others, and THEN decide who's date she'll be :) And interesting things? Like what? The Emily-thing, that I don't trust her?

    AiFiahK3mE
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