How Original Is Your Warrior Cats OC? | Comments, Page 4
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well this is my next time making the quiz with my other oc bright'leaf. (you didnt have so you could choose med cat on what role they die with). Bright leaf was born in riverclan and befriended another cat the same age nearly. but when the leader died the new leader wanted the clan to be pure and bright leafs friend werent so her friend ran away. soon they met again when they were warriors and bright leaf decided to ran away with her friend. she learnt herbs while they were rouges but were soon found by a thunderclan patrol. a thunderclan cat recognised bright leaf from when she distracted the river clan warriors so her friend was able to flee. they kindly took bright leaf and her friend in as warriors but thunderclan had no med cat! so bright leaf took on the job and is still livin to this day
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My OC's name is River, She is a blue she-cat with dark yellowish-green eyes, (This backstory has a relation to World War 2, just letting yall know) When River was a young kit, her father was the probably the most protective of her since she had resembled her mother and well.. her mother had drowned in a RIVER- (Maybe not the best idea to have named your child after the thing your mate drowned in :/ ) They lived in the Soviet Union, Stalingrad. River was going to ask her father a question about their lives until enemy planes flew in to destroy the city (Related to the actual event in the invasion of Stalingrad) and her father grabbed her and retreated to try and protect themselves from the danger and explosions. They ran to cross a road untila tank was flying down that same road, River's father had no choice but to sacrafice himself to protect River and pretty much yeeted her across the road and was ran over brutally by the tank. River then looked up at the sky and declared to avenge her father one day out of sorrow (Anime main character moment). She than ran away from home into another country,. She came back to her home a couple years later and soon met her mate Snowflake, a white tom with ruby eyes, and they bad kits together. The she-cat that looked like a copy of her father was named Diamond, her brother was a all blue tom named Hawk (*Cough*, spolier, he becomes a evil leader and tries to murder his clan, *Cough*) When Diamond was chasing a squrriel toward the road, when River called out to her she turned around and smiled at her mom, thinking her mom was proud she was chasing the squrriel. River then recieved small flashbacks to her fathers death as Diamond was being ran over by the car. Snowflake told River she was a terrible mother for letting her get hit and doing nothing about it (THEN WHY DIDNT YOU DO ANYTHING SNOWFLAKE, Sorry i had to), River soon realized this was her time to avenge both Diamond and her father. She murdered Snowflake as a result and Haw
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Here's my friends oc... I'm letting her type :)
My oc is Blowdrop. She is a fluffy gray she-cat but she starts out as a loner. Though she has a fluffy apperance her personality is the exact opposite. She has a tough, cold-hearted personality and has a quick temper. She found herself in the borders of Windclan. She soon joined them and met Boulderfoot, who is the father of her kits. After the kits were born she unexpectally left Windclan a mess and joined Riverclan. She then met another tom, Whitereed, and had his kits. After the three kits of Whiereed were born, she snuck out and hid in Shadowclan. To no one's surprise she met another tom named Pineshadow and had his five kits. She escaped to Thunderclan and met Shortstorm, the deputy. She had his kits but before they were born he died. After the kits were born she was elected to be the new deputy before Thunderclan was informed of what she has done and was exiled and died.
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My oc is Brokenstorm. He is a base-black tom with multiple gray and golden patches, some being striped with darker gray, or even white. Though his name sounds fairly edgy, he is actually very pleasant. His personality consists of being well-mannered, loyal, strong-minded, and caring (though, he does have quite a temper!) His mother's name is Whitewillow (a white tabby with golden eyes) and his father's name is Blackpool (a black tortoise-shell). His mother named him Brokenkit, because his pelt reminded her of broken-up puddles of water.
He once took a liking to a generally popular she-cat named Adderfoot (a loosely patched white tortoiseshell) but she did not feel the same for him. A few moons after that (enough time to where it was the next year) the Clan camp caught on fire, and Adderfoot's kits where stuck inside. All of the other cats were much too terrified to go back in to save them, so Brokenstorm went back to retrieve them. During this time, his right eye was burned, along with a small area around it. Adderfoot then accused him of doing this to get her to like him, which he had no intention to do. From then on, his Clanmates- including Adderfoot- attempted to avoid him, unless they physically could not, and he went on about his days half-blind.
I would like to know if anyone who sees this thinks Brokenstorm is a good oc! (I'm not all that good at explaining things like these.)
