Promised Revenge (Warrior cats again XD)

What happens to Raven, Scourge's secret daughter, during the Darkest Hour? How does she react during terrible times? But most importantly, what happens when Scourge dies?

Never revealed in the books, and to be revealed, Raven lives together with Scourge from kit to warrior. Or maybe even kit... To an amazing BloodClan leader.

Created by: Winxlover
  1. Btw this is part one forgot to say in the title
  2. Unknown POV I shivered, hoping no one could spot me. I was watching a small cat hunting. It looked like he was 7 moons old. I tried to copy him. I caught a mouse. I smiled and beamed, triumphant. When I took my first bite, a voice above me said, "Nice catch." I looked up and saw a small black tom with one white paw and cold, ice blue eyes. "Th-thanks," I stammered. Suddenly, his smile faded. He attacked me, and when he got me pinned down, I asked him, "Why are you fighting me? If you were testing me, shouldn't you sheathe your claws?" I looked down at his thorn sharp claws. "I always fight with unsheathed claws!" he growled. I yowled and threw him off. He landed on his paws safely. I clawed his side. He let out a screech and I sliced his other side open. He yowled in pain, then his eyes opened and he smirked. "BloodClan could use a kit like you. I name you Raven."
  3. He's my adoptive father now, I thought. He moved away, and I followed him. Suddenly, he stopped. "We should live here," he meowed to himself. "Stay here." "Wait!" I called after him. "What's your name?" "My name is Scourge," he mewed quickly. He came back with a group of cats that were wearing collars studded with teeth from cats and dogs. "This is BloodClan," he said. BloodClan. The name echoed in my head. My biological mother used to tell me stories about BloodClan... And Scourge. They were evil.. Right? I can't remember. I didn't notice when Scourge introduced me to his Clan. A huge black-and-white tom flipped me to my side. "Are you listening?" he snarled. I nodded.
  4. Scourge's POV I decided to keep Raven secret. She could grow up to be a strong warrior. If I could choose any of my cats to be leader after me, I would choose her. Bone would be furious. I felt someone drop a mouse in front of me. It was raining. I devoured it in few famished bites. Then I regretted it. I should have let Raven eat some. Just then, Raven dropped a rat at my paws."You could eat it," I offered, glad for her catch. Raven's eyes brightened. "Thanks!" She dragged the rat to a corner. Bone snorted. "He doesn't let us eat. He lets Raven eat." I shot him a glare. Then suddenly, there was a big, muscular tom approaching me that I didn't know.
  5. "Boulder," Bone growled. I recognized his scent. "I never thought you would come back," I hissed. "I thought you liked the forest." "Oh yes, the forest is full of fresh-kill. It's wonderful," he replied. "So you came here to compare Twolegplace to the forest," I growled. "No," Boulder meowed. "I'd like you too meet someone." The brown, unfamiliar tabby stepped forward. "I am Tigerstar, leader of ShadowClan," he announced. "And I have a preposition for you."
  6. Raven's POV The two cats talked a lot, but I couldn't make out what they were saying. "Deal," I heard Scourge finally say. "BloodClan! We will battle against ThunderClan and WindClan!" The whole of BloodClan yowled, longing for the sight of blood and death. Scourge walked up to me as the other cats walked away. "I want you to watch," he hissed in my ear. "If I die, there would be no one better to lead the clan." I was grinning from ear to ear. Everyone in BloodClan just gave me dirty looks. Suddenly, I remembered about the battle. I better be prepared. I crept to a block shaped Twoleg thing and went under it. It was dark, but dry. I poked a hole with my claws in the rubbish. I scratched some more, and finally I felt comfortable. My soaked fur dripped on the ground. I should be ready for the battle... But I wasn't going to be part of it. Maybe a cat would find and attack me. Before I could think more, I was trapped in darkness.
  7. Scourge's POV More cats to kill. BloodClan will win. I can't wait to get part of the forest. Fireheart thinks he can defeat BloodClan. He says his "StarClan" will help him. StarClan is a myth. Besides, who would defeat us? With TigerClan, we are invincible. I stretched and yawned, looking for a place to sleep. I found a block of Twoleg rubbish. Maybe it would be suitable. There was a hole in it. I peeked inside. There was a groan. "Scourge, you woke me up." "Raven?" I lifted the thing and a black she-cat with amber eyes stepped out. "Let's go. We have to battle," I reminded her. We went to the forest and tried to find Tigerstar.
  8. Raven's POV I scented Tigerstar. "Ready?" he asked. Scourge nodded. I stalked through the thick trees, trying not to make a sound. It took me long to follow them. When I finally got there, an orange cat was speaking. "Cats of all clans," he began. "This cat is a threat to the forest." He pointed his tail to Tigerstar. He went on and on about the evil things he had done. When he finished, Scourge was first to speak. "I will think carefully about what you have said," he meowed clearly. "There will be no battle today. Tigerstar's muscles bunched up. "Traitor!" he yowled. I gasped, thinking this was the end of my father. But Scourge dodged swiftly to the side. As they fought, Scourge sank his claws into Tigerstar's throat. He sliced his belly open, from neck to tail. Tigerstar's body twitched. His claws teared up grass. He let out shrieks of pain. Finally, he fell limp. Scourge had killed Tigerstar.
  9. Firestar's POV "We will let you go back to Twolegplace," I said. "Go?" Scourge snarled. "Go? In Twolegplace, there is less prey than the forest. Give the forest to us." "We will not," I replied. "The forest is ours." "If you don't give the forest to us, there will be a battle," Scourge warned. "I will wait for your decision on the third day. Leave or die." BloodClan went back to their territory. I thought about Scourge's words. Leave, or die.
  10. Raven's POV Finally. The third day. "Wake up, you lazy slugs!" Scourge called. We went to the forest. The cats were still there. "I guess you would rather die," Scourge growled. "BloodClan, attack!" "LionClan, attack!" The orange tom who was telling about Tigerstar was the one yowling. I was going to plunge into the battle, but I remembered what Scourge said. I watched the other warriors fight. Then, I flicked my sight to Scourge. He was fighting with the flame-colored cat. Scourge killed him, then went to battle a white cat. The snowy cat was weakened, but the fire-colored tom was alive again. Scourge looked back. "How... I killed you." "You did," he mewed. "But I have nine lives granted from StarClan. Can you say as much?" Scourge aimed a final blow at the white warrior, then began to fight the orange tom. He got my father pinned down and bit his throat. Scourge tried to snarl defiance, but there was only blood bubbling in his throat. Then... He fell limp.
  11. He was dead. He was. Don't worry, Scourge. I will have my revenge. I promise. I will have my promised revenge.

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