Is Your Character a Mary Sue? | Comments

Uh i guess 30% isn't bad? I did think it would be higher... my characters name is logan. They are about 18 in human years, shaggy purple hair, purple eyes, and half human/half angel. As a child his dad had to run away with him as the angels hunted them down because cross species breeding was bad (His father was an archangel). They found a place in "heaven" to hide for a while. Anyway, they were caught before he turned 10 and the dad was killed, and the kids wings were ripped off, throwing him to earth. He was taken in by a friend (now bf) and yeah. Now hes fighting alongside them.

I used one of my 130 something OCs. She a gay Jewish female Marine and is definitely way prettier than the average person. 6% Mary Sue. I guess she does have a lot of flaws.

I got 45% on the quiz and I used myself as the character >~< I took the test because I thought it was a personality test XD But I don't actually know what a Mary Sue is. So is having 45% good or bad?

lol i got like 23% or something, the mc of my story is a guy named niko and admittedly his history is a bit of a clich: his mother had an affair while married and he has an older half-brother named quentin that wasnt an affair child, nikos mother admitted to her husband that she had an affair but they didnt divorce because her husband wanted quentin to have two parents in his life so niko was either ignored or treated like garbage for most of his childhood, and the inciting incident of the story occurs when quentin is 10 and niko is 8. quentin attempts to strangle niko because recently his father moved to taking his anger out on him, so he figures if the source of his anger (nikos existence) was gone, then his dad would like him again. he chickens out and the incident traumatizes them both, yay! growing up quentin resented niko and constantly tormented him at school, he would physically harm him, spread rumors, etc etc so niko was a complete loner as he grew up. quentin grew out of bullying niko, even started becoming protective of him and genuinely loves him but his treatment caused niko to develop a deep resentment for him and for the foreseeable future, hes pretty much solely focused on making his brother suffer like he did. niko makes a few friends but ends up using them for a revenge scheme against quentin (niko is a TERRIBLE PERSON and betrays the only people who gave a s--- about him because hes a petty piece of s---), he ends up beating the crap out of one of quentins friends after he saw him stealing stuff out of quentins locker and frames an innocent girl for cheating just to inconvenience quentin (the girl wasnt even his girlfriend). other than that hes got a napoleon complex (56 guys rise up) and severe antisocial personality disorder. the story is basically about how niko is a horrible person and repeatedly refuses the kindness others offer to him

i got 29%

my oc is a fanmade mha oc his name is remedy his quirk is dragon which allows the user to fly and breath fire like a dragon it only occurs in 1 in a 100 people and he was lucky to get it when remedy's mom found out she didnt like it she had a thing with kids were they whould always hate her and she thought the same for her son 9 months later he was born and she gave him a few years of trauma till he was 4 then she snapped and trued to gauge his eyes out leaveing him blind till this day he has ptsd and trust issues his adopted dad is kirishima

I got an 11% for my OC, Vision. She is a fortune teller and can predict things based by how people look at her not in her direction, though because that overwhelms her abilities.

I got 19% and that's OK, she used to be a Mary Sue, but then I decided her to NOT be the chosen one and be narcisstic and that changed everything.

The OC I used for this is An alien who can shapeshift, his name is Orion Agara. He has purple skin and white hair because he (doesnt know yet) is the son of Lotor (he is a Voltron OC) hes hated because his primary race is galra, and he got a 27%

I took this with my sister using her persona from many years ago. She got 69%. I absolutely hated that mary sue character, but she always got mad when I called her a mary sue. She lived in the undertale universe and was dating sans. It was god-awful.

How the hell did this only get 40% Mary Sue? I tested on my childhood OC who was literally the mean girl and had all the powers and everybody loved her even if she was a total b----.

I posted a comment earlier about my character Squirrel (my babyyy) but Id like to comment again about my Warriors oc Mousetail. I got 23% again! Listen its great and all, but this quiz assumes a lot that our character is human. Yes the rules bend for her, she is a queen-but she has no kits and she hangs out in the nursery Ferncloud did that, Daisy did that, why not Mousetail? She only wanted to hang out there because she wanted to help new queens with their first litter after hers died before she came to the clans. Also, again, the quiz uses the r slur and slurs are not good

Most of my characters except for one got a 10-25%. The one that got like 50% is literally in a universe that my friend and I made to see who, out of a bunch of completely OP characters, would come out on top in an all-out war. So yay!

My Stranger Things OC is meant to bs Dustin's older sister who's very overprotective and likes to call him "feather duster". She's only 20% mary sue •ω•

16%. Probably 'cause my character, despite having power over fear, is absolutely brutal in combat and a) regrets it and b) gets a lot of hate from other characters about it (as in, [no urls] kind of hate)

my oc is extremely complex to the point i found it hard to properly answer some questions LOL, got a 15%, not too bad for her. she's definitely overpowered but for a reason + the universe i have her in has become a world of my own in my mind, since the game devs suck ass (racism), she's a branch off of several other ocs that used to be MAJOR mary sues, since i was in fact like 6-7 yrs old i didn't know how to really write ocs that well, this was a fun test to take for sure though! :)

I got 15% "Characters at this level could probably use some spicing up without any damage. Go ahead and make her a little prettier!"

Girl but... my character is hella pretty, she just doens't have the tragic innecesary past and even tho she has magic and is a warrior princess I want to make her relatable for the non-existing reader, but I like the result, it means she could pass as a normal teen as I intented and not an over the top mary sue

mine is 20% mary sue

my oc is someone named rin yamada. they are trans, ftm, and bi. their pronouns are they/he. they like sleeping, video games, hanging with his bestie, friday night funkin, boba, vr, stardew valley, sebastian from sv, and drawing. he has an updo with a portion of his hair covering his left eye. they have a little bit of hair sticking out the back as like a mullet kind of. they like wearing grungecore clothes and listening to mindless self indulgence. they have a pet frog named ito. they have a bad habit of biting his nails. he is currently dating their friend, aoi yakizawa, as recently they found out aoi had a crush on him, and rin liked aoi back. they cant meet up irl, so they videocall everyday. they even had a mini virtual wedding.

15% mary sue. The only reason I felt I earned this score for my OC is that I took the time to develop his story and character.

25% so i tried my first oc he is a human 17 (don't know name) word where "magic" exist so backstory he got his powers yung when they wheren't common yet and as a idialistik kid tried helping people and he did but he got boss of magia to prison so other mebers wanted to get revange they folowed him to his home and planted a bomb other day he had his bithday so all his family came he was inside taking cups when he went out bomb explodet he was far so he survived then member of the mafia come in to look at the mess but when he saw them he snap and kiled them his father survived but he killed him by mistake stoping his rage THE END. One more thing about "magic" when you unlock the "2th state" your eyecolor change his changet to blue but beacose of the rage his eyes started turnig red but he stoped before both his eyes were red so one eye red one blue

15%...ok. My OC had a rough past with her father, cause hes a sociopath that murdered her mom and sister in front of her, she managed to barley get away. Sooo...yeah I guess thats accurate