Don't leave me hanging part 40 | Comments
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I apologize for not commenting earlier, I had no idea this had come out Dx
Questions, so many of them D: Firstly, I'll start with a more... Down-to-Earth, question. What's up with Cain's hair? It's so... White, and soft, and long... Is it really real? I mean, was he born (Or whatever way immortals start existing) with it, or can he change his appearence at will? Do all angels have light hair? And what about his eyes? They seem pwetty :3
Secondly: Have you heard the story about Lillith, or is it a pure coincidence that you named this character the same name as THE immortal Lillith from the legends? I know that the original Lillith was definitely not a nephilim, but she and this Lillith seem to have the same personality.
Thi rdly: I don't get it. Does the Council have members of EVERY sort of immortals? Like, nephilims, cherubims (If they exist in your world) and so on, or only the big races? By the big races, I mean werewolves, vampires, angels and elves. Eventually mermaids, fairies, centaurs and other supernatural species.
Fourthl y: Dominic seems very... Affectionate to ______. Does ______ remind him of a past love, does he believe that ______ is like, a reincarnation of a past love, or maybe is it that he's actually in love with _______? A little too forward if that's the case, isn't it?
Fifthly: Was Owen aware that Emilia (Is that how her name is spelled? I've forgotten :'D ) was a traitor?
You have no idea of how frustrating this is, judging by the fact that most likely you will not answer the question I care about the most (The fourth one x3 DON'T JUDGE ME xD), nor the last one D:
Damn, it's been too long since the last part xD I know that December will be a busy month, you've already said it, and I will absolutely not stress you into trying to write faster, as rushing greatly decreases the quality of the work, so I will not tell you to hurry up. But still,
I'm sorry it's been a while, but part 41 is FINALLY up! Please read, and I hope you enjoy! I've missed you all
@Fairygal that sounds like craziness, 6 essays for one exam I would hazard a guess that right about now is your end of the semester? I hope you're doing well :) aww, when was your birthday (wait, do I already know this)? By 5 ideas it was like I had different parts of DLMH going on, with The Other Side, a mini backstory I've been playing with, this one idea I've been mulling over for a bit, and a couple spontaneous fan-fictions. None really amounted to toomuch yet though, nothing compared to how much I've written for DLMH (I pasted all my DLMH writing into Microsoft Word the other day and it took up 100 pages, proud writer moment xD)
@AiFiahK3mE Cain's hair? Oh, who knows? x) I'm not going to lie; Cain was a last-minute character creation. I just had this picture in my mind of someone like that, and I had to create it because it would not go away. Good questions, I should probably find the answers to them XD I'll let Cain answer them in a bit maybe (I agree Cain's eyes are pwetty x3 )
No, I don't think I know the story you're referring to; what is it? :0 My name-choosing strategy is a little wacky. For Lillith, I just decided I wanted her name to begin with an "L" then I liked the name "Lily", but then that sounded too innocent and dainty, so I picked "Lillith" instead.
I actually haven't decided the makeup of the Council yet... xD I was thinking just the big races, but you'll meet them eventually with whoever I decide upon
LOL you are very interested in Dominic? ;P you're right, I'm sorry, I cannot divulge secrets about Dominic's past romantic life nor his present one. Just know that I will include him more often now because he's important ;P
We shall see in the next part about Owen I can't give it away when it's so close! XP
I'm sorry to torment you so with the questions, and I agree that it's been too long between parts, but I absolutely cannot let myself finish a part this month because I have college applications due on the 1st of January :x (someone, cue the doom music) after that, though, I only have one final, so I should be good with releasing one (or maybe even 2 as a sorry present???) in January
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! I was wondering when I didn't see your name :P I always do love reading your comments because they have really good questions and make me think as well about the things I know about my own story XD I really appreciate it - thanks!
