I'M BACK ASS-CLOWNS!
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Thread Topic: I'M BACK ASS-CLOWNS!
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Damn this is confusing with ze names but anyways.
It wasn't too long ago that a young, dark haired boy with sparkling violet eyes was forced to make a decision that would change the world as he knew it. At the time, everything seemed perfect. He lived a wealthy lifestyle with his sister, Raylen, and their two loving parents. Raylen had blue hair and eyes, and she loved her brother to no limit. The parents would do anything for their children, even if it meant keeping some secrets. You see, they were a wealthy family, and many people wanted the money. The parents were one day foolish enough to leave the eleven year old boy and his eight year old sister alone that day.
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The boy moved his bishop only a square away from the black king. "Check mate." Although his tone was bored, a satisfied smirk danced on his lips as the boy crossed his arms and leaned back.
"What?! Not again!" Raylen frowned. "How come you always win, Victor?" She looked at the board, upset to find she was once again trapped.
Victor cracked his knuckles and laughed. "Hey, don't be sad. I'm older than you. It's only natural."
This did not seem to cheer up the girl. Victor frowned and left his seat to approach his younger sibling, gently patting her head. "Hey come on, now. Don't be so daft. One of these days, I'm sure you'll win all the games." He grinned, and Raylen cracked a smile.
"Thanks!" Raylen giggled and hugged her brother. "I look forward to winning all the kings!"
Victor smiled and hugged her back before pulling away. "Now, what should we play next?"
Suddenly, there was a loud thud at the door. The two siblings gasped in fear. Then, another. Raylen clung to Victor's arm, letting out a whimper. Yet another thud sounded. Thud. Thud. CRASH!!! The door fell to the ground in pieces as a group of large men entered the house, rushing over to cabinets and drawers, pulling them open and breaking what did not matter.
"Search the house," one of the men, who seemed to be the leader, yelled at the others in a gruff and harsh voice. "I will handle the children." He spat out the word 'children' as if they were filthy rats.
Victor took a deep breath and glared bravely as he pulled Raylen behind him, the blue haired girl still clinging to her big brother. "Why are you here?" he asked, trying to mask the fear in his voice for the sake of the petrified girl behind him.
The man pulled out a knife as his men ransacked the house. "Don't worry about that." He advanced towards the children, his heavy boots shaking the ground with each step.
The boy took three steps back. "P-please let us go. You w-won't hear from us, a-and w-we, we won't tell a s-s-soul about this!"
The man took four steps forward, a sick and twisted smile corrupting his face. Victor could smell the alchohol in the man's breath as he leaned forward. "I'm afraid I can't take that risk." The man grabbed Raylen and put the blade against her throat, causing both her and her brother to scream.
Victor clenched his fists and took a step forward. "NO!" All sounds were silenced other than Raylen's hysterical crying as she wondered if her life would end there. The boy's heart beat furiously against his chest as he screwed his eyes shut. "P-please, let us...let us spend our final moments w-with eachother."
The man hesitated before grabbing both children by their shirts. He threw them both into the office, as it was already reaped of all valuables. He locked them in and yelled, "You have ten minutes, then I kill you both!!" The man was not worried about the children escaping, as there were no windows.
Victor took his sister into his arms as she sobbed loudly, while his tears were silent. He wanted to seem strong to the girl.
"Raylen..." he said quietly, gently carressing her soft blue hair. "I want you to run as far and fast as you possibly can."
Raylen looked up at him, scared and confused. How was she supposed to escape if there weren't any windows?
Victor pulled away and pryed open a floorboard, grunting in effort. Finally, he discovered a large mallet that had been hidden there in case of fires. Summoning every ounce of strength he had, the boy swung the weapon at the wall. After a few swings, a hole small enough for Raylen to crawl through was created.
"HEY!" the man screamed in the distance as he heard these sounds. They could hear his heavy footsteps approaching as Victor yelled desperately at his beloved sister. "Run!" he told her, "Run, Raylen, and don't turn back!" Seeing her hesitation, Victor took her hand and softly kissed her forehead. "I'll see you soon, don't worry." The boy gave a weak smile. Raylen reached up and kissed her brother's cheek before hurrying into the hole, her dress being torn as she crawled through. But she did not care. She had to leave. Finally, Raylen pushed herself through just as the man emerged from the door, although part of her dress flew freely in the wind.
Raylen then ran, her legs burning as she desperately climbed up the hill that overlooked their house. Finally, she reached the top, taking deep breaths as she attempted to slow her heart. Raylen sat and watched the house for a couple minutes until she saw fire on the first floor. It started as a small little bud until it began to grow into a murderous red flower, causing the top floors to all collapse into the belly of the fire. Finally, Raylenrealized that Victor would never return to her. Herhands flew to her mouth. "No..." she breathed. "No! NO!! NO!!"she collapsed and threw her head into her arms and sobbed. "NO!! NO!! VICTOR!!!" Fat tears rolled down he cheeks, hot and fast.
It all seemed fuzzy to Raylen when her parents finally came home, police sirens wailing in the distance. She felt their warm embrace as they picked her up and carried her. Although they whispered words of comfort, their choked sobs indicated the sadness the family felt in those moments.
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As if it was a slideshow in the back of her mind, these images flashed as Raylen stared at her brother, now an adult. How was he alive?
( The end. )
(.________.) ......I'm sorry. \(_ _) -
O.....M.....G....
can you write more??? -
I am currently working on it, although it gets more complex and unrealistic with angels and s--- later so I'm afraid I may lose my audience.
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Sooo????
that was f---ing amazing. -
This is the part where I blush and awkwardly laugh then go hide underneath Senpai's bed.
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*Sits on the floor near the bed*
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*cuddles chibi Victor*
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:3
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*chews on Victor's hair*
Victor: What the bloody...stop that! (O___e); -
XD
Maeve: What is she doing?
*laughs again* Nothing sweet heart. -
Sorry for just now coming back.. I think I'm going to give an attempt at writing a fan-fiction. The only issue is none of you know anything about the stuff I like, so I'm going to have to try and explain a bit of the universe IN the fanfic. That'll be interesting.
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bob: sounds interesting :3
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I'm sorry for...the thing I posted. I look forward to see what you will do in this fanfiction story.
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pt 1.
My name was Cyrene Valention. I grew up on a compliant world. We had stories of Lorgar, the great leader who unified us for the Empire's arrival. My parents were still young when it happened. They called him an Angel. We loved our Angel Lorgar. For a son of the God Emperor was raised among us. No normal man, but of the normal man. When he left with his father we rejoiced.
By the time the Emperium returned, I was a young girl. Barely out of my teens. I lived in what we called the perfect city. The land that Lorgar grew up in and the capital city of the entire world. Improved in his image into the pentacle of beauty and ingenuity.
We thought their return would be cause for celebration. But something must have gone wrong. His father didn't like us calling him a God. He didn't like Lorgar being called an Angel. Worship was forbidden, and to teach his son, our Angel, a lesson, the God Emperor unleashed his wrath upon us.
We were given a warning to leave. The entire city was told to be gone within 2 days. My family and I were among the last out. As we were marched from our homes, the skies darkened and erupted with a great light and an earth shaking boom. I turned to see our home wiped away in a single blast. The flash of the explosion seared my eyes and left me blind.
to be continued... -
OMG wow that was awesome!
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