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Btw! If any of you guys reading this wants to know anything further, ask me the question you want an answer to! It might take me a while, because I'm one of the most forgetful people on this planet
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What clan?
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Thunderclan... I've also thought about it more, and the "era" he lives in is where the leader is named Darkstar (I know the name is pretty basic), the deputy being Violetfoot, and these two cats are evil.
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ALSO! (Sorry) If you want a better idea of how the story/rp (if possible) would play out, just listen to the song "You Belong Here"
Hmm idk1
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Birch'flight: White tabby with yellow-ish orange underbelly, tail, and back legs, has black stripes and green-ish yellow eyes.
Turtlepelt: a emerald eyed calico she-cat with dark brown splotches on her side in a turtle shape.
Whisper of fallen water: a black tom with white stripes and white-ish blue eyes.
Jay that sings at dawn: light grey tom with blue eye (left) and a green eye (right) darker grey stripes, black muzzle and paws, fur is feather soft
Willow that sways in wind: brown she-cat with green eyes and black stripes, has 1 black paw and tail is pure black
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My OC is PebbleShade
She is a white She-Cat with Silver and Slate Grey splotches from her back to her face. Her right ear is Silver and her left ear is Slate Grey. Her front toes are Silver and her back toes are Slate Grey. Her Tail tip is Slate Grey and her eye color is Emerald Green. She is a RiverClan warrior. She is usually annoyed of kits, but she still loves mentoring apprentices. She is ambitious and sneaky. Though she hates her little brother, which is still a new warrior, she still loves him in her heart.
PebbleShade's Kit-Hood was pretty boring. At that time, there were barely any kits. Most of the kits has died of Green-Cough. Her dad died when she was 3 moons old from Green-Cough as well. Her mom abused her but nobody knew about that.
She then became an apprentice and trained with the other apprentices. She never wanted to go back since hanging out with friends made her feel better from living with an abuser. She was happy since now she does not live in the same den as her mother's.
She then became a warrior and received the suffix "Shade" for her shady attitude. Her brother was really annoying to her at this rank. He kept asking questions on how it was like being a warrior. She hated that and yowled at him annoyed. Her mom was furious and clawed her to the ground. But everyone saw what she did and she was exiled for almost killing PebbleShade. Now everyone knows why PebbleShade was shady. Now, she is super happy but still has a bit of "shade" inside of her.
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My OC is Cloverstar, she was leader of CloverClan but her deputy/brother killed her in order to become leader. Cloverstar was kinda cruel, but she always thought she was in the right. In StarClan, she was reunited with her, little sister who died. She also watched the war that happened all because of her death, and in the end she and most of StarClan had to interfere with the battle.
Cloverstar was born into a group called Ices Group at the time. She was named Clover when she was born.
Cloverstar is a thin, short furred, light gray tabby shecat with a long scar down her side, as well as bright orange eyes.
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Name: Runningshadow, eventually Runningstar
Age: Dunno yetDescription: Black, Fluffy, Pale Green Eye, Left Eyes Blind, Torn ear, a scar on her front leg and spine, white toes and freckles? (Just face spots around muzzle)
Clan: SkyClan (unless I change my mind and use an Oc Clan)
Extra: She lead a rebellion to eradicate borders after creating allies with at least one of the other Clans- theres gonna be some ordeal with StarClan wanting to stop her because that would mean less power for them, shes part of a prophecy sent from the higher power (this higher power has been hinted at in the actual books- they control the clouds over the moon, the prophecys powers etc..) and that is why StarClan is disagreeing with this whole thing. Her power i think is going to be mild shape shifting- like she cant turn into a dragon obviously but you get the point
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Name: HawkGlade
Age: (Dunno Yet)Colouring: A Light Brown Tabby Tom With A Cream Underbelly and Muzzle. The stripes on his back are a darker brown
Backstory:
HawkGlade lived in Riverclan happily with his mate and 3 kits until one night they had a fight, his mate, WilllowWhisper took the kits and left him, HawkGlade carried a broken heart for a very long time. He became a rogue due to his anger and grief blinding him (also sorry I suck at writing backstories) He followed the path of the dark forest for many moons until Starclan punished him. This punishment was to put him back on the path of good again. He fell into the Thunder clan camp and broke a rib, forcing him to stay there until it healed. Hawk was caught in a fire that ravaged through the camp and suffered greatly from smoke inhalation, giving him a nasty cough for life. HawkGlade was bound to the Thunderclan medicine den until his cough took his life. A sweet elderly she cat, HawkWing who took care of him until his last days...
