Teenage Chronicle Part 22 | Comments

Why Jake!!!!!!!!!! He was my 4th choice guy and also of his hottness. He was exactly like my dream teen boy. >=( who ever killed him is going to die.

Literally crying....why jake???....

Yeah i have a suggestion...

Ho w about you stop killing off everyone i love! LOL :P

So I haven't really been commenting cause I'm trying 2 catch up so I can read the mash-up but I felt like I had to comment... OMG HOW COULD YOU DO THIS!!!!!! FIRST MY PARENTS AND KNOW JAKE???? WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU??? the only good thing to come out of this is one less guy from me to chose from.

WTF y is everybody dieing!!!! *sobs*

*cries* That b---- is gonna pay!! this is so sad :'( first my parents, and now Jake? Erika and Cydonia, watch out, I've already got your names carved into the tombstone!:@ and I'm thinking about burying you in a public toilet........

*reads first 2 paragraphs* oh, yeah, I forgot how FREAKING much I want to RIP Cydonia apart >:/GRRRR Patch too? Lady, you best be saying your prayers and resolving your sins right now, because you are dead. LET ME AT HER! ... *hugs teddy and bawls* thank you Alex... *cries more* wait... Jake? Jake? o.o must go read part 23...

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omg jake!!! first my parent and now jake?! that women is gonna pay!! I love ur quiz it's amazing!! but plz bring jake back

I can't believe you wrote all that! That was so depressing... And wow, you should add in how me and Patch could do that, plus how to get Jake back!!!

LISTEN TO angelic4, It's a great idea and I can get Jake back!!!!

@angelic4 Oooh thats a good idea!! Love it!!! Then I can get Jake back!!

Dude you kill my parents and now Jake, cruel writer you are, Bring back Jake, *thinks how* omfg i know how, ok you know there's a god of healing and so what and Josh is a god, so he can bring him back, it'll cause tension cause Josh hated Jake so bringing him back would be a whole lot of a sacrifice.

That was so amazing I am so happy its finally out :D That was so sad :'( Can't believe Jake died! :0 and my parents

:( Anyways, please make the next part soon as I am dying to find out what happens next! :D By the way , I included you in my recent shoutout quiz so if you could go check it out I would be super happy! Thanks!

Sorry I meant to say Jake *down below*

Ok **this is me bowing down to you**

You are the best! It's very sad that my parents died and now Josh(even though he wasn't my guy/guys)? BUT it's still sad :(

I agrre with Firey_Soul, I wish I had an Alex or Patch in real life!

You are an amazing writer. Love you lots!!!

Everyone , try out my new quiz "Case 1: The Boy on the Ledge". It can be found on my page: "Jinx_TheSleuth" because the stupid quiz didn't show up on the new quizzes list. Thanks :D

I will never be the same. You crushed my heart into tiny pieces and scattered them in the wind. My PARENTS?! You had the nerve to kill my PARENTS!??! How dare you! Gosh, I felt like it was actually MY parents dying, how terrible! Then to top it off you kill Jake. Way to go. Just go ahead and kill me. The only thing I'm HAPPY about is that it wasn't Patch-I'm still upset though!

Don't kill off Jake!!!!!! Make the next part soon.

You killed Jake and mad this part constantly sad/depressing?!?!? !? Please let Jake be able to come back to life. I may not be his biggest fan, but he is on top 3 list. So please if you value your life, I mean my support, you have to make everything better. This includes letting Jake live again, killing Cydonia (is that spelled right?), and finally making the next part a lot happier. Follow these instructions and you will live longer than if you don't follow them. Thank You! :)

YOU KILLED JAKE!!!! I can't believe you, how could you do that to me?? WHY??? please can we find a way to make him come back alive!!! PLEASE!!! I am begging you, he was the ONLY guy that I really liked!! Please!! PLEASE!! I like Jake more than anyone and I can tell you that. When you said he was dead pain just hit mr like I had lost someone. Please find a way,can we bring him back to life or something? *cries*

NUH-UH! TEAM ALEX!!!!!! OH YEAAAAA!!! *Jayden comes out* Jayden: uh, what did you just say *i go quiet* ummmmmm... TEAM JAYDEN!!!!! Oh i love you baby... *Jayden rolls eyes* Jayden: mmmmmmmhmmmmmm? *i look around* yeaaaaa.... do you want some chili cheese fries????

My god... Cydonia actually made the number two slot... NUMBER 2 on my list. She can't top number one though, she can kill all the people she wants, there's no way she deserves number one on my list. I have one very certain person on there who will be on there forever. I won't say who, but that person will never budge from the number 1 slot. Anyways, Jake's dead, my parents are dead, and everything is going downhill. I'm going to just put aside my hatred for Cydonia at the moment, and try to make this comment as salvagable as I can. Okay so, golden eyes = godess does that mean I can't die or does that mean I have lots of powers? Also how did I incinerate everyone BUT Cydonia? Does she have some sort of protective armor or something? I dunno. Anyways awesome, and post part 23 up soon or else I'm pretty sure everyone is going to flip out (that's including me) for the sake of our sanity (or how little we have left) please post it soon. Thank you and TEAM CALISTO! Peace out

hehehe... keep your eye-eyes opeeeennnnnn... sorry...There is no record of the biggest tantrum but recently Christian Bale threw a huge tantrum on the set of Terminator Salvation. .... are you sure your up for that @ firey?.....ok i really SHOULD shut up because i limit myself on comments because it takes us a long time to read.... ok stop reading this

Such a sad part! :'( No, Jake can't be dead! *teardrop* It's a good thing that it wasn't Josh or Patch because I would've had the biggest diva tantrum in the history of the world! I'm so glad you finally started writing these, I was starting to go through Teenage Chronicle withdraws. (Yes, they do exist. :P) I love this series so much and I know that whatever you write, it will be good. Perhaps you should include more moments with Patch and/or Josh. ;) I'm also a big fan of Alex. He's just... awesome. I love him so much. I wish I had an Alex in real life... or a Patch or a Josh. Any of the guys will be fine, really. I don't even care that the guys aren't real, I love them a lot! Ezra too, she's cool. Oh... and I feel like such a jerk for rambling on about how awesome the guys are... it seems like I don't even care about my parents. Oops, sorry. I guess it's because I've never met my dad and I'm not close to my mom in real life. I'm still royally pissed at Cyndonia. She better sleep with one eye open... >:) Okay, sorry my comment is so firetrucking long. I will shut up now. (P.S. I wish this series was a book, you could probably make a million off of it.) Ok NOW I'll shut up. xP

whoa thats a lot of air i put out of..... ok i should stop typing....yeaaaaaaa .....hehehe that awkward moment when your dad farts and the person the tv makes a farting sound... :3 awwww shucks! im weird

*lets out a puff of air* lalallalalallaa.. ummm i don't know... you have the same cruel mind like any other author... start reading more books/ movies or JUST COME UP WITH IT ALREADY!!! I'm already dieing here! :) i would like also more mushy mushy stuff with my bro Alex... plllleeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeee*more air* eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeeeeee*gasps for more* eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeessssssssszz zzzzzeeeeeeeee?