The Girl Who Lived part 27 | Comments
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I just finished reading through the entire series, and I have to say, I'm absolutely captivated. I admit I put off reading these editions for quite a while because of a lack of time, but I was pleasantly surprised reading through them. I could definitely see an improvement from the first few parts to the last few. The plot twists leave me wanting more every time, and I like how you're including the twins as separate personalities. They tend to be clumped together most of the time.
Anyway, I also like how you're including first and second year. Many HP writers (myself included) just consider it a sort of standard to start in third year, and it's a nice change to see a series start in the earlier years. I think the portrayals of the characters are very nicely done most of the time, and as a reader that appreciates length, the detail is definitely appreciated as well.
I'm looking forward to more in the future! :)music8261
To music826: When I read your comment, it put a smile on my face. Thank you so much for simply commenting (I don't get many comments) and for the praise. I am aware that it is standard for stories to start the 3rd year but, I had to build the whole entire plot up from 1st year. What surprised me the most was how you said that my writing improved and that I made the twins have seperate personalities. To be honest, I didn't even think I did that. I had thought up until now that I had clumped the personalities of the twins together and that my writing ability has been slipping. Thank you again so much for your comment.
yours truly, chopinssonata
thanks, it will be out soon
Great job!!! This is sooooooooo good!!!!!! I'm really excited for part 28!!! Keep it up!!!