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Cold'Throat, a grey pelted WindClan Tom with dull blue eyes. His pelt is a split between grey and white. His feet being completely grey with white socks. Cold'Throat is 28 moons old.

As a kit, he was neglected from his father, Robin'Prowl. But his mother, Ash'Tongue, loved him dearly. Soon, a fire was set to WindClan, he was dragged out from the fire- but his parents weren't so lucky. After that, the clan had set on a journey to find a new camp, in that while, he was adopted by a warrior, Grey'Feather, a albino she with a grey feather upon her ear. WindClan found the new camp, and settled there. He was raised by Grey'Feather. At App age, his mentor was Little'Lion. A tall yellow furred Tom with amber eyes. Little'Lion was like the father Cold never had. At his warrior ceremony, he was named Cold'Throat for his cold and deep voice. When Cold was 21 moons old, Grey'Feather died from a severe WhiteCough that turned to the fatal BlackCough.

Cold'Throat is the cat you would go to for mental help, emotional help, or just help with the patrol! He is the loner of the clan, always off in the clan, either helping the elders, or giving stories to kits that are daring enough to hear his tales.

My OC is LeapordWind-

She is a cat from the Tribe of Fallen Snow. She is very fierce and stubborn and always has been loyal. She has a mate who was formally a rogue but then joined. LeapordWind lost a lot of family due to a sickness that spread from a cat that had traveled. Sadly, her mate died. She had to leave with her Tribe to find somewhere safer. They lived near another Tribe called the Tribe of The Running Stream. She and her best friend became mates after he confessed, saying he had always wanted to be with her but was too late when she had her mate. They soon after became mates but she died a little after giving birth due to bears.

My OC is Mist paw, a grey and white she-cat that has blue eyes. She is very adventurous and mischievous and has a lot of friends in her clan (Skyclan). When she grows up she becomes a leader of sky clan and a good one!

Backstory: her backstory was normal, she was born to her two parents: Hybrid fur and Grey flower, she trained as an apprentice and got close to a cat called Pine paw, who later became Pine heart. They became mates after Mist paw became Mist star, (Her warrior name was Mist Wish).

They had one kit: Wish kit, a grey and white she-kit with green eyes.

(Pine heart was a siamese with green eyes) Sorry if this is too long ;-;

My OC's name is Marshcloud. She is cream-furred with brown points and amber eyes, a warrior of ThunderClan. Her suffix came from her daydreamer personality (head always in the clouds). As an apprentice, Marshpaw was slightly jealous of her sister Sunnypaw, who had good looks and a bright smile- an all-around perfect cat from the perspective of most of her Clanmates. 2 toms around Marshpaw's age had crushes on Sunnypaw- Bladepaw and Goldpaw. Unfortunately, they both knew this and constantly got into arguments. Sunnypaw was a troublemaker and favoured Bladepaw because he was similar. They would throw pebbles at the dens every night and sneak back in. Most times Bladepaw got caught solely but was too head-over-heels for Sunnypaw to give her away. Marshpaw knew and this angered her, along with the fact that Goldpaw was becoming very self-conscious. One day Goldpaw and Bladepaw got into a a real, physical fight. Marshpaw was forced to watch this drama from the sidelines, too afraid to speak up. That night, Sunnypaw said she was going to explore outside of Clan territory. Marshpaw was mad as well as tired and refused, not bothering to stop her sister. That night, Sunnypaw went missing. After a half-moon of searching for the lost apprentice, the Clan gave up and moved on from Sunnypaw, almost forgetting her. This might have seemed like a dream come true for a younger Marshpaw, but she started to fill herself with guilt, as if everything was her fault and she could have prevented the situation. Worse, Marshpaw started to fill in Sunnypaw's shoes as the "popular one." It felt fake.

Marshpaw became Marshcloud along with the other apprentices. She "tried" to train an apprentice in the future even though she woul always start daydreaming. She eventually falls in love with the ShadowClan warrior Splinterclaw and they raise an abandoned kit named Lucky together. They would later learn this was the daughter of Sunnypaw, still alive somewhere out in the wild, living with her mate G

my oc's name is Dappledmoon,

she's a large slender she-cat from ShadowClan who is pitch black with white face, dappled white paws and long fur.

I haven't given her much lore but she's in love with her clanmate who is a half kittypet (mother was a ShadowClan cat and father was a kittypet) named Ratface, and I was going to make Dapplemoon become leader because she wants ShadowClan to be seen an honourable calm again and reverse the affects of some of the bloodthirsty leaders who tainted their clans name in the past.

not sure how old she is ill have to figure it out but ye :D

My OC's name is RabbitFeet. She is a athletic, small, white she-cat with brown and grey markings wich make her about invisible on the heath where she lives. She is warrior of the Windclan who got promoted to deputy. She is brave, a good hunter, but not so social. Her partner is SnakeBite (another one of my OC's).

My oc is Rapture'fang, she's currently 15 moons old and is a moonspeaker, when she dies her role is a high-moonspeaker, she's high in medical knowledge, she has an interesting personality falling under the depends what cat she's talking to = her personality, she's a proud member of rift clan.

