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I used a cat i made up, Voidclaw, they are a tom, their clan is leafclan(known as LC) which replaced Skyclan,currently they are an apprentice but will be Warrior then Deputy then Leader, they do have a prophesy, given to the dead toms that raised them, Flametail and Jayfeather(straight from normal books, these are about 40 years future,) the prophesy is "There will be three, Raised by Jay and Flame, and the Feather of the Moon, who hold the power of the Moon in their paws" Voidclaw and Shiningheart(she is a medcat) and Moonfeather(my friends oc also yo bagel if you see this) are the three, Voidclaw: Swift as a Leapord, Fierce as a Lion, Golden claws(grandpa was farmed for them), Shiningheart: can speak with the bookclans(erin hunter book clans) and has Diamond claws, Mother was farmed for them, and Moonfeather: can see much better and hear. This was long.

Name: Ashstrike
Gender: she-cat
Clan: ThunderClan
Age: 40 moons
Role: Deputy

Ashstrike is a she-cat. The colour of her fur is silver- grey. She has a leader's star on her forehead and chest. Her eyes are half sky-blue, half heather purple. She is kind, loyal, fast and responsible. She had 1 secret kit- Dawnkit. She is from a prophecy. She had a forbidden mate from ShadowClan.

Name: Tumbleoak
Gender: female
Clan: windclan
Age: 40 moons
Rank: medicine Cat

apperance: a Light Brown tabby with thick, fluffy fur and short legs. She Always seems to be having different leafes Stuck in her fur.

Story: Tumbleoak was Born Into windclan. She was the only Kit in her litter and her mother died During birth. This let to her father being very close to her and always looking after her. She soon started to have interest in herbs and was apprenticed to the old medicin cat Crystalsnap. Later in her Life she Fell in Love and became mates with Silbersplash, the current deputey, and even Had two Kits with him (in my Story medicin cats are allowed to have Kits as long as there is another medicin cat)wich she named turtlekit and molekit. She still lives in Windclan Happy to see her Clan thrive and her Kits grow.

my oc is larchbranch! she's a charcoal bengal [mostly white/silver with matte black bengal markings] molly with golden yellow eyes from a roleplay server on discord.

she's a roseclan soldier, and about 34 moons. she is a lesbian!

her theme song is you stupid b*tch by girl in red and her current voiceclaim is angie martinelli [played by lyndsy fonseca] from agent carter!

she's a pretty wild gal, and never lost the adventurous personality that many kits have. she's fairly normal in all aspects, and grew up with two sisters. she isn't evil and she doesn't go to the dark forest, i just wanted a fun cat to play around with. that's just me, i like picking more minor roles so i can't get stressed like i would be in a leader, deputy, medicine cat, medicine cat apprentice, etc situation. i usually roleplay as elders, warriors, and apprentices!

anyways, that's my girl!
and i got 98%! teehee

coniferthicket a thin, long-limbed she-cat with short, well-groomed, soft, black fur. she has a tuft of fur on her head, and narrow, dark yellow eyes.

personality traits

she is clever, sarcastic, and untrusting of rogue cats or cats from other clans. she is un-fond of kits and has a small group of friends within her clan.

skilled and weaknesses

coniferthicket is an exceptionally good hunter, because of her good nose and sharp hearing. she is bad at swimming and good at climbing ; she has a unique fighting style, often jumping around to confuse her opponent. this strategy works well on new warriors, but she often struggles against more experienced warriors who know how she fights.

likes
* nighttime
* running
* leaf-fall
* hunting
* frogs/lizards
* gatherings
dislikes
* hot weather
* rain
* fighting
* fish
* caves
* mud
she doesnt have a backstory.
90%!

My cat is named Stormberry. She is a grey cat with emerald eyes and is currently deputy, although she will become leader soon. Her mate is Sandtail, (sandtail was a riverclan cat) but they both currently live in Thunderclan. Stormberry and sandtail have 3 kits, Wolfkit, Lionkit, and Falconkit. (And yes I know they are all names of other animals, deal with it) wolfkit was lost crossing a river and is assumed dead. However in Stormberrys leading years she will find wolfkit. Wolfkit was raised by loners. Stormberry is part of 2 prophecys, (three of you dont one about her kits.) I have written the first book about her and the next one will be in all three of her kits perspectives.

