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  • Name: Alexia (Alex) Bell
    Age: 24
    Gender: Female

    Species: Angel (not what your thinking at all, it's pretty offensive and I don't want to get hate for it)

    Sexuality: Aromantic asexual
    Height: 4'9
    Weight: 130
    Eye color: Chocolate brown
    Hair color: Mousy brown
    Skin tone: Olive

    Body type: roundish, ovalish? (She's chubby but she's not extremely fat)

    Clothes: A baggy white jumpsuit (standard uniform of heaven)

    Extras: Giant poisonous barbs sticking out of her back (Every angel has them and it's what was mistaken for wings because they usually cover them up with white veils)

    Disorders: PTSD, ADHD, OCD, anxiety, stress eating

    Personality: Anxious, sarcastic, blunt, manipulative, genius, protective, sometimes rude and sometimes nice (it really depends on her mood)

    1tzM3hh123
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  • Oof ok here we go...so fitzroy is my character shes one of the leaders of a militant group fighting against this pmc in attempts to force them out of her city shes violent and cocky laughing at death wielding a large knife at all times...she watched her friends die and she will make the pmc pay for it

    Theredraider75
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  • Got a random idea to make an apocalypse story, but mixed up different ones so... AU within an AU. One of the main characters is Jack, or Jackson. I tried to make his family life a little different, so he has adoptive parents, but they're pretty chill and his parents are relatively unknown and don't come in later. Any advice on something I could do to make him a better character/any of my other characters? it would be really helpful if so, thank you!

    dangerinfiction
    0
    • I think just be original. And make sure it has some logic and explaination behind that. I had this question before writing a story as well, had many advises. But I am glad that I just decided to be original.

      Made_From_Soul
      0
  • My OC iaveh is a witch upclass in a delinquent story. Her brother was killed, and she killed a maid. The authority doesnt care about it because they say the law doesnt apply to witches, because they are really competitive and kill each other constantly. Because of this, one of her eyes is a rose. 21% Mary Sue tho, Im really happy!

    Joycelly
    0
  • HEYYYYY GOOD ONE FOR THE ULTIMATE PUPPET MASTER! SHES 9% MARY SUE! (Yes Im talking about my danganronpa charter

    cheezitsyeet_46
    0
  • 14%
    uwu i

    my character (ivy kumo) is like spiderman,,, its a heroaca character hee hee

    sgtsun
    0
  • my OC, Foxina, is half fox half human, though in her world that's normal. she has fire magic and healing magic that are rare but do happen in her world.

    Meowlings
    0
  • Apparently I have to make my OC more stereotypical? There are no stereotypes in the world that my OC lives in, any suggestions about what else I can do?

    ArcticGlory
    0
  • 6%

    my character Nova is someone with the powers of hell (actually pretty common), specifically the ability to manipulate fire (again common in the world) and she was abandoned by her birth parents because there is a prejudice against people with her power and raised by Lady Death, her mother, who treats her as a weapon for self-preservation. She is pan, sleeps with anyone and has a ton of repressed anger issues and the inability of let go of s---

    Spoopy_Moose
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  • My OC Lullaby is the angel of dreams. She is very mysterious because she doesn't often talk, and sometimes she seems sad for no apparent reason. She likes to save, protect, and raise children who have been abused, orphaned, neglected, etc. Often tears will fall down her face. People don't know why it happens, but it does because all the nightmares of children are locked away inside her, so they don't get to them.

    Mizuki Koneko
    0
  • 20%? ok. I wasn't expecting to get that high anyway.

    Ultralogic
    0
  • 20% :) I'm good with that.

    sophie16
    0
  • Huh, I'm surprised I did well, since my character is a Hetalia oc (don't bash me, it's not ship fodder), and the characters are supposed to be weird, or abnormal-

    Like how America has super strength, or how Russia's heart can pop out of his chest. And how the personifications are ageless to a certain point. All without magic XD

    DenverThePotato
    0
  • For #38, I think you should add something about the character not starting fights, but if they get in one, they'll finish it. Other than that, this test is really accurate!

    Astroblaze
    0
  • Dang. I keep getting a lot of really good answers, and I'm definitely proud about it, but I worry I need to be a little more... Well, Mary Sue about it. This is a great quiz, though! Even for fanfiction, it seems. I hope. Probably.

    WindyTheWarrior
    0
  • Your Character is -0% Mary Sue!

    Um... I'm not joking. Why did this happen? O_O

    Pony Plorta
    0
  • Interesting. i base mine off of some of the strangest dreams of mine. However, studying dream psychology helps in finding out why I have such dreams of my character...and even becoming said character! As random and as illogical as they may be I am assured that they all have an important message that i can now know.

    zg00geeleeg00gz
    0
  • Thank you for your praise, Darth Vader! May the force be with you!

    Apollo's Daughter, that sound very interesting; I love dream stories! I'd love to write some of my own, but my dreams turn out a bit too whimsical to make very good material.

    Much accolades to anyone who has taken this quiz! Keep writing, all!

    -Her Grace

    KilljoyRainbow
    0
  • 7%. That's good because I based this story that I'm writing off of a dream that I had, so they have no magical powers, or anything like that, and they try to help people, but the government is hunting them down.

    I liked this quiz.

    DaughterOfApollo
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  • This is a great quiz, some of the questions were really funny lol. I got 6%... Wow. That's less than I thought I would get!!

    DarthVader
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  • Hey, everyone! It's the quizmaker here! Thanks so much for takinga gander at my quiz. Just took it myself--Got 9%. =) See you around!

    --Her Grace Killjoy Rainbow, Dutchess of Antarctica, Commander of the Grammar Ninjas, Unicorn Lover, Proud Accordion Player.

    KilljoyRainbow
    0

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