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I said I wasn't gonna post it but SCREW IT, why not? This is one of my docs from my clan, each with their own backstory
The thing is, I haven't gotten a design for her or a name yet... names take me a while cause I always want them to be special, earned, and fitting.
SO I will call her (as a place holder) Soaringwish. She starts as an apprentice under a new and quite young leader who took over winning a war with another clan. She is the only surviving kit of her litter, kittens dying is unfortunately a common occurrence in this clan.
She wasn't really close with either of her mother and never knew her father, who died during a attack from Coyotes to keep his litter safe.
Souringpaw was very close with a tom we'll call Flyingpaw. The two are marching to their first battle and the first battle under the new leadership. The two apprentices are optimistic and joking, excited about defending their clan.
However the battle doesn't go well. Cats are horribly hurt, the clan is scattered, unorganized and tired.
Flyingpaw and Soaringpaw are ones of many that lay bleeding out in the dips of the battlefield, along with many warriors and apprentices alike. The cats don't share words, but an understanding of the situation, and they wait to be carried back to camp.
But the clan flees.
And they don't come for them.After a while the cats realize that they were abandoned. They're not making it back to camp. Nor tomorrow. Slowly one by one cats around them give up, even Flyingpaw. No one will save him. So there's no point in trying. He closed his eyes, and slept. But he was suprised when his eyes opened in the morning.
You see, Souringpaw thought differently and got up from the dips to find any sort of herbs.
She treated Flyingpaw first.
The two were the only ones alive. Even if Souringpaw had tried to save them. But she was no medicine cat.
The two apprentices, despite a growl of protest from Souringpaw, made their way back home. Their clan's land, however
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is huge. And dangerous. In a jungle-like territory with cave systems deep in the ground, winding rivers, glowing waters, twoleg statutes and monuments overgrown with plants, hanging flowers, and hollowed out dens and rocks, and predators. Lots of them.
The way back is a long hard journey, Soaringpaw in the lead. It seemed, whatever trouble they ran into, Soaringpaw was the only one who did anything about it. Flyingpaw simply would give up.
When the cats were close to camp, they found a creature. A large one... a cat? They could talk to them. They were large brown creatures with long fur, huge paws, ear tufts atop their ears, and had stubby tails.
They offered them a place away from clan territory, a place away from war, away from those who had abandoned them. The latter was itresting to Soaringpaw while the former was interesting to Flyingpaw.
But Soaringpaw couldn't come, the creatures said. She was too hurt. She would only slow them down.
Flyingpaw took the creatures aside and explained that while he loved the offer, he couldn't abandon his friend or his clan.
Soaringpaw, filled with trust issues from her clan abandoning her, Knew Flyingpaw was giving her up. She started to walk away when Coyotes attacked. The huge creatures had disappeared.
Soaringpaw defended her friend in a moment of instinct, leaving her to be thrown in a river by one of them.
Flyingpaw raced after her friend, thinking it was over when his clanmayes appeared driving off the Coyotes and saving Soaringpaw.
The two were rushed to camp, met with yowls of love and exsitment. Soaringpaw didn't feel their joy. In the medicine den, Flyingpaw didn't visit her once. She felt even more betrayed. Surrounded by strangers that didn't come back for her.
The middle of the story isn't ad fleshed out, she spends her time in recovery and learning to trust some cats and spending her life to train and fighting battles. Wanting the war to end so she can experience the clan the elders keep talkin
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talking about. Flyingpaw however, has been caught sneaking away from the battlefield, has never stepped into the medicine den, even when hurt, and never did battle training. Ever. He made sure to be with Soaringpaw in anyway he could but the two no longer mixed. Soaringpaw always was talking about the war. Or other cats.
Soaringpaw soon became a warrior, Soaringwish honored for her dedication amd hope in midst of the war. She was littered with scars. Heavy ones. Once the medicine cat had to burn her leg closed, as she was bleeding out and would die within minutes, as the med could see her leg bone.
Now in the final battle she fights with everything she has. And they win. The clan rejoices and Flyingpaw joins them... not a scratch of him. He didn't fight. Now he pretends that he can get credit?
When their alone they have a huge agument. Saying that Flyingpaw never cared for anyone! At all! He is a disgrace to the clan and should have gone with the creatures! She fought before they had won, but he had fled the feild.
Flyingpaw yowls back saying that he can't stand fighting. It hurts him, makes him sick, he has really bad PTSD from it. He says that the war has hurt her too, she gave her life to everyone else, cause they proved that she wasn't good enough to fight for. Because she's kind. He begs her to just let it go back to the way it was. They can be friends, maybe even more! They can pretend none of this ever happend.
Never?
Soaringwish slashes Flyingpaw across his face and his old scar. Deep. She yowls at him, saying that all her efforts were NOT going to be ignored. They were changed, nothing was going to 'be the same' she hates him for leaving, for giving up. He's a Coward. He can't fight for himself. He doesn't deserve to celebrate.
She runs off, not wanting to admit that he was right about her.
There is much more to the story but that's where their MAIN story ends, the plot would continue along with them but that's the jest of it! Let me know if
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you have any questions, or feedback! Or lore about the clan as it is very diffrwnt from normal warriors while having the backbone! The other clans find it weird how diffrent their way of life is!
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My ocs name is Halfflower, a 19 moons old maine coon she-cat with very light greyish brown/light lilac(?) fur, a dark brown cape, tail tip and rounded stripes on her side and face and a white underbelly, neck and muzzle/cheeks with blue + yellow eyes
Halfflowers mother, Wolfsong, was exiled from BirchClan while she was pregnant for killing one of her clanmates, thinking that they killed her mate. Eventually Half (Dark, at the time), and her brothers, Hawk and Sand were born, but Halfs mother was still grieving over her mates death, thus rendering her unable to care for her kits. No matter how hard Dark and her brothers tried to cheer her up, it never worked, and soon, Wolfsong had enough. She couldn't keep her kits, but she didnt know anyone who could take care of them, so she left them near a badger set and left. The badger soon found Dark, Hawk, and Sand. It killed Sand, and Dark ran away, knowing she was probably next since Hawk abandoned them. She found herself in AlpineClan territoty and was taken in as a prisoner (she was about old enough to be an apprentice and was pretty big for her age), but was then accepted as an AlpineClan apprentice and renamed Halfpaw after she helped them when the camp was attacked. Half was a very skilled hunter and fighter, using trees to her advantage. Because of her fur, she hunts well during leafbare cuz she can blend in with leafless trees and the snow. Soon she earned her warrior name (Halfflower) after a small group of badgers raided their camp. Half had a very strong hate for badgers, and many cats were injured or killed, but while Half was in the medicine den, she caught herself frequently looking at the medicine cat, Kestrelheart. She felt like she had a bit of a crush on the tabby she-cat. Eventually, Half, wanting to become stronger to defend her Clan, started to train in the Dark Forest. Very few suspected her, and her crush on Kestrelheart started to grow stronger. A fee noons later a war with EagleClan was waged. Half
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My oc's reference sheet:
Willowtail
Clan: Thunderclan
Role: Warrior
Skills: Smells, sight, great with herbs
Death: GreencoughA mysterious, graceful, sweet and understanding white tom with light gray patches and brown spangles and amber eyes.
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my oc is RustThistle imma sumup this storu for short. shes a darkclan warrior her parents clearly loved her younger sister way more. she was impulise and loved to battle for her clan she killed som cat she dint mean too and evrey cat became untrustig of her and blamed her for her best freinds death since she was last seen with her and she was played to be evil and was drived out she eventuly became eader of some rouges and took over the three clans so no cat can be judged like her. she was drived out and a diffreny evil cat convinced her to drive out the clan cats with the dark forest but she turned on them in the battle remebering her loyalty to the clans
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My OC is called BlackPaw, she is a small floofy and fully black apprentice. She was found from a bush when she was really small and got adopted to river clan. She is really sweet and kind but lonely. She is 8 moons old.
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Btw my friend made BlackPaw for me
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-But stil, fought, she didnt want to be leader and eventually moved to riverclan and became mated with onyxflare, moons passed and chinchillastar died of green cough, onyx flare had been deputy after the battle where the old deputy had died in, so he was now Onyxstar. (I didnt realize that it cut off the first time, sorry if its a bit lazy xd)
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My OC's name is Willowstream. She is mostly orange with spots of black and white along her tail. She's currently an apprentice, at 8 moons but is proving her worth and will most likely become a warrior soon. She's easily angered and often runs off with her best and VERY close friend, Fawnpaw, to the Dark Forest to train. She's accidentally killed a Dark Forest cat. The other cats congratulated her on it.
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Willowpaw, right? Also, killing a dark forest cat as an apprentice is one thing. But on accident? That's a little... or very unreal. Why is she easily angered? How did her and Fawnpaw become close friends? Just some questions you should ask yourself while making an OC.
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My OCs name is Softpaw. They are male and were always judged by their soft and fluffy appearance. They are very feisty and angry, however. They are white with light brown markings.