Name:Mousewing
Gender:She-cat
Clan:Windclan
Rank:New warrior

Personality:Kind but stays out of the way-background character-sorta peppy-not very smart-a good friend- shes better at hunting that fighting-

Appearance:A silver she-cat with brown stripes(sorry if its not realistic)

Name history: Mousekit, Mousepaw, Mousewing
Score:88% I expected 60-70% XD

Name: Neon
Status: Loner
-uses they/them pronouns
- 18 moons

(Was a kitty pet but the kitty pet house burnt down)

- cowardly cat, likes telling jokes and completely black fur with some burns and 2 brightly colored paw warmers

Eyes: Orange

Name: tall-furn
Coat: ginger and black
Role: medicine cat

Scars: one eye gouged out and one on the back 4 on 2 of the back legs and tail because she snuck out of camp once as a kit and ran into a fox

Gender: she-cat

Personality: kind , helpful , brave , loves collecting ferns!

Name: Songpaw
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Boulder Clan (Oc clan)
Age: 17 moons
Rank: Med. cat apprentice

Personality: A quiet and kind she-cat with a bunch of patiences and love for her clan

Appearance: A small light yellow tabby with slightly fluffy fur and ice blue eyes

Mentor: SilverFall
Sisters: Ryepaw, Blazepaw
Brother: Thistlepaw
Mother: BreezeFlake
Father: BeeSong

Hopes to serve her clan well and be a great medicine cat

She got 80%

Name: Night Dream
Gender: she-cat
Clan: River Clan
Age: 39 moons
Role: Warrior

Night Dream is a small she-cat with dark fur. The colour of fur is very dark silver. She has black swirl on her body. Her eyes looks like saphires. She is kind, loyal, fast and responsible. Right now she is in Star Clan. She had 3 kits: Almond Paw, Pearl Paw and Flame Paw. Her kits are from a prophecy just like her. She had a mate from Thunder Clan- Fire Tail. Also she had 2 friends- Sweet Petal and Night Sky.

Name : Piapiacwing
Gender : Cisgender female
Sexuality : Aroace
Rank : Herbalist ( Made up role )
Clan : Seamountclan
Status : Warriorsona
MBTI : INFP-T

Personality resume : A kind herbalist who's always eager to help.

Positive : Kind, diligent, pure, calm and creative.

Negative : Tough, insensitive, insecure and desesperated.

Like : Corvids, nature, herbalism, the ocean and her flower shop.

Dislike : Falconquill, fire, dry herbs, loud noises and thunderstorms.

Mother : Treepievalley
Father : Harpystrike
Younger sister : Ravenshade
Best friend : Weepingcloud

Friends : Riverrow, Windsail, Ravenshade, Svea and Hollyprairie.

Enemies : Falconquill.

Appearance : Long-furred tall she-cat with a pretty white pelt with dark-gray and black spots. Beautiful vibrant blue eyes with light blue eye

lashes. Light blue, blue and dark blue flowers growing in patches on her fur.

Mockingjay
She-Cat
42 moons (approx. 3.5 years)
WindClan
Deputy (died before leadership)

Mockingjay is a white-based and sleek-furred cat with splotches of silver tabby and brilliant green eyes. She was widely known and fairly popular among other Clans at Gatherings, mainly for her fighting skills and excellent stories/storytelling ability. She was in one prophecy involving the deputies of each Clan where they were to work together and stop a war among every Clan. She died fighting alongside her leader (who died in the same battle) against an invasion of rogues.

Still working on my oc a bit but they got tortured by there old two legs that tried to abuse and kill her so she fled with tons of cuts on her and is blinded in one eye so she wears an eye patch she made of from wolf fur she found. She has trust issues and is a loner. Still working on the name and I want her to eventually start her own clan or join riverclan sense she is a excellent swimmer. She is 5 moons old and has a gray and white pelt with silky fur but messy. Pawsome quiz mate.

Name:Curlyfur
Clan:Thunderclan
Gender:she-cat
22moon
Medicine cat

Nice cat, she has light brown fur whit orange spots.

