Poem

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    Skaterchic Newbie
    opps let me rephrase that:

    Angel are with God and Jesus
    In our world but,up in heaven
    They can talk real soft at midnight...
    And give you a better life with everyone
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    I like music Novice
    That's a nice poem, it's kind of... soft and mystical, and like, I can't describe it, it's nice.
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    Anastasia Novice
    Awesome poems you guys
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    Skaterchic Newbie
    I wrote that in church. It was my assiment in 4th grade but then I quit when one year later.
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    Anastasia Novice
    Hey I wrote this poem earlier today. It's a bit weird lol it's all what first popped into my head. It's called Beautiful Wolf

    Beautiful wolf with gray fur,
    eyes the tone of orange flames;
    I watch as you howl at the full moon

    You are free to do as you please.
    Every week you stare death in the face,
    knowing it's coming soon

    Yet you are not afraid to die,
    your pack watches over as you sleep.
    Loyal loved ones and truue friends, how nice.

    Oh beautiful wolf, I wish I could be like you.
    At night you dream sweet dreams
    even with the chance tomorrow you won't open your eyes

    You lived a great life, led many out of danger's way
    So selfless and giving though you are a wild animal
    You are a role model for all the young cubs

    Beautiful wolf, your time has finally come
    After respects are paid your pack moves on
    Leaving your body for the vultures and bugs
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    I like music Novice
    Wow, that was so Amazing I could never write anything that good. You should work as a writer when you're older, you'll get lots of
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    Anastasia Novice
    LOL thanks I actually would love to be a writer, I usually write like poems, songs and stories
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    I like music Novice
    I've written three novels:
    - Dreams come true (130 pages)
    - The forest empress (185 pages)
    - Pearl (A gift for my mum) (Only 16 pages but still...)

    And I'm writing another, it's called The vampire's boyfriend I wrote a short version of it in the Write your short stories here thread.
  • Kelly_jay Newbie
    Ok well i had to write a sonnet for my english class so here it is- she is the life that holds my love i would trade in my soul for a life time with her the melody of her words is like the chirp of a dove i wouldn't trade in my love for the richest of furs her caution is what intrigues me any barriers that come will be dismissed for i love her so much i shall have to say a few the fire and passion burned when our lips met- by the way that was in the view of a guy cause i'm a chick:)
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    I like music Novice
    That was very beautiful, I liked it so much, it was dreamy!
    But what exactly is a sonnet? I don't think I've come across it before...
  • Kelly_jay Newbie
    Thanx:) i dont entirely remember but i look through my notebook and see
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    I like music Novice
    I want to write a poem about. No Roady! Stop! Don't write one about vampires! Resist the addiction!
    Anyway, um... uh...
    WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    I like music Novice
    Ok, this is about the night (In a dreamy way that isn't scary and doesn't envolve vamps, I swear to god!)

    Under the sky I finally see
    A world that seems just for me
    The moon in the center shining bright
    It and the stars give their lovely light
    Where the world hides from day
    Night is the time to sleep not play
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    I like music Novice
    What d'ya think? Was it ok? OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T TELL ME IT WAS GAY!!!!!!
  • Kelly_jay Newbie
    No it was really good i really liked it:)

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