Betrayed by Love Part 1

Why hello! My names Veronica and I've done this once before. I decided to try it again, so here's part one. First, i love writing and only did this because I wanted to get a story up on the Internet.

This is more of a story then a quiz. So you don't have to answer it or anything. Just read it and comment. Now, your name is Melanie. And you've just met Paul, Mike, Lucy, Caleb and John. Enjoy :)

Created by: Veronica
  1. What is your age?
  2. What is your gender?
  1. "Linda, I'm leaving for tonight. I'll see you next week." I called out to my co-worker as I grabbed my things and walked down the steps to the parking lot. I worked at the YMCA as a part time job. I was a junior in High School. Reaching my car, I quickly jumped in and started the car. Checking around, I made sure that there was no one around, so I can back out. Putting my car in reverse, I started pulling out. But I atomically hit the breaks when a random black van stopped their car behind mine.
  2. About to get out of the car, i froze when I saw thus huge guy get out of the driver side and approach the car. He stepped into the passenger side of my car. I could have sworn I locked it though. I loved up at him. He has brown hair, short yet long. Even in the darkness of the night, I could tell his eyes were the same shade of green as the grass surrounding the car. I got a strange feeling as he was sitting next to me, like I knew this person, or I should. "I'm sorry." He whispered.
  3. He reached over and grabbed the back of my neck, pressing on my pressure point. I was soon out.
  4. My eyes were to heavy for me to open just yet but I could hear everything that was going on. In the distance, I could hear the sound of people arguing. "What was I supposed to do!" Someone yelled. "I don't want her here!" Another voice yelled, a female. "Stop being such a b---- Lucy! She needed help." "Mike, from what Johnny told me, she was perfectly fine, up until you told him to knock her out and bring her to you." "Wait, shhh. She's awake." Everyone stopped talking and started walking up some steps to the room I must have been laying on a bed in.
  5. I sensed someone move next to me. Had that person been there the whole time? "How is she?" Mike asked. "I don't know. It's been 28hours and she still hasn't moved." John answered. Lucy signed and walked out of the room. As she walked out, I sensed two new people enter.
  6. "She should be opening her eyes in a few seconds." And just like that, my eyes opened. "Oh thanks god!" John wrapped his arms around me as Mike stood up and smiled. "What's going on here?" I asked.
  7. I looked around, at all of them. Mike had short black hair and redish eyes. Strange. There was a guy standing next to him, who had long brown hair, that covered his eyes. And then there was another guy, standing at the door. He had dirty blonde hair and blue eyes. I stared at him, he was sure to be the cutest one here. "Stop that." He demanded. "Stop what?" I was dumbfounded. "Thinking about me!" He ran out of the room and left me speechless.
  8. "That's Paul, but don't worry about him. He just needs to cool off." John explained. "Okay.. Well, what do you guys want from me? I don't even know you guys." "Right. Well, I'm John. That's Mike And that's Caleb." "Hi." Caleb said, totally staring at you. "Hi..."
  9. "And, well, you're not going to believe this, but we have powers and so do you." "Okay, I'll bite." I sat up and they started explaining more. "I can teleport and go invisible." John said. And he showed you. "I can shape shift into any animal and I have the power to heal things." Caleb asid. "I can fly and control the earth. Like water, fire, wind, ect." Mike explained. "What about Paul?" I asked. "Paul, he can read minds, sense your emotions, oh and he's a..."
  10. "Shut up John!" Paul yelled from some other part of the house. I couldn't help but laugh. It was just to random. The guy laughed along with me. I got off the bed and stretched. The guys just stared and I noticed they were looking at my tattoo that was on my wrist.
  11. I quickly covered it and coughed shyly. Caleb was the first to speak, "Why don't we go down stairs?" "Yeah, okay." Mike let the way as John followed then I, with Caleb behind me. Caleb seemed to have complete confidence because he grabbed my hand and kissed when no one was looking. Pulling away, I looked at him and saw he was smiling. "You're a really good kisser." He stated. "I know." I answered and walked away from him.
  12. Reaching the first floor, I could hear Lucy and Paul arguing. "Stop being such a dick and grow up Paul." "Lucy, I don't need your s--- again." He has a cigarette in his hand. "Paul! Lucy! Stop!" John yelled. "Shut up, Johnny!" Paul said. "Don't yell at him!" "Will you just give it a rest already!? You guys do this almost every day and we're all sick and tired of it!" Mike said. Paul grabbed a lighter and a beer and walked outside. Caleb walked in and rolled his eyes.
  13. "Sorry about that." John said, always the sweet one. "It's okay." When Lucy heard your voice, she shivered. But she didnt stop, she kept shaking and when she looked at me, her eyes were foggy white.

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