@Flight :D thank you! Haha, well if it's not a birthday, then it's an unbirthday, and that's perfectly awesome as well - bring out the tea party, Mad Hatter, March Hare, and we can't forget that Dormouse :3 (Alice's Adventures in Wonderland reference) me, being an inspiration? I think my heart just melted xP It's an honor, and I remember your series! Kinda since my memory isn't that great, but I do remember you were adding new guys and there were twins and nature element powers... and you were debating names - I think one was Zuko :3 I probably only remember that name because I love it XD It's fine about the characters, as long as they're in sometime by the new year; I completely get it about school getting in the way!
Oh your friend reads my series too? :o Glad she likes it! Tell her thanks for me, please?
Sorry this one took so long! Plus, even with all the time it took, I'm still not satisfied with it (and the results *shakes head* I wish I could edit those XP)
I bring some bad news... part 41 might take a long time too or it might be short because December will be a super busy time for me. Between holiday stuff, getting ready for final exams, and applying to college, writing might be difficult.
BAH, so many bad things, but on the up-side, I'm have stuff in mind for the upcoming quizzes so less chance of writer's block *cheer* thanks for reading, everyone! (I really appreciate how you all stay with me even though I'm terrible at updating any faster than 2 weeks)
Thank you! I'm glad people do use my site :) Working late at night on my birthday on a last-minute English research essay WAS certainly memorable xD I celebrated my birthday the 2 days before though, so it wasn't too bad C: Yes, I hope to see my writing soon too XD this past month, my writings have been all over the place, working on like 5 separate ideas at once XD it's been fun though, and I can't wait to see your writing either! Aw, the last days of the semester and deadlines are always the worst, but, believe me, once it's all done, it's the best thing ever ^^ Good luck!
Oh, xxblutixx, glad that you are still here in GTQ! Thank goodness, I came here to check up on how you're doing. So how are things going for you? Have you applied yet to college or university yet? I still need to research on my possible career and apply to universities, which is bad, but I think I will be getting to it soon. Did I tell you that I'm thinking of being an accountant? I know it's surprising, isn't it? Lol. It's getting more less stressful over vacation time so it's been awesome for me! How is the story going? I hope that it is going well for you and not hard. Please update me on what's going on!
One final thing, did you notice that Freeze's Hogwarts Love Story is out as well as Bluebird's Fallen Angel Story? Natuhleegayle added more chapters too on Wattpad. I don't have an account there but I'm not sure if I should have one...
@ixheartxu haha thank you =)
@AiFiahK3mE I... actually don't know how much I'll put into the next part :P most likely, Cain will explain.... part 42 because, thinking it over, I already have a lot of thins to put into part 41. And oh, it seems like that? Well since there is usually a month between parts, maybe that's why Cain seems like a developed character?
Ohhh I've kinda heard of that story, but I didn't know the name was Lillith... how coincidental though :)
Oh no need to worry about giving me ideas; I have stuff planned out >:] that is a good one though.....