Key: moonpaw - medicine cat app
Moonspeaker - medicine cat

High-moon speaker - highest level medicine cat

The moons - star clan
Rift clan - custom clan

My oc is Feathersong.

She is a white tabby she-cat with gray patches. She has a pale pink nose, inner ears, and belly. She has emerald green eyes. Her tail is a grey, fluffy tail. Her fur is as soft as a cloud. Also her ears are grey too.

Feathersong is kind, smart, and helpful. But she is also stubborn, and talks a little too much. She only talks, though, to a few cats that she is close with. She loves kits.

Feathersong was born in ThunderClan to Petaltail, a small brown she-cat, and an unknown father. Because of this, she wasn't treated well. But one day, soon after she became Featherpaw, the ThunderClan leader, Eaglestar, came to her. He told her that her father was Reedfeather, a RiverClan warrior, and asked if she would like to move to RiverClan. Featherpaw thought that it would be like a fresh start, and she agreed.

In RiverClan, her father apologized to her. He told her a forbidden relationship was hard, and that she could trust him with anything. She trained hard, and became Feathersong. Then, she met a tom named Duskleap, a pure black tom with bright blue eyes. From there on, she hung out with him a lot. They soon became mates and had 2 kits: crow kit, a white she-cat with black spots, and Mosskit, a brown tabby she-kit. With time, they became Crowspot and Mossflame. And her life is just normal from there. Except that she becmes deputy after killing 2 badgers single-pawed. Petaltail and Crowspot died because of the badgers.

His name is Stonepelt, he was born to Thunderclan but when his mother died in a fight with a Windclan warrior (because his mother was trying to get his sister Honeykit (now Honeyclaw) to pass across the thunderpath so the mother knew if it was safe or not since none of them knew what the thunderpath was, but the windclan warrior saw as she left the moonstone with her leader, and was like "dont send ur kids across that" and they fought) but was adopted by the leader of Shadowclan, Moonstar, with his sisters Honeyclaw and his other sisters Slateheart and Chipfur (as in chipped stones). He was born half-blind which made him become a medicine cat instead because his mentor Wolfstripe gave up since he (Wolfstripe) wasn't used to teaching half-blind cats (despite being the default mentor for Shadowclan when he wasn't busy with another apprentice). Stonepelt struggles a bit with concentrating and locating wounds but uses smells to get around the latter (he hasn't figured out how to deal with the former yet lol)

TLDR: Stonefur is a half-blind medicine cat who was adopted by a Shadowclan leader because his mother was stupid and a Windclan warrior accidentally killed her for it

My OCs name is Craneswallow. Shes a black she-cat with a tan tortoiseshall patch in the middle of her back. Her ears, muzzle and left eye also have these tan patches. Craneswallow became WindClans medicine cat and took on an apprentice, Duskpaw (later, Duskflower.) She met, and later fell in love with, a ThunderClan warrior named Redfern (a reddish-brown tabby tom). When their relationship was exposed, Craneswallow faced banishment from WindClan. However, Redfern persuaded ThunderClans leader to grant Craneswallow sanctuary. Craneswallow and Redfern faced suspicion and hostility at first, but they stayed together through it all. When Craneswallow was given the chance to return to WindClan and her medicine cat duties at a Gathering, Craneswallow refused in front of everyone, saying a life with Redfern was all she wanted. Unfortunately Craneswallow and Redfern were unable to have kits due to a miscarriage early on, but they didnt mind- at least they had eachother!

The end! I hope you enjoyed! Sorry it was long

Your OC is 74% percent original 74%

Very good job, you have a very good OC that has good originality, but everything can be improved! You did a good job but still remember that you can work on aspects of your character.

My actual OC is Silentsong, the skilled warrior, who is definitely not ok with kits dying even if they aren't his or even his clan's (Beetleclan), definitely a bit edgy with his backstory but other than that he is normal.

My oc is a she-cat named Whitewish, she is white with tortoiseshell on her face, tail, and legs, with marbling on her legs and tail. She also has silver speckles on her face and back. She has the ability to control lightning/electricity (most cats in my fan made warriors world have powers like this from their neighbors, tribe catswho have elemental abilities.)

My OC is Stembolt, A humorous and Sympathetic Gold, gray & white tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes, big, fluffy fur, And as a queen about to become a warrior again, she is proud of her three little kits, who just became apprentices. Their names are Tulipkit, A white kit with little red-pink splotches, Seedkit, A small tom with a brown tabby pelt, and Brookkit, a small white she with light gray markings like a slow-flowing stream. she loves her mate, Oakeye, whom is a brown-and-white tabby tom. She soon becomes deputy, and dies moons and moons after to drowning in a Tsunami while on a journey beside the Saltwater. She lives on in starclan watching her kits grow up. they now are Tulipstep, Seedlight, and Brookwing.

More ocs!

Raccoonpelt: a fluffy Tom, scary on the outside, but hes actually very kind. Hes a elder, who often helps the queens with their older kits by telling them stories. His fur is quite literally raccoon coloration, with one black stripe all down his back.