Eyes:left:green right:blue

Dead:accidentally shot by a hunter while looking for herbs😢

Bueno mi oc no ce si es lo suficientemente bueno pero se llama Plumoso Featherpaw es naranja y tiene la mitad de la cara negra dos patas de color negro y la parte negra de su cara tiene un ojo azúl y la parte naranja un ojo verde pero bueno es un mestizo del clan del río y el clan del viento como su madre Eagleflight murió en el parto Red star tuvo que criar a su hijo en riverclan. Plumoso/Featherpaw se interesó por el mundo de la curanderia pero a las 12 lunas de edad se estaba enamorado de su amiga de toda la vida lunarplet/Manto lunar y un día fueron a recolectar provisiones de hierbas y una patrulla del clan de las sombras los sorprendió lucharon los dos y le ganaron a la patrulla pero Manto lunar/lunarplet quedo ciega y Plumoso/Featherpaw se transformo de un gato amable y comprensivo a un Jaypaw/glayino pero una noche Plumoso/Featherpaw le dijo a Manto lunar/lunar plet que se iba a ser un mínino doméstico porque si no iba a ser curandero no iba a ser nadie (esto sucedió a las 13 lunas y media de edad) Plumoso /Featherpaw fue nombrado Heysel por los dos patas, Heysel se arrepentio de volverse un mínino doméstico y fue al clan del río pero lunar plet/ manto lunar no dijo nada sobre la supuesta desaparición de Featherpaw/Plumoso ahora Heysel apareció en el campamento y su padre Estrella rojiza odiaba a los mínimos domésticos y uno una pelea verbal y física donde Heysel salió perdedor triste y devastado corrió hacia el sur pero cruzo la caza de los dos patas fue más allá del bosque y termino en un desierto. Desnutrido y sin poder caminar más se desmayo en medio del desierto y hay recibo un mensaje del clan estelar una serpiente siendo devorada por un alcon y cuando despertó era el atardecer y estaba en una caseta abandonada y un perro sin la pata delantera llamado Xolock le ofreció comida y agua y se hicieron amigos y por el mensaje del clan estelar Heysel que se auto nombró Alcon plumífero decidió volver al bosque se subieron a un tren

Name: stormtail
Sex: she-cat
Clan: thunderclan
Age: 62 moons
rank: warrior (currently a queen)

personality: fierce, headstrong, loyal, strong, gets angry easily, very sweet to friends.

likes: rabbit and fish, her mate, and hunting alone

dislikes: the other clans, her deputy, hot days, lies.

appearance: dark gray she-cat with black paws, tail and muzzle. she was named storm by her mother for she had dark blue eyes with bright blue inside, later being named tail for her very long, dark tail. she has scars over her nose and ears. has a long gash down side of body. although she has very poor eye sight, she is still an amazing hunter (better than most) and fighter.

96% yay! <3

Name: Moonfall
Age: 49 moons
Clan: Fogclan

Personality: strong, indipendent, sly swift and smart.

Appearence: A big swift she-cat, with dark blue fur and white speckles. Light blue eyes and two scars across her face making an "X". She likes to wear lillies in her fur.

Backstory: she was very close to her sister " sunbird" when they were apprentices, and still were while being warriors. Until one day the deputy suddenly annaunced that he was moving to the elders den. Moonfall, who had her eye on the deputy role for a long time was very exited, and waited in patience as the leader called a new deputy. But to her suprise, the deputy turned out to be sunbird. From that day on, she hated her sister more than anything. And it became worse when sunbird became mates with the cat Moonfall loved. Even tho she still formed a closeness to her niece, Hollypaw. They were very close and Hollypaw never told on her aunt. At the time, Moonfall was also plotting revenge for her sister, by making allies with loners and other rouge groups. When the time came, Moonfall attacked Fogclans camp, and looked for her sister in the battle. She spotted Sunstar (leader now) and got closer and closer, and right at the moment she was about to pounce, Hollysky (her niece) pushed her away and battled Moonfall to her death. But even after, she felt guilty. And on her way to the dark forest, already in spirit form, while nobody saw her, she sat by Hollysky. And later on, left.

Hope ya like it :)

Lynxheart

Clanborn, but when he was a kit his mother died due to a monster when they were out in the woods. He couldn't find his way back and for several moons hunted and fought for his life. One day his littermate found him and was overjoyed. Lynxkit mumbled in his sleep, only words a medicine cat could hear. Shining cats came down to him and said " your time is not over yet, little one. Wake up."

The knowledge of this seemed to posses lynxpaw and was in no time made a warrior, then deputy. When lynxheart spoke of his past, you could just about make out a blinding flash of white in his eyes, then if you looked into the depths of his eyes you could see stars glimmering faintly. The only cat who noticed this was a former loner. Butterpelt. A beautiful sleepfurred tabby cat with warm golden eyes. They tell in love and had 6 kits. But little did Lynxheart know there were much more challenging things ahead.

Name: OpaqueTerracota
Gender: Tom
Pronouns: He/They
Role: Elder

Fur: Cream with Reddish Dilute Brown splotches that intensifies and darken at his lower body

Personality: A raconteur elder with a burning passion for telling stories, either real or imaginative.

Lore: He was born as Opaquekit at shadowclan, his mother was a energetic and stubborn queen who tended to bring life to the nursery. He made few friends and went in a little bit of mischief but was never something serious. As a warrior he was a gentle feline yet lurked in the shadows as a true master, nimble and mysterious. Even in his senior moons he kept his strong mind and agile feet. Now hes retired and adore his calm seasons after the storms he went trough.