Thanks , and I hope it's going all right with my college applications too :P ah, writer's block for that kind of stuff is at least 10x worse than writer's block for this story >.< so I do completely understand about being busy with school and everything! Yes, it is a good thing that you make me wonder about my story :) it helps me come up with things and decide where I should be focusing more attention to developing
@rvelez thank you so much!!! ^^ yeah, it would be nice if xxdarkxx was here (especially to finish that cliffhanger of an ending in her story D:), and I think I'd have a little bit of a fangirl moment if I ever got to meet her XD Kris? haha, I don't know how exactly that boy would react to being kidnapped by a fan... maybe something like this: o.O I was definitely thinking about White from "Falling Feathers" the entire time I was writing that scene XD *tackles hugs White* nooo stay haha. Lillith is a little sulky and confrontational, but she does have a reason (and it's not because she personally hates you :) oops, gave a little spoiler) Cain XD Cain was inspired by these 2 animes I was watching at the time: Sesshomaru from Inuyasha and Kaname from Vampire Knight. Ooo I have some things planned for part 41, yes I do ^^ glad you're enthusiastic XD
@MysteriousEnti ty thank you! :) haha, it's all part of the plan - to brainwash you with the color white! I'm kidding ;P Ooo likey Kris? And yep, Owen's back, and for good reason
Just saw the new post on your site. Congratulations for being an official adult now! :) I didn't know your birthday is on the 6th so happy belated birthday. I hope that you had fun on that day and that it was memorable to you. I have ways to go before worrying about that. And good for you that you finished the semester! Now you can relax and take your time on things. I hope to see your writing soon! I can't wait for my semester to end in three weeks so I can catch up in reading and writing. I have started working on a different story that is about a girl whose past affects her in the present. But I have seminars and essays to worry about... And applications. Boo hoo! :'(
Thank you for saying the encouraging words in the end! The thing is for one of my exams I have to plan out 6 essays or something like that so it really sucks... Lol, that birthday is certainly very memorable. It must be so fun to write an essay for English and at the last minute too *sarcasm*. At least that's done and over with and you got to celebrate it beforehand. My birthday was only celebrated for an hour with one person because no one else had the time or really cared. You had five separate ideas!? Are they for separate stories or works?
Sorry I haven't said anything in so long! DX Like you, I'm really busy, so I totally understand with quizzes taking a long time. =) This part was fine, don't worry!
HAPPY 40TH BIRTHDAY!! Hmm... can you call this a "birthday"? :p Anyways, congrats on reaching the big 4-0!! Like elf maiden, I can barely get a third part started.... -.-lll XP Just like xxdarkxx is your inspiration, you and a few others are mine. =3
I'll post my characters on your blog as soon as I can! I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry that I've been taking so long! X( I've never forgotten, I just haven't had any time... :< I have exams coming up, too. And good luck with your college applications! ^.^
As always, can't wait for part 41!! I recommended this series to my friend, and she loves it. =DFlight1
And dont worry about it, i jnderstand, i can wait as long as i can. Take your time, no rush intended! Im starting a new quiz series too. Ill be also working on the quis questions and answers making it be more like a quiz while you get the juicy writing. But my writing will never be as good as yours sooo..... and if the series goes off with people liking it (but unlike yours that it can turn into a book or something) ill put it on quizilla and gotoquiz too. Quizilla is another website with quiz stories but it has literly a section for quizzes, stories, poems, lyrics, ect. Okay i should stop blabbing because this is taking 15 minutes each comment on this nook .-. :PPuffBall1
Hey Fairygal! ^^ Yup, I'm always here, and not planning to leave any time soon xD I'm glad to see you one here still. Oh, no you're not bad, I'm so with you on that boat. I'm actually stressing a lot more over this vacation time because my first two schools have a deadline January 1st! DX and... of course I procrastinated on the essay-writing part, so yeeeeup. Accountant? Oh my friend was thinking of that too. I wouldn't know a thing about accounting, so if it's surprising you chose it, I can't judge xD Because of all I have to do before my semester ends mid month January, the story's been on hold. It's bad D: I haven't touched it for at least a week if not two. Once all this is over, though, I'm sure I can get back into it because I know what I want to do! Yes, I did just see Freeze's story was out, and it's the first thing I'm going to read today! No doubts about it :) And I read and commented on Bluebird's too ^^ I love that Fallen Angel story :3 I'm two chapters behind on Nat's story because she's been updating so quickly, and I need to update my Wattpad app xD I like Wattpad a lot, so I don't see why you shouldn't have an account except for the fact that it's a website full of talented writers, which can be distracting because there's so many good stories out there to read xD
Oh and I just saw... if you read "Forever and Always" by 33iZZy18, part 22 was released recently, but didn't show on the newest quiz list (Don't you hate when GTQ does that? I'm going to go read that now even though I should probably go to sleep XD) so spread the word =)
Also, I just saw Mockinbird of "Supernatural Studies" is holding a contest on the Literature forum for characters, so if you take her series, there ya go :)
@xxblutixx Really? Cain seems like he'd be a character that takes time to create... Like you had been forming and molding him, planning to add him on the story, for a long time... Will Cain answer them on the next part, or will I have to wait even longer? D:
I'm talking about (according to the legends) Adam's first wife. I think you've heard that story about how God created the world, and then created the very first man, by molding him from clay? Well, there is a legend that the first woman ever was NOT Eve. The legend says that God created the VERY FIRST woman, Lillith, from the same clay that he created Adam. Lillith was rebellious, and refused to do what Adam told her to do, so she was banned from paradise. Afterwards, God created Eve from one of Adam's ribs. Lillith (Who got PRETTY pissed off), as to take revenge on God, Adam and Eve, had... Well, you know what, with numerous demons, and became the mother to the first vampires. At least, that's the version of the story that I've heard of.
