Your life as a wolf pt. 2 | Comments

For your first series, this is awesome! I love wolves. ^.^ I read Reanna's comment on part 1, and you've done a great job adding what she commented. Also, if you don't mind me sharing my thoughts, I think if you're aiming for a more sort of "love story" kind of thing, as Reanna tipped off in her part 1 comment, you should make at least two more male wolves for ______ (the main character). Each one should have a different personality and look to please all the readers. But if you're not going for that angle, then just keep it up! Personally, I think if you already have Smoketail liking ______, it might be a bit easier to introduce a few more boy wolves to the storyline. If you don't like my idea, it's totally fine. Can't wait for the next part! :)

YES! I can finally go back to my pack! My alpha will be pleased. Not sure what made me want to be part of the plain pack. I'm wondering what made them evil. There's always two sides to a story so they probably have a reason to be like that to the forest pack. Hmm... I'll make up a reason in my head!

Omega. That was fun. I kept answering how Smoketail was cute

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGO MG!!!! YaY!!! You gave me a shout-out!!!! Thx. But don't stop the serese!!!! Sorry, bad spelling...Anyways, most people won't start reading this until there is more parts to it. I noticed that. Just keep going, cuz you're doing great! And you put more detail in this one, which is really good. Just keep going!

*Ray*

Nice story dude! Keep it up!

Lol this is fun.

i cant find part 1! D: