Love is a challenge

Read this amazing and enticing love story! Then, comment on what should happen next! I really need your feedback. I want to please my readers. Also, I want to be a better author than that brat Lydia Lejune.

Oh please read my story! It is fun to write them, but if no one reads them, then what's the purpose? Also, comment on what you want to happen next, or if you have any complaints, suggestions, or especially compliments!

Created by: Leah
  1. Anna slammed her locker door and looked annoyed at her BFF. "Chelsea, I swear, if you tell, I will NEVER talk to you again." "Fine..." said Chelsea, and she rolled her eyes. The school bell rang. "C'mon, we have to hurry. Mr. Brodrick hates it when we're late." They hurried to room 246.
  2. In class, Mr. Brodrick was teahcing about geometric pressure. But how would Anne know that? She was too busy staring off to her right, at her one true love. Mr. Brodrick noticed, so he asked, "Chelsea, why don't you tell the class what I was just teaching?"
  3. The school bell rang to signal class was over. As the class stampeeded to the hall, Anne sighed a sigh of relief. "Anne? Could I see you for a moment?" called Mr. Brodrick. Her heart practically jumped out of her throat. Mr. Brodrick handed her a note. Really more like a ticket. "You have detention for the rest of the week. Maybe then you could enjoy staring at him. He has detention, too." Anne's face flushed. "Yes, sir." She walked to the hallway.
  4. Jackson walked down the hall, holding a football, surrounded by his two friends. "Hey, aren't you gonna say somethin' to her?" one of his friends, Mark, asked. "No... well... NO!" "He's too scared." His other friend whispered. "NO I AM NOT!" Jackson protestd. "Maybe we should tell her for him." That stopped Jackson dead in his tracks. "YOU ARE OT GOING TO TELL HER." "Realax, dude, I-" "YOU NOTHING! AND IF YOU TELL HER, IT WILL BE THE LAST THING YOU EVER DO!" The two friends looked at each other. "Geesh..."
  5. Megan sat at an empty lunch table, eaing some sort of vegetarian sandwhich. She paused and looked around, pushed up her glasses, and started to stuff her face. "How does she eat like that and stay so thin?" she overheard someone at the popular table say. "She's vegan. She could eat an entire buffet and be pencil thin, but nothing would hsve taste." Megan grabbed her lunch sack and headed for the bathroom. Just another Wednesday: Lunch in the bathroom.
  6. AS Anne walked home she thought of that special boy- all handsome and smart... he would never like her. As she was thinking, a boy ran into her, He was her age, he had brown hair, blue eyes, and... looked kinda cute. Anne dropped her books in surprise. "Oh gosh, sorry!" said the boy. "I'm new here, so you don't know me. If you did, you'd know I'm really clumsy." She giggled, but the boy was gone. Wait- what just happened?
  7. Have you liked my story so far?
  8. If I wrote it, would you read the rest?
  9. Are you aggrivated by the characters popping in and out?
  10. Are you going to comment on this?

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