Hogwarts Love Story Pt 11.4 {A New Year} | Comments
Below are comments submitted by GoToQuiz.com users for the quiz Hogwarts Love Story Pt 11.4 {A New Year}.
-
@AiFiahK3mE - Yes, she did have light brown hair...it faded to her natural hair color. That bizarre, I didn't know. Also, I'm unsure what color I previously had Ambrosia's eyes. So, it might be wrong. I personally don't mind the long comments , it's fine :) Hehe, yes, its ironic she insulted Oliver while she dated him and thought he was the one. Don't worry, Fleur is going to be your friend in the series and I intended to keep it that way. I'm also glad you enjoyed Draco's once in a lifetime dorky moment. Thank you :)
-
@Obssions0112 - Yes, you do! I wanted to expand on it but it would have taken the majority of the quiz. That's a fantastic idea, I'll see how it works with the future quizzes! Hehe, like I said Harry and the twins play an important part in this series, you'll see a lot of them. Yeah, I was sort of cautious writing in French because I'm not exactly fluent, only simple phrases. But I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
-
I totally loved that scene with Ambrosia! I felt pulled towards Draco during this one. *Sigh.* LOL, this really was an amazing edition, and I loved this chapter in general, as I love all of your quizzes! You manage to make it seem so real to me, and the little details you include but don't go too far into - I don't know how to explain how your writing is so amazing! LOL, I CAN'T WAIT for the next one!
-
YES I beat her up. I think that if I'm going to be expirementing with the twins I should prank her... Just an idea. I loved that I did at least do some damage hopefully I hurt her soul. She totally had no come backs to me. Aw Draco such a cutie! Everyone knows by now I love Harry and the twins but he's so cute! I got all ecited when I kicked her butt. When I met Fleur I imagined talking to her in french because in real life I know french I loved this! I squealed most of the time it was fantastic keep it up!
-
@rosekat - Haha! Thanks, that scene with Draco turned out to be the most difficult in this edition. The idea with trying out for quidditch isn't a bad idea, I just need to try to find a way to add it in, since the Tri-Wizard tournament is a big deal in this year but I will definitely consider your idea and try my BEST to add it into this year. & I don't mind the lengthy comments :) They're a joy to read!
-
I just wanna say I really, really love your quizes, to a point where it's bordering on obsession lol =P you are a fantastic writer and I get sooo excited when I see a new quiz up!! I am a Draco fan all the way so make sure you keep him in it and would love to see some cute little private moments with him. Oh and loved the fight that b---h totally at it coming!!
-
@Wolfiey - Don't think you're done with Ambrosia just yet. More is on its way :) If you enjoyed that, wait till you see the latest edition! :)
@Jayla - You will! Don't worry, it's just the start of the year, there is much more to come across. Well, I would say that Ambrosia liked Oliver for his looks rather than his personality. Regardless, you will get even with her. What you did doesn't sum up the amount of damage she did. I'm in the process of publishing the quiz right now, it shouldn't be long! Thank you :)
-
Okay, you probably think I'm annoying right now, writing three comments right after the another. Even I think I'm annoying. Oh well. Now, what I want to say AFTER I've actually read the whole quiz:
First, a little message to Ambrosia. Insult Oliver one more time and that might be the last thing you'll ever do. I have just to words for you if you do: Avada Kedavra.
Now, to natuhleegayle, the author. Please do't make me fight with Fleur? Pleeeaaaaseeee! I really like her, she's really nice.... And when Draco walked into the wall? THAT WAS SO CUTE!!!! Seriousy, I thought it was the cuteste thing since [A New Year] started, I think ^-^ But I still do like Oliver :)
-
@AiFiahK3mE - Yeah, i'd wake up around that time. Although, there are times where I don't understand how I could possibly sleep at 3-5am and wake up at 7am like nothing ever happened. It's a wonder
@Orange_J uice - Thank you so much! It brought a smile to my face, I was pretty unsure about this part. Haha! Thank you ! & Don't worry about it :)
-
@HogwartsLove - LOL, thank you! I would have to agree, Draco was too adorable here especially towards the end! Haha, that scene with Ambrosia is definitely a crowd pleaser. Thank you once again, if anything I was worried I put too much detail in this but I'm glad you enjoyed & I say the same to you :)
-
@natuhleegayle No problem! He really was so adorable! I can see how anyone, not just Oliver-lovers, would want to break her nose. I think that you're amazing at balancing out the amount of detail to put in, and that isn't including your choice of words. Thanks and no problem! :D
-
WAIT WAIT WAIT WAIT WAIT!!!! I haven't read the whole quiz yet, so I might comment some more, but about other stuff. I saying this now because I'll probably forget later. Now, this is what I wanted to ask. What haircolor did Ambrosia have before she had dark brown? Please, I need to know this, and I'm too lazy to go and checkmyself in your previous quizzes... Was it light brown?
-
I loved when draco walked into the wall it was so adorable....if these quizzes were made into books and movies im sure they'd be successful except for it would be like copyrighted and you could get sued...but people would still love it especially with seeing a different side of draco.
-
@Princess_Demon - Why thank you very much. That certainly made my evening. I'm glad that you liked it and I will try to include more Draco as I can! Haha, awe. I hope it's not a bad obsession. But regardless, thank you ! x
-
wow I got the FIRST comment great job and let me say I completly loved the scene with draco.second I think since it is a new year we should get to try out for quiditch (sorry if thats not how you spell it)*hin*hint*okay if anyone else agrees with me and as always I loved the entire quiz I know I say it every time but I can't seem to find any other words so good luck on the next one and I hope you consider my idea and KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow sorry for the long comment didn't see how big it was getting.
rosekat1 -
@Bluebird - Thank you so much for reassuring me. Haha, yes. I feel the main highlight is seeing Ambrosia beat up and talking to Draco. Glad that you enjoyed it :)
-
Great quiz I loved it! I love the drama and the scenes where great. The detail was fine and I'm so glad I got to beat Ambrosia up! I've been wanting to do that for ages even though I'm a total Draco fan. Can't wait for the next one.
Bluebird1 -
@AiFiahK3mE - It comes in handy when you're almost on your final year in High School. Surprisingly, I feel amazing when i do that. It's pretty ironic for some people.
-
one word..AWESOME!!!i simply loved it.it rocked.im so happy i beated that Amber character >:) i hate her(like everyone)the part with Draco..CUTE!!it was ADORABLE.your an awesome writer.KEEP ROCKING XD
P.S:sorry for not commenting on the last quizzes.i didn't have time :p
-
@natuhleegayle Oh, it's okay, I would have thought it would be weird that someone was awake 5 am, so I kinda knew you wouldn't answer... I use to wake up like 1 pm myself when I don't have school, so...
-
@AiFiahK3mE - I would have been awake but I haven't been sleeping right for days. Haha, I'd pull an all nighter everyday during the breaks from school.
@Horselu ver - Haha, thank you very much :)
-
@natuhleegayle Ah, neither have I. The earliest I slept was like... 1.30 am? 2 am? At least, that is when I look at the clock. I lay there trying to sleep for another half hour, I think. But in compensation, I wake up 1 pm or 1.30 pm, so....
-
I got to beat up Ambrosia!? Yesh, I have taken my revenge!!! I totally won in that fight.
I'm so happy that I got to have a scene with Draco. What a cutie. ^///^
Wolfiey1 -
@HogwartsLove - it was only fair to have that reason for the hatred of Ambrosia. Haha, well thank you :) It's glad to know that it's just right; not under or over .
@Dragon - thank you m'dear ! x
-
I got Draco Malfoy!
- 1
- 2
