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  • Okay!
    Name:Alice
    Age:unknown
    Born :1600's

    Looks:Long blonde hair, dirty and ragged, dark brown eyes, pale.skin.

    Wears:f rilled dresses, dark greens and blacks.

    Backstory: Born with bipolar depression, she spent her life locked in the attic of her parents Victorian townhouse. Her twin sister Abigail was always the favorite child, and was often sent into the attic to punish Alice for her condition. Alice was a doll on display to doctors and scientists who claimed they could "cure" her. She was crazy, screaming and crying about everything, until the day she hung herself and her family.

    S_E_
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  • Okay!
    Name:Alice
    Age:unknown
    Born :1600's

    Looks:Long blonde hair, dirty and ragged, dark brown eyes, pale.skin.

    Wears:f rilled dresses, dark greens and blacks.

    Backstory: Born with bipolar depression, she spent her life locked in the attic of her parents Victorian townhouse. Her twin sister Abigail was always the favorite child, and was often sent into the attic to punish Alice for her condition. Alice was a doll on display to doctors and scientists who claimed they could "cure" her. She was crazy, screaming and crying about everything, until the day she hung herself and her family.

    S_E_
    1
  • Jinx I feel like changing the oc I submitted

    Name : ( I had chosen Abigail but now I have to change it lol ) Jennifer

    Now known as : Dark witch

    Ability : If she says something clearly and with enough passion and emotion it can happen , if it's even. The slightest posisble but the more unlikley the harder and more energy draining it becomes

    Looks : dark brown eyes , dark brown skin , dark down hair with white streaks from overusing power ( not to many just at the front a bit lile movie verse rouge and annabeth and percy )

    5"8 petite
    Born : 1970

    Wears : when killing balck leather hunting gear and black archer gloves

    When not bell bottom jeans a long sleved tee shirt which is dark grey with music notes on it.

    Backstory : being born black and a dissability is difficult but her being bi - sexual and having a speical ability made her life almost impossible to live.

    Bullied everyday bY classmates mocked and unfairly punished by teachers.

    Beaten up or hurt in the street by strangers .

    And being an orphan .

    One day Jennifer ( or Abigail if that's alrght ) was limping to the orphanage after a particularly harsh beating.

    When she was ambushed by an angry mob of the towns folk they tried to drown her like at a witches trial witch led to her attempted burning.

    But she uttered the words " Let them all die let them all perish " and as the flames began to lick at her flesh she blacked out and awoke in a manner

    Phasing being slaved by the creature slender man .

    Personlity : on duty : Cold , analytical , rarley speaks , swift , intelligent and observant

    Off duty : loud , music loving , slang using , Hyper active , distracted easily and I pulsive

    Puppet master12
    1
  • Umm not sure if this is good but I'll try
    Name: Ashlynn
    Age:16
    Born: 2007

    Looks:Short brown hair in pig tails,two different colored eyes

    (one brown other light purple),purple grayish skin,long stitches across one side of face(Right side going through her eye)

    Wears: Long sleeved brown-ish black sweater,shorts&sneakers

    Backstory: Once a happy girl living with her mother, father and brother. Until when she was seven she developed a disease called Laughing death.After a while she wasn't able to eat and started to die, her parents couldnt bare to see her suffer so her parents had no choice but to kill her. Her brother was enraged by there actions and killed them.After a year of research he brought his sister back to life with voodoo magic only to be killed by her within a week. Believing that a demon killed her brother she now roams the globe seeking revenge on any poor soul she comes across.

    Storyinventor
    1
  • Interesting story. But why? Why was she teased? Btw I haven't read your other stories. Exactly how do you fill form? What happened to her? Blurgh!! You good writer!

    LiviGirl33
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    Puppet master12
    1
  • Thanks XD

    Jinx Blackclaw
    1
  • S_E- Ok just fill out a form and I'll write the story.

    Jinx Blackclaw
    1

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