Story Of Elisa Ch 1 (your elisa) | Comments
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This was more like a script from a play rather than a story. It was a little hard to follow and didn't really grab my attention. Try making it into a detailed story. (No dashes, actually explain the settings and the actions of the characters.) I know it takes a really long time, but trust me, it's totally worth it.
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Thanks for the feed back I know I couldve done better it is my fist quiz and it was midnight when I made it so ill try to do a better job next time ty
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Yes I know theres some spelling mystakes forgive me minna san anyway hope you like it
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