A Simple Hogwarts Story Part 1. {Revised Edition} | Comments
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I was reading this last night, but I stopped because Josh's name was starting to look like John xD never a good sign, anyway, I agree with HL ^^ The change is amazing, as much as nat's revision of her story. I like the slower pacing, and I'm always a big fan of detailing x3
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@xxblutixx- Really? You had to do that? Now I have the urge to text him. >.> But anyway, it's JOSH and Josh is NO where close to being like JOHN. Ew ew ew, John who's so cute and adorable....I mean potato pie. I like slower stuff too but I feel like I'm rushing but I don't know how to slow it down because I'm reading the book as I'm writing and it's all weird. But thanks for your feedback! x
Aria1 -
What do you mean you think it's not that good? This is a great edition! I really love the revision and all of the detail you added; you've got a wonderful writing style! I think that you've improved a ton and I can't wait for the next one! :D
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@HogwartsLove- asdfghjkl That means a lot coming from you! I don't think it was all that great though, I just wanted to get the readers into the character, if you get what I'm saying? And I'm writing the next one right now, haha. Thank you so much though! x
Aria1 -
Awesome! Aria, we all know that you are a total Oliver fan! I'm surprised that he isn't in this! I wish that I was at the wedding! Peace out!
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Oh and a quick thank you for all those who wished me Happy Birthday on New Years! x
Aria1 -
WHOA WHOA WHOA, I see that! XD did you just say John was cute and adorable? Did you? Awwwwwhhhh
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@xxblutixx- I meant John from the story from wayyyy long ago, uh duhhh...
Hey why aren't you on msn by the way? :O
Aria1
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