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  • Hello there sweeties! Yes, I haven't been updating you on what's going on but here we go.

    First off, thanks for all of your wonderful ideas! It certainly made the progression of the story easier but even though @Aria stated that part 7.2 is coming out really soon, I still need to go over everything and make sure everything makes sense & etc.

    @Obssions0112 - Ah! I see, I'll have to think of something then!

    @eyeofawol f22 - I'm sorry. I'm really unsure of your second suggestion. Mind rephrasing it for me? (:

    @PersonXD - You're making me really wish Pt 7.2 was done, so I can go further on into the story. I simply love the "Draco tutoring the main character in Potions" I'm sure the Draco-fans will love to see that !

    @AiFiahK3mE - Ah! I see! Oh! You write your own quizzes too? I'll check them out when I get the chance, I'm sure your quizzes will be amazing, considering what you gave me for an idea. I'm sure you'll break out of that writer's block faster than me!

    I'm trying my best to get the next part on as soon as possible, I just had midterm marks mailed out to my parents, so it was a bit of a handful. Anyways, next week from Nov 24 - Nov 28th. I'll be in the states, so I'm hoping that Part 7.2 will be posted before then.

    Massive thank you to everyone & hope you all have a magical day (: x

    natuhleegayle
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  • @Obsession0112 I don't mind you talking about Ambrosia that way. I'm not that good but what you said gave me a great idea for the story! Thanks! & if you want to give features to your characters attitude! Please feel free to request (:

    @Laya_9 Awe, so sweet :$ I'm not perfect, to be honest I'm still a novice & this is the first story I've continued for more than 5 chapters. I really need to thank you all & I love you all, reading your comments definitely put a smile on my face. I love when a new edition commes out ! Stay tune for more !

    Majority wants the holiday specials, keep watch for the Christmas Special ! x

    natuhleegayle
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  • Make the next on soon and have you (me, whoever) go back to Hogwarts nad find out she is failing potions and has to Hhave Draco tutor her,(Prfessor Snape said so) then Harry finds out and think something is going on between them so he tells Oliver then Oliver pulls you aside, askinng all these quetions when suddenly break down from stress and just cry into, him then Peeves should spread it around the whole school, and then Amber should be mad at you for no apparent reason. Yeah, thats all I got. And that was one rally long run on. LoL.

    XD

    PersonXD
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  • Yeah, I know. I go a little overboard while writing the questions, what can I say? I want to give you all the experience of actually being inside Hogwarts. For those of you who wonder about the newest character "Ambrosia" She will be your companion for the rest of the story, a character I created. Her name is Ambrosia Jeanette Delrima, hope you welcome her! Any request you can email it to me at rawrnedly@hotmail(. )com. Stay Magical x

    natuhleegayle
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  • My quizzes take a long process to be written. I hand write them which makes me read them over, edit them and rephrase questions which usually takes up my whole day & I am a Grade 11 student, so University is a priority. I'm also a part of my student council so I stay numerous hours after school. It takes a few weeks, sadly months but Pt 7.2 should be up, in a few weeks.

    natuhleegayle
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  • Oh, it becomes that realistic...I'm terribly sorry if this became a very serious problem but we all have that celebrity that we love. I have millions of celebrities that I love but being realistic, it will take so much effort and dedication for them to notice us, it's nice to have someone you love, admire. We just need to take the time to wait till we find someone who feels the same way about us.

    natuhleegayle
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  • @natuhleegayle Don't be so sure I'll get out of my writer's block so soon... I'm using my whole creativity right now on the story for the school, and I'm just in part three. We are supposed to write something that isn't so long, but not so short either, and right now I'm trying really hard to not make a book of it >.> Oh, and it's happening something really weird with the second part of my quizzes. It doesn't show up even if you search for it >.> I think GoToQuiz hates me...

