Far Away: Part Two ~*~ By Zane ~*~

I would like to say thank you to everyone who is reading Far Away. I know the title dosent make any sence right now, but maybe in the next part or part four you guys will understand how the beach and the killing all comes together into a really cool story. I'M GIVING SHOUT OUTS TO PEOPLE WHO LEFT COMMENTS. Shoutouts from the last quiz: LoneShadowWolf, Aria, ivoryleaf, WTF_NINJA and xxblutixx. Thanks guys!

I would like to say thank you to everyone who is reading Far Away. I know the title dosent make any sence right now, but maybe in the next part or part four you guys will understand how the beach and the killing all comes together into a really cool story. I'M GIVING SHOUT OUTS TO PEOPLE WHO LEFT COMMENTS. Shoutouts from the last quiz: LoneShadowWolf, Aria, ivoryleaf, WTF_NINJA and xxblutixx. Thanks guys!

Created by: Zane Is Here

  1. I woke up to a loud screaming. "Ally!" I heard Zack yelling for me. I sat my head up. Zack was crying and pointing at two bodies laying on the floor. Mrs. Anderson and Jillian were caked in blood. "No...No no no." I ran over to the two and got on my knees. I felt both of their bloody chests. They were dead. "I will miss them..." Zack said crying. I looked at him with anger. "Dont you get it! Were ALL ALONE NOW! ALL ALONE! Were only KIDS!" I screamed. I calmed down. "Jillian locked the door last night. No one could have came in. Help me check the windows." Since Monika and Aria were still fast asleep, we slowly tip-toed around the house. "All the windows are not broken or opened." Zack said. "That means..." I said in a soft voice. "The murderer is in this room."
  2. Zack gasped. I shushed him and then knelt down beside Aria. I didn't have to search for long. In her back pocket was a bloody knife. I put my finger on it and felt the blood. It was fresh. I also noticed that Aria wasent laying where she was when I fell asleep. In fact, she was sleeping on the other side of the room, far away from me. The only people that were sleeping close to her were her mother and Jillian. I looked at Zack. Tears streamed down my face as I said "My best friend is a murderer."
  3. I picked up Monika gently, so gently enough that I would not stir her from her wake. I looked at Jillian and Mrs.Anderson just one last time. I whiped my eyes with the free hand that wasent holding Monika. I looked at Aria, who was still sleeping. In a soft voice I said "How could you?" The Zack got onto my back, and I walked out of the old building. I looked around wondering where to go. I heard a soft noise. A noise that sounded much like the sound of waves crashing upon a sea shore. "Maybe we can find some water." I said to Zack. I walked with Monika on my side, and Zack on my back towards the noise. It wasn't long until I heard the noise get louder and louder. I soon found myself stepping onto smooth sand. There were palm trees and sticks along the shore line. Thin waves crashed upon the shore, leaving beautiful sea shells scattered, just waiting for the next wave to bring them back into the ocean. "We have to get as far away from Aria as we can." I said to Zack, careful not to wake Monika from her deep sleep. I bet Monika is having a nice dream..I thought. One where all of us were safe, where Jillian and Mrs.Anderson were alive, where my best friend wasent a murderer, and that we were at home with our mother, drinking tea and relaxing. But that isnt real life. It's just a dream.
  4. I'm sorry it is really short. I don't have the time and I'm surprised I at least got this much done. I was going to work on it some more, but people have been begging for part two. I did say it would get longer but it only got shorter. I promise whenever I get the time, I will make a huge one for you guys. Heller. -Zane
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