A Nightmare in the Alley Intro | Comments

I do agree, this was a little too short, but after all, you did say it was just an intro. It sounds like a different concept and has a very sci-fi feeling to it that I like X) one critique though that I have to make is watch your verb tenses. You switch between present tense and past tense a couple times. Please, do continue!

This sounds very interesting :) Great ideas!

I think this is very interesting from what I saw, please write more and make it longer!

if u wrote more i'd read it, interesting concept