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • Hey guys, this is kind of disappointing. I'm pretty much stuck or at writer's block with 7.2. I've already written 5 questions but I'm afraid I have to rewrite them, with that said, I really need some ideas. I've already had ideas from @Obsession0112 & @AiFaihK3mE. Anyone with ideas, please send them forward.

    natuhleegayle
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  • @Aria - Thanks for the wishings hun x

    @Fred4ever - Massive thank you x I'm glad you enjoy it & thanks so much for helping me out of a predicament. I've been meaning to figure out how else am I going to incorporate the twins into the stories now a days & you'll find out (:

    natuhleegayle
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  • @natuhleegayle Thanks :D I love to write :) But it's a bit hard right now, because I have a story I need to write in school, the third part of my quiz-series and a little story I'm writing just for fun... It takes a lot of my creativity, and I'm almost always with writer's block...

    @Kaitlin1 998 You think I don't want romance between the girl and Oliver? Then you're terribly wrong xD I was just thinking that if it was too much romantic things, it wouldn't be so fair to Draco-lovers, Harry-lovers, Neville-lovers, Fred-and-George-lov ers etc...

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • I hope I don't offend anyone by saying Ambrosia seems like a horrible person. I don't know she just seems like the kind of girl whose friends with you when your populare but leaves you when your not. Any who I don't trust her with anything for a minute. I'm not buying it I only wish that my charactor thought more like me... But if she did she would have hit every one in the story by now... Oh well

    Obssions0112
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  • Draco Malfoy

    Yeah, I get it. You're not big on Quidditch players but I think you have a thing for an ex Quidditch player, let me guess, he goes by the name of Draco Malfoy? C'mon girl, you're on your date! There's not time to be thinking about Draco! ...Well, okay. Just this once!

    First thingz first,YAY!specialz? epic idea!! Also, this is the first time I got draco!!yay!*happy dance*i know what's happening next,he'll kiss me. Just great!(Sarcasticall y)it's okay,I'll suffer....oh yea,by the way can I send you a picture of draco malfoy for the next one?(It's amazing and makes his hair look awesome!!reallyy!I' m not joking!) O.M.G! Ron just told oliver!I....just feel like swearing at him!!&when I checked after school if you'd finished this one I screamed!!

    So yea,I'll scream when the next one's out!
    Love you&your epic quizzes!!

    xXa_bl ack_roseXx (aka.frizzy_hair_gi rl&xXemoexc eptionXx) ;D

    xXa_black_roseXx
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  • @natuhleegayle Hmm, I've got some ideas, but I don't know if they'll work. I'd need to know how much you already wrote, and I don't think you want to tell me what is going to happen in the next part. But here's something I thought of, parting from the sneak peak you gave to us:

    "Why aren't you leaving?" You cried as you had your back face towards Oliver, with your hand on the iron fence. Your voice cracked and it was obvious to Oliver that you're about bawl your eyes out. "Just tell me one thing, did you feel anything? Between the both of you..." He said, you couldn't identify whether he was hurt or furious at you, you turned around to see that his eyes showed remorse and that he wasn't mad. "It meant nothing." You said holding back your tears, his face seemed to lip up and he took a step closer to you "Really?" He said now staring face to face at you, you looked up at him and wiped your tears "Absolutely nothing." He brought his hands up to your face and used his thumb to wipe any excess tears "Tell me if you feel anything between us." he said, and kissed you. It was just a quick kiss, just enough for you to be able to tell if you felt anything or not. "So?" he asked, after he pulled away. His face didn't show any emotion, but his eyes were completely a different thing. "I-I don't know... It didn't mean nothing, like it did with Ron, but I think I need to think over it for a while" you said, still a little shocked over that he'd kissed you even though what Ron said. You saw what looked a little like dispointment in his eyes, but he just said: "Okay, then. But promise me you'll tell me as soon as you figure out what you felt, okay?" You just nodded. You really didn't know your feelings right now.

