Cursed Pt 1 | Comments

Oh yea what's ur bet childhood memory? Mine is between going to sleep on my bed and then waking up the net morning my my parents bed and thinking I teleported ( a fact that might have been made with Bella's world) . OR almoust peeing my pants right before going on my first roller costed and when I got seated and i had one belt and my parents had two and I didn't know how to put it on so I squermined in my seat and started freaking out so much and I turned around calling for help to a helper but that helper was busy so I was peeing my pants and when I turned around I thought I might has died till I saw another helper right I front of me smiling. Gosh, after that roller costed I wanted to go on another one and another one but still embarrassed by that.

This. Was. Awesome. Seriously, it was. You just need to work a bit on your spelling, and not to jump between parts. For example, you never said the bus arrived at Bella's home, she got out of it and entered her house. She just was suddenly wrapped in a warm blanket drinking coffee... It was kinda confusing :/ But otherwise, like I said, THIS IS AWESOME :D Like, the dream/flashback in the beginning? Such a good introduction :D Usually, stories start with "You wake up because of the alarm clock going off" or something like that, but this? Hell no, it starts immediately with an awesome dream about the protagonist's past ^-^

Didn't u already make another one just like this?

Oh and I love ur name for gotoquiz. BUUUTTT it's not as awesome as mine. BABY PUFFBALL RULES THE WORLD!!!

:O. That's really good!!!! PART TWO!!!

Oh ok then

Ooops I meant nameS

FANTASTIC quiz I LOVED it!!!!!!!! And when re you goin to make the next one?!?!?!?!?