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Thread Topic: Poem

  • Anastasia Novice
    Here's a pretty song we sang in choir for contest last year:

    Waters ripple and flow
    drifting to the sea
    gentle falling stream
    ever calling to me
    gentle falling stream
    ever calling to me

    Waters ripple and flow
    rushing to the sea
    rivers deep and wide
    ever calling to me
    rivers deep and wide
    ever calling to me

    Can you hear the river?
    Can you hear the sea?
    Joining with the earth
    in a song of peace...

    It goes on a little from there and I can't remember but it sounds better when you sing it.
  • nessie14 Novice
    ooh, sounds peaceful. thanks, guys!
  • nessie14 Novice
    oh here's another i wrote called "inspiration":

    i'm lying here
    on my bed
    notebook in one hand,
    pen in the other.
    trying to think
    of a poem or song
    to write down right here,
    on this paper.
    waiting for
    an inspiration
    to jump to my fingers
    and write itself down
    i know that its there,
    that little inspiration.
    poor thing must be shy,
    hiding back in my mind.
    im chewing my pen now,
    thinking real hard,
    trying to meditate,
    anything to coax that inspiration.
    i try to think
    of meaningful things
    like friends and life,
    love and death.
    still, there is nothing,
    maybe it just needs some time.
    i'll give it a break,
    as i put down my pen...
  • rachcab21 Newbie
    WOW! You guys are REALLY GOOD! Way better than me! You guys should join in a poetry contest! I did and I usually be in 3rd place.
  • nessie14 Novice
    i've tried, i cant seem to find that many. i've looked online, but a lot of them limit how many lines, and i'm always over.
  • rebekahgilman Novice
    Okay, well this is now a poetry contest! Best poem wins, and I'll mention them in my next quiz? Yeah! that'll be the prize! Write awayyyyy!!!!
  • rachcab21 Newbie
    Awesome Rebeka! Thats a good idea!
  • umm heres the poem i wrote before in another forum: it doesnt have a name...

    you loved me and i love you.
    how could this be?
    you sent waves of darkness and drawned my heart.
    but it survived.
    you broke my heart and shattered it into tiny pieces.
    but it became whole again.
    you pierced my heart with a sharp dagger and killed it.
    but the wound healed and and its alive again.
    you hurt me in so many ways, killed my heart, and left it to die.
    why does it keep suviving?
    because i love you.
    and i will always love you no matter what.
    you put me through pain and made my life hell but i always run back to you.
    i cant ever let you go.
    you are my love and my life.
    nothing can ever separate us.
    we live off each other now.
    so will you love me today? tomorrow? yesterday?
    but the one thing i hope is that you love me always.
    because i know i always will.
  • rachcab21 Newbie
    Oh, yeah! I remember that poem! It's a awesome poem alltime.
  • haha thanks!
  • nessie14 Novice
    i like it too!
  • woo! more likererers!!! hahaha!
  • Bambi Novice
    Wow, there are some good poets here! I'll have a try now:

    A special world for you and me,
    A special bond one connot see,
    It wraps us up in its cobweb,
    And holds us fiercley in its womb,
    It's fingers spread like find spun gold,
    Gentley nestling us to the rold,
    Like silken thread it holds us fast,
    Bonds like this are meant to last,

    And though at times a thread may break,
    A new one forms in it's wake,
    To bind us closer and keep us strong,
    In a special world, where we belong.

    A special someone inspired it. ;)
  • OMFG THAT WAS AMAZING! im like crying! aww s--- i gotta hide my face!
  • rachcab21 Newbie
    Whoa! That was something!!!! It gaved me the chills for some reason rather then crying. Weird.

    Time to vote Rebeka!!!

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