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  • @Brooke14911 - As interesting as that sounds, if I were to add your idea. The story will become really out of hand and complicated yet confusing. Sorry, I've already stated since the beginning that Cedric will be a temporary love interest but not included into the results simply because he dies. Also, the idea of having two boyfriends at the same time, is not very realistic. One gets hurt either way. The thing with my story is, I bring the actually Hogwarts Experience to life; I relate to the books while adding my own twist. I may consider Cedric asking you to the ball but we'll see how it goes. Sorry, but if you want; you can create a story all on your own and see how that takes it's turn ~

    natuhleegayle
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  • @Orange_Juice - First of all, thank you! Haha, I guess I have a way of creating fan favorites for people. Don't worry, the next part will hopefully be up tonight ! There won't be any romantic scenes for a while

    @Dragon - thank you very much!

    @AiFiahK3m E - Ohhh, I see. Oops haha, my bad. Well, its good that you finally understand why now. Also, sorry I had to make the boys all equal in a way but they do have different personalities in a way. Oliver is more hmm, well I guess you guys can answer that since you fell for him. Draco has his soft interior side to him that's hardly show, and the twins have their quality of always being there for you and making you smile.

    natuhleegayle
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  • *CLICK*

    Yo u know that clicking sound over there? It was my head, when I realised WHY Neville was uncomfortable when Mad-Eye Moody(A.K.A. Barty Crouch Jr) tortured the spider. I've seen that movie I don't know how many times, and I only realised why while I was reading your quiz. What is wrong with me? I noticed that Snape was paler than before, in the last movie(I watched it today), and that the actor seemed to have more make-up around the eyes than usual, but I don't realise what made Neville uncomfortable? Seriously?

    And that part with Draco... I would have cried, but my cousin is here in my room, and I don't like to cry in public. ARGH!!! I'M SO TORN!!! It feels like that when I'm with Oliver I like Oliver, but when I'm with Draco I like Draco, and oddly, when I'm with Cedric(I mean when he's acting sweetly to me) I like Cedric... ARGH!!!

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • @Obssions0112 - No worries, I understand. That'll be me in a couple of days but I'm glad you enjoyed it.

    @Jayla - Yes, I'm working on the next one but it won't be up till around probably tomorrow night. I have company tomorrow. Thanks, although it was rushed I'm glad it came through ! Also, the part where you pulled away; the first time that was a tease. If you're talking about when you pulled away AFTER the kiss, then I'm sorry but thank you. I'll try to lighten up the mood.

    natuhleegayle
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  • @Aria - Well, that probably what Oliver could be feeling but remember, you and him broke up. So, it's going to be interesting to see how Oliver reacts to the kiss, that is IF you tell him.

    @HogwartsLo ve - Thank you so much! I'm really shocked at how this edition turned out. Well, it's as you said. Since it's so realistic, I put myself into the story and try to write how I feel as well as everyone else. Yeah, I'm pretty sure I've made the whole "torn" situation worst. I'm pretty curious what Oliver would say as well, Haha! Thank you, thank you so much! I look forward to your next release as well!

    natuhleegayle
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  • I swear that had to be the most perfect thing that I've ever read.

    The emotions - dear Merlin! How do you put them so clearly into words so it's like people actually feel them with deep clarity?! And thinking about Oliver during Draco's date made me SO sad, because (I feel, as I read your quizzes, that they're real) I was really falling for Malfoy, but then - but then Oliver!

    I can't wait for the next quiz; I want so badly to see what Oliver writes, even if I will feel guilty while reading it! I simply LOVED and ADORED the emotion in this; they transitioned amazingly!

    HogwartsLove
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  • @The Popolisk - I appreciate your support with that other comment. I don't mind suggestion but that idea was kind of complex and confusing. Doesn't really fit in to the message of Love that i'd like to show.

    Haha, thank you very much for your comment! It was a very fun scene to write and visualize! Thank you so much, the next edition should be out soon! :)

    natuhleegayle
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  • I loved it! That scene with Draco was so cute and romantic but I felt sad when it ended the way it did. The detail was incredible and the scenes were just phenomenal. I'm a massive Draco fan so the scene was just great and I didn't want it to end. It's kind of like in my quiz where your about to kiss Oliver and then you think of Fred. I loved it! It pulls on the emotional strings and it just was fantastic. I can't wait until the next one. I'll be looking.

    Bluebird
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  • I'm crying. Oh gosh. That was the most emotional thing EVER. I am totally falling for Draco now (as if I wasn't already), and I'm serious when I say this, I cried. It was so slow and flowed perfectly into the story. I've gotta say, you are big inspiration.

    Now, please excuse me while I go and sob into my pillow from this amazingness.