I think that THAT Lillith and this Lillith seem to have very much in common, if we are going to talk about personalities. At least, from what I've seen so far, they do.
That doesn't sound very good D: It sounds like ______ will do something so stupid, that she'll need to have a trial with the Council... I hope I didn't give you any ideas O.O
Damn >: :P I knew it, you aren't going to answer xD Well, the only thing I can do, I guess, is wait and see, right? Same thing with Owen D:
*plays doom music on the guitar*
And a sorry present, huh? xD Sounds good :P Well, I really hope it goes well with your college-aplication- thing!
It makes me happy to hear (Er, read?) that :D I'm assuming that it is a good thing that I make you wonder things about your own story ^^' And sorry for confusing you, it's just that I've been very busy (School hasn't ended yet for me >.> ), and I almost forgot ab
@MiddNightt I congratulate you for reading 40 parts of my wordiness! I'm still amazed (but very pleased) that there still are new people starting this series :) thank you loads and loads for taking time out of your day to follow my story; I appreciate it! ^^
Lord Jack is so sweet, not knowing what to do to help me :3 Can we please see more of the guys? Like a picnic :D Hehe Blake I miss you. Can't wait for his P.O.V. Don't get stressed about releases because each one is worth the wait and I'm pretty patient. I once waited for this show for 2 years lol. It's since each part has 30+ questions which is 3x most normal story parts.
Yay for xxdarkxx. I can see she's a great inspiration for you. I'm sad to say I still haven't read her writing yet. I can't find the complete set of her series D: I loved the beginning, the white. It felt so real and fairyland-ish I'm rereading it omg. I wonder what the whole dealio with Lilith and Cain and Dominic is. Lilith seems so innocent but then she needs to take some pills. There's so much mystery in the meeting. What is it with secrets ._. I love it when things are blunt and straight on. I HAVEN'T HAD MUCH OPPORTUNITY TO SEE ALL THE LITTLE GUYS' PERSONALITY I NEED BOY ATTENTION :3 I already know Blakey boy :P Blake should now be officially in every part xxblutixx you write 30 questions yet none of them are of Blake XD But Jack and Kris are fine. Cory. Urgh I'm still sort of confused even though Blake is the obvious choice.
EVERYTHING WAS FINE THE WAY IT IS DON'T DOUBT YOURSELF. I know I sometimes change the paragraphs too since nothing goes the way you really want it to. It's pretty late for me but who cares. I haven't read Forever and Always in a long long time. As for Supernatural Studies dearie I need to catch up and stop feeling guilty. I just changed my highlight color to this pretty pink and I am in love with it. PINK :D
Question: Do you ever want to start another story series? I feel like I get those urges often :D Off to see your blog...tomorrow I swear mah eyes are hurting.
Okay, I just started reading this series! And, I'm in love with it! It's really, damn interesting! Omg, I seriously can't wait for Part 41, hope you get it out soon...you're a greaaat writer! :)
Andd, congrats for completing your goal, getting the 40th part out!
