The Girl Who Lived part 27 | Comments
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I just finished reading through the entire series, and I have to say, I'm absolutely captivated. I admit I put off reading these editions for quite a while because of a lack of time, but I was pleasantly surprised reading through them. I could definitely see an improvement from the first few parts to the last few. The plot twists leave me wanting more every time, and I like how you're including the twins as separate personalities. They tend to be clumped together most of the time.
Anyway, I also like how you're including first and second year. Many HP writers (myself included) just consider it a sort of standard to start in third year, and it's a nice change to see a series start in the earlier years. I think the portrayals of the characters are very nicely done most of the time, and as a reader that appreciates length, the detail is definitely appreciated as well.
I'm looking forward to more in the future! :)
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To music826: When I read your comment, it put a smile on my face. Thank you so much for simply commenting (I don't get many comments) and for the praise. I am aware that it is standard for stories to start the 3rd year but, I had to build the whole entire plot up from 1st year. What surprised me the most was how you said that my writing improved and that I made the twins have seperate personalities. To be honest, I didn't even think I did that. I had thought up until now that I had clumped the personalities of the twins together and that my writing ability has been slipping. Thank you again so much for your comment.
yours truly, chopinssonata
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thanks, it will be out soon
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Great job!!! This is sooooooooo good!!!!!! I'm really excited for part 28!!! Keep it up!!!
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