    Allycat
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  • @Samantha2332 - Thank you so much! I'm glad that it all came together so well. To be honest, this edition was rushed. I only had number seven written bit when I woke up at around 12, I wrote all of this in an hour or two. So, I'm really glad that this turned out wonderful and exciting for all of you. Haha, out of the whole thing, that scene with the letter has to be my favorite. :)

    natuhleegayle
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  • @AiFiahK3mE - I'm guess you read the result of Neville? Yeah, the movie didnt really explain why but to most people, Neville loves Herbology so seeing wildlife harm may upset him but it was his parents that was tortured by Bellatrix that brought them to insanity.

    Awee, I never seen a three-way torn. I'm sorry. :/

    natuhleegayle
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  • touching!
    i cried!
    The story-me and the real me!

    I don't want to see Draco hurt but I can't bear the fact that Oliver isn't here!

    Yes, he's not Oliver but he is a nice guy!

    Natuhleegayle , i know you have posted up 5 and more editions but please start working on part fourteen!

    I can hardly wait and that part with the kiss, my heart raced at 360miles per second and there were butterflies in my stomach!

    Lovee it!

    Aria
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  • Here are the lyrics to Draco's song. The tune to it goes to I swear this time I mean it - Mayday Parade

    {There's this girl, that I know. Captured my heart by a glance. Now, she haunts my dreams and every waking moment. She can't be with me-yes, I know. She has a love of her own. It pains me as I see, I'll be just a memory

    I've come to notice
    It pains me to show it

    That how I feel for her, she'll never feel for me.

    She's all I see, she's all I need.

    But I'm not the one she's calling for, I'm not the one she's longing for

    But I'll be, the one she needs. To hold her close late at night, the one to keep her safe tonight.}

    It's been a while since I wrote lyrics, so forgive me! I hope this edition was suitable for all of you! There's nothing left to say, so stay Magical x

    natuhleegayle
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  • @Brooke14991

    Don't demand things of the author. If you want those things to happen, write 'em yourself.

    SO CUTE! But it's dissapointing ____________ and Draco's date didn't go better. I wanted them to be a couple! XD Now I'm whining. But still...

    Anyway, this. Was. ADORABLE! Well, the drama was dramatic, but it doesn't count, because the rest of this was so darn cute! Good job, and keep writing!

    The Popolisk
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  • @Allycat - I'm literally stunned after reading your comment. I honestly didn't think it would have a huge impact on you. Wow, thank you so much. That honestly means a lot to me, right now I'm literally speechless to your comment.

    Thank you so much and I'm very sorry about making you cry

    natuhleegayle
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  • @Aria - I didn't think that scene would be THAT powerful. I know no one wants to see that happen but it pretty much sums up the "torn" everyone feels between Oliver and Draco. Thank you for your comment and I am working on Part Fourteen right now. :)

    natuhleegayle
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  • Gack sorry I've had a tiring day and didn't take this till nine because I have no free time! I have school all of a sudden and blah anyways AMAZING!! I love Draco ! I giggled and squealed the whole time it was so cute I could have died!

    Obssions0112
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  • Your Result: Draco Malfoy
    100%

    "Hmm? I'm fine. Just go away." "You're persistent aren't you? Well, what can I say? I don't know how I feel. Me and ______ actually had a real moment together, it was ... amazing but I guess she realized that I'm not Oliver. Ha, what am I going to do? My loss?"

    dance_and_sportz
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  • I loved the date with draco although i was upset when i left him in my head i was like NO STAY NO NO GO BACK DONT LEAVE GO BACK!! of course that didn't work and i like having fleur as a friend figure. i hope it doesn't end like how things did with ambrosia...great quizzes its just like reading my favorite books i can't tear myself away from this...but i still hope this ends with a happy ending.

    littleTiger
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  • Hey guys, I had to reread the quiz; For those of you interested in retaking the quiz with music, I suggest you start playing the music when you ask "Do you think we have to waltz" It's actually so cute if you visualize it but then again that's just me.

    natuhleegayle
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  • Make cedric ask me to the ball and then oliver comes back to visit and take me to the ball but i go with both and cedric asks me out and then oliver and cedric fight over me at the ball and i start crying and then they both just start acting right and they both dance with me and then as both of them dance with me they both kiss me.And make be both of my boyfriends and dont kill cedric and put me in the triwizard tournament

    Brooke14911
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  • @natuhleegayle Yeah... But it's still hard. I'd prefer if just ONE boy liked me. It'd be much easier. It's just that I can't stand the fact that they are being hurt when they see me with another guy. Must be because I pretty much know exactly how much it hurts...

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • @TatiJudith3 - Yes, I know but it just sort of had to be put in even if I'm kind of tearing Draco and yourself apart right now. I'm sorry for putting you on one very emotional rollercoaster !

    natuhleegayle
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  • @Natuhleegayle, well yes. i'm very curious to how he would react. It was extremely realistic and I am excited to read what Oliver writes!

    I miss him SOOO much!
    =(
    But there is Draco and his amazing smile!
    I can't decide!
    ahaha

    Aria
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  • @AiFiahK3mE - Ah, I understand. Well, I'll try to ease their emotions and hopefully in the later editions; it'll be more fluffier and satisfying (?) Idk if I would use that word but yeah.

    natuhleegayle
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