~MiddNightt, latest fan of yours! =)
@Lllama lover haha it's a cute nickname :3 thanks for reading
ivorylea f: time with the guys? I'm right on it! Well, in a while XD don't worry, some peace with some guy time will be coming. Oh, haven't read xxdarkxx's series? I can give you all the links if you'd like. You liked the part about the white? Thank you :) I wasn't sure if I was overdoing it. That part was longer initially, but I thought to cut it down and make it more concise. Secrets and immortals go hand in hand, and each of those three hold deep, dark secrets indeed. Pink highlighting? XD pretty cool... my favorite color is purple, though, so maybe I'll go change my settings for that XD Yes, sometimes I do get these ideas to start a new story, but I'm not creative enough to have that many ideas XP Two ideas I'm keeping on a back burner are a halloween-themed one and one about greek mythology. And of course, my idea for "the Other Side" couldn't stay inside my head XD that one actually I was debating for months whether I should release it or not. Thanks for reading! (and I do still have to reply to your email D: sorry 'bout that)
@SaraW thank you! ^^
@Firey_Soul awwwh thanks :3 parts? Hm... a lot XD there will be a lot more because I do have to get through those 2 vacation spots as well as a big, dramatic ending >;) I'm really glad you liked it! After revising this chapter so much, I just really wasn't sure anymore what was what and ah :P
@Gina1028 it's too bad... i don't have F6 on my iPod o.e please refrain from putting spam like that on comments boards; it's disrespectful
@Puf fBall did you say popcorn? Where??? XD thanks so much :3 I'm glad you really like my writing so much ^^ oh you got a Nook? Cool ^^ I have a kindle and I lub it :3 oh you're going to write a new series? Awesome, please, tell me when it's out ^^ and no, don't say you won't be as good as me because that's a lie ;P
@elf maiden thank you! sorry about cramming all that inf
I love you too! I love you all and i CANNOT wait till the next part as i adore the enchanting,amazing, loving,jaw-droping, and popcorn-making writing and boys. As i cannot write very well with my new found Nook i had gotten and now writing. I must say 3 things: 1. MAKE THE NEXT ONE ASAP! 2. She better understand and consult with the immortals and nake sure when she let them out that the balance will stay balanced and that she has the ability to see BOTH P.O.V's! 3. I WANT MORE THiS TOO GOODPuffBall1
Awww, I luff you too. :3 Congrats on making it to part 40 of this awesome series! :D Out of curiousity, do you know how many parts there will be? I loved this chapter as always. It was just... wow. The imagery was amazing and the whole time I was wondering what would happen next. Can't wait for the next part! :)
Congratulations on writing a 40th part! I can barely make a decent 4th part, let alone 40 parts. My head is drowning in the information right now, so I'll probably figure it all out before bed tonight. I can't wait for part 41!
Wow...I have a lot to say but first,congratulatio ns xxblutixx.You deserve it. If only xxdarkxx saw this:) I remember the first part when I slammed my alarm clock and now...just wow. You got better and far from the beginning:) I saw this part post yesturday night but I was too sleepy to read it.My eyes couldn't take it anymoreXD. Ok second, my Kris. OH I just want to kidnap him and enjoy my life with himXD He's just so fkdslfdsop:P Ok thirdly,there was too much white in this part*.* (WHITE from Falling Feathers: "Yeah.Enjoyed my name on here;)") (me:*pushes White away*XD) anyways Lithe(don't know how to spell her nameXD)...I don't like her.She's a meanie:P.And Cain! OMG.He's just weird but awesome at the same time:D I wonder what Owen's going to do *.* man I can't wait:D PART 41!!!!!!!rvelez1
Happy 40th of Don't leave me hanging!!!! I have the color white stuck in my head now lol. Kris thinks I'm important *blushes* and OWEN IS BACK!!! You are an amazing writer and I can't wait for part 41! :D