Someday Never p.1 | Comments

Hmmm, needs a bit more detail and needs to be longer. Sounds interesting, but Zane sounds hot! I am willing to take part two if it means I get to see Zane. But anywho take my series? It's Forever and Always and good job:)

P.s I say again please more detail cuz it got a little confusing...

I like it but you need to stop skipping forward so much.When you skip forward too much it makes it harder to understand.So in your next episode just try not to skip forward so much.But other than that MAKE THE NEXT EPISODE QUICK!

hey :) This is pretty interesting and a lot can be told with it. I'm just wondering, will the second part be longer?

Hmm... this was very... vague. There's not much background info, descriptions of characters, or details.

This quiz is good. Just slow down and add more detail :) I like Zane already :D

Hurry up and make part 2