Dark and other people who are amazing writers,
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Thread Topic: Dark and other people who are amazing writers,
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Oh..
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That's it in order. I took screenshots before it was doing that.
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It's better. Just make a transition from "His neighbors could hear the explosion from outside the house" to "Louis refused to stop banging on the door." Something like how Louis was running to the house. But everything is better.
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Okay. Thank you. I really mean it. Thank you.
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Yeah. You're welcome.
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My friend just read it. She's not even a Directioner, and she was saying Aweee, and she was gasping. She really liked it. Thank you.
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Where did you come up with the name for his girlfriend? It's pretty.
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for a moment I was going to agree
and then I realized..
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on another note
I like the story. I was too distracted to help, but I'm glad BB got to it. -
Never seen it spelled with two l's.
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I know that your name is Brandilyn, Andi. xD
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What she meant was where'd you get the name idea, from her name or..?
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I got it from Andi because I really liked it.
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lel nice
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