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My oc is a Stormclan tom named Scorchspots. He is a creme colored cat with brown patches and golden eyes. he is very self-centered and only cares about himself and his son, a former kittypet who's mother and siblings died in a dog attack before being adopted by the warrior.
Currently he resides in starclan after a fight with the medicine cat caused him to abandon the clan and in the process he was hit by a car. He now blames the medicine cat for his death and haunts him excessivly.
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My Oc is a Ginger Tom named Atlas. Atlas has one Orange eye and one Green eye. His Fur color is a bit similar to FireStar. He was once a happy Kittypet, but was abondoned by his owner. He still wears his Cyan collar and still wants to remember his past owner. He became a Rogue after being thrown into the wild and was welcomed by the Rogues. Atlas developed the lifestile of a Stealer. Once, he was caught by a Windclan Warrior, but managed to escape.
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my OC's Name is Shadowpelt. She is the main character in her book.
Shadowpelt is a dark grey She-cat with lighter areas on her snout, underbelly and the tip of her tail. she has a long poofy tail, blue eyes and a scar on the right side of her face her brother gave to her when he betrayed her clan.
Shadowpelt is still young she is 8 moons old.
Shadowpelt is a very strong, sassy warrior of Shadeclan. She keeps her opinion to herself most of the time but when she needs to she shares it.
her mother is Willowtail, a strong clan born senior warrior, and her father is a calico kittypet named Patch. Shadowpelt has a twin sister and 2 twin brothers. her twin sister is Callie, her twin brothers are Sunny, and Socks. Callie is a small calico kittypet, Sunny is a mainly golden yellow calico and Socks is a dark grey kittypet with light grey paws. Shadowpelt also has and older brother, Shadeclaw a light grey warrior of Darkclan, he betrayed his clan and ran away to Darkclan after a near death attack by a fox.
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My oc is lochstar, (stream) a mostly white, light blue-gray she, with light tawny spots, and pool-blue eyes, with burns down her left side. She was a kittypet accepted into her clan after a fire, she was often teased, as you would expect, but the leader at that time , Froststar, accepted her into meadow-colony, and had a prophecy the prophecy foretold five cats leading their clans to New adventures on an island. Lochstar was one of those cats, and was accepted into the prophecy. becoming one of the youngest leaders, along with her brother, sagestar. (Whisker)
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My OC is MidnightStrike. They are nonbinary and their pronouns are he/they. They were born and raised in Wind Clan. He has pitch black fur with a grey heart on his chest. They are kind, gentle and reserved. He is open to taking care of any kit who needs it. They lost their mother, RavenShade when he was an apprentice. They have long legs and are swift on their paws. He took care of Coal Kit once, who's mother was searching for her lost son. After gaining the leader's trust they became deputy. They died before they became a leader due to a group of badgers who attacked their camp. He has had a mate, NightWing.
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My character's name is Taintedslumber. He's been through many roles, but the one I used for the quiz is a med. He's black with gold flecks and undertones, with golden eyes and bright pink and brown spotted paw pads/nose.
He's not evil, but his mothers were cast out for betrayal. He's trying to rid them from his mind however.
Won't share much more, but two canon quotes (from different times in RP) are
"I guess my bloodline is 'Tainted' with betrayal, hmm?" -Evil path
"My name may be 'Tainted', but my bloodline is not!" -Current path
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My OC is Silvershine.
She is a short legged, fluffy pale brown and pale cream she-cat originally a medicine cat from RiverClan trained in RiverClan by Stoneheart and Leapinglily (before she died) that came to ThunderClan after there medicine cat Oatfur died. Originally she left to help ThunderClan and train a medicine cat for them then go back to ThunderClan but she found that she actually liked ThunderClan a lot. She still trained a medicine cat in Fawnpaw to Fawnspot then she returned to RiverClan. Her clan welcomed her back but she found herself unhappy with the RiverClan life she had originally loved and after a moon of being in RiverClan she left again and went back to ThunderClan where she found herself happy again. ThunderClan was happy to have her back, Fawnspot was struggling and really nervous with her work alone in the medicine den and the clan could tell, Hazelkit is also requesting to be a medicine apprentice for her apprentice ceremony and Fawnspot is anxious about taking on an apprentice so early.
