Hogwarts Love Story Pt 7 | Comments

@natuhleegayle Thanks :D I love to write :) But it's a bit hard right now, because I have a story I need to write in school, the third part of my quiz-series and a little story I'm writing just for fun... It takes a lot of my creativity, and I'm almost always with writer's block...

@Kaitlin1 998 You think I don't want romance between the girl and Oliver? Then you're terribly wrong xD I was just thinking that if it was too much romantic things, it wouldn't be so fair to Draco-lovers, Harry-lovers, Neville-lovers, Fred-and-George-lov ers etc...

Part 8?? :D

Make the next on soon and have you (me, whoever) go back to Hogwarts nad find out she is failing potions and has to Hhave Draco tutor her,(Prfessor Snape said so) then Harry finds out and think something is going on between them so he tells Oliver then Oliver pulls you aside, askinng all these quetions when suddenly break down from stress and just cry into, him then Peeves should spread it around the whole school, and then Amber should be mad at you for no apparent reason. Yeah, thats all I got. And that was one rally long run on. LoL.

XD

I also had a suggestion. For the next quiz you may have one be he kisses you and for the answers they can be like you kiss him back, pull away, etc. And then th next question can involve then he says or you say....

Oliver

._. next one - PLEASE. Please please please

@AiFiahK3mE your idea was great but i think it should be more romantice.i mean the way they talk to each other or the way they act.

No you the charactor I think I've made it clear I don't like Amber ( Because even though she said I could call her that you don't) I hope it helps

An Ugly past or flash back anyone?! I'd like it if she would talk about why she is so friggen sensitive. Maybe she has an ugly scar, or tradgic past? Something to take away from her. You said that there are a million things wronge with her think of some get creative! Good luck! :)

@natuhleegayle Hmm, I've got some ideas, but I don't know if they'll work. I'd need to know how much you already wrote, and I don't think you want to tell me what is going to happen in the next part. But here's something I thought of, parting from the sneak peak you gave to us:

"Why aren't you leaving?" You cried as you had your back face towards Oliver, with your hand on the iron fence. Your voice cracked and it was obvious to Oliver that you're about bawl your eyes out. "Just tell me one thing, did you feel anything? Between the both of you..." He said, you couldn't identify whether he was hurt or furious at you, you turned around to see that his eyes showed remorse and that he wasn't mad. "It meant nothing." You said holding back your tears, his face seemed to lip up and he took a step closer to you "Really?" He said now staring face to face at you, you looked up at him and wiped your tears "Absolutely nothing." He brought his hands up to your face and used his thumb to wipe any excess tears "Tell me if you feel anything between us." he said, and kissed you. It was just a quick kiss, just enough for you to be able to tell if you felt anything or not. "So?" he asked, after he pulled away. His face didn't show any emotion, but his eyes were completely a different thing. "I-I don't know... It didn't mean nothing, like it did with Ron, but I think I need to think over it for a while" you said, still a little shocked over that he'd kissed you even though what Ron said. You saw what looked a little like dispointment in his eyes, but he just said: "Okay, then. But promise me you'll tell me as soon as you figure out what you felt, okay?" You just nodded. You really didn't know your feelings right now.

Wow, that was longer then I thought, in order to don't make it longer, I'll just put it like this: Oliver and the girl continue the date, but it feels a little awkward. After the date is over, they go back to Hogwarts(separated) , and Ambrosia attacks the girl

srry i wrote wrong.

NOOOOO!!!*cries*

When is the next one coming out?? I got Harry! YAY!

umm....well rite nw im out of ideas xD bt i think the person who said the thing abt amberoisa (idk hw to spell it) is a good idea. oh nd my friend said that yu shud hv a fight btween me nd ron. xD

your welcome ;)

@Kaitlin1998 thank you for agreeing with me. :D

lol...um im online nw....nd i'll be online for the rest of tha nite so imma jush ask yu on msn bt yu nt replyin to my msgs so irdk wad to do =S

sweet..nd yar im online rite nw bt yurr nt replyin =(

hey! ^_^ natuhleegayle, r yu busy on msn cuz yur nt replyin nd um...did yu make any more questions for the quiz?