Quartzfur: An albino Tom, who is a warrior. With his ghostly pale fur, and bright red eyes, kits find him scary! But, much like raccoonpelt, hes truly very kind, albeit a big ball of anxiety. He was once a kittypet, and is a Cornish Rex, meaning his only fur is down.

My oc's name is Bronzeclaw! She is a light/dark brown tabby with green eye. She's kinda build like Brambleclaw. She was bron as a rogue, her mother brought her and her brother and sister to Thunderclan. Her mentor became the evil deputy, lol. He never trained her well, bc of that she got trained by several straclan cats in her dream. The deputy was trained by Tigerstar, he is a kinda copy of him. So yea that goes on and on. The deputy kills the leader but the leader made Bronzeclaw deputy at the last second so she became leader and kicked the deputy out. Thats how for i got by now, :D.

I have MANY OC's but among them is SnipTail.

She is a Tortoiseshell She-Cat with Green eyes

SnipTail was born in BearClan with a tail that looks like someone has cut it in half. Her parents then named her SnipKit. But then her parents abandoned her on the Thunderpath. She was left to die. But SparrowClan cats came by and they were training. The apprentice GreyPaw, an all grey Tom with a dark grey brindle and Golden eyes, saw SnipKit and saved her from a monster that was about to crash into her. She was then accepted into SparrowClan and grew up with a queen and her kits. She then became an apprentice and her mentor was RunningBird, a silver Tom with white spots on his back, black freckles, and cyan eyes. She trained hard but kind of had an attitude. She would sometimes talk back to her mentor if she thinks she is right and that he is wrong. She was also annoying. She would like to annoy the elders with fake stories and gibberish yowls. She finally became a warrior though, and GreyPaw became a warrior as well. SnipPaw became SnipTail and GreyPaw became GreyShade. SnipTail then became mates with GreyShade for saving her a long time ago. She gave birth to 3 kits but 2 of them died. Her surviving kit was FrostKit, a pure white She-Cat kit which is blind. FrostKit is still 5 moons. One more moon and she will become an apprentice!

My OC is MapleCream. She is a honey-cream colored cat with a very light cream blaze and muzzle. Her underbelly is also a very light cream color and her paws are the same color as well. Her legs are light brown and her ears and half her tail are light brown as well. Her other half of her tail is light cream and her eyes are green. MapleCream is ThunderClan's medicine cat. Her friend SongWing died from greencough when they were kids. This caused MapleCream to train to be a medicine cat. She wanted to help everyone so they could not die from greencough just like her friend did. She trained hard but her mentor let MapleCream help a queen who is having kits. The queen was in pain so MapleCream gave her poppy seeds. The queen's milk dried out and the babies did not have any food. Her mentor was very mad at MapleCream. But MapleCream kept training and one day, she became the medicine cat.

Name: Willowfrost soon to be Willowstar
Age: 2

Description: Pale gray she-cat blue/green eyes. very smooth fur a torn ear and white stockings on all her paws.

Clan: SeaClan(A made up OC clan)

story: Willowfrost grew up to be a fine warrior mentoring her first apprentice, Peachpaw.Frostpaw was to be her apprentice but after an accident it all changed. The medicine cat, Troutfoot had a prophecy of a frozen willow tree. He saw Fernleaf's kits and Willowfrost appeared carrying the kits to saftey.He sent Willowfrost to go find Fernleaf's kits.when Oceanstar died Fernleaf took on as leader choosing Willowfrost as her deputy.Willowfrost's mate was Seafog and she had 8 kits, Stoneshine, Pebblestar,Snowflurry,Birdpaw,Lilacstream,Stripedtiger,Nightkit,and Dewlight. Willowstar lost her last life peacefully in the leader's den staring up at the frozen willow tree.

My oc is named Bluefeather. He’s the first Medicine Cat to exist in my warrior cat oc story, but he’s also a wander who’s respected by all of my oc clans because he heals all of them freely and doesn’t care for any of the rules against other creatures/cats.

Bluefeather is a dark gray tom, has a blue grey tail with a white tip and white underpaws with blue grey toebeans, plus blue eyes.

My oc name is Pterodactyl, he isn’t exactly a…cat?…but he’s a big cat (mountain lion mix w/ jaguar) and is apart of one of my custom clans! (FossilClan), his role is called ‘twospeak’ where he is trained to learn how to read twoleg language because their camp resides in an abandoned museum. And they believe the bones and fossils are their own Starclan, so they learn how to read what the things that says the creature’s names say. He is 7 ft and 23 inches, 97 moons, and born in captivity.

I have 3 Oc i'll share the first one today

Her name is Lost'breeze, from Riverclan (a long-term roleplay) she's a tortoiseshell and white she-cat (golden/light brown) tabby, she has amber/yellow-sih eyes and she's the medicine cat, Lost'breeze is Halfclan River/Shadow clan, she live in Riverclan with her Father and Brother, and her mom and two sister stayed in shadowclan, she became an medicine cat because when she was 6 moon, the day before her warrior cat ceremony she dreamt of a starry-cat telling her "that she'll find her place in the clan" and nothing bad happened from there