Name: WitheringRose (She changed it to that later on, her real name was CloudWhisker)

Gender: She-Cat

Clan: Riverclan (Now, Dark forest but whatever)

Age: Idk
Rank: Deputy

Personality: Somewhat kind yet stern, nervous, anxious, aware, and determined (How do these go together? I dont know! They just sorta do!)

Likes: Hanging out with loved ones, battle training, fresh mouse, swimming for long time periods, other

Dislikes: The dark forest, rude cats, disloyalty, dogs, and death

Appearance: A black cat with Ruby red eyes, yet ruined by the tears in her body showing bone, her face is mostly black but white takes half of it, somewhat saying she has two sides, or is two faced. Also carries a skull necklace which can become bigger and be worn as a protective face cover, or something else

Time for trauma [Warning] Kinda cringe :)

CloudWhisker was visited by a dark forest cat who gave her the necklace, and taught her how to use it, she wasnt the greatest hunter, but the necklace helped, showing her where prey was, giving her an advantage in hunting, but she didnt know that really every time she caught prey, one cat dropped dead. If she caught fish, Someone in riverclan died, she caught a rabbit, someone in wind clan died, and so on, yet she didnt know, for a little while, she soon figured it out, and you know what that means! (Here comes the big sad ) she cried for a long time but she had to keep hunting so she just never hunted fish again, soon she became deputy, and then war broke out, every clan accusing another that they were murdering their clan mates, and the she died in the war and was sent to the dark forest, even though she should have gone to starclan, because they forgave her (for some weird reason) but the dark forest cats dragged her back, into the dark depths of the forest. Only if she knew she could have taken off the skull tsk tsk. Oh well! Bye :)

Almost forgot!

Score: 81% Sure I guess, Id take anything rlly :)

Name: Mantis`Maniac, around 20-22 moons
Clan: Windclan
Pan, poly

Personality: Quiet, timid, friendly, usually hungry and nervous

Appearance: A medium she-cat with pale brown fur and a fade to darker browns at the end of her body. She has blueish green eyes. Mantis grew up in windclan with her brother, who disappeared when they were apprentices, and her mother and father. She fell in love with Crow's`Call and became mates with him but when she tried to have kits, it was a miscarriage, so she lost them. She ended up just being mates with Crow's`Call and caught sights of a she in her clan and it was love and first sight. (I have to end it there cause I got nothing else.)

Rating: 97%

Name: Smoke'Hollow, roughly 24 and a half moons

Clan: River Clan, formerly rouge
Straight

Personality: Snarky, Clever, Stubborn, Sarcastic, Hardworking and proud

Appearance: A small she-cat with ashy dark brown fur, a black under belly, black socks that go to just below her shoulders,a black tail and a black mask around her face, she has some odd little patches of white fur.She has green eyes.Smoke was found as a rouge at the border of River Clan territory at around 6 moons by a hunting patrol and chose to go with them to join the clan,luckily she was accepted and began training immediately as Smoke'Paw alongside a tom named Rain'Paw and a few others and grew into a noble young warrior named Smoke'Hollow.She eventually fell in love with Rain'Spots (was Rain'Paw) but Rain'Spots wanted kits and she didn't want kits, causing tension in their relationship.Frustrated,they quarreled constantly on this matter until Smoke'Hollow decided she was done being pressured to do something she didn't want to do, and left him.(Smoke'Hollow is still a work in progress and idk what happens from here I'm considering a villain arc I hope you enjoyed lol)

Rating: 87%

Name: Whitewish

Age: 14 years (in my fanfiction the ages are measured in years because I dont like measuring age in moons)

Gender: she-cat
Rank: medicine cat
Clan: GrainClan (fan made clan)

Appearance: white with tortoiseshell on her face, legs, and tail. Rosettes on legs and tail. Silver speckles on back and face. Left eye amber, right eye turquoise. Long legs, slim body.

Personality: shy, quiet unless shes familiar with who she is speaking to. Has her own sense of humor. Likes to think she is humble but can sometimes brag (but she tries) She tends to be more of a follower than a leader, but sometimes she tries to act like shes in charge.

Physical traits: smaller than the average cat, but not exactly tiny. Long legged, slim body. Long, plumed tail. Doesnt hunt much considering she can only catch fish and rabbits on some occasions. An ok fighter.

Relationships:
Mom: Wish (loner)
Dad: Plume (loner)
Brother: unknown (MeatClan)
Best friend: Snowcloud (Tom, ForestClan)

Crush: Jaypepper (ForestClan, handsome gray tom with golden spots and turquoise eyes. A cat named Velvetfall also has a crush on him.)

Mentors: Amaranthclaw (GrainClan, her mentor before the events of my fanfic) and Pearlwhisper (ForestClan, the cat who completed her apprenticeship)

Scoring: 82% well made