Dark and other people who are amazing writers,
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Thread Topic: Dark and other people who are amazing writers,
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K.
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[i]Did I get everything?[/url]
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Well, I screwed that up. xD
Did I get everything? -
Iz it doing this to you? It looks different. When I click on the link, it's the unedited version, but when I go back to the app, it's the edited version.
This is one of the pages of the edited version.
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You still have some things missing. You forgot to take out the "and there Louis was" part after "Niall lazily dragged himself down the stairs". You also forgot that Niall actually walked over to the door and answered it. And you forgot that there is actually no 'room'. Louis is outside, remember? Instead add, "There was a moment of silence".
I guess that's it, really. Nothing else is very much noticeable. -
No, it's not happening for me.
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* Is
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* I fixed that. I know for a fact I did.
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Why did I put a star there? -.-
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Seems the same to me.
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I fixed it. I know I did. I remember typing it.
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Can you show me the fixed draft?
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It's doing this.
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Oh.
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It's not letting me go back to it.
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