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My OC is Poison'Vision (May have seen me on tiktok). He is a black tom with green marbled rosettes. He has heavy, amber eyes. Poison'Vision, as a kit, was always bullied for being super tall when he was born. Poison'Vision grew up being taunted and picked on. That was until he was apprenticed. All the other apprentices, especially his biggest bully, Moose'Paw, being mentored by the best warrior. I hear you ask, Well, whats better then Shadow'Gryphon, the strongest and coolest warrior? The Leader. Poison'Paw was mentored by the leader, Lion'Star. Every dusk, they'd train outside of Smoke'Clan until the stars shone at their brightest. Poison'Paw eventually became a warrior. Finally, his plan he had had since he was a kit... Kill the deputy, Frost'Claw. Frost'Claw, yes, was a good deputy, but Posion'Vision wanted power. He wanted to rule. He went over to Frost'Claw, and asked him on a walk to the gorge. He knocked the deputy into the water, drowning them. He ran back to camp, looking frightened. He ran into camp, screaming "THE DEPUTY FELL INTO THE GORGE!!!" cats crowded around as he explained that a "fox" started chasing them, and knocked him into the gorge. Warriors raced to the gorge, and found Frost'Claw dead on the side of the water. They brought the desceased deputy to the camp and stood vigil for him. The next coming days were quiet. But, finally, a day before half-moon, Poison'Vision was chosen as clan deputy, due to him being Leader's apprentice. But, soon after, someone found out what Poison'Vision had done, as Poison had accidentially said it to a warrior while they were having a conversation about breaking the warrior code. poison'Vision was chased out of camp. He evntually was cornered by 3 warriors. Including his gay mate, One'Creel. One'Creel slashed open Poison's throat, killing him. Poison'Vision was sent to the dark forest.
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My warrior cat OC is named MysticClaw. She is black with deep purple eyes. She is secretly evil because of an incident that happened long ago... She is deputy of SkyClan
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My OC is...
Patchspring!As a kit, Patchkit was a white calico with splashes of russet-red and chestnut-brown with New-Leaf green eyes. She was born in a litter of two in ThunderClan. Her father was unknown, her mother was Twistedbranch, a dark red she-cat with twisting black stripes like branches, and Badgerkit, a tiny white kit with silver-grey and black splotches.
In her kit-hood, her mother loved Badgerkit over Patchkit and normally neglected Patchkit, paying more attention to Badgerkit over Patchkit and teaching Badgerkit games to level up his skills while name-calling Patchkit. Badgerkit and Patchkit were close, and Twistedbranch didn't like that.
One terrible moon, a bought of green-cough spread through the Clan and dreadfully stole Badgerkit from them. Twistedbranch grieved, for it was only half a moon until apprenticing ceremonies. In anger and grief, she refused to acknowledge Patchspring for the remainder of kithood.
Patchkit earned the name Patchpaw, mentored by Dustmask. Not long after, she befriended a nervous and sweet pale ginger tom, Honeypaw. They became close friends, and often daydreamed of serving their Clan and having kits of their own.
While on a Border Patrol with Dustmask and Twistedbranch (by bad luck) Twistedbranch attacked Patchpaw and attempted killing her, but Dustmask leapt in and they killed eachother.
More out of pity than by StarClans will, her aunt, Sorrelsong, the medicine cat, chose Patchpaw as her apprentice. Patchpaw, feeling accepted, agreed.
At Moonpool, she earned the name Patchspring before the other medicine cats, including Sorrelsongs close friend, Lioncry, a very old medicine cat from ShadowClan.
Patchspring first met the irritating warrior, Crimsonfire, on a WindClan patrol with Talldusk and Mouseclaw. They had an odd interaction, teasing yet defensive and (secretly) nervous and awkward.
Crimsonfire started meeting Patchspring in secret, and StarClan told Sorrelsong a prophecy about Patchspring leaving and them need
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It didn't post my whole comment ;n
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My Oc's name is Kitefox, and Fluffy black she cat with Startling blue eyes. She was originally a Kit from Zinniaclan but her mother died giving birth and her father blamed her for her death. She didn't have a name then and she was slowly starving to death. A starry cat who turned out to Be Kitestar the former leader of Dowitcherclan couldn't do a lot but she made it so she wouldn't die knowing she had a greater destiny. She didn't have a name then but a couple weeks later a Sandy colored cat named Sweetpaw and her Mentor Snowcry who is the Dowitcherclan Deputy. They took her to the clan and a queen Named Otterleaf nursed her. Sweetpaw took a liking for her and played with her all the time. Hawkstar named her Kitekit as she looked like Kitestar. Kitekit had the power of knowing anyone's emotions though she didn't understand it. Kitepaw became Kitepaw and her Mentor was Rapidcreek and gentle tortoiseshell tom. Kitepaw was a quick learner but had a sassy and Sarcastic attitude but was always making everyone feel better. She earned her name Kitefox because when a Fox hurt Rapidcreek she killed it. Later she mated with Rapidcreek and they had 3 kits, Spottedkit,Starkit, and Swiftkit. Later Hawkstar dies and Snowcry becomes Snowstar. Her powers overwhelmed her as everyone had mixed emotions. Snowstar made her Deputy. Kitefox has another litter of kits about a season later ( 2 kits) Named Hawkkit and Lilykit. She later dies her father killed her but he later dies.
