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  • @vulturemonem Yes, I hesitated over posting this for a number of reasons. I did feel it was a bit rushed (as you pointed out with the transitions), and I thought the whole family plot was a bit overdramatic. Nevertheless, I really appreciate the support and the helpful criticism. I'll definitely try to make future editions less muddled and more "up to scratch" as you said.

    Anyway, yes, I've been longing to write sixth year for a long time now. Originally, I just had ideas for Draco, but now I've got so many ideas for everyone else as well. I'm looking forward to seeing how you play out sixth year as well! :)

    music826
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  • Ah! A quick update!

    That woman is delirious. She can't actually think that Cassandra will want to go back with her after all she's done? She's a murderer, as you said. Ugh. What a horrible woman to have as a mother! Plenty of family drama there!

    Very sad. Sirius died. That always upsets me. They played that out very well in the movie, but I thought the rest of it was utterly rubbish. Loved the book though!

    I'm going to be perfectly honest here. I didn't think your transitions were quite up to scratch. I mean, they were great and everything, but they weren't up to your usual standards. I though the whole getting from the Department of Mysteries to Hogwarts part was slightly rushed, if I'm honest, but I still enjoyed this a lot!

    *sigh* Poor Harry. My heart went out to him when I first read the book, and it did now, as well, despite the fact that he was just briefly recounting events.

    My own sixth year is also the year I've been itching to write. Drama will reach top level then, and, of course, whichever character I introduce from my character contest will be wrecking havoc... I won't give away the other little, ok big, but of drama! *smirks*

    Oh Draco. You're not your father, not quite, but your father isn't as bad as he appears either. I wonder how Cassandra will react when Snape kills Dumbledore, and she learns (or sees) that Draco had everything to do with it?! I can't wait! For part 36 and part 35!

    XD

    vulturemonem
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  • @music826 I certainly hope I don't disappoint. :) Anyway, thank you so much! I agonized over the Department of Mysteries, but eventually I settled on something much less complicated than the first few ideas. I did find that chapter quite heart-breaking as well. I didn't cry, but that was mostly because I wanted to kill Bellatrix Lestrange. I didn't think I could catch the moment when Sirius died quite right, so I just opted for revealing it after the actual event.

    All in all, I'm just ecstatic to finally be at sixth year. It was one of my favorites along with Goblet of Fire and the Order of the Phoenix (I could make an argument for pretty much any of the books), and I just have so many ideas for it. I've got the next edition written, so hopefully I'll be able to post it tomorrow. :)

    music826
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  • Did I ever tell I actually cried while reading this chapter of Order of Phoenix? I still wish Sirius didn't die, he shouldn't have died. :'( This edition brought back the same memory, except that, I didn't cry this time. *tries to hide moistened eyes*

    I never expected that much drama @music826, but when I read it, I was emotionally moved. I know writing such stuff isn't easy, rather is very much difficult, but you managed to do it so smoothly that I was left in awe. It was just so- so perfect! I don't find words to describe what I really felt while reading this.

    I guessed right then. I knew it was Cassandra's mother. (: There was a lot of family drama as expected. So now, sixth year is about to start. It's my favourite year (the last one was too depressing) and I have faith in you that you'll not disappoint us.

    Great job @music826! (:

    hp4evr
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  • I wonder what the original plot was? Also I really like the option that said ^^^^*hops into dursleys car* (me:do you really want to do that) *pulls Harry out of car* I just thought it was absolutely hilarious. Although I wish I had called Ron a right foul git at some point. @music826, do you think it would be okay if I used your 'my parents a death eater idea'? I just really think that puts a twist in things.

    Blahh45
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  • Oops, I just put @music826. This is why I shouldn't post these after midnight. :P

    music826
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