Magic Love Part 1 | Comments

Um, sorry, but I just didn't follow this very well. Like everyone else said, you could portray a better picture of the characters (what do the boys look like?) and the settings, but other than that, not bad; I'm interested! I'd like to read the next few parts! :) Thanks!

Ya it was really good I just don't understand it all like how you met those guys in the first place?

I didn't get any of it cause y didn't describe the boys or who she was or anything like that. Sorry:(

hi, not bad but u should make the paragraphs longer and u need to explain more, other than that i enjoyed it i will be reading ur quizzes ;D

You didnt decribe the characters or the settings as much :(

i thought it was really good