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Not bad but what happens if stark it becomes leader? StarStar? Just so you know Prefixes can't begin with "Star"
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My OCs Violetsun. In my book series, The Forsaken Frost, she is the daughter of BlizzardClans deputy, Coffeebean. At the end of the first book, she and Coffeebean; her mother, Silverminnow; and her brother, Yarrowpaw, are banished. They then go to PrimeClan.
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Copper. A brown she with olive/green eyes. She's a rogue who hangs out in riverclan territory. She's a loud, mischievous feline who is 36 moons old
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My OC is Summerfly. She is a ginger she-cat with a white chest, front left paw, and muzzle. She has a brown patch over her left eye, ear and fluff. She also has a brown patch on her back, right side. All of her other paws are brown too, she has green eyes.
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My oc is called Pepperleap and she Is a brave young shadowclan warrior she is a tan cat with pale red splotches all over her she has blue eyes and is very kind
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I've got two i did for this quiz - Mudpaw (later mudpelt) and stoneclaw. Not much backstory for either of them yet aside from them both being from windclan. Mudpaw is a tan and brown tom who's fur pattern looks like he fell in a mud puddle (hence his name), and stoneclaw is a grey tabby tom who looks similar to greystripe but his underbelly and paws are white
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My OC is Rainstripe, who I made a warrior cats role play quiz series about! I can't really say how she looks because I want you to imagine that. You can take them now by clicking on my name!
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Name: Snakefoot
Age: 27 moonsDescription: beautiful tortoiseshell she-cat with a white chest and muzzle. kind of like squirrelflight, she has one white paw. her eyes are green.
Clan: Oakclan (I made it up)
status: Deputy, but also a queenFamily: mother-Rowandawn father-Moonshade siblings- Foxheart and Nettlesting. mate: Smokesky Kits: Galepaw and Breezepaw.
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My OC's name is Firepaw (soon to be Fireleaf) an evil med cat app, she killed a cat with death berries, once the clan has discovered what she has done she is killed and goes to the dark forest
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(she's a tortoiseshell with amber eyes and a torn ear)
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Ri du is my other oc, he's a rouge cat he's also very stealthy he isnt really any harm unless threatened, he usualy visits a specific skyclan kit and Five`fox
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Im so sad that almost all of the comments here r like 1, 2, 3 yrz ago... ur OCs r soo good I know the feeling that no one cares about ur Oc but you love it... I love ur OCs too n I would like to make a story with all of them
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Idk if someone who already put there their OC's gonna rlly come back but yea...
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My OC's name is WinterBarry
She is currently a queen raising her second litter of kits LynxKit and GoldenKit. she also had SpotKit who was killed by her former mate BrownFace. Her first litter was with BrownFace she had three kits LeopardFang, SnowTiger, and LionPaw.
Rank: Deputy/Queen
Clan: ShadowClanWinterBarry has a gray pelt with a silver muzzle and underbelly she has black speckles under her Blue-Green eyes.
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Mother: SummerFern(StarClan)
Father: HawkFur(DarkForest)
Brother: HollowKit(StarClan)
Sisters: RavenFlight(Alive), MoonGrove(Alive)
Foster Mother: SilverFrost(StarClan)
Foster Father: GreenEye(Alive)Foster Brothers: TreeFrost(StarClan), BlackThorn(Alive)
Foster Sister: SnowNight(StarClan)
Mate: FlameFur(StarClan)
Former Mate: BrownFace(DarkForest)Daughters: SnowTiger(Alive),LeopardFang(Alive), GoldenKit(Alive), LynxKit(Alive)
Sons: LionPaw(StarClan), and SpotKit(StarClan)
Foster Daughters: LeafKit(Alive), RoseKit(Alive)
WinterBerry has suffered physical and mental abuse from HawkFur and BrownFace since she was a kit. her mother died during child labor and her father took his anger out on his kits and ended with him killing HallowKit thats why OwlStar forbid HawkFur to see his kits. because of trauma WinterBerry tends to be vary timed around toms(except FlameFur and GreenEye) unless they threaten her family that is still with her.
Mentor: FlowerTail(StarClan)
Apprentice: IceLight(Alive)
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Also Leapord is golden with bronze spots like a leapord and also patterns, and black patterns (like parts of the spots and her tail tip, ear tip, legs)
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My OC is Trappaw/Talon he is an apprentice currently.
Basically he falls in love, then she dies tragically by Whistleclan cats and he rages and kills their medicine cat. Then he meets a Whistleclan she-cat he nearly kills, but falls in love AGAIN and i haven't really thought into his backstory ;-; making it up as I go--
WRITERS BLOCK AAAAAAAAAAHHHH
If any of u have Wattpad follow me Sp00ky_Shadow_WolfZ my oc is in one of my books ;-;