With Silvershine back in ThunderClan, everyone is calm and happy. ThunderClan loses the leader Dunestar to the last leader Goldstar in the Dark Forest and Sunstreak takes over, becoming Sunstar, Hazelkit is apprenticed to Fawnspot and Silvershine now Hazelpaw and now life seems good? A cat appeared from the other clans, FireClan, LightClan, NightClan and WaterClan, Ravenpaw and joined ThunderClan. This was a while ago back when Silvershine was first in ThunderClan. Ravenpaw turns to Ravensong while Silvershine was back in RiverClan. Silvershine and Ravensong fell in love and problem, there both she-cats (yes gay cats deal with it) Silvershine gets pregnant (By a rouge tom willing to help them called Comet). The two she-cats leave the camp so Silvershine can have the kits and they return saying there Ravensongs, pinning the fatherhood on Silvershines brother Rootclaw back in RiverClan as they were both showing interest in each other before. Ravensong is sh
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it cut off my whole backstory
Ravensong is shamed for having a half clan relationship but the clan accepts it. Silvershine jumps in and takes the place of the other parent for the kits because thats allowed deal with it. Hazelpaw turns to Hazeltail and many seasons after there kits turn warriors, Silvershine and Ravensong retire to the elders den together and die in the same rockslide as Sunstar, leading to the leadership of Tallfire turned Tallstar. from StarClan Silvershine and Ravensong lead Hazeltail and Fawnspot and there kits through there lives. They live happily ever after together in StarClan with there family and friends, watching over all eight clans.
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The kits names are Auburnkit, Sablekit and Shortkit
Comet is a leggy gold tom with black spots, big ears and a short tail
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My OC is Casper, A white and fluffy cat with one black paw and ear (Witch is torn). He is a rouge living in the barn and has an ordinary life. He was originally a kittypet, but decided he hated being pampered, so he ran off and found a barn he now lives in. He lives there happily and hopefully gets himself into a prophecy. (He does somehow know about starclan but he has mutual feelings for it.)
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Maybe he could find out about Starclan by passing a patrol of Clan cats and they were talking about it?
Hmm idk1
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My Oc Thistleblue is a blue and cream dilute tortie with a lot of white marking and lavender eyes. (she comes from a clan that's basically my made up Skyclan where when they settled down in the gorge, half of the clan wanted to continue despite risking Starclan no longer being able to follow them)
She lives with the SkyCats in a massive hollow tree surrounded by 6ft tall grass fields. Thistleblue is raised during a war with a fox group called the skulk where the war has been going for many generations.
Everyone in the clan sees her either as some sort of prodigy destined to become the leader or just some overachiever, all the other apprentices don't like her since she became a warrior extremely early. The only reason this happened is that her father Lynxtuft is deputy, and wants above all else that she becomes a deputy at his side when he becomes leader. Her mother Rosecry is a mostly-blind Medicine cat who broke up with her father in the past due to (things that will be revealed). And her extremely sensitive sister Mournpaw who is Rosecrys apprentice and failing miserably at most things. Basically, a lot of family drama only gets worse when (spoilers) it reveals that Rosecry is kinda very evil and murders a warrior, the leader and tries to murder her father.
on the other side of the story, we have a kind of Romeo and Juliet/forbidden relationship story, with Thistleblue meeting one of the fox's, relating to them and they slowly become great friends over the story. There's much more but it's too much to write
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Try the Warrior Cats Animo
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My OC is Emberclaw (hence my name). Ember is a stocky, strong calico she-cat, with cream-gold eyes. Well, eye. I'll get to that later. While on a midnight walk with her rouge mother, she was swept up by an owl. When flying above the mountains, another owl tried to take her from the first one's talons, resulting in a talon to er face that left the entire left side (eye, ear, part of the nose) disfigured. She was dropped by the combating owls, falling to the ground. She would have bled out, if not found by Sootmaw, a warrior of Dawnclan. Dawnclan is the remnants of the half of the tribe that stayed behind in the dawn of the clans series. They accepted her in, despite having a missing left eye and torn ear. Also a couple scars of her back, from the talons. She's humorous, warm and kind, but she can be extremely stubborn and even aggressive when mad. Her mentor as an apprentice was Aquatuft. She has an amazing sense of touch and surprisingly good smell. She is good at hunting burrowing prey.
lol i dont have any more to say
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My OC is a Loner who left her clan. Her apprentice name was Freepaw, but she changed it to Tally when she left. She has a dark brown pelt with a black stripe down her back, a white crescent on her head, white toes, and black socks. She was mated to an abusive Shadow clan cat. He took their kit to Shadowclan where it died. She later mated with a loner known as Skip. They have two kits. They live in an abandoned two leg nest. Her personality is very gentle and calm. She has a lot of fears and is very protective of her kits til they left to join the clans.