    Wow, that was longer then I thought, in order to don't make it longer, I'll just put it like this: Oliver and the girl continue the date, but it feels a little awkward. After the date is over, they go back to Hogwarts(separated) , and Ambrosia attacks the girl

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • To be honest, I tried creating a date for the quizzes to be up but it doesn't work. I usually leave comments on my latest edition when the next part will be up judging by how much is left to do. It took me 3 weeks to post up this edition from the last one. If you want to talk to me about how it's coming along, just ask (:

    natuhleegayle
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  • I totally understand where you're coming from, my friend asked to write him a story for his Greek Mythology assignment but I ended up making it 375 words when it was 150. Oh, what's the title of your story called? Good Luck x :)

    natuhleegayle
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  • Hehehehehehehehehee ee!!!!! I'm super DUPER excited for the next one!! Please hurry? I'm sorry I know we urge you and rush you and you have the stories have to be perfected (btw it's already perfect!!) but we're all into it so any free time you have can you finish the quizzes?? Anyways I think you're a talented person with wonderful creativity!! I can't wait for 7.2!! So please hurry.. But you're awesome!!! I just LOVE you're quizzes/stories!! Please please hurry? We all cannot bear the wait. We love you and we can't wait! Please hurry??

    Laya_9
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  • @Obssions0112: Who are you referring to? The main character or Ambrosia? I will, I just need a little creative push. x

    @AiFiahK3mE: I simply adore what you've added. Pretty stuck on what should happen next after that! Thanks, you'll most likely see it in the next edition! x

    natuhleegayle
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  • nd i cried wen i found out yu stopped at pt 7. thing is...i love evrytin abt HP. Wen i wz 1 yr old, i honestly wz readin harry potter bks and natuhleegayle, yu make evrytin seem so real but i ask you one favor, can yu plzzzzz plzzz put up tha other part cuz i reeli want to knw whats gonna be goin on wid me and oliver. ive grown attached to yur quizzes and hogwarts is a perfect distraction|relaxat ion for me but umm....in one hr, i finished all yur quizzes and i strted to take them bck nd i kept waiting for the others but i hvent seen one up...plzz put up the other part for 7.

    Aria
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  • @AiFiahK3mE I checked out the song "Promise me" by Dead by April. It's absolutely amazing, it actually fits the part. You've given my a story idea! Thank you! This song is just amazing by the way !

    natuhleegayle
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  • idea - ok i don't know if you will need this but - after whatever with oliver, you still need to get something for malfoy and give it to him, so when you come out of the hospital wing, fred & george could be comming back from quidditch practice, so you could talk to them then - i just kindda thought of it of the top of my head, you most likey already have something done but thought i might give you my pro idea!!!! Tee Hee, love ya! :)xoxoxox

    fred4ever
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  • An Ugly past or flash back anyone?! I'd like it if she would talk about why she is so friggen sensitive. Maybe she has an ugly scar, or tradgic past? Something to take away from her. You said that there are a million things wronge with her think of some get creative! Good luck! :)

    Obssions0112
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  • How do you guys feel about holiday specials? I can't do halloween special since today is Halloween. I'm for sure going to do a christmas, new year, valentine day & probably birthday specials. So, what do you say? (: By the way, have a magical halloween! X

    natuhleegayle
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  • Okay. Special message to Ron(Weasley): THIS IS WAR!!! YOU'RE GOING TO REGRET MESSING WITH ME!!! >:-(

    I just found this part, and it took like, FOREVER for me to gather "courage" enough to continue reading when Ron came in, and said *that*. Make the next part soon, please? Oh, and I'd love to tell Oliver in the next part when he asks if I feel something between us, I'd LOVE to tell him yes. Please? Make next part soon :D

    AiFiahK3mE
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  • Ahaa, not really. You're not really with Oliver, so if you got someone other than Oliver during the date, it's not exactly real between the both of you despite what I write.

    natuhleegayle
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  • Also, thank you so much for putting "Hogwarts Love Story Pt 5" onto the homepage! I was really hoping I'd post 7.2 before it showed though. Anyways, wish me luck !

    natuhleegayle
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