Any advice on making her a better character?
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My OC is called Lightningblaze. He is born in the future when the clans have a less flawed society (a council, more roles etc.). He takes down a Windclan cat called Cinderstorm who wants to revert the clans to the old ways because Starclan is covering the stars (it's actually pollution). He used to be called Littlekit, as his mother died giving birth to him and his sister and she named his sister (Curlpuddle), but died before she could name him. His father, Stormhead, refused to name him, he was determined that Littlekit's mother Fernstripe would send a sign to what his name would be. Everyone teased him for it until he got lost sneaking out of camp in a storm as a kit. He got struck by Lightning and died, but was sent back to life by his mother, who said that the Clans needed him, much to the objections of Firestar. He gets his new name, Lightningkit. He doesn't have powers, but he does have a neutral side effect from being hit by lightning and being brought back to life. He randomly spasms and lightning flickers out of his claws. He has hurt several of his Clanmates with this, but can also harness it in battle.
He also ends up taking down the dark forest itself (not cats from it, but the immortal manifestiation of the dark forest itself).
He has a mate from Windclan (Aurburntail), who joined Thunderclan to be with Lightningblaze and to get away from Cinderstorm. In the future they have a better warrior code, that among many improvements, states that if you are in love with a cat from a different Clan, you must join the same Clan one way or another.
That's all.
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I actually only made my OC a few days ago, and havent even thought about their backstory yet. Her name is Cherryclaw, and shes a ginger and white tabby with yellow eyes. Shes based off of one of my very old and very cringy OCs. I tried to make her character better and less generically edgy. Shes fierce and dedicated to her clan (I dont know which clan yet). Shes a young warrior who thinks she can boss everyone around. Again, still working on this character! (You guys can rate her if you want)
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I dont get why my apostrophes wont show up eek
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My OC is Featherpaw! They are a she-cat but is bisexual and/or pansexual. She has a tan pelt but also has tan and brown patterns. She is a very fluffy she, but also has a blind eye. She is in Riverclan, but was previously a loner from when her mother took her away from her birthclan, Thunderclan. She has a mentor called Rosefall, the deputy of Riverclan, and two bestfriends named Deadpaw and Sheeppaw. She has had strange dreams, but no prochecys yet. She is 7 moons and has not met her family/kin before except her mother, Berryleaf, who is now dead. Her backstory is... When Featherpaw was just a kit, she was taken by her mother to go live life as a loner. She met two she-cats, Apple and Slipper. They grew up together for a couple moons, but one day, Feather went missing. Where did she go? Well, her mother was an elder now, and she had taken Feather to Riverclan. In Riverclan, she met Deadkit and Sheepkit. They became friends quickly, and became apps together. There is where I left it off ( I know, I know -_- ). I hope to continue this role play later!
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My oc is Mercuryvine. He's a white tom with gray and ginger striped spots, He has heterochromia,one eye blue and one yellow. He has a scar over his right eye,making that eye slightly damaged. Personality: He's relatively chill,though will be extremely sarcastic and sassy if he feels like it lmao. Uhh,idk he's a relatively new oc so I haven't thought about this alot.. uh..His lore ig; Mercurykit was born to Batfang(mom) and Quickspots(dad) He was later apprenticed to Silverecho,who later died of a severely infected wound. He was given his warrior name Mercuryvine blah blah blah..all basic stuff but uhh yep! My goofy lil fella
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My OC is Snake tail,A brown tomorrow with A torn ear, and one to Manny snake-bites.When he was a kit, He wandered too far off of Wc territory and a adder bit him in the leg too many times, so it had to get Amputated. He was in the med den for 5 moons, and when he finally became an app, he was almost a full warrior. His Clan mates bullied him, but when he was a warrior in a quarter-moon